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The levels of skills, monsters, and immortal cultivation resources are all messed up, and the author doesn't know how to change them.

Although Donghuang can currently enter the strange world, he will be unable to get out like the Wushi Emperor. Only when he reaches the level of Red Dust Immortal can he enter and exit the strange world at will.

Soul penetration, crushing the protagonist to death, you can withdraw

What else can I say, although I don't know much about Zhetian, but I can only say that this author is stronger than me, Duyun Chaos Body. Let's not care about the ruthless brother in the book, the Holy Body, who can fuse the Tianxin Seal. I have nothing to say. I have become a true immortal and Huang Tiandi in four lifetimes. You are not qualified. This logic is nonsense. I really have nothing to say. This is really the worst fan fiction. If you don't know how to write it, just don't write it. What else do you write? What's the difference between this and writing about incest?

Very interesting to watch. Highly recommended. The plot is exciting and full of ups and downs.

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Isn't Tang Hao dead? Didn't the little rabbit lose his memory after being caught?

Come on, the author will tell you how the protagonist was still born after his parents died.
How did the protagonist's parents give birth to him after they died? Was he born in the underworld?

It feels like it was written by AI, and there is a strong sense of dissonance.

Is the author male or female? Is the protagonist of this book a woman disguised as a man?
The daily life of the protagonist and Lao Zhang is described like Lao Zhang's daughter-in-law. The way she talks and gets along is so interesting, and the way she takes care of her sister is almost like her sister's mother, so I asked the protagonist or the author if she is a girl.

First of all, I have read Chapter 208 where the protagonist has given birth to a baby, but I bought Chapter 530. Let me tell you my personal views on this novel. The first poisonous point is that it is too ink-drawn. Whether it is plot advancement, cultivation or fighting, I will not go into details. The second point is that the biggest poisonous point is that the combat power is suppressed. The protagonist is more powerful than Han Li in the original novel. There are so many treasures and powerful skills, and the skills are so much better than the protagonist of the original book. The protagonist in the original book can compete with the middle Nascent Soul one or two in the early Nascent Soul. If he is lucky, he can kill them.

They also made all the colors white. It's really disgusting. They know how to filter readers.

If there are a few more female protagonists, will Meng Hongchen be able to accept them?

The author should update more quickly. There must be more female protagonists.

Fuck, it's really water. The more I look at it, the angrier it becomes. I'm so annoyed.

Don't say too much and don't waste too much. I hope you can stand up to the genius scientists.

Chapter 321, the soul master's already fragile body is changed to Tang San's already fragile body

The author should update more quickly. Many female protagonists receive direct five-star reviews.

I feel that the people here have no brains. Since everyone knows it is a storyteller, then this thing must be fake. Why do so many people come online, and people criticize you and ask you to explain for so long? I don't think you are here to write a novel, you are here to write a defense. And I think your protagonist is like a fool. Others have humiliated you so much. If you ask me to open a few heads to show them, especially Sword Douluo and Bone Douluo, I should have opened their heads.

The author has a tendency to commit suicide and destroy society, and is in a bad mental state

It's too hard to read a few words in one sentence. You know how to divide it into paragraphs. If you don't express the complete meaning, you will divide it into paragraphs. You can't finish a sentence in one page.

It's not interesting. It feels stingy in terms of ability and imagination. The only saving grace is that the author's description of the characters is okay, but this cannot solve the boringness of the novel itself. Even if the experience card is played out, it is just an experience card, and it does not bring a comprehensive sense of growth to the male protagonist at all.

In the opening chapter, the sixth level of martial arts can only deal with monsters. The protagonist doesn't even have one level. Then the second and third brothers in the family have the ability to drive monsters, and they all want to deal with him. So do you think it will take hundreds of chapters until the protagonist has the ability to protect himself?

I read this book without missing a chapter. If it were not for the first chapter, I would give this book five stars. It is very well written. But in the first chapter, you said that you are coming back to save Chinese-language film and television, which suddenly raised my expectations for you. After reading everything, I can only give it three stars, because if you want to save Chinese-language film and television, you have to become a capital to grab the right to speak and formulate rules. Just making good movies is useless.

The progress is too slow. There are 30 chapters in total, with an average of one force every 10 chapters.

It has the flavor of the original work, which is quite excellent.

I like it, it would be nice if there were more words in one chapter

To be honest, the entire God Throne except the beginning and the end. The middle part is something you can watch or not, and the more you watch it, the more you want to sleep.

What a pity. Good platform.
The platform is good, but it's a pity that not many people like this book. I'll give it a second-tier book.

The writing is weird and my writing skills are not up to par. I don't want to be unconventional in my writing style. It looks awkward.

















