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Too watery
Up to now, the plot has not really cut into the main plot. It has just begun. The focus is still on ranking. Although this is a necessary part of the Tianmu novel, can you finish it quickly and get into the main plot? It's almost 100 chapters and I really don't want to read this list anymore.
Highly recommended, the latest chapter, Chapter 42 is so good
So helpless! Review stuck Posted a picture
Like a female video, the protagonist is too twisted.
You can't say that the author is a real waste, but if you write that Wuhundian is a waste, go find the Holy Mother Qiandaoliu.
It's great, but it's a pity that the rest is the same
The sperm enters the brain, and the void mirror Qinglian directly revives the protagonist in seconds, and the whole drama ends.
This is the epitome of abuse
The equation of abusive writing = countless misunderstandings + countless frame-ups + countless mistresses and green teas + the male protagonist is tall, handsome and rich but has no brains... The most abusive thing about this book is that modern literature adds worms🤞experience!
This book is actually okay, but it was too tiring to read and too confusing.
The author writes well, I hope he can continue to write better
It's great to watch, both the original route and the later extra chapters. The author is very good
Lao Ya realm
If I had the time to suppress my realm and not break through, I would have cultivated to the Immortal Emperor long ago. I can still reverse punishment for the Immortal Emperor or below.
The author is awesome, the little words are all in one set.
27DAY丨Can Si Wu return to the real world
I think Si Wu can go back after becoming bigger and stronger here! I also want to see what Si Wu's world is like. Both the pure-blooded level player and Shazhu are very curious.
Very very very wow.
Very nice. , It's a really cool heroine.
This book's stance and content are both great!
I have read Chapter 351 so far. The protagonist in the book is an ordinary person who gets a golden finger (ordinary Super)! At present, the plot is not broken, and the IQ is basically online.
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White Horse - Big Black - Bingbing It looks almost like this in the back, but the horse has four legs and the gun, which is not yet fully awakened, is still dark. Ps. Please read
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So nb, he was an ordinary person before time travel, but he created his own technique after time travel?
Don't look at it, it's another level.
Fans who write about Douluo are generally weak.
Why do you need so many words? I'm really convinced
Very good rhythm
I wish the author a successful book signing😹
The author's storytelling skills are limited 1. I don't know the importance of it and write it as a running account. The intrigues of the four major families in the early stage were okay, but the plots of the Black Lotus, the secret realm of poisonous miasma, and the Golden Lotus Temple were very boring to write. It was very long but there were no ups and downs. The author also liked to intersperse funny comments, completely ruining the atmosphere of the Yakuza-ryu immortal cultivation adventure, and there was no sense of tension. The character dialogue is very poor, completely modern style, in short, it is just a drama. 2. Pressure the realm. It seems that the protagonist's strength is improving quickly. In two months, he has mastered martial arts and practiced Qi at the ninth level. But it's not like this. The author has written 200 chapters and only two months have passed in the timeline. This is entirely due to his failure to control his golden finger. He is afraid that the protagonist will upgrade too quickly and learn a bunch of messy things, such as the fusion of martial arts and the dual cultivation of immortality and martial arts. Readers only see the protagonist holding such a big gold finger, and he is still in the Qi training period for more than two hundred chapters, which is very watery.
The subject matter is good, but the updates are a bit sparse. I hope it won't be discontinued.
It ended inexplicably at the end of the writing. You could have just written an ending. I thought it was because there were no updates, but when I looked at the release date, I realized it was just like that.
The protagonist has been hiding for a long time
After it was released, the plot was boring and had nothing to do with the protagonist. Every day, I was either writing about other people's perspectives or emotional scenes. Although I am not saying that I won't write these, I have to pay attention to control. Did I change the writer after the game started?
A rubbish martial spirit is a rubbish martial spirit. What can be written about garbage like Lan Yincao?
What a fucking mess you can write. I, Jin Tian, Emperor Jin Tian, and Tao Zun kept changing and writing whatever they wanted, right? There is no fixed name.
Author, you must not stop updating. How can I live if you stop updating?
The plot development of the novel is limited and updates are too slow.
The ghosts and supernatural items controlled by the protagonist
Itself. 1-Sick Ghost (weak): You can slightly suppress and repel the evil ghost's actions through coughing. 2-Ghost haze (hallucinogenic): Within the scope shrouded by ghost haze, you can create a real illusion. After the ghost haze dissipates, the real illusion disappears; at the same time, you can also create a body, which can last forever with the blessing of supernatural power; in addition, the ghost haze can simulate other supernatural beings of itself, and can also create supernatural clones in the ghost haze; it has the ability to preserve consciousness. 3-Burned Ghost (Burn): It has an incomplete ghost realm of black soil and red flames. It must be attached to an object and can jump within the range of black soil and flames. At the same time, the fire of the Burned Ghost cannot ignite supernatural beings, but it can limit the movement of the ghost. Supernatural items. 1-Concentric Lock: A love token from the Republic of China. When opened, a curse can be released. The curse will connect people or ghosts together. Both parties will be slowly killed by the curse within a month, but they will not die from the ghost's resurrection during this period. At the same time, it has the ability to restart in disguise. 2-Three yuan of ghost money: To buy life money, you can give the money to the evil ghost, and at the same time, the evil ghost will no longer target you. 3-Several pieces of black letter paper: After completing the messenger mission, you can light it and get the guide to the ghost post office. The current source is left by the previous messenger. 4-Two Ghost Candles: The headquarters has not yet been cashed out to the protagonist. 5-Coffin Nails: The ability to suppress evil ghosts without any solution comes from the coffin nails nailed to the white bone tree. The imprisoned devil. 1-The letter delivery timed out, and the ghost post office sent out an attacking ghost with an unknown name and an unknown pattern, and was imprisoned through coffin nails. 2-Blank ghost painting, which stores the consciousness of the owner of the ghost painting and is imprisoned in the first letter delivery mission on the second floor.
Sometimes it's first person, sometimes it's third person, and it keeps changing back and forth. Also, the protagonist also needs to look at the face of the monks in the Great Saint Realm, and it is common knowledge that a demon cultivator on the first level of Immortal Platform can deduce that he will become an emperor, and that he will grow old when his lifespan is reached. How come you don't even know that you are a quasi-emperor and you still have to ask. Don't be too outrageous.
Who are the heroines? The author tells
Is there a little Huo Niang? You have changed Huo Yuhao's nature. It's hard to tolerate it if you don't accept it. The cover is Gu Yue, so is there the Silver Dragon King? Is there Xiao Xiao? Just don't have Ma Xiaotao. There are also some cannon fodder female supporting characters in the original work, such as Ning Tian. Don't accept her for a long time. What kind of son-in-law are you?
It's like a hodgepodge. After reading dozens of chapters, I have no idea what it's about. When I get to Douluo Continent, I end up like a little brat, laughing and joking all day long. The Flame Dragon Armor is used like a fool.
Everything has happened to Lang Cheng. Bo City has not even left the city, and it is almost exposed.
Did you buy level 5? Whose practice is to do it layer by layer, and those who are in the Qi training period still need money?
The writing is quite good. It's like watching Diamond A. I personally feel that your writing is the best among the similar ones I've read so far. Come on.
So far, the writing still has a light novel flavor, which is quite good.
It looks good, I love reading it, please update it more often, it is recommended to update it ten times a day.
In fact, I have read a book that combines Butterfly Lovers with mythology, fantasy and history.
Operator, how do you differentiate? The world of Jiuding Ji is a two-and-a-half-star world, and the World of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty is also a two-and-a-half-star world. I would like to ask, are these two on the same level? Can the Shattered Void in the world of Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty beat the strongest in the world of Jiuding Ji? There is also the world of Da Ming Rivers and Lakes. It was said to be a one-star world at the beginning, **, the second time I went there, it was a two-star and three-star world, and you, Daming Jiang How come the Lake World has turned into the Jiuzhou World in the Immortality World? Are these two the same thing? Are they the same level? How many bigwigs are lurking in the Jiuzhou World in the Immortality World? You, the Ming Jianghu World, and Linghu Chong-level one-star worlds are also coming to compete with you, and you, the Ming Jianghu World, are already in the Ming Dynasty. **, After thousands of years, the industrial revolution did not happen the second time I went to the West. It's really fake,
Why hasn't it been updated yet?
Why hasn't it been updated yet? Why hasn't it been updated yet?
Wow, you can't watch this. Anyone who has read the original movie will feel like it's going to hit their head.
This book is at the level of a master even if it is on a female channel
Hurry and update soon. . . . . . . Like, praise, praise, praise
27DAY丨Can Si Wu return to the real world?
I hope that I can, and I also hope that Si Wu can freely travel between the game and the real world, and get both.
It's still a book you can read, and it's no problem to pass the time.
It's a pity that it is not easy to stay in this world for a long time.
Who knows the value of this sentence? I feel that Be will be included in the subsequent plot. I hope the back part looks good. I think the front part is okay. It should be a small climax in Chapter 5. I'm really curious about the identity of the boy in scarlet clothes? The emperor, the prince or a charlatan?
It looks good, just a little bit more.
It looks good, I love reading it. Come on, author, please give me more