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Nothing else. Finally someone who doesn't accept dogs.
Have you seen the latest, eunuch? It feels like the author is giving up!
Author, how long will it take for the protagonist to leave the Far North? You can go first. Eyes of ice and fire. Absorb the ambrosia inside. Repair the protagonist's origin. The Ice and Fire Dragon King is probably not completely dead, and still has his soul inside. As the main character's brother. He should be happy to help the protagonist. In the future, the protagonist can also resurrect the Ice and Fire Dragon King. I'm also curious, will this novel have a female protagonist? There should be, after all, the protagonist is a dragon. There is going to be a heroine. Is it a soul beast? Or humans? Or is it both? Should it be written with multiple female protagonists? After all, in your novel, the main character's mother is a human being. His father is a dragon god. The protagonist inherits his father's bloodline abilities. It can also transform into a human dragon 🐉 Since my father is relatively strong, so. The protagonist is in the form of a dragon. The father's model is 90%, and the mother's model only accounts for 10%. After all, the father is the creator of the Dragon God, the creator of the fairy world. Do you need some privileges? Finally, the author, you only update two chapters of this novel every day, which is a bit too few and not enough to read.
Don't look at it, don't look at it (if you really want to look at it, pretend I didn't say it)
What the hell, the author has no literary talent and suffers from literary youth disease. After reading Chapter 40, I felt a little better about clearing my grievances. The song was so bad that I even started writing poetry again, and it was modern poetry.
How many female protagonists are there in the novel? Are there any?
The dark world of cultivating immortals is like a roll. If you don't grab resources, you will die. The special world of cultivating immortals is that the bosses are not allowed to burn, kill and plunder. It's good. The latter is more comfortable😯
A good book, but Zhu Zhuqing and Meng Yiran are badly written.
I can only say that it is a pity that such a good gun mount as Zhu Zhuqing was killed, alas.
The writing is not good and the plot is awkward. The idea is right but there is too little ink. Readers can't stand the written content. I suggest you go back and settle it down.
Rice has recommended books to you. Where is your book?
I always thought there was something wrong with Liu Erlong's twelve or thirteen years old. Maybe change it to twenty-two-three? I always feel like I'm going to be shocked
Please.
Write another book, or continue writing. Damn it, this one is so well written.
I started using Ai before I even understood it. It's so messed up that it doesn't even match the original work🤗
Happy birthday
Happy birthday Happy birthday Ye Shen😿😿🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
I have read several books by Shiiguguda. They are as good-looking as ever. The characters are full of characters and the pace of the story is very comfortable. Dangdang~ Let's continue reading the next one.
The member score of 8.0 May be low, 😶 personal opinion
The author continues to update. . Quite good looking. . . All kinds of support. .
The writing is quite good, but will you, the author, finish the book?
I've finished reading Chapter 22 and have a few questions. 1. There are a lot of missing punctuation marks in the dialogue, which greatly affects the perception. 2. What the hell kind of treatment does the protagonist get? He doesn't pay enough attention to the orphans in the inner courtyard + Ultimate Fire, so he only cares about his food and doesn't give him any training resources? There are no elixirs, no whale glue, and extreme attributes are not common attributes. Not to mention training in the golden tree every day, at least the soul beast meat can be eaten freely. How about a hundred-year whale glue? Just a few months of normal training and 2 hours of exercise time every day to let the protagonist try the thousand-year soul ring. Seriously? Do you not pay so much attention to the future elder/master of the Poseidon Pavilion? 3. The author wants to accept Zhang Lexuan, but he has only been with her for 6 years? I've never seen an old man, no, do you look down on Ultimate Fire so much? It's okay to bring Wang Yan's useless soul ring to the protagonist. What's the point of bringing those little brats? What's the point of hibernating? You don't have a soul ring to kill a 600-year-old soul beast alone and absorb a thousand-year soul ring, and you don't avoid people? 4. This is the most annoying thing. Even if Kong Deming suppresses his cultivation and becomes a level 6 soul mentor, his physical fitness is still at the level of a Titled Douluo. Even if he is poisoned, he will not be able to defeat a century-old soul beast, let alone the poison of a century-old soul beast. What kind of spirit beast is this, so poisonous?
A bit wise
The male protagonist said that he liked the female protagonist so much, but he could stop looking for her after leaving the countryside. He did not write to her, did not call her, and did not contact her again. The stepmother said that he was not allowed to disturb the female protagonist, but the male protagonist really did not look for her. Then the male and female protagonists got engaged, and the female protagonist's adoptive parents doted on the female protagonist so much that they didn't tell her clearly about the male protagonist's situation? ! The heroine was reincarnated and knew that the female partner was the stepmother's daughter. She knew that she had deliberately switched the relationship back then. She didn't want to directly charge the person with child trafficking and send her to prison. She also hid the viciousness of her eldest brother, second brother, stepmother and daughter. Anyway, it seems that filling in the holes is too far-fetched, and both the male and female protagonists look like fools.
Didn't Duguyan and Gu Bei make the list? What is her rank?
Now the demand is exquisite, and it took me half a month to find this one that I can see to the end.
Is it a stallion story or a sweet dog story?
It's okay, not bad, and the Cavaliers praise it
I have read more than a dozen chapters so far, and I feel that this book is quite well written. The first is the spirit of chivalry that I care most about in novels with knightly elements. The protagonist in this book obviously has it. From the first time the protagonist fought in Ning Rongrong's dream to his subsequent attitude towards the dream soul ring and nightmare soul ring, he was already ahead of most other Douluo fan fiction protagonists. The author of the creation here should have learned from Mo in the original drama, and applied part of Mo's family-oriented and kind-hearted character to the protagonist. This is much better than those fanfics that only wear a layer of knight skin, at least it will not be so dramatic. Secondly, the sewing of knights and Douluo is not obtrusive. It is not like Zhutianliu's I use my power system and you use your power system. Instead, the knight is integrated into Douluo's promotion system, such as the dream soul ring and the nightmare soul ring, but at the same time, it also retains the setting that zzz's dream capsule comes from itself, that is, it is extracted with a gashapon. But probably because of the new author, some of the plots are still a bit too cliche. For example, after awakening the martial spirit and being provoked in public, this part feels a little abrupt and a little bit intellectual. Then there are some descriptions. Compared with some of the articles I have read before, sometimes I feel a little embarrassed. Maybe it is because of the emotional drama of a six-year-old child. It may also be because of the dialogues similar to youth romance novels, and there are some exaggerated writing methods. I feel that I am a straight person, so some of them cannot be read, but it is generally acceptable (after all, this is the land of love, even if the knight comes, he will give me a good talk about love) In short, it seems that this book is indeed not bad at the moment. If you are short of books, you can give it a try. The author will also work hard to update it. Don't give up halfway.
The setting is very good, but it's a pity that the writing failed. I couldn't finish the eunuch if I couldn't finish it. I'm speechless.
It's really beautiful. I hope I won't stop updating the eunuchs.
Water rises from the sky, a flash spell floods 10 chapters
The rating is almost 6 points. The writing is okay, but it is classified into games. I originally thought it was a lord novel in the game category, but it reads like a historical novel. It's okay if you read it as a historical novel, but it's a bit unbearable if you read it as a game novel.
It looks pretty good, but updates are slow.
Very warm, thank you author for letting me read this masterpiece
Medium, you can't say it's garbage because it does have a refreshing feeling in it. The writing style has also reached the level of normal online writing. The only drawback is that there is a serious lack of logic.
I just came to see a joke
Come on! Don't stop it😯It will be funny if you do it😯
The cute girl is the biggest flaw so far. It affects the viewing too much and is too distracting.
This book is well written, but I wonder why so few people read it?
You said Faye Wong has no partner. I think there's nothing wrong with you writing songs for her. Now she's not a diva and she's not single. Write a stylish song. If someone says something to you, you should respond. Just give me a note🐶
Level 36 at nine years old, level 40 at 12 years old, looks uncomfortable
This plot is retarded. The lair of a thousand-year-old soul beast has soul bones and attached soul bones. You could just write that it has a hundred-thousand-year-old soul bone.
9772 My family, I want to join the v group!
Very good, very good, keep up the good work, author.
Your venom ability is written like the black light virus
You shouldn't have expectations for this kind of junk novel. It's wrong to have hundreds of them without ratings. I didn't pay attention to the few negative reviews in the comment section. . After it was released, people were crazy about it. Chapter 156: Feed your father a big mouthful. What the hell was it written about?
This is not true. .
Why doesn't anyone write book reviews😬 This makes me a little embarrassed🫠
This is my first time reading a book about Clash Royale
Why don't you change all the genders and write the male protagonist as a female and Gu Yuena as a male? Then it won't be strange to me. Don't write it as a delicate and pitiful one and insist that he is a male protagonist with a male and female appearance. I think he is basically a female.
I give you a five-star review, hey, hahaha
If he has a foreign author, he must have more female protagonists and update it quickly.
Come on, the author must have more female protagonists. That would be great.
Come on, the author must accept all the heroines