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The only drawback is that the number of words is too few
It's great. I haven't read a book in a long time without skipping a chapter.
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It looks good, please give me more. I like the heroine very much
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The author obviously knows nothing about business, but he also cleverly avoids this part of the content. However, the numbers that occasionally appear are also very exaggerated. The fact that Big Fish and Begonia purchased the Big Fish song license for 10 million highlights the outrageousness. The most outrageous thing is the song selection. You can hardly imagine the author's brain circuit. One song by the author with a good plot can make you have a strong urge to abandon the book! The kind that doesn't care about the life or death of others at all! I ignored all the minor problems in the middle and finally I could bear it and the male protagonist went solo. However, the following plot made me think that the male protagonist might as well continue to be in a boy band. The author has no plan at all, just writing it blindly! IQ also went offline immediately. I couldn't stand it any longer and gave up, otherwise I was really afraid of being poisoned to death!
It is indeed a good book and worth reading. It is a rare book.
The writing is very good, why don't you continue writing? What a pity, I look forward to the author continuing to write 👍
Today's gold fingers have long since evolved into a system. There are no rings, mirrors, scrolls or stones like those decades ago. They have been replaced by a new generation of gold fingers. It is no longer popular. After all, things like this are easy to be snatched away and easily discovered. Unless you don't use it for the rest of your life, you will be discovered sooner or later if you dare to use it. The system does not have this shortcoming.
Updates are slow, please hurry up and update more.
Mark, come on, haha, I like heroines with strong martial arts
It's still pretty good, but I finished it in one go and it's gone.
I have not read any other books by the author, and this is also the first book I have followed to the end. From your comments, this one seems to be The Eunuch. It was quite attractive in the early stage. I listened to it on video software for 3 hours and then came here again. I felt very sorry that I didn't see the ending.
Very beautiful, hope to continue to work hard!
Really abstract. You can make me laugh to death
There are too many typos, can you correct them?
Overall, I would rate it as an excellent work. It doesn't follow others' lead and writes its own original plot. The language and text are a bit clichéd, but it's not bad at all. It's better than those who write anecdotes, don't convey the meaning of their words, and make bad jokes. One of the shortcomings I feel is that Gold Finger is not good enough. If you want to give people a sense of immersion and satisfaction in fan fiction, Gold Finger cannot be too weak. Otherwise, you will not be as good as the original Han Li, or not much different from him, and it will be very unpleasant to read. It means that you have a crushing advantage over Han Li. The other is the magical weapons, magical powers, skills, fighting skills, and the cultivation process. These can be written carefully. A big highlight of the original work of Mortal is the wonderful fighting skills. There are many magical weapons and magical powers. The training process is mysterious and mysterious, and it gives a refreshing feeling of upgrading. Another person, you just had one fight and didn't get two moves, but your magic power can't keep up. You have always said that your magic power is deeper than that of the same level, but after all the companions fought, I haven't seen anyone with weak kidneys like you. Since your magic power is deeper than others, you must show it. In a fight of the same intensity, others are weak and you are still tough. This shows how powerful your skills are. Subsequent important opportunities such as the Gold-eating Insect, the Golden Thunder Bamboo, the Xuantian Xuantian Immortal Vine, the Golden Que Jade Book, etc. Need to be dealt with. I think it is inappropriate for some fan fiction to give these to Han Li. These are great opportunities in the spiritual world and even unique and irreplaceable opportunities. You can just grab the other unimportant ones. It is simply incomprehensible to give these away, unless you write a better opportunity than this, and you will not look down on these. My personal suggestion is that the more you write, the better.
I skipped a bit and read a story about a pig's trotter whose name was a bit confusing.
Just write "Celebrating More Than Years" alone, don't wear other books, it will look different.
Damn, it's simply too poisonous. Firstly, Tianmeng Ice Silkworm is still sleeping in the far north at this time. Secondly, what kind of flaws are there to make up for? Can't they be made up through fairy grass and soul bones? If you have a second martial soul, you don't want it. What kind of bullshit do you want? It's simply poisonous to death. Only fools will read the follow-up content of your book.
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Zheng Peng left the Han Dynasty and returned to the Hutian area.
Obscene thoughts, different logic, and inconsistent plot
No wonder the name of the tweet on Kuaishou is called Yifang Waste, it turns out he is really a waste😐😐
Nothing matters, the most important thing is that the male lead is good, the female lead is beautiful, and the novel is good to read. The male protagonist is gentle and considerate, with various personalities. The heroine plays with everything with ease. All aspects of action description and language description highlight their respective shining points and characteristics.
I don't understand who is the protagonist, or is there no protagonist? Everyone is better than him, and there is not even one tenth of the subdivision. Is this the result of grinding?
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There are quite a lot of trivial things.
Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly
I like this kind of strategic writing, step by step
It's a good idea, but the AI is a bit obvious, and the plot is too fragmented.
Chapter 321, Tang San's domain is changed to Lin Xuan
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
Come on, come on, keep writing~ It's very good writing
When will Qin Bi become proud? The two little breasts are so cute. Find more good things for Qin Bi, and then Qin He will be so angry with that shameless thing
A very good novel. If you like fairy tales, you must read it. It is worth reading.
I was running out of books, but the writing is really good.
The author's writing and plot are very good throughout.
After asking about the part about martial soul fusion in the original book, after Wang Dong's spiritual sea of consciousness was detected in the soul master competition and the Clear Sky Hammer was revealed, Tianmeng really didn't know Wang Dong's identity, or was it just a guess? My understanding is that Tianmeng probably guessed that Wang Dong and Tang San had some kind of relationship, but deliberately didn't reveal his guess in order to become a god.
The heroine is committing suicide, and she gave up after watching it halfway
I was tricked by DY into becoming a member. Just don't stop updating. After finishing Delta, I felt a little bit refreshed after reading a few chapters.
Brother, let me give you a review
Your problem is that it's too slow. It's seventy or eighty chapters into the next chapter, and I haven't progressed to the next plot yet. It's not that you don't write novice upgrade articles, you don't know how to write upgrade articles. It's too difficult to write. Let me tell you how to write it. The protagonist is seriously ill and will soon die, and then relies on health-preserving skills. This is all right. What is the use of health-preserving skills? There is no cash withdrawal. From beginner to proficient, it is useless. At least it is superficial The board doesn't show up. This is not an upgrade article. You upgraded without timely feedback. At least the lifespan should be changed. Then you can maintain your health and your body will be better. It's no problem to go to the back mountain to collect herbs. The key point is to meet the Li family. It's a failure. Why do you want to create a boss that runs through dozens of chapters? Just because of some ginseng, it was not discovered, and then I ate ginseng and achieved great success in health, which is equivalent to practicing martial arts for more than ten years. At least I am no longer sick. I am writing that the protagonist wants to practice martial arts and is humiliated by his old friend, and then he has the courage to go to the black market. Black market, and then go to Fucheng or Zhoucheng. You have to change the map, you have to become enemies, you have to change skills, and you have to mention the panel in three or two chapters. It is better not to have a panel. The protagonist is bullshit. Wait, look at the mink hair you wrote. It is too protracted. A plot has dozens of chapters to complete, involves countless characters, and is too impatient. Do you want to write a primary school student's article without a full stop?
It's rubbish. It's just trying to attract traffic and it's not as good as AI writing.
Why is it so watery?
It was a good read, but all of a sudden, there were just a few chapters of memories, life, once or twice. It was okay, but it was bound to be published within 10 chapters, 400 chapters, 300 chapters of memories, and only 100 chapters were progressing.
It's pretty average. It's okay to watch for fun.
Can you try the mysterious goddess of the night?
It's rare to see a book with normal content
It's just that the pace is a bit fast, but it's still within the acceptable range.
Not as good as that book of Confucianism
And the protagonist of that movie is known to be reincarnated 98753 It's as miserable as Su Ming
It's so beautiful, it's so beautiful, it's so beautiful, I'll say important things three times