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Has the author not created a group yet? I haven't seen it every time I come here to look. If you get it, let me know. If it hasn't been built yet, hurry up and build it. 😝

Ugly.
The author is purely self-deprecating, and there is no logic in many places.

Come on, come on, tell me, what kind of magic did you use to awaken? Forget it, it's rubbish. You can't even write the most basic things.

The death is too outrageous, the combat power has collapsed, the Soul Sect has the combat power of a titled Douluo, what to write next, write about all the worlds? The heroine is another self-created character and has no use yet.

27DAY丨Can Siwu return to reality
I think it is possible. The baby has experience and strength, and the game should be related to reality.

It's an urban campus novel, and the protagonist is quite funny. It looks fine.
It's not bad. The protagonist's character and way of speaking, as well as the conversation with Zhao Rui, are all quite funny. It fits the character of an abstract, high school student. Anyway, I feel it is similar to when I was in high school. This book is a multi-heroine novel. So far, I have locked in about three heroines, a childhood sweetheart, and someone who has a crush on the protagonist and likes to give things to the protagonist. And the best friend next to Qingmei, I think she will also be the heroine, right?

Come on, it's just your book. It's probably impossible for the fandom to surpass the original, so just try your best. Don't worry about other people. After all, you are a new author. Don't be too smart. Just change the original work. Other minor points don't matter.

If you don't know how to write a book, you don't have to write it. Who would want to read something like a primary school student's composition?

27DAY丨Can Si Wu return to the real world?
In the end, I thought it was possible, but now it seems that it is not possible. I feel that I need an opportunity to go back, but it is not enough now.

To be honest, I don't have any requirements for the book. I've read too many books that follow the steps of cultivating and recruiting girls. Suddenly I saw this kind of book, where I was invincible at the beginning and didn't follow the plot. It was really fun. Haha, I don't know what will happen next.

Very nice article
The ending is not very good, but the article is very exciting and the emotional line is very rich, but I don't know, I always feel that the love between the two male protagonists is inexplicable.

Come on, work hard, this is a good book, read more every day.

27DAY丨Can Siwu return to the real world
It's definitely possible, Ah Wu is so awesome, he can directly control the game! And I really want to see Ah Wu Zai's sanatorium

Novel content
It's been a long time since I've seen a novel like this twice in a row. It's hard to find one that I must support 😋 Please be sure to finish writing it, no more supplements🥲

It's so beautiful. I'll sign up as a member and give it away as a gift. It'll be a blessing to people who also like to watch it. Remember to mention it when you get it, so that no one else will miss out later.

27DAY丨About returning to the real world
I feel that Si Wu can return to the real world, and I believe that Si Wu can do anything (nods). After all, this is a game, and it feels like for Si Wu, after the game is cleared, he has to leave, that is, return to the real world.

emmm
It's my favorite type, but the writing is terrible and I can't stand it...

It's very interesting and interesting. I have read many books written by him.

Waiwai
The auxiliary golden finger just needs to be developed honestly. The strong people the protagonist encounters all have positive images that are beneficial to him. He gets a response no matter what happens and has no sense of vigilance at all. The weak people like to fight against the protagonist and then be destroyed.

Updates are too slow
After waiting for a few months, there are dozens of chapters. Hey, it's difficult to do

Why can Ah Yin's soul ring restore the god's divinity? And if Brigitte can really restore the god's divinity, why is Gu Yuena still recovering from her injuries? After all, isn't it easier to heal it than to restore its godhead?

I couldn't stop reading the whole novel. The author's writing style is mature and natural, without any rigid routines. The characters are very realistic and flesh-and-blood, and each character has his or her own personality and story. The plot progresses layer by layer, the foreshadowing is in place, the twists are natural and not abrupt, and the emotions are delicate and moving. It has great staying power after reading it, and it is worth reading again and again!

27DAY丨Can Siwu return to the real world
Hope to return to the real world. Curious about the world in which Ah Wu lives, and curious about Ah Wu's life in the real world. However, the most important thing is Ah Wu's thoughts. Ah Wu's choice is my choice. (Actually, the writing of Xianxian is my choice. I love Xianxian~, Xianxian is the best! Xianxian is rich! Xianxian is safe and smooth, and always happy!)

It's beautiful, I love reading it. The author should write more, it's not enough.

Please collect and read more
Readers, please read and add to your favorites.

Come on, author, keep it up! I hope there will be more female leads in the future

I'm really going to die laughing
How to say it? The author's segmentation skills are superb and kept me entertained in the middle of the night. It reminds me of my youth. At that time, I was probably in the second or third grade and had just learned how to write essays.

I watched the short drama first, and then I accidentally saw this. What a coincidence.

27DAY丨Real World
It sure works! Because I am very interested in the doctor and the piglets that Si Wu mentioned, and I always feel that they will appear.

It's a bit like the book "There's Something Wrong About My Wife". This book is very written and almost meaningless. It feels weird.

The script is good, but the writing skills are terrible. The worst thing is the pet.

I read the Ice Dragon King book, but unfortunately it ended when I started reading it. It's nice to follow the illustrated books now🖐️

27DAY丨Can Si Wu return to the real world?
It is unlikely to return to the real world, after all, we have entered the game world; if we can go back, we will not enter this world, and Si Wu is quite good in the game world.

I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?

I have just read some of the first few dozen chapters, so far they are all about how Xiao Yan is doing, and I have to follow Xiao Yan to observe and write a diary. When I saw this, I didn't want to read it. I didn't have any outstanding roles. It seemed that I couldn't write without Xiao Yan. I don't know if this will always be the case in the future.

27DAY丨Return to the real world?
No way, Yugi can't be so kind, and Si Wu doesn't have any strong desire to go back.







