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A brainless dragon that offends people in all kinds of ways. Do you really think you are invincible? I thought it was about the magical world and wanted to develop hot weapons. Shocked

[25DAY丨Write a piece of advice for players who do not have the same copy as Si]
Advice to players: Don't be deceived by Ah Wu's appearance. Although Ah Wu's body and face are covered in blood, Ah Wu is actually very warm and friendly, unless you don't want to be a human but want to be a "pig".

The protagonist Jin Bing, the god, has no blood relationship with Yang Jian, and is even an idiot that he hates in a sense. And this is too dark. What attracts Liu Yanchang to the Three Holy Mothers is his kindness. You have made the whole world look like spring pigs.

Very enjoyable to watch
The spin-off of "Zhetian" is the most exciting one I have read, it evokes the feeling of reading the original work.

It's not worth watching. I don't know the plot. What's the difference between it and the natives? I have talent but I still don't work hard to practice. I'm eating my food. I'm still fighting for power.

Can the heroine have Ye Qingxian, Luo Qingxian (Pollen Emperor), Ruan Ren (Empress), Yue Chan? The author may not.

The protagonist is too useless, the world view is very different from Swallowing Starry Sky

Are there only Xihe and Chang Xi as the female protagonists (make up the number of words)

Eunuch
In fact, gold fingers can also be used to trigger other things, there is no need to use chakra.

It's outrageous. You get soul bones again and again, and you add settings randomly. The settings of Dou Yi are not Dou Three. It's okay if you mention it occasionally, but you don't need to mention it in chapters. Is this the high score?

It poisoned me to death. . There are too many original characters. It's just a fan but a bunch of original characters have to be added.
Qian Nianyu, Dai Chongshan, Lu Youyou, Ning Jiaojiao, Ning Xueying, Lu, etc., Add a bunch of original characters, and I guess they will be added later. Adding so many original characters will completely miss the main plot. It makes my head hurt watching it, and the key is that the author has no grasp of it. There are so many characters, but the characters are too thin and too abrupt. The protagonist has no reason. When he wanted to find Prince Xingluo to provoke him for no reason, I was confused. Is this the brain circuit of a normal person? Moreover, the Star Dou Forest is so big that I can find Prince Xingluo accurately. . Only after seeing the back did I realize that I wanted to lure Dai Chongshan out. . Can you introduce the characters well and don't force their wisdom? And I don't understand why a genius with a potential of 99 can absorb a 300-year-old soul ring and can't even configure the optimal soul ring. Moreover, the plot is also a lot of originals. The most important thing is that the original is original, but the writing is not good. It really poisoned me. Also, the setting of Douluo is that the higher the quality of the martial soul, the stronger the innate soul power. Inexplicably, I wrote a Yaocao saying After picking up the treasure, he was gifted with a first-level soul power, which deviates from the original setting. Alas, I can only say that this book is my life-threatening poison. If I can accept the original characters, forced intelligence, and the absorption of top geniuses for 300 years, it deviates from the original setting. The original plot is boring, so just read it. I was really looking forward to the setting of Devouring System Taotie + Angel Twin Martial Spirits.

Are you still friends and enemies with Xiao Zha San? If you offend the little Yakuza even a little bit, you will be killed, and you will become an enemy as well as a friend. It really made me laugh to death

Author, please do it quickly, do it quickly! Very good harem, please update a few chapters quickly

It makes me laugh so hard. The little bastard's soul is already 29 years old. How can he still be innocent? Still want to change your outlook? Hahahahahaha. It really made me laugh.

Write quickly, write quickly, write quickly, write quickly, write quickly, write quickly

How amazing!
**! This is the first time I have only one comment on a book with 3.13 Million words. If it had not been deleted, I would be the second comment. 🙄

General image of the protagonist
After transformation, the AI is so useful now, brothers.

The background time should be after 2000
The background of this novel should be set in the post-2000s, and what the author writes basically has nothing to do with the 1980s. Maybe not too old.

I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?

The ending sucks, the main character feels aggrieved, and it makes me very angry and annoyed.

Is this book going to be cut again? All I can say is that there is no other way.

It was originally a five-point rating, but then the more I looked at it, the more strange it became. The protagonist has made money and has a career, but he actually agreed to a secret marriage for the sake of the heroine's career. How can he be so shameful? Why make money and become powerful? He also changed himself for women again and again, which was too much!

It feels like the author has no outline and just comes up with ideas.

Ask
I want to ask, does this novel have a male protagonist? I only read the ones without cp, I'm afraid I saw the wrong one, thank you

It would be best for the heroine to be paired with Qian Renxue. For the harem, Dugu Yan, Ye Lingling, and Zhu Zhuqing are both good.
The angel + twin spider martial soul configuration is also a classic and genius style.

The plot is a little extreme, but the emotions are really sincere
The characters in the book are slightly more extreme. Although it is a novel, it can be a little more extreme for expression, but it is indeed a bit too extreme. From very good to very bad, and then back to very good. Of course, there are also extreme bad characters, but the extreme good remains the same. Generally speaking, the characterization is too extreme. However, the feelings are indeed sincere, and the feelings I want to tell are clearly explained and persuasive, so it can move people. The full confession at the end also allows the readers to release their twisted emotions, so it is a good novel.

How should I put it? In fact, there is no need to say a few things at once and not get to the point. This will give people a bad feeling and it will be difficult to achieve practical results. Including but not limited to, if you do this, what will happen to the protagonist's practice and progress? Moreover, the protagonist's advantage is not only knowing the plot, but also the dimensionality reduction impact of reality on this anime. Not to mention anything else, hundreds of schools of thought are also pursuing peace, or peace. Their thoughts and debates can just crush the Hokage. What's more, political and philosophical thinking to this day Apart from anything else, only through great unification can peace be achieved. Moreover, ninjas do not engage in production, but make money from mission remuneration. They are no different from mercenaries. Do you still want peace under this system? Furthermore, the exploitation of daimyo and nobles ... In short, there are many, many, many If you have to talk about things step by step, the protagonist's strength improvement will be very sloppy in the end, and the plot will not advance well.

The ninth level of one realm and the 81st level of nine realms. No wonder no one is watching. Fighting Xixi

It's definitely a masterpiece among historical texts, and it feels like it's always new to read.

[25DAY丨Please write a piece of advice for players/NPCs who do not have the same copy as me.
1. Please satisfy Si Wu's curiosity and answer all questions. 2. Si Wu is very sincere towards her companions, don't try to deceive her.

25DAY丨Advice~
To the players/NPCs in Awutong dungeon: 1. Ah Wu is everyone's good friend. 2. Good friends should treat each other sincerely. If you have any needs, you can talk to Ah Wu directly, don't beat around the bush. 3. Good friends should get along well with each other. Don't bully Ah Wu, lest you get hurt. From another of your sincerely good friends.

If it weren't for the minimum of one star, I wouldn't even want to give it one star.
















