
Devouring Starry Heart, Phantom Demon Lord
by Morning Clouds And Dusk Snow
About This Novel
The soul from the earth was brought into the star-devouring world by the original jade embryo of the ancient innate spiritual treasure, and merged into the soul of the fallen world lord. The genetic level of the body was perfect, and the qualifications, understanding, soul, and will were all greatly improved, becoming a super genius that surpassed the original ancestor! When Luo Feng stepped into the starry sky, he realized that his teacher was already the most heaven-defying existence!
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Official(9)Scraped 27d ago
Very nice, please update soon! ! ! ! ! ! Renew
A paragraph can be divided into several paragraphs, otherwise it will be too long and it will seem like you will subconsciously skip it.
The more you write, the better
The first few pages are written like a diary. It makes my head hurt just to write them down later. There are some things that are unnecessary to repeat and it would be better not to write them down. For example, it's useless to tell them all over again for the elves. For the treasures obtained, there is no need to explain them one by one. Just say how many treasure points they can be replaced. Others are pretty good.
It's boring, not much to say, the writing style needs to be improved, it's a pity that Goldfinger
The material seems to lack depth and needs more detail to enrich it.
I can only say that this book is so poorly written that I can hardly read it.
It's written like a running account... What's the advantage?
Liu Shui Wen, rubbish! Even a stream of literature can be written like this rubbish
The logic is a bit poor
The origin of the law of time and space admits that it is also wrong. There are also 10081 genes, which are either taken away or directly killed and used as materials or focused on cultivating, making it impossible for such content to appear. In addition, the inheritance of the god general is also a treasure that directly protects your life. This situation will only be given if you have not been killed before and have been focused on training. Also, the invincibility of the king is not a realm but a title of combat power. Immortality is divided into three levels. The first is ordinary. The second level of feudal lord is the immortal body plus a branch of the three major directions of time or space, and the complete realization of the law of space or time. I admit that the third level is a complete realization of one of the three major directions. Even if the genetic level is doubled, it is still 100,000 times the divine power.
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Official(9)Scraped 27d ago
Very nice, please update soon! ! ! ! ! ! Renew
A paragraph can be divided into several paragraphs, otherwise it will be too long and it will seem like you will subconsciously skip it.
The more you write, the better
The first few pages are written like a diary. It makes my head hurt just to write them down later. There are some things that are unnecessary to repeat and it would be better not to write them down. For example, it's useless to tell them all over again for the elves. For the treasures obtained, there is no need to explain them one by one. Just say how many treasure points they can be replaced. Others are pretty good.
It's boring, not much to say, the writing style needs to be improved, it's a pity that Goldfinger
The material seems to lack depth and needs more detail to enrich it.
I can only say that this book is so poorly written that I can hardly read it.
It's written like a running account... What's the advantage?
Liu Shui Wen, rubbish! Even a stream of literature can be written like this rubbish
The logic is a bit poor
The origin of the law of time and space admits that it is also wrong. There are also 10081 genes, which are either taken away or directly killed and used as materials or focused on cultivating, making it impossible for such content to appear. In addition, the inheritance of the god general is also a treasure that directly protects your life. This situation will only be given if you have not been killed before and have been focused on training. Also, the invincibility of the king is not a realm but a title of combat power. Immortality is divided into three levels. The first is ordinary. The second level of feudal lord is the immortal body plus a branch of the three major directions of time or space, and the complete realization of the law of space or time. I admit that the third level is a complete realization of one of the three major directions. Even if the genetic level is doubled, it is still 100,000 times the divine power.









