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Some of them don't match the original settings, but that doesn't matter. No matter which force you join, as long as it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist's fighting power and the protagonist doesn't feel aggrieved, it's a good novel.

I hope there will be a heroine and Dr. Chen, will they come?
Don't you want to see the heroine Chen Chengcheng, Huang Moli and the others come?

It's really bad. I'm always being stepped on. I'm too pretentious. That Yang Di book is so much better than this one.

Nice! ! ! ! Please update! ! ! Finished reading woo woo woo~~

The book is good
Can't you just pay the money back quickly? Are your current funds insufficient, and you are always stuck? Personal opinion.

Hey, learn from the nerd next door. People lose money in stocks and are weak. Are you the same? Just follow his example.

Very beautiful, very scary... I have been reading unlimited novels for many years, and the pacing and ghost creation of this book are very good... The number of female supporting characters is very good, there are really many. The control of both the dungeon and the main plot is quite good. The only drawback may be that there are too many descriptions of the appearance of the protagonist/female supporting character. When describing (appearance), it is more about the character, which is more superficial and less realistic. Maybe this is why the author is said to be a bit masculine. I believe the author will definitely improve in the future! I won't give any advice, hahaha. Xiaoxiao sent a gift to show his appreciation, hoping that the author would not be discouraged.

Personal opinion: There are too many dialogues, which affects listening to the book.

I didn't read it, because I was afraid of being disappointed. The biggest fear is that I will enter the devil's door, and my heart will be like the Virgin Mary. Isn't it good that Momen just writes about being selfish, cruel, and ruthless (if you stay alive, you'll live longer)?

Very pretty. . . . . . . . . Please update. Hee hee hee hee hee hee

They pretended to threaten the Sorting Hat in front of them, making it look like there was a big fight. As a result, he withered when he hit a giant monster later.

1. Smooth writing and ups and downs of the plot "The writing style of this novel is like flowing clouds and flowing water. It can not only depict the emotions of the characters delicately, but also promote the plot with a compact rhythm, making you feel like you are in the world of the story." 2. The character creation is vivid and vivid "The image of the protagonist is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, with both passionate responsibility and real human struggle. The supporting characters are also charming in their own way. It is as if you can hear their souls beating between the lines." 3. The world view is grand and self-consistent "The author has constructed a universe full of imagination. Whether it is a fantasy setting or a realistic metaphor, it can be cleverly integrated into the narrative, making people feel the depth of thought while being amazed." 4. Emotional resonance and clear growth line "The love-hate entanglement in the story is intertwined with the protagonist's growth trajectory. It contains both the cruelty of fate and the tender redemption. It is both heart-wrenching and healing to read." 5. "This work is a masterpiece worth watching. It is mind-blowing in the early stage and steady in the middle and late stages. Although the ending is regrettable, the process is amazing enough."

Disgusting, the male lead is disgusting, the second male lead is even more disgusting There is a Bai Yueguang who wants to marry the second female, saying that he wants to continue the family line. He is still thinking that if the second female knows that he has Bai Yueguang, he will slander his Bai Yueguang. Wow, does it mean that in his eyes, other women except his Bai Yueguang are reproductive tools? The second female with her family background will not be able to marry him. Is there not a better person? The heroine and the hero are reunited. What do they need to reconcile? Is the heroine so bad in the eyes of the author? The damage in the previous life is a fact. No matter how you say the damage has been done, why do you still treat her like this in this life?

I finally know why the rating is low. It's the first time traveler to self-destruct. Many people think this is a poisonous point. How can I put it, I don't mind self-destruction at first, but after reading the first part and then looking at your self-destruction identity at the end, it really feels a little poisonous. But it's still within the acceptable range

Show me the protagonist's determination to be a eunuch at the beginning?

I feel that the description of vehicle speed is a bit flawed in language, but there is also a version that feels very novel.

There are too many problems with the introduction and it does not pay attention to seniority.
Are you serious in the introduction? It says in the introduction that the eldest brother who has become a sworn brother should be called uncle. So shouldn't the older brother who is sworn in be called uncle? How does your seniority matter? According to what you said, you are sworn sworn friends with a person. He is younger than you. You were originally going to call him younger brother, but you ended up calling him grandson. Do you think it is appropriate?

If you say anything to others, are you trying to be a dog to others? Just half of it is enough.

This is my first time reading a book on QQ. I like leopard the most. I feel like he is so miserable and it makes my heart tighten. If there really is a leopard, I hope he will be happy every day in the future.

Emphasis on love, light on business! After reading almost 260 chapters, it turns out that the business has just started and the relationship has not made much progress! If you like slow love stories, you can read it!

Fake cheats posted on forums gave so many destiny points. Even if they didn't sleep with Jiang Xin, they didn't give them to her. She slept with Liu Tao and gave them 1,000.

Why isn't it updated? The author needs to work harder. This book has the potential to become a hit.

It feels very contradictory. There are a lot of things that are against the sky, but I still have to fight for my life by using the three-seal talisman to fight for my life. I don't understand it. And knowing the plot, I talk about cleaning up others, but at the same time I am not strong enough and very high-profile. I am completely speechless.

This book is okay. It doesn't have any bloody or frustrating plot. It should get good results.

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I can't see enough of it. Please give the author more help in coding.

Has it been eight years since 2018? But this book is really good and it seems that the author will not come back again.

Can the author write a story where after the protagonist dies, he is controlled by the destructive attribute and wants to destroy the planet? Just like Boruto in Naruto😘

The heroine's town hall
Little Medical Fairy: One of the female protagonists, the future Empress of Ten Thousand Poisons, and the mistress of the Great Thousand World Star Pavilion.

What is this written about? It's Pokémon, Naruto, and Kamen Rider. You are not traveling through the heavens. Are you writing about Ultraman? I don't write much about Ultraman, I only write about other things.

Author, why hasn't the protagonist yet fought against the emperor? Is your realm improving so slowly? Other novels are all over the place here. They have all gone to the world. Is your protagonist's progress so slow?

Come on, come on, update quickly. Come on, come on, update quickly. Come on, come on, update quickly.
















