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Looking for scolding, the title of god is also written as emperor, emperor of human beings😐

Hurry up, there are only 80 chapters, it's not enough for anyone to read, maybe it will gather dust on the bookshelf.

Manman is particularly fond of his delicate thoughts towards his relatives, and also leaves room for bad guys, which is quite refreshing to watch. The author's writing is vivid and smooth, which is very interesting.

The God King in Douluo should be able to blow up planets, but whether he can break a mountain in perfection is a question 😘

Let me first ask Shrek if he is dead or not. Those who are not malicious are actually a bunch of people who are going to be dogs now. I really don't want to see the disgusting ones, especially the two dogs Yun Ming and Yali will not turn around casually. I want to go to the federation to become a master. This is more

I haven't read it yet. I just read the introduction. This is written by a piece of AI🐶💩. The details seriously hurt the system and I'm so blessed to have read it.

Urgent for more updates Urgent for more updates
It's a very good book, why isn't it updated?

The writing is not very good. If you hang too hard, a king can beat a saint. A half-saint can directly beat a saint in the ninth level. Ye Fan was also a half-saint before he could beat an ordinary saint. Although the divine ban can exceed the eight bans, it cannot be too much. At most, there are ten. There are two or three bans, and there are about six bans to become a saint, and to reach the realm of divine bans is almost entirely dependent on Hetu Luoshu. It feels like Yao Guang, he is controlled by the Immortal Heavenly Art while the protagonist is controlled by Hetu Luoshu, and there is no sense of his own at all.

There are too many plots where you pretend to be B and get slapped in the face. It looked good at first, but when you get to a certain place, you are ridiculed, pretend to be B, and get slapped in the face.

Please update soon
It's very thrilling and interesting, and makes people want to read it more and more, but there are too few updates! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

How long will it take for it to be finished? The author can give me an approximate time.

The author hasn't updated for so long. Did he take a leave of absence?

Isn't this book too good? This book is so beautiful. I need to add some scary words.
I like this book because it's so scary

What did you say about this book? It's a bit like Chen Qingyun and Liu Canyang in ancient times. It's exaggerated, but not offensive. Don't dwell on it, just read it according to your feelings.

The annoying cat takes up half of the page, and the witch is also annoying

It's also great for Konoha! The other party is chasing you, but you still help the other party.

It's okay, let's see what happens next.
The start is quite eye-catching. It is outrageous to give it one star. The autochlorosis is too serious. In order to prevent people from misunderstanding, let me briefly explain that the protagonist wants to take photos in the style of celebrity advertisements for modern luxury brands, but the atmosphere of the times is different, so the protagonist secretly posts advertisements at the beginning asking for people with good figures to take photos, and the location is in a movie studio. Liu Xiaoli was short of money. At the same time, she saw the notice that the movie was looking for actors. The audition location was also at the movie studio. Then the protagonist thought that he was here to take photos of himself as a model, so he started shooting. The actual scale was normal. However, Liu Xiaoli came to be an actress and felt that she was not playing the role of a rural woman. In addition, the protagonist mouthed a treasure, and was directly treated as a gangster. So to sum up, it's not a sex scene at all, the one of Yixing is just nonsense, but it may be that he saw it too quickly, and the author's description does have an ambiguous atmosphere.

Five-star praise, I have read Tomato's Starting Point once, compared to Tomato Huo Yuhao, Dragon King Legend Tang Wulin is more exciting😋😋😋

Don't write wrongly, just work hard, work hard, work hard, work hard, work hard

It's beautiful, the perspective is novel, I look forward to the follow-up! ! !

Good pressure, good pressure, great pressure, really good pressure

...Don't you feel weird when you write it? If you don't know how to write emotional and ambiguous plots, you don't have to write them. If someone threatens you with a knife, do you have to write them? , I didn't think it was AI at first, but when I saw this, it could have been written by a human.

Update quickly, update quickly, the author is great. I sit with a small bench every day waiting for the new chapter. 😘......

I calculate that ten hours of one night is 36,000 seconds, one million books, one book has 100 pages, and one second is about 27 books. Count 15 words per line. One second is 40,500 words.

Have you read the original work? Yu Tianheng has the first soul ring. Ning Rongrong was just born.

I want to cheat but I don't know how to write, so it comes out inexplicably.

The author is completely immersed in his own world
It's too stream of consciousness, the foreshadowing is too abrupt, and the content transition is too blunt.

When writing about movies and TV shows with many women, you can't leave out women. Leaving out women would be too bad.

The main character is useless
The character is not good, the ability is not good, there is no golden finger, the group portrait story is very confusing, and the main line is not clear. I don't have to read online novels to read the stories of ordinary people.

Chapter 7 mentioned earlier that the middle stage of foundation building is still almost in the late stage. If we don't talk about the late stage of foundation building in the Core Formation Realm in eight years, we should have reached it long ago, right? You should all be ready to form elixirs. Why did you just break through to the late stage of foundation building now? It's really speechless that you might as well not take pictures if you are so powerful. If you want to suppress the combat power, then write slower in the early stage. Take your time and accept the inevitable. Mortals are slow-paced. If you want to write fast advancement, then don't suppress it later, otherwise you won't be able to read it.

The writing in Liaozhai is quite good. The writing about the immortal sect in the main world is shit. The writing in the main world is inexplicable, and it is about building the foundation of heaven, being a genius, and playing cards. Wouldn't it be good to honestly write about traveling through multiple worlds and heavens to cultivate immortality?

















