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A different Chinese style Chunwu Daoshi, the same charm. "Spring Things" is currently one of the most promising fan fictions. The degree of restoration is very high. I usually feel full of pictures when I look at it.

A cute youth story, you can read it if you like the arrogant female protagonist with a cold appearance and the gentle male protagonist.

2. Writing style The writing style is majestic and full of aura from the beginning. The description of the world of cultivating immortals also seems natural, with rich character descriptions, martial arts that focus on "power", and it is relatively difficult to set up. The reversal is a bit passionate, but this kind of emotional sustenance is a bit like hanging on. How to grasp the emotions that are created in order to become stronger depends on the individual's writing style. Of course, using one's mind to enter martial arts is relatively rare in fantasy. It is more common in classic fantasy in the past, and it is still quite competitive. 3. Beginning Using small events to introduce it and introducing it from another person's perspective does have a surprising and natural feeling compared to other conventional openings, and it also makes the protagonist Qin Tiange more subtle. In the face of the majestic atmosphere created at the beginning, the protagonist's momentum has begun to take shape, and his leadership style is just right to control this atmospheric world view, and he already feels invincible. It is a relatively classic, traditional fantasy with charm. And the pace is very fast, skipping the novice village and training, starting from the current confrontation with the father who is the best swordsman in the world, and then tracing back to the origin of the golden finger. The plot is not too obstructive to read. 4. Plot setting It follows the traditional fantasy of cultivating immortals, but rarely mentions the concept of levels set by force, which makes readers' senses a little blurry, and they do not know the difference between foundation building and Qi refining, golden elixir and foundation building. There are countless stories in the books of golden elixir disciples. It seems that the golden elixir is just getting started, and some are too strong in the early stage, which may lead to the collapse of combat power. Secondly, there is the concept of demons and monsters. Demons include both demon cultivators and monsters. So will the demons in the demon realm be confused with the demons in the demon cultivator? The same goes for the concepts of monsters and monsters. The golden finger is a brain obtained from another world, and thus knows the fact that the demonic realm is about to invade. Through the calculation and deduction of the brain, it can easily analyze the skills, calculate the best practice path, and create a small world where the speed of time in the large and small Sumeru realms is delayed ten times or a hundred times, and the spiritual power is abundant ten times or a hundred times. The Invincible style is beginning to take shape, and it is basically the disciples who show off their skills in front of outsiders. The protagonist, even if he possesses a powerful unique skill such as sword power, which is not available in the golden elixir, still maintains the appearance that his skills have not improved in the past ten years in front of the world. The foreshadowing is here, and it is slowly unraveled, and it begins to feel like a fantasy reading. The people of the Duanyue Sect have no idea about the current state and strength of the protagonist. Under internal and external troubles, people are divided, and there is a clown who thinks too highly of himself. Although the preparations are still being made, it has taken too long, and we are waiting for conflicts to intensify and the protagonist to be slapped in the face at any time. Although I also know that the time and occasion are not yet ripe. Only when you can master the sword is it worthy for the protagonist to take action. But laying the groundwork for too long will squander expectations and patience, and you need to be careful. In addition, the story focuses on resisting the demonic realm, and early preparations are essential, so it has the flavor of a farming novel. The early stage of farming is comfortable, which is somewhat different from the rhythm of fantasy. It is necessary to grasp the ink and energy allocated between "development" and "plot". 5. Overall perception It is one of the few traditional fantasy genres that is still competitive today.

Fun piece. Being a master of pretending is natural, and from time to time there are some technical constructions of online game articles. It has the intention of becoming full-time. There are no too hard-core fighting showdowns yet, but the protagonist has a lot of room for growth.

Baldy's new game will be a bit more powerful in the early stage than "Deception Hunter". The quality of the book is guaranteed, the manuscripts are 150,000+, so there is no need to stop updating (temporarily) To save the apocalypse, we must rely on a new apocalypse! When will the endless cycle of reincarnation end? The Ming Dynasty Infinite Flow, the first volume, is about the zombie apocalypse, and the second volume is about the plant apocalypse. Yes, this is Plants vs. Zombies!

Writing style The pen power renders it concise and capable. (Example: "He opened a black umbrella and walked into the heavy rain. The honking of taxi horns echoed around him, and the red brake lights and orange and yellow lamp posts pierced the rain curtain. He walked through the steel beasts that bumped forward and backward, like a black flower floating towards the river and sea. " The battle scene has a strong sense of being, short, crisp and full of murderous intent. (Example: Twist your waist and sweep your legs out The style in the text is very high, which is rare to see. At least the rich text meets the needs of the readers. Beginning It begins with the story about Xu Erqiu's need to adapt to bone marrow. The male protagonist Xu Ziguan was rejected for making money, but was used by mysterious forces to "jump off a building" as a bargaining chip for treatment. So the male protagonist jumped off the building, only to find that he had entered another world and began a passionate showdown with the Japanese bosozoku. It was only after reading the third chapter that I learned that it was an infinite flow. The author had already sped up the pace of the plot, which was within a suitable scale. Generally speaking, there is no problem with the expansion, but compared to the dazzling text, the expansion seems quite satisfactory. Of course, the content is attractive enough, so it will not cause too much discomfort in reading. After all, it is a product of the times that combines the characteristics of current online articles and comes into being. Plot setting At this point in the story, there is still no clear explanation as to why Xu Ziguan was assigned the task of Infinite Flow. The mysterious forces had been keeping an eye on him from the beginning, and even Xu Erqiu's matching bone marrow had been found. Then comes the story of the battle between the Bosozokus. There is no golden finger, and the orthodox passionate battle rekindles the visual sense of the world of "Dragon". The biggest competitive point of Infinite Streaming is that the processing of each scene is rich and varied, which also tests the author's solid knowledge and imagination reserve. From the first story, it is full of emotions. Initial D, the legend of the car god in Qiu Mingshan has always been the belief of the passionate teenagers in the second grade, and the leading plot is also full of passion. Although there is no follow-up story yet, the plot quality of this book can basically be predicted. I won't go into details here. Although the shadow of my predecessors can still be seen, the follow-up is worth looking forward to. Overall look and feel He is usually arrogant and cool, with fancy operations, but in his books, he is a majestic king, with lion eyes overlooking his subjects, and his awe is beyond words.

Overall rating: 71 Author: Lexi Taixu Writing (14/20) The writing style of the youth campus series basically makes all the characters cheerful and cheerful. He has a brisk tone, makes jokes from time to time, and has no major dyslexia. Similarly, joyful moments are divided into occasions, and some joyful moments can destroy the artistic conception. Therefore, in terms of portrayal and maintenance of the scene, it is necessary to maintain reasonable preservation, and try not to ruin the atmosphere because of the characters' off-line complaints. Basically all the characters are a little bit dramatic. Ziwei, who has a cold personality, also has the demeanor of a young man who wants to roar. The other characters more or less have this tendency, giving them a sense of déjà vu in Chinese comics. Another obvious problem is the scene switching. The previous sentence is still in this scene, and the next sentence is a dialogue that opens another scene. This is a scene change in film and television works, because vision directly affects the senses, and as text, it is a secondary transformation. This kind of scene will be a bit abrupt. You can add time, location, environment, etc., Or directly click on the ellipsis to divide the scene. Beginning (13/20) The story begins with Pinyue, who has her fifteenth birthday, coming to Yinyue Pavilion and turning on her superpower. Her superpower is to cut her hair constantly, so she is also the hair girl chosen by God. And with the emergence of her superpower, she can see little monsters and ghosts, so the fighting girl always likes to be a peacemaker in front of ghosts. Generally speaking, it has a relaxed campus style. The monsters are not as harsh as expected, nor are they hoarsely bloody and violent. Although bleeding and injuries are inevitable, there is still a relaxed tone that advances the story. In terms of rhythm, the first paragraph is a bit slow in order to depict a happy girl, and there are all kinds of complaints and noises in the follow-up. It's a bit like being in the excitement stage of just starting out and writing whatever I see. It is not until later that the monster is seen and the series of strange things that happen to the heroine come to the point. They are all near misses, after all, the hero has not always been angry about his presence. Plot setting (14/20) There is a grand worldview involving time travel and world turmoil. The other side of the human world is a world where monsters are rampant. The background is the light ancient style of Chang'an Street, which is simple and has a sense of history. The events in the article are very short, basically one story in three or two chapters. The main plot is hidden in the short stories one episode after another. It is not very clear. The girl's communication with the ghosts at school supports the purposeless plot in the early stage. There is also the male protagonist Zi Wei, although he is always cool, he still sounds like a little adult. There are a lot of interesting contents in the setting, including two eggs hatching shikigami, weird weapons, and various costumes. It always feels like a Japanese version of "Onmyoji". I haven't gone over the details of the settings later on, but traveling through time and space and going back to the past to influence the collection of materials are also quite bold ideas. In addition to being a little immature, I need to slowly improve my details. This part is the same as the writing style, with some omissions, but part of it is a matter of style and part of it is a matter of accumulation. Overall impression (15/20) Among women's videos, romance lines have a smaller proportion in supernatural stories. The girl's growth story becomes more stable later on, and the writing also improves significantly. Another highlight, there is something heartwarming about every story.

The real world of chivalry Author: Bingyan Red Dragon 1. Writing style 1. Overall writing style: The overall writing style is close to half vernacular and half ancient dialect, and the best characterization is the character dialogue, which is mature, steady, decent and vivid. Shapes, sounds, colors, and colors are all mastered by his unique writing skills. The narration of the story is round, natural, rigorous and meticulous. The calm and unhurried tone makes the story more full and full of tension. 2. Specific details: ①. The characters have clear dialogues. Dialogue plays an important role in character development. The tone of voice and the words that should be said about the character's character all show the author's writing power and skill, and he is eloquent. Looking at the dialogue, it will not be just shouting to kill and fighting with swords without agreeing to a word. Closer to everyday logic, kind people are kind and talkative; reckless people are outspoken but also reasonable; treacherous people use their sweet words to sow discord; smart people talk and laugh humorously, and pay equal attention to kindness and righteousness; young children are also sharp-tongued, but they are still innocent and charming. These are the most intuitive effects of dialogue. There are no subjective adjectives to help readers describe the characters, but the character portraits emerge vividly on the page. ②. The martial arts plot is outstanding. The martial arts here is more about "hearing its sounds, observing its actions, anticipating its intentions, and messing up its scenes." The basic details of movements, blow effects, psychological activities, scene effects, etc. Are all timely and solidly described. ③. There are basically no errors or omissions in the book, and there are few errata, because if you look carefully at the chapter update dates, you will find that all chapters show recent updates. In other words, the author is revising almost every day. Faced with this meticulous and demanding attitude, it can basically show the text quality that matches it. In "Shenzhou", the focus is on getting along with the characters. The writing is like the author, who is respectful and thrifty yet playful, and the characters in the book are also truly chivalrous. This is not to say that there are no conflicts in the polite martial arts world. On the contrary, these conflicts appear very naturally and make readers convinced. They are also killing people to seek revenge, but they are also rational. There is hatred for revenge, there is hatred for hatred, there is kindness for kindness, and there is kindness for kindness. Every word and deed in the book makes me feel warm. Mr. Jin Yong's last gift to the world of martial arts is about to be exhausted. From then on, the grievances in the world subsided, because martial arts people were rare. So when I read "Shenzhou", my thoughts did not stop at this book. Maybe I added drama to myself to make me feel that this work is valuable, but Brother Red Dragon's writing style always unintentionally stirred up my thoughts. Martial arts is the belief of a generation, and it is also the goal that some people still strive for. I was lucky enough to see this competitive work. I was unexpectedly happy, but also felt that it was not easy for martial arts to survive in the online literary world. Therefore, in the online literary world, which is in a hurry, I can only use this article to bid farewell to the heroes and wish you all the best to find your lost world again.

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It is an extremely niche traditional Western fantasy literature, but its level and ability are beyond doubt. Those who like it will enjoy it, while those who don't will abandon the book hastily. Uriel takes a strange last train and arrives in another world (Chapter 1 or 2) He discovered that the original location of his cabin had become a tavern, and then he realized that he had really traveled through time (Chapter 3-4) Unable to go back, he could only consider working in a tavern, and got to know Miss Carrot and the tavern owner Mr. Eds (up to Chapter 10). During this period, there were a lot of troubles, and there were various sub-scenes of other aristocratic forces and mysterious forces that he was not in the mood to watch. Then he and Miss Carrot fell in love, but Miss Carrot died unexpectedly in a city-wide undead incident. For this reason, Uriel, a cowardly apprentice, finally summoned up the courage to become a "mysterious" creature and wanted to avenge Miss Carrot. It's already twenty chapters here, and it's already worth watching. Fortunately, the subsequent plot is also twists and turns, and the stories and battles are also very exciting. It is a traditional Western fantasy story, magic, magic, and various races: druids, light elemental elves, dwarves, knights and necromancers, etc. 1. Overall writing style: Apart from the famous masters, this is the purest traditional Western fantasy writing style I have ever seen. To a certain extent, it has gotten rid of the tone and tone of Easterners writing Western fantasy. And between the lines, there is a rare piety and tenderness towards words. The writing style is quite amazing, but it's not the way to write a web article. Amplify a story into every detail, and through writing and imagination, together transform the words into a visual, auditory, and tactile feast that can be felt by all the senses except the melody. This is the controversial part of the book, with mixed reviews. Excessive description and pavement will turn it into a complicated decoration, and the description of certain details will make people addicted. To put it bluntly, the author writes with imagination. Writing can't save the world, imagination can. But imagination needs to be controlled by yourself. She introduced the scenes, dialogues and inner activities of all the characters that she believed in in her mind, in detail. Sometimes these details make the entire tense plot seem draggy. None of the books I have read so far are like it, striving for coherence and naturalness to the point where it almost becomes an obsession. There are also many shortcomings, such as the writing is obscure, the amount of information is large, and there are obstacles in reading. It is basically impossible to read it easily and happily. The author thought he was describing and supplementing the details, so he tried his best to restrain his restlessness in thinking about the tense plot, and patiently wrote out the long development. He really fell asleep after reading it over and over again. Even if you are a fan of Western fantasy novels, only a few of them will continue to read it. However, even so, this is still an excellent work. In terms of writing, it adheres to the babble of traditional Western fantasy. Even if there is only one protagonist, he can talk to himself and add rich psychological activities, environmental descriptions and simple memories into one chapter. Not to mention that when communicating with the characters, almost a greeting is followed by several lines of inner activities. I have to say, this is very traditional Western fantasy. Detailed nouns and a large number of modifiers jointly create a grand picture.

Overall rating: 78 Love brewed by wine culture Theme: Female channel·Modern romance·Urban life 1. Introduction to the book title (16/20) Book title (9/10) The whole book revolves around the "Tongue of God". "Gods and demons" are not popular in male videos, but they are very distinctive in urban romance. Introduction (7/10) Standard female channel flavor. The story and emotional journey of the book can be introduced in detail. The wine culture is rich, and the audience has been selected at the beginning. 2. Writing style (16/20) In addition to the wine culture, many times there are conversational styles that shuttle back and forth between the East and the West. Especially the ideological concepts have a Western literal translation flavor. Of course, the Western elements are very strong, just like roses paving the way for the Eastern narrative tone. The full text gives me the feeling of a beautiful red color, a passionate state and saturated emotions. It is very unique and very readable. It is said that the beginning has been changed many times, and I personally feel that there is no resistance in the past. Of course, as a wine culture subject, a certain reading threshold has been set at the beginning, but the author has always popularized science from a professional perspective, which is also very acceptable. In the middle period, he gradually got better and his condition was even more like a fish in water. 3. The beginning (14/20) It begins with the story of a heroine, Qu Xiaoning, who went to France to join Lishe. She got a perfect score in the blind tasting and was known as the "God's Tongue". Her talent was dazzling, but she was jealous of her colleagues and was ostracized. The dangers of the workplace hit us right from the start. This kind of strong atmosphere was in An Nuan's work last time I read it. This kind of rhythm can be considered exciting even on male videos. In the initial job battle, the heroine, who had no scheming at all, was defeated miserably and was fired. Just a few characters already portray the working environment of the sommelier industry. The opening chapter of this volume is quite brutal. The female channel is good at abusing the female protagonist, whether it is a romance or an urban drama, it is full of entertainment. After the abuse, the surprise was that it was not the male protagonist who solved the problem, but Qu Xiaoning who walked out on her own. 4. Plot setting (16/20) Job fighting is the main thing. In other words, there will be more industry battles and discussions involving the wine tasting industry. This is also different from previous female videos, more like a girl's confession of struggle. There is also an emotional line, with a moderate amount of sweetness and abuse. The second volume is basically an unexpected little theater of life plus real contact between the two parties. I imagined that in some sadistic scenes in the first volume, it would be better to have the male protagonist Jia Yimo appear according to the sweet and sadistic video story mode. After all, the first volume is basically a tragic story with a darker tone. In addition to the plot, the villain is full of conspiracy theories and his IQ is online. There are some extremely scary thoughts when you think about it. So when I read about An Rui buying paintings, my first reaction was premeditated flattery... It's full of sinister feeling, but the more it is like this, the more it reflects the difficulty of finding a job for the heroine and the care of the hero. Generally speaking, the plot will have ups and downs or changes, and readers will find it exciting.

I really like Mulan! I wrote down the things I secretly like in a generous way! In terms of the writing style of this book, I personally think it is average. But this is my favorite subject, and I love the brave and strong heroine so much! In this book, Mulan is gentle and virtuous, but outside she is a brave general. Although it is written about history, it is not a detailed textual research. Half of the comments are arrogant, which is also the weak point of this book. Speaking of which, I have also studied a lot of Mulan culture (after all, one of the prototypes of the heroine is Hua Mulan). In fact, this book is positioned in the Northern Wei Dynasty in terms of textual research, which I quite agree with. Because I have also done research in this area, I do not agree with the textual research party's behavior of not reading the book but focusing on dissing. Mulan in the article is not only reasonable, but also very smart! The protagonist is quite lucky.

This is a high imitation of San Zha's work. But this is also where my attitude is most complicated. Because: 1. After all, a high imitation is not oneself, so sometimes the blunt parts are heart-wrenching, funny, or elements, more or less. Second, the author actually still has his own rhythm, his own writing power, and his own tone of writing. These are different from the three scumbags. If they are ignorant of the past, they will not be able to cross their own threshold. Apart from subjective factors, the author's improvement in writing skills is also visible to the naked eye. In fact, it is also my favorite subject matter, but seeing the familiar three-scum element makes me a little sad. But despite these, the author's efforts are worthy of recognition. There seems to be a lot of new content recently. Indeed, as the introduction said, there are many classic elements of Sanzha. As a nostalgic person, it may be necessary to make another follow-up review, but let it go for now. No matter what my attitude or opinion is about this book, this is a subject I like, but it will be more harsh. But being strict to a certain extent shows your attitude.

This is the first fantasy time travel system novel in this book. The old author Zhetiandad's writing skills are still there, and the development process is quite satisfactory. The early plot development and plot setting are also standard web writing models. I believe there will be readers who like this type of writing model. Zhetian Dad used to update the manuscript ten times a day, and he said it was guaranteed. I almost never read classic online articles based on the current traditional model. The first one seems to be very valuable.

First of all, Dou Niang's works are meant to teach children bad things. As Dou Niang said, there is no absolute good or evil in the article, and there is a certain subversion of concepts.

Sanzha's second work. Now it has joined the ranks of film and television adaptations. It has been praised as "China's Marvel" in the reviews. Although the ending ended hastily due to pressure, it does not affect the book's influence on a certain group of strange people to go further and further on the unruly road. Boss Tianyi is still the manipulator behind "Zhou Lin". While reading, I always have an inexplicable admiration for Boss Tianyi and a deep understanding of the dark style. There are many ethical values ​​in the article that are contrary to common sense. Although it does not represent Sanzha himself, the brainwashing and logical rape are slightly stronger, so please read with caution.

Sanzha's masterpiece of becoming a god. In the article, Teacher Jue is used to fully reveal all the reasons for delaying and missing updates. Teacher Jue has become the spiritual pursuit of a generation of Jue disciples. The article is written in the form of a pseudo-online game article (in fact, it is to rely on data to improve the word count), telling a magical world - (the world view of Sanzha's debut novel "Ghost Hunter: Ghost Crying and Catching Ghosts") The full text unfolds with a copy of the game system, with various twists and turns and bizarre plot directions. The battle of wits and courage in the copy is no longer enough to describe the shamelessness of Teacher Jue, and there are also joyful dialogues and developments.

Accidentally, I saw Lao Liu's works on the Sanjiang ranking list. Liu Da's writing style is too realistic. Whether it's a joke or a bit of fun, it's all masterfully crafted. The reading process is also very effective in attracting people into the book, and the sense of immersion is very strong. Recently, Liu Da's works have been put on the shelves, and I think it is indispensable to update them. Business war and love are two-pronged, and Goddess Kong Xi is indeed lively and beautiful. It is an urban reality-oriented work worth reading.

Nanda has been feeling unwell recently. As a fan, I still hope that he, a good man, will have a safe life. "Dragon Five" is back with passion, and Nanda's writing style is as good as ever. During the one-year serialization at Qidian, he learned to break the text just right. The book review is as exciting as the book series, and the whole book is filled with jokes. As an official joker, the author himself has lived up to expectations and successfully aroused everyone's desire to send blades (laughs All in all, "Dragon" is a work of faith. Others say that ten years is a blink of an eye. Nanda said ten years, that is, I am lucky enough to see the completed series in this lifetime.

Sanzha's current efforts in production (maybe). Continuing the world view of the classic "Sin Trafficking", the reverse cross is coming again. What kind of drastic changes will happen in this turbulent world? What other horrifying operations are there for the new members of the Anti-Cross to make people laugh? There are many bug-level characters in this issue of the Inverse Cross, and I'm afraid the final boss is also worth looking forward to. Of course, don't expect update speed for Sanzha's books. The most chic and unrestrained author, bar none.