Beginning as a Tantric Academy Monk

It's a bit novel, but there are a lot of "professional terms" used in the article. People who don't understand it will be very confused, and sometimes they will feel a little conflict with each other. A thing that is essentially the same, in different places or different people, will have different names, what is the deity to worship, and what is it? What is the purpose of enshrining the deity of the Tantric Dharma? At first it was said that the degree of a good teacher is the sixth level, and later it was said that so and so has obtained the fifth level of the good teacher. So whether the good teacher is the sixth level, or all classes are good teachers, it is a general and a bit messy feeling.

The writing is long-winded, which dilutes the sense of oppression from the evil ghosts and the tension of survival. It is uninteresting to read and the rhythm is wrong.

The article mentioned lions as guardians many times, and I was very curious. Is there still a lion in the Tibetan environment? I looked it up out of curiosity and found out that their lions are dogs, and the snow lions are white Tibetan mastiffs. The description in the article is called a domineering one, with a roar that suppresses all directions! I was instantly out of touch and laughed to death. I just wanted to say, "What is the dog barking?" It's hard to describe the Tibetan Mastiff's fighting prowess, which can't even beat a wolf.

There is a lot of nonsense in the writing, and a lot of things are repeated. More than ten chapters basically talk about one thing, without any plot advancement.

In fact, I have read it many times. The setting background is very good, and everything about some sects in Tibet is very detailed. Originally, these two points can be said to be a breath of fresh air in today's novels, which can give full marks. However, the repeated explanation of the setting background has reached the point of being long-winded. After reading about 80 pieces, the plot has almost no advancement, and it is stagnant. Moreover, he is not a new author, but the writing style is extremely jerky, the reading is not smooth, and it is tasteless. It is a pity to abandon it.

I came in feeling good about the setting, but I haven't read a few chapters yet. It's too confusing. I don't know what it's about. What's going on here and there? Author, can you tell me what is written here? One moment, the protagonist is asked to prepare a tribute. He looks like he is about to die. The protagonist is suppressed and is not ready. Suddenly he gets better and becomes a wild horse? And then suddenly he was named the protagonist again? ? ? What the hell? You have to make this book understandable. It means telling a story. You should make it clear at least. What do you want to tell me? Is my understanding ability too poor?

I feel that the audience for this novel will be relatively small. I suggest that the author use relatively easy-to-understand vernacular in describing the psychological descriptions of some characters and the environment. It is obviously a word that means "holding", and it can also give you some tricks. I often use some special religious terms. I can guess what it means, but it is tiring to keep guessing.

Originally, I was attracted by the novel settings in this book, but after patiently reading more than a hundred chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. There were too many dialogues, and the appropriate jokes and flirting dialogues made it interesting, but the repeated dialogues inevitably made me bored. Sometimes one dialogue even took up one chapter, and it felt like the author was coding. In addition, the author's writing style is very good, but I feel that I have not handled the outline of this book well. I feel that there is no main plot at all. I just write the plot that comes to mind, like a headless fly. There are very few climax plots. It is difficult to attract me with the subsequent small plots

The plot is okay, but some of the details and Goldfinger's narration are very general and vague in many places, especially regarding some specific contents. The author will always use the form or language to describe, or various descriptions. He will use some sentences above that are not very fluent, and seem to be incomprehensible. But in fact, if he changes his meaning, everyone can understand it, but the author doesn't want to do this, just use this inscrutable tone. To be honest, I feel that you have to read some things several times, and you may not even understand it, and you will feel that there is a grammatical defect or something. I don't know if the author did it intentionally or what, but I feel that this is the place where people are criticized. I don't know if this problem will continue in the future, but at least it is this style within the 50 chapters I read!

The subject matter is indeed good and attractive enough, but when I first watched "My Weird Life", the strange and changeable, absurd and terrifying scenes described in it were more abundant than this one. In fact, if the writing is good, I won't say anything. But when watching it, there was a sense of déjà vu that was clearly about to exert force, but suddenly became weak, which made people unable to get up and down. The verbal description feels unclear, the logic is confusing, and there is no clear understanding. What's more, maybe I have a filter, and the introduction says it's original, but whether it's a secret realm or opening a temple to pretend to be dirty, it gives me a sense of familiarity, which leads to a feeling that the filter says this is original, so I can only support one.