My Name is Rhine

You obviously have the ability to exchange it, but you have to wait until you are about to die before using it. Do you think it is a fairy bean? Once the chakra is exchanged, it becomes Chatara. The Sharingan has an illusion resistance written on it. You have taken away the other functions? That little outburst in front, I don't understand what you were doing in front of you since you have the ability to exchange for blood. You have to wait until you are almost dead to use it. The sage body is just for water. I haven't seen you use it. There are a bunch of ninjutsu skills and none of them are useful. The whole article emphasizes the importance of the Sharingan and the sage body. Emotional ninjutsu is Rubbish, you didn't write much about the two abilities you emphasized. There are all kinds of pitfalls. I haven't seen any of the abilities of the immortal body. Sharingan emotion has only one function. I haven't seen you use ninjutsu at all. Just some C-level ninjutsu. I just mentioned chakra. You have unlimited firepower in terms of emotion. Rasengan is so powerful as you say, but I haven't seen you practice it yet. Spells are not mentioned at all. The opening chapter is so awesome, but the rest is full of Naruto stuff. Naruto stuff is also a lot of poorly written. With so many abilities, you can just grab a bloodline and hold on to it without developing it. Have you read it yourself after writing it? What I wrote before was incomprehensible, and I suddenly got angry, and then I exchanged a bunch of things, and then I just wrote it out, without developing it at all. I just exchanged it and I can use it. Please, after you finish writing it, you can see if it works.

Regarding the rhythm issue mentioned by book friends, let me explain. You can see from my description method and wording that I can only spend 300,000 words telling the first story. In fact, the pace of the first ten chapters is a slow pace. Originally, I prepared at least one chapter plus two and a half chapters to describe people like Will's adoptive father. Including small characters like Andy, there is still about half a chapter to describe. But there is really no way. This is not only a fantasy, but also a web article. My data tells me that I am not allowed to write so slowly. If you read the chapel chapter alone, you will understand. In fact, I can also slowly portray the characters, but at that time, I basically only had Bradrick as a reader to support my entire story. I did not have a readership as large as Squid Girl to support slowly telling a story. So we can only quickly tell two stories to attract readers. As for the rhythm line, it's actually not confusing because I thanked the outline. This is the end of the first part. It revolves around the theme of fate being a bastard and manipulating small people at will. The logic line is that one small story leads to the next story, with continuous foreshadowing, such as hunting vampires and leading to the plan to lead vampires and the Scarlet Church, recruiting Will as a knight leads to hunting the Silver Moon Wolf. Only the clock tower is a foreshadowing and I haven't fully explained it. For the characterization, I forcibly captured Will and the protagonist, so the supporting characters will naturally be much smaller. I actually spent a lot of time on using words and sentences. If you read it again, you will find that I actually made a lot of foreshadowing. In fact, I will slow down the pace after this and pay more attention to characterization. Thank you for your review.

Drawing a tiger is not like being an anti-dog... Can't you be a good alien mage... Forcibly add a system to extract the skill of Hokage?

Before the book was put on the shelves, William was written to attack the protagonist and make the protagonist lose himself, dedicate himself, and dedicate everything he has to his Lord. That is, William, and the god behind him, attack the protagonist and want to enslave him. As a result, the following content seems to have forgotten that there are enemies. The protagonist in your setting has a system and can collect energy in exchange for skills by killing people. The introduction of your book is to fight against all the gods in the world through infinite monthly reading. The protagonist has exchanged for a kaleidoscope. Even the bishops of gods in the mortal world cannot be defeated. There is still no way to fight back in the future. It is a pitfall, disgusting and uncomfortable. Others don't know it, but I just want to see the protagonist being attacked and be able to fight back in a short period of time. If I don't fight back, it's okay if the enemy hides and turns around to fight back when he gets sick. The protagonist you wrote was almost enslaved, which is equivalent to the rhythm of the whole family's sex. The protagonist just accepted it, and God couldn't do it, so William let him go freely? It's funny. I read one chapter. One point for nausea. I just want to read the counterattack. Otherwise, what kind of online novel should I read? It's not the previous book. Each word is the best. Internet novels are just watery words. How long will it take for the results to come out? A kaleidoscope can't kill a mortal. I still want to read the God of Infinite Moon. What a rubbish setting.

It's okay for the money I charged, but I haven't watched it since I paid. I don't have a strong sense of Naruto being immersed in it, but it's weird. I think it can be used as the second part to improve the protagonist's strength.

When Naruto was mentioned at the beginning, I decided not to watch it. Who told me not to like watching Naruto! Goodbye everyone.

In fact, I just read it for Naruto, and it was very well written. But after dozens of chapters, I saw a magatama plus a fairy body plus chakra refining technique. Isn't my tailed beast jade fragrant? What arcane method should I learn?

It feels good to have a slower pace. There is no need to fight and kill from beginning to end just because there is a system. To be honest, I am a little tired of watching those.

Let's change the title of the book, Biography of the Second Generation of Rich People

Did the author cut it? . . . .