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I came here with Lone Bamboo. I also think this book is quite good.

A time traveler is very noble, noble, and serious. Sha Bi, I don't know how to pretend to be hypocritical.

It's quite good-looking, Dou San is pure and refreshing, and the writing is invincible.

27DAY丨Can Siwu return to reality
I hope I can return. I feel that the main plot will be richer. If I can't return, I feel like I will be more likely to write about that kind of game. I still prefer a peaceful and stable reality.

I read it for 2 minutes and wrote like an idiot. The donkey's head is out of alignment with the horse's mouth, it's a mess.

Please increase your rating! I read four chapters and can't stand it anymore. I traveled through time for more than ten years and submitted an article even though I knew Mingpao was low-paying. My first submission was 100,000 words on 330 pieces of paper. I just let Jin Yong see it so casually. Do you think you are Ni Kuang?

Has the author changed his name? Two little pigs snoring. Why can't I search for Double Major in Arts and Sciences? I just asked Doubao to find you out.

The junior high school was fine, but the high school concert was so embarrassing that I almost got cancer. He is also an old author. Did he imitate the writing style of Angry Banana? I couldn't stand the book.

This book is quite good, but the first part is a little stressful. I feel unhappy in the first part, but I am convinced. I just feel uncomfortable in my heart, and he just can't do what he wants to do. Then it gets better later. I hope it won't be too uncomfortable to meet you next time. Later. It's not that uncomfortable, thank you.

As for taking Ma Xiaotao, there is no problem. Although it looks too big in the original work, the protagonist has a high IQ. If handled properly, she will be a top beauty + top talent + absolute loyalty + top thug. It's a pity that there are too few more.

Fairly good
As far as historical literature is concerned, it is relatively rare for the Shunjun to start in the late Ming Dynasty. The author gave the protagonist a buff from the reincarnation of Lu Bu, but it was still very difficult to resist the Qing Dynasty. The reason is that the internal fighting consumes strength, which can be regarded as restoring history. But the protagonist started too late, not much has changed, and many tragedies have already happened. As of the latest plot, I really can't imagine how the protagonist can fight. King Chuang is gone, Nanming and Nanjing are destroyed, history is still repeating itself, and the protagonist can only live in Chongqing, and he has to stay with Zhang Xianzhong and the remnants of the Ming army. They say they are fighting the Qing together, but people are not united and cannot even unite. I feel that there is no possibility of cooperation with these insects. When the Ming army was useless and defeated the main force of King Daxi, why not directly attack Chengdu with the power of victory, kill Zhang Xianzhong, and integrate all the forces of Shu to resist the Qing Dynasty. The protagonist chose to maintain peace with the Western army and the Ming army to fight against the Qing Dynasty. Can Zhang Xianzhong and Nan Ming be counted on to cooperate?

The author should stop talking about the word count. After reading more than 100 chapters, I can't stand it anymore.
I can't remember what I wrote earlier. You are writing Mao. The first part has been cleaned up, but the later part is not. Even if you modify it, you have to unify the context. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. 😐

Did the author not write an outline? There are a lot of logical problems, confusing and confusing.

I'm a long time reader. It's very interesting. Please update it soon. It's not enough.

Idiot article, at the beginning it said that the descendants of the Qing Emperor were to be liquidated, but later on, why did you kneel down and call your ancestors? What is the difference between Gu Yuena in Douluo Continent and a dead rabbit calling mother, a virtue?

This film is similar to the one I watched called: Something Is Not Right with My Wife. It feels like the routine is the same, but it's pretty good.

If you like a bunch of people being in love with one person, you can check it out.
If you want the protagonist to be an awesome support, I have no problem with it. The Rainbow Dragon Spirit is really suitable in this Dou San, but can you not make the protagonist look like a succubus? I think it's okay for girls like you Gu Yue to like the protagonist. I really can't stand the feeling that you made people like Tang Wulin, Xie Xie and Wang Jinxi have a special obsession with the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist has his own cy and is a dragon martial spirit. Even people who can't stand the charm of the protagonist. When else can a martial spirit abandon its master? In Dou 1 to 3, Yu Xiaogang's martial spirit was a little self-conscious. As a result, Long Yueye ran away because she captured the protagonist's martial spirit, and even merged with Xie Wang Jinxi. It's really outrageous. If you say that, then why did the Four Little Dragon Gods come out? Why didn't the soul masters of those dragon souls worship them without their heads?

Before going to Dongting Lake Jinlin City for training, go to Douluo Continent and use the ice and fire synergy to devour the bones of the Water and Fire Dragon King. Then independently awaken the dual martial souls of the Water and Fire Dragon King. The Water Dragon King - also known as the Ice Dragon King, can be called the Ice Element Dragon King or the Water Element Dragon King. The innate soul power should be between level 30 and 50, because it is a god-level martial soul such as Gan Renxue, who has innate level 20, and the protagonist has eaten so much fairy grass. Then let the Dark Demon Evil God Tiger take the protagonist to the core area of the Star Dou Forest. If you feel the breath of the Water and Fire Dragon King, the Silver Dragon King and Ditian will definitely notice it. At that time, you can communicate with Gu Yuena, let her become a summoned beast, and help the protagonist grow into a god, and the protagonist can help Gu Yuena become a dragon god to counterattack the divine world. First, the soul beasts take the protagonist to grab the gold soul coins, and then the protagonist goes to buy whale glue, eats it himself, and takes it to the full-time mage to ask Lingling to sell it, saying that it can enhance physical fitness, and the side effects are Cui Qing's. The three-eyed golden beast sacrifices the spirit of the Fire Dragon King to the protagonist. It has the fire attribute and can also enhance the protagonist's magic system. If possible, it can become the protagonist's soul. The Red King becomes the second water ring of the Fire Dragon King's martial spirit. The first ring of the Dragon King's martial spirit is Ziji Yinshui (an attribute that is a fusion of dark and water attributes), the second ring is the Ice Bear King, the third ring is the Titan Snow Demon King, the fourth ring is the Ice Emperor, the fifth ring is the Ice Sky Snow Girl, and the sixth ring is the Sea Princess. When he reaches level 70, he will take the Ninth Poseidon Exam. The protagonist is now 19 years old. It is recommended to practice to level 70 before the age of 21, or rely on soul beast sacrifices and soul bones. In the original work, 21-year-old Tang San took the Ninth Poseidon Exam at level 66.

The wind also likes to talk. The wind's speech is sometimes brisk, sometimes gentle, and sometimes very passionate. Sometimes, it contains the sadness of the whole world. And the sound of wind, eloquent too, sometimes brisk, sometimes gentle; sometimes passionate, but other times, expressing a world of sorrows.

I stayed up late watching it, and I didn't want to put it down. Daily recommendation tickets start
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Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, super good looking

Keep writing to the end, don't let it go unfinished and don't be a eunuch.

666 Open high and go low
After reading more than ten chapters, it was proved that Haotian is too awesome. The three emperors and five emperors of the human race, the saint Nuwa and the saint Taiqing are all living on dry food. From the time after becoming a god to the Qin Dynasty, the human race could not retire from immortality. Okay, I thought Haotian had already become a saint of heaven. The golden finger of the protagonist is also quite useless.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but it's hard to write about how to train Wang Sheng and Dai Mubai to compete in the ring. After all, the gap in talent and level is huge, unless you give Wang Sheng a small trick, such as Xuanshui Dan and some heavenly materials and earthly treasures to improve him.

The book is quite good. It can be seen that the early stage is well designed, and the stories are closely connected and interlocking. But the level has dropped in the middle stage. The level up is too slow, always at level 4, and then all events are level 5, level 6 or even level 7, and the system is very confusing. There are many foreshadowings laid before the last foreshadowing was finished. The most important thing is that the protagonist has been downplayed and the combat effectiveness cannot keep up. Others are always helping.

The writing is okay, the subject matter is okay, but the plot is dragging.

The protagonist is inconsistent and capricious
It's reasonable for people's thoughts to change, but the plot about the two women around Chapter 150 is just nonsense. At the beginning, you spontaneously wanted to know what happened to your kind out of human social nature, which is reasonable, and it is also reasonable because of the existence of Dr. Xu to bring those who are willing to come into the camp. But what the hell is the plot treatment of them later? They attack with greed, and the protagonist fights back. It's almost done here. The previous attitude of asking them to perform high-risk missions was to pity them, which was hypocritical. The protagonist also said that he didn't release water in the final attack, so no one died. That's nonsense. After losing half of other people's lives and still accepting them as teammates, do you think that the only result is that they will be defeated? Madness. In the end, I told the readers with a condescending attitude to educate others, that I let them go because I considered the future of mankind and the possibility of my own loneliness. The most terrible thing is that I was afraid that what I said was wrong, giving these two women a story of reflection. If you are a WOC, you will not act directly, and you will treat the reader as an SB. Finally, let me tell you why I feel hypocritical, stupid, etc. They stay in the camp and are separated from the team, and their strength is still average. If you ask them to complete the mission of exploring runes before they can join the team, isn't this what they understand as death? Lao Li took a bunch of high-end equipment you gave him. Completing this mission is high-risk, so forget it here. You still claim it because there may not be high-risk situations in other places. It is also a good thing for them and you have helped them. Am I relying on a lie? It's extremely hypocritical. When Biaozi established a memorial arch, he directly said that he didn't want you two idiots. He looked down on you and failed the test. He also disgusted the readers. In the middle of the fight, the protagonist used all his strength to kill a level 4 bird. He said he was going to kick it with all his strength, but he did not let go. In the end, a human with a maximum combat power of level 2 was not killed. He also specially included a story of a level 4 bird coming over and killing one to show his strength. Don't you think it is inconsistent? In the end, it was not disgusting enough. One person was near death and the other was seriously injured and pretended to be dead. I also wanted to kill three people with two peaches and put in a bottle of anti-inflammatory medicine to see human nature's choices. No, buddy, you still approved it. Don't you think humans should not be the only ones living alone in the end? Don't you think there is no need to reduce the number of humans for unnecessary things? Isn't this the reason why you let them go in the end? Isn't it inconsistent? Are you the character of a fun-loving person, or a judge of moral hypocrisy? Although the previous is hypocritical enough. And there is stupidity, this is simply stupid, extremely stupid! You have crippled others and ruined half their lives, and yet you act like an educator and tell others that my strength comes first~🤑The beauty you think is worthless~🤑, if you stop here, you are just a little embarrassment without any hard-on. It must also be added that they have understood the truth of your life, regretted it, and realized it completely. You see that they are so regretful, and you feel that there are still normal people, so you will be merciful and give them another chance to join the team. Wdf, who is not a normal person, the protagonist? I really want to ask. And is this any different from the plot where others worship you as soon as the bastard's anger is turned on? This is a passerby's perspective. From the perspective of the protagonist, would you add a person to your team who attacks you because he wants to occupy the base, and is crippled by you? Isn't this stupid?

New book issue, please collect and read it, it is very important
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First time posting
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Compare water, in another sense
This subject matter is no longer new. The protagonist goes smoothly with the help of the system. What is more criticized is that every time a case is broadcast live, there is basically no follow-up, which misses the biggest joy of this type of novel-the villain is punished. Although you can write several cases at once by writing this way, it feels watery just by looking at it. All you need is a set of templates and you can keep changing cases. You can read it in Shuhuang, but I suggest you throw your mind away.

Hidden rules?
The protagonists of many novels are Air Force guys, and this one is no exception.

In which chapter of the book is the release of the book at the end of the introduction? I skipped till the end but it's not there.

The author writes less about the plot in Element City and more about Dugu Yan, and then goes to Tiandou City after the Element City is sold out
How about the author's next book about auctions? This one is so pretentious. If I write about opening a store and selling hangings, I feel a little tired at the end of the writing.











