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Some of the works I encountered had some bright spots but many shortcomings, mainly due to the character problems of some novel authors. I paid to subscribe. Although the reviews may not sound good, they are honest, but in the end they deleted the posts and banned me. I am really convinced. If you don't want anyone to complain about your poor writing, why don't you just create a book list and list all the things you want to complain about?

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I Really Didn't Get Rid of Spirits in Tokyo1

Wang Wangcai Is Super Fierce

2.4M7.733

You said the wild dog I accidentally kicked to death was a human-faced dog? The lovely Miss Sawada in my apartment is a slit girl? Are those weird people that I often fixate the ghosts of? Even the apartment I rented is known to be a haunted house? Please, do you think I will believe you if you come to me in a miko costume during working hours? I am a staunch atheist. This is the story of a former Yakuza member who traveled through Japan and worked hard to buy a house, a car, a wife and children (dense fog). ... This book has been completed, and the new book "Tokyo: The Evil God Doesn't Want to Be the Top" has been released. Welcome to taste it!

Curator

After reading more than 400 chapters, I finally gave up on this book. First of all, this book is very creative and the protagonist is pseudo-invincible. He is suspected of being reincarnated or possessed by Ksitigarbha, and all ghosts and monsters will die if touched. However, he has been unable to understand the truth due to his blindness caused by resentment. The overall plot is not bad. For example, the plot of the heroine Xiaotiaoyou is not bad and has no poisonous points. The character design of the student and the witch is also good. The character design of the gay policeman Jie Er is also good. But many plots are very unpleasant to watch, and they are the kind of poisonous plots that are completely unnecessary! For example, the orange-flavored girl seems to be called Orange? The villain came here to trap the male protagonist. If he did it the first time, he would run away. If he didn't succeed the second time, he wouldn't run away. Then he would go back and trap him a third time? She deceived herself to death, and during this period, several people were there, whining, killing, and running away. Fei Moji, in the end, this woman regretted that she would have given up the organization and joined the male protagonist? What the hell is the plot of three people jumping off a cliff together? The most annoying thing is that the woman's blood stuck to the stone plate after falling off the cliff. Although I didn't write the plot behind it, I can guess that she will either be resurrected or the sealed monster will be resurrected using the blood. Wouldn't it be better to just write her to death? And then there's this "female supporting role" Mai Hanyu? After experiencing the kidnapping incident, she didn't clearly explain her attitude toward the male protagonist. She bought clothes and treated her to a meal, and it felt like it was about to happen, and in the middle, she extracted blood and saliva. With the character of a female scientist, it made sense. After arriving in the world of Hell's Gate, she followed her uncle to deceive the protagonist to remove spirits and take the qualification certificate? Why else would the company be incorporated and the protagonist be directly fired and still owe a lot of money and not let the protagonist run away? To be honest, at this time, the protagonist already knows that he is different. To tell the truth, for example, the government needs to be allowed to use high-tech technology. As a hero who saves Kyoto, are you being played by these two people like this? It's understandable that you don't know how powerful the protagonist is. You know the protagonist's abilities. The protagonist himself is gradually understanding his own power, and he still treats people like fools? What does this Hanyu Mai family want to do? This woman's uncle also said that although he couldn't see it anymore, he hoped that the protagonist would grow up and save the world soon. Knowing that the protagonist is the reincarnation of the Venerable, you still want to use your immortality to determine who will die? The plot of those monks is good, and they help the protagonist to respect them but they don't count as kneeling and licking. To be honest, it is very poisonous to read novels in which a weak person arranges a strong person at will, especially a strong person who cannot be resisted by the entire organization. Isn't it funny that a group of ants ask an elephant to carry food for them? The protagonists in many novels similar to pseudo-invincible novels either do not expose themselves in the early stage like "My Little People", or they directly occupy a hilltop to farm and develop themselves. When the government or the country has something to do, they come to him for mutual benefit. Like "Gu Dao Immortality" and "You practice dancing while I farm", are there such invincible protagonists who are wantonly toyed with? I feel completely unhappy and aggrieved by it. In addition, the plot of the protagonist's good gay friend is even more inexplicable. The gay friend's girlfriend was killed by a hostile gang for no apparent reason. She said she had something to do and went out to work overtime but didn't show up. She turned around and died at home. A gay friend turned black in a flash, and then he was possessed by the power of the mask for no apparent reason, and then the power of the mask was purified by the protagonist's power for no apparent reason, and then he got the power to form a team and continue to deliver? Borrowed from the protagonist

Cataclysm: I Can Make Alchemy and Strengthen it Infinitely2

George Pea

1.1M05

Under the disaster, the city collapsed. Monsters are rampant and humans are awakening. Strong men emerge in endlessly, just to continue the fire of the human world. While Xu Shen, a young man, was escaping, a metal room and a black screen suddenly appeared in his consciousness. After completing the mission and becoming an alchemist, can you continue to strengthen your attributes? When others finally awaken, they can only have one ability. Xu Shen: "I refined another set of equipment and only added a dozen abilities. Isn't this too much?" Awakened One: "Let's be friends, rich people!" Someone asked Xu Shen what he felt during the disaster. Xu Shen shook his head helplessly, looking at the sky at a 45° angle with melancholy: "The lives of rich people are often so simple and boring." ... In this dark age, who can break through the darkness and see the sunshine again? Who can defeat the shadow of death and achieve immortality? Xu Shen said: "This can only be me!" Book club group: 935163315, welcome to play!

Curator

I have read 60 chapters, and I feel that overall it is okay. The novel can be used as fodder, and it is not so poisonous that you can't stand it at all. However, there are many problems, and I guess this book will not become popular. If the author is a newcomer, then the writing is not bad. Here are the areas where I think there are problems. 1. There is a problem with the protagonist's style of doing things. The protagonist in the apocalyptic novel was killed at the beginning and ran back to seek revenge. Later, he was found by a suspected military boss, so he joined him, and he was still living in it? When you get a prop card that checks other people's attributes, you don't use it on enemies before using it on teammates, just to promote the plot and introduce superpower levels, and treat teammates as hidden enemies? It felt very awkward, especially since I didn't get a second one later, and the plot seemed even more deliberate and inexplicable. It would be more reasonable if the protagonist in some novels swiped hundreds of pictures at once, and found that this person was abnormal everywhere. Moreover, what is the purpose of this enemy and what force it belongs to are not mentioned later. The injured soldier was not saved when he was escaping later, but a little fat man was saved, just to echo the plot of the time bomb earlier. The most disgusting thing is the story about the female thief at the end. She just told her to leave if she didn't want to interact with her. What was she writing about? This woman pestered him and didn't express her feelings. He spent a whole day with her. Later, I wrote that he was even blind dated, and finally found out that she was a neighbor. Just to get in touch with the story organized by this woman later, a normal person knows that a person with problems keeps contacting him, and he has no intention of countering the other person's tactics, and he still plays with the other person. Especially in this kind of apocalyptic world background, isn't there something wrong with it? 2. Many parts of the plot design are not echoed, and I forgot about it after two chapters. I wanted to pull someone else's tooth and say that I would pay homage to it later, but I didn't mention it after more than 10 chapters. I took what seemed to be my father's watch and the manuscript. I didn't read it when the situation was urgent, and I still haven't read it after more than ten chapters. I guess I'll wait until I want to advance the plot in this direction before writing it. I also added a sentence like the situation was urgent and I later recuperated and forgot about it. It was said before that you can only enter the shelter if you have a bracelet, but it can only be outside. It may be that I didn't look carefully and you can only go to the shelter if you have a bracelet. In short, the writing is very vague. It is suspected that the military personnel took out the bracelet of the protagonist when they recruited the protagonist. Later, when writing the plot of Aunt Hu, they rewrote the previous plot again and wrote hundreds of words, but did not say anything about taking away the bracelet. After Chapter 60, there is still no mention of the background of the apocalypse... And no mention of how these monsters appeared. 3 Logical questions. The protagonist and Fatty Lao Wang were abandoned by suspected military personnel. Anyone who was not mentally retarded could tell that the other party did not want them alive at all, and even deliberately killed them. Knowing that the other party wanted to harm me, I turned around and ran to the shelter where the other party was. At first, I was injured to recuperate because of the situation. Later, when the injury was much better, I controlled the bracelet and ran to study. How big is my heart? The shelter is so big, so I am not afraid that the other party will come and silence me? In addition, the masters of the rebel forces rushed over and wrote down their consciousness and used their fists to fight back. Don't you think there is a problem? If you don't have a gun in hand to defend yourself in advance, the opponent will obviously have strong combat power. The first thing you can do is dodge and fight back. When you kill someone's men, the first thing you don't do is kill him with a last hit, and Mo Min cleverly runs to force him to kill you? Then he came into contact with this female thief inexplicably and was identified. Is your awesome gun a decoration?

People in Tokyo: Starting with a Time and Space Gate3

Happy Handsome Guy

1.5M7.8

Travel through Tokyo. There is no drop-in system and no built-in plug-ins. I thought I could only settle down and be a grocery store owner from now on. But unexpectedly found a space-time door in the warehouse. 〖Confirmation of entering the Space-Time Gate for the first time - Obtaining ownership of the Space-Time Gate〗 〖Confirmed to obtain the title-Traveler from Another World〗 〖Confirmed to receive protection-the favor of the God of Time and Space〗 〖Confirmed acquisition of unique skills - super-speed growth〗 〖Confirmed to obtain unique skill - Time Traveler〗 After walking out of the time and space door. Linn found that he seemed to have taken off!

Curator

The author's novel with Li Yalin as the protagonist seems to have been read two years ago when I first started reading online novels. Now I happened to read this book when it was free for free. I saw that the author's name looked familiar. I read all the updated ones and summarized the good aspects: 1. The protagonist is considered to be pseudo-invincible. He has never encountered anyone he cannot beat, and he has not deliberately made the protagonist suffer in order to improve his strength. This aspect is quite comfortable to watch, unlike Kamen Rider's new skin, which starts to shrink as soon as the protection period expires until the next new skin. 2. Although some of the worlds I have selected so far are relatively unpopular, I have basically heard the names. At least there is no cliché movie game world that starts with biochemistry. The anime game time is just swords and swords. In the past two years, with the increase of work and age, I used to watch more than a dozen or even dozens of anime a year, but now maybe three or five a year. Many of them are downloaded on mobile phones and only watched two episodes a year later... I have watched Slime and Shieldmaiden during the time chosen by the author. 3. It's a sense of nostalgia. There aren't many novels of this type nowadays, but on the other hand, novels of this type are no longer popular. As for this novel, there are a lot of things that can be complained about or said to be poisonous. 1. Open a harem at will. To be honest, it is really unexpected to see such stud men at the starting point in 2021. However, this way of writing can easily become boring. When I first started reading novels, I read all kinds of novels. I thought harem novels were really cool, and I read them all, including school beauties, nurses, teachers, beauty killers, etc. After reading three or five books, I felt that it was just like that. Almost a year later, I started reading this boring "Is This Man Sick?" I Love You... 2. The IQ is obviously not online. Especially the protagonist and his harem. The protagonist has a cheat and doesn't work. No one suspects that he delivers food and drinks every day. He doesn't teach the cheat but teaches swordsmanship to the three sisters and the maid, especially since the maid is still an undercover agent. The younger sister of the protagonist's stepmother inexplicably wants to protect the protagonist. Then after seeing the protagonist's strength, she begins to think that the protagonist can protect Japan even if she is here. She also wants to find evidence when the protagonist is not allowed to use force to solve the problem. When the evidence is found, she fails to do so. It's obvious that Xiao Da is a master, but he always plays the role of a supporting player. The three sisters of the Nan family live next door. It is outrageous that they can enter the protagonist's house at will without the owner's consent. What is the point of keeping the protagonist's secret? They can stay in the protagonist's house sooner or later. 3. The female characters are inexplicably nymphomaniacs. The female characters in it are as if they have no brains. The protagonist starts to fall in love with her if she exudes a little bastard spirit. For example, the female elf commander of the Orc City proposed to the protagonist on the spot because of her fruit candies. The protagonist's aunt, after being helped a few times by the protagonist, feels really good about being taken care of by the protagonist. You are a generation older, and you are still there even if you don't mention your age. Is it really good for an old cow to eat young grass? The princess in Tanya Wars directly offers to work for the protagonist on the condition of marriage. The newest female general in this world heard that he would sacrifice his life for nothing if he could take her to Tokyo. These plots are really disgusting to watch, and many of the following chapters are skipped. Final suggestions: Don't open a harem, at least don't open a harem randomly. I think dxd, New Girl Demon King, Demon Forbidden, etc., Although the protagonists open a harem, they use their own lives to protect the girls, which is not uncomfortable to watch. But

My Cells Seem to Be Rebelling4

Difficult To Change

1.4M7.8

Zhang Wen, a terminally ill cancer patient with only three days left to live, found himself traveling through time... The most outrageous thing is that this is actually a world of immortality! ? When Zhang Wen was possessed by a female evil spirit, a new door to the world opened... Looking at the female evil spirit on her body who originally had no facial features, but now looked horrified and hideous. Looking at her desperately trying to get out... Zhang Wen slightly thought... I felt that after being possessed by a female evil spirit, I felt extremely comfortable and my body was free from the severe pain of cancer. Zhang Wen stretched out his hand and slowly pressed the head of the female evil spirit... Don't mention it, it's cool, elastic, smooth... It feels like a needle but not prickly... ......... PS: Systemless, a profiteer's struggle to survive through "difficulty" after traveling through the cruel world of Xianxia...

Curator

First of all, the protagonist's plug-in is relatively new. Although the protagonist's training method is a bit old-fashioned, it is also interesting. However, the plot of the heroine Li Qiuling is really uncomfortable. First of all, she is killed without brains. I also specifically said before that if you can't help, stay away and don't cause trouble. This woman won't do it. She appears out of nowhere and shouts, "Don't kill my boss!" Then he dies at the speed of light. I was so embarrassed watching it😰. What happened later was even more extreme. The girl's IQ was still online and suddenly she became mentally ill. She said she was alive just for her younger brother, but suddenly she gave it away. After she was resurrected, she felt that her younger brother's life or death didn't matter. This girl's impression was originally an 8 but after she was resurrected, she was left with a 2. She turned directly into a love brain. She watched the male protagonist do something to her, and her mind was filled with the image of the male protagonist. It was so disgusting. And what about the male protagonist? I have been in contact with this girl for a total of two days, and I specifically emphasized that I don't like her, just for peace of mind. I don't understand why I feel uneasy. First of all, if there is no male protagonist and Captain Zhao colludes with the two evil cultivators, the people in this village will definitely die. Secondly, I told her to stay away and not to leave, but even if I didn't curse her, it would be fine, but still feel guilty? Think about playing League of Legends and telling your teammates to guard the tower and wait for me to clear the line of troops. As a result, as soon as the line of troops enters the tower, I use a set of skills to clear the line of troops and can't replenish a few. Unless I line up with the enemy in the middle of the two towers, the opponent rushes in with a set of skills and dies. After dying several times, I still get out of the tower. This heroine is the kind of person who can't just run away with her younger brother. Even if she wants to stay, she will let her younger brother run away first. In the end, none of them will run away, so they give her away. The third ghost path golden elixir monks all said that it is extremely difficult to retain the memory of a person after death and transfer to the ghost path to rebuild. As a result, the protagonist, a novice in cultivation, succeeded easily after studying the secret book for a few days, so he asked if this was a form of intelligence? I don't understand the value of this woman's existence. From the perspective of the heroine's identity, first of all, even though I don't have a virginity complex, it doesn't make sense to write about her being raped. Although she is a son of a nobleman, her father is dead. It doesn't make any sense. Don't suddenly write later that it was actually a royal princess who poisoned her. From the perspective of helping the protagonist, although she has a little understanding of the world of cultivation, she only knows a little bit without talent. If the protagonist has a little training, she will basically not be able to help at all in terms of knowledge. Her help is basically limited to that one secret book. From the perspective of strength, in my opinion, a person who has never practiced cultivation has no talent for cultivation. Is it reasonable that a formation and the blood of the protagonist will suddenly have a strong combat power? It's completely unreasonable, it's just to make her not become a useless person. It makes her uncomfortable to watch. In addition, from the plot of Chapter 60 that I have read, it is enough to write that the protagonist is seriously injured and goes berserk. There is no need for her to be killed. The plot until the resurrection has no impact at all. There is no need for this woman to give you even the cultivation method. You can just get it from Captain Zhao in muscle form. I think most of the emotional scenes in online novels are awkward, especially a relationship like this that ends with two meals together in 20 chapters and then ends up living and dying together. It's so speechless. If you can't grasp it, just don't write it. In fact, there is no need for the heroine of this kind of fairy tale to exist. Regardless of whether it is the goddess, saint, or daughter of heaven, under the power of the protagonist's plug-in, unless it has reached the ceiling of combat power, she will be surpassed sooner or later and will never be able to catch up. Like the heroine in Xian Ni who seems to have died because of the golden elixir

My Runes Can Be Upgraded5

Smile Angrily

2.4M8.080

The new book "A warrior who doesn't want to be a master is not a good kobold" is on the way. Please support! ... Condition 1: One Yellow Turban Soldier Rune satisfies condition 2: Independently kill 100 rune monsters Satisfy condition 3: Kill a pig with one sword and train 5,000 times Satisfy condition 4: 10 Talisman Pills satisfy the rune to start the upgrade. Your original rune has been upgraded from ordinary quality [Yellow Turban Soldier] to premium quality [Yellow Turban Hercules]!

Curator

To be honest, based on my many years of reading experience, a novel must first be stable in one style, whether it is the earliest sadistic type mainly based on bitter hatred, deep hatred, wife and child separation, or the later type of waste wood rising like a mortal, in which the protagonist is abused, leveled up, pretending to be awesome, changed maps and then abused again, leveled up and pretended to be awesome again. In recent years, the style of novels that are closer to the fast food culture of online novels, nonsensical or funny pretentious novels, etc. Must have an overall tone. And in the first five chapters of this novel, he has a sadistic style of being abandoned by his teammates, and then he practices and rises, a style of serious training and upgrading, and then evolves into an invincible style, killing big monsters and small monsters randomly, and then in chapter 30, the team that abandoned him appears again without showing off or revealing his identity. What is the meaning of this plot? Can you say that he is a bit steady in the Wild Boar Forest, and he knows how to poison, but he is not reckless when he comes to the Spider Cave? You don't send summoned monsters to explore the map. If you know there are elite monsters nearby, don't fight them. Find a place where there are no monsters. Isn't the purpose of your map below just to kill monsters? The biggest problem with this book is that the main character is very failed in shaping. The basic shaping has not been completed in more than 30 chapters. He is ruthless and talkative, brainless and funny, smart and almost demonic, steady as a dog, etc. There is no relatively accurate character. In addition, to be honest, since the protagonist can clear Wild Boar alone without evolving the Yellow Turban Soldiers, why does he still have to be a grandson in the team? What is the purpose? If teammates were together in a team to level up before, there would be no saying that no one was helping the other. Who did you show your bitter and resentful look when you were kicked out? ? ? Why do you want to kick me out after I've done all the work for the team? Normally, this kind of person would not be kicked out at all. Which team doesn't like this kind of hard-working old scalper? Only when there is no room for other people will they be kicked out. As a result, the protagonist stayed in the wild map for four or five days for the first time. Since he can come back at any time, why not rest in a safe and comfortable environment instead of staying in a dangerous place? Since you can stay outside for four or five days for the first time, why should you suffer in the team if you have such strength? It doesn't make sense at all logically.

My Martial Arts is Popular All over the World6

Pen That Doesn't Fly

3.0M7.540

[Urban + Entertainment + Martial Arts-'Entertainment Literature' You've Never Seen Before! ]Everyone in this world can enter the dream world. Li Xing discovered that the dream laws in China are related to martial arts, and he can create all the martial arts in his memory, so... "Nine Yin Manual" allowed him to set a sales record! "Dugu Nine Swords" allows him to lead the trend of the times! "The Eighteen Palms of the Dragon" brought him countless fans! ..."As the youngest [Tianwang Realm] superstar in history and a Grand Slam winner of five major awards including the 'Martial God Award', 'Sword God Award', and 'Tiandao Award', what else do you want to pursue?" The reporter asked. Li Xing: "A great chivalrous person serves the country and the people. All I want in this life is a clear conscience!"... (The high-quality "Martial Arts Live Room" has been completed and ordered thousands of times, and the quality is guaranteed)

Curator

First of all, I want to state that this book is quite good. There is a reason why it is so popular. Except for the plot in the last thirty or forty chapters, I suddenly felt very unhappy and jumped to read it. I only skipped a few chapters occasionally, and I basically subscribed to it completely. However, recently the plot has really gotten angry and I am ready to give up. There are no big problems in the first two-thirds of this book. To put it bluntly, it seems that everyone else is second-rate at this time, and only the protagonist's awesome skills are basically hits, and each one has huge potential. What do the top experts learn? If it compares to the protagonist🐮, why would it be shocking? If he wasn't as good as the protagonist, wouldn't the protagonist be invincible easily? Of course, this can be classified as the late start of world martial arts is not a big problem. There are three biggest problems. The first one is the girlfriend of the protagonist. First of all, in a society where money = resources = training time = skill proficiency = combat effectiveness, a wealthy daughter did not learn martial arts at all before college? How long does it take for the Jade Girl Heart Sutra series of exercises created by the protagonist to increase the power by casually adding some internal power elixirs? It seems that four episodes of the program are only one month. Even if it is calculated as one episode per month, it only takes four months. Can it be comparable to the first line? Is the gold content of the first line so low? And for the three-star copy that didn't know what to do, this girl, as a novice, just brought it in. The reason is that the combination of two swords has fighting power? Apart from anything else, there is no way the protagonist can protect the heroine when facing the most powerful one. Moreover, it is completely useless for the heroine to worry about the safety of the protagonist while rowing all the time. What is the purpose of arranging her in in the plot? Second, there is the issue of time and style. The first two-thirds are basically the protagonist showing off his new kung fu skills. Everyone is shocked by the plot. There is no clear villain and there are some minor frictions at most. But after more than 200 chapters, a villain, the Nightmare Force, suddenly appears with the purpose of destroying mankind. This style of painting is suddenly related to saving the world. Of course, that's not to say that the emergence of a villain is unreasonable. What's unreasonable is that the first villain appears only after a few hundred chapters, and it's just like destroying the world. It's unreasonable, and currently, other countries except Bangzi Country have only mentioned it in one or two sentences, but haven't said anything specific. In such a huge country, no one from other countries has appeared in hundreds of chapters. Unless it is said later that these people have become cold, otherwise it is too unreasonable. The third one is also the most popular plot I watched. The president of the Wushu Association was changed and the hawks were directly in power. I was furious to see various behaviors. Maybe the author didn't express what he wanted to express well? First, let's talk about a few settings: 1. If the nightmare dungeon is not cleared, the nightmare will become stronger by killing the players inside. 2. There is a villain organization that collects a large number of nightmares through luck items, and is ready to find the right time to break through the world in one round. 3. The new stipulation that players must decide according to external instructions when entering the dungeon, but external instructions may not always arrive on time. 4. As long as you follow the instructions, you will be rewarded if you fail, and you will be punished if you don't. 5. The benefits from exploration basically belong to the individual. To sum up my opinions, 1. The new president's management is boring, he talks too much and just says that all the profits belong to the individual. Many people are willing to do so. 2. Wouldn't it hurt your conscience to use human lives to carry out adventures with unknown benefits? 3. The villain organization's standards are too high, but the official government is considered useless. 4. The new regulations have too much room for maneuver, and if they are put into practice, they will become a new breeding ground for corruption. 5. Everything else is easy to say.

I Am Super Brave and Carry the World of Heroes with Me7

Pig Xiaoxiao

2.7M7.553

I, Wang Zhi, am super brave! The chest is full of liver! The abdominal muscles are full of krypton! Take the world of heroes with you and browse different dimensional spaces as you like; eat the King's Force Beads as you like; explode the top equipment as you like; open the super treasure chest as you like; the Royal Sister Loli as you like... What are you thinking! This is the story of a straight man with a group of funny men who explodes the whole universe. ♂Easy? LOL? Complaints? Sand sculptures? Serious ♂ This book is also known as "I was confessed to my love again", "The big guy with a lot of money stepped on the brakes at too high speed", "What should I do if I am such a straight person", "I am going bald after playing games every day", "Bringing four pig teammates Kai Rui to the audience". ★☆★Relaxing and funny, welcome to join in★☆★≧???≦?

Curator

Initially, I thought it was quite good. Although the plug-in is powerful, it is not invincible all of a sudden. The pace of upgrades is also well controlled. Although the routine of pretending to be cool is old-fashioned, it is okay. There is no clear statement of feelings, but there is no particularly bad plot either. But what does it mean to start poisoning just by looking at it? One is that he obviously saved the girl's life, but was coerced and coerced by her family into joining the official organization. If she didn't join, she would sink into the sea. (This is called an official organization? It is worse than a gangster. What is it reflecting?) The second is that he was forcibly dragged into a killing game by his female deskmate's grandmother (although that's not what it was written about, but that's what it meant). What else is the Wen family? The protagonist and his deskmate have basically never had an affair, and somehow they become Wen family members? Third, from the plot I watched, it seems that the protagonist's father and his sister are on the same side, and they are most likely high-level officials of the new country. They claim to care about the protagonist, but in the end, they have basically no grasp of the protagonist's situation and just let it go? (I was so angry just watching it that I imagined that the final villain was the protagonist's father.) The protagonist was forcibly bound by that ghost ring and then told him that he couldn't be bound? Always slow down the plot, is this the real father? The twin sisters know the inside story but don't tell the protagonist? Fourth, the protagonist has a secret all his own, and he has no intention of hiding it? It was okay at first, but after selling things in Antarctica, he started to be unscrupulous. He also sold products from secret places that he had never been to, but the seller was still the same every time. Aren't you afraid of investigation? And if you join the official government and don't have room and board, is that considered a woolly army? The protagonist's ability to absorb life force is just a copy, and he uses it on his own people. Although he only absorbs a little bit, the nature is very bad. It's like stealing a little money from others. What matters is not the quantity but the behavior. To be honest, there are no inexplicable poisonous points. I really think this book has the potential to become a god. I will wait and see if there will be a twist. If this happens in the future, I will give up.

Luck: Ordinary Life Contestant8

Random Little Fish

856K8.142

Xiu Xing, who has quick-learning life skills, always thought that the script he got was "I Get Rich from Farming in the Stars". Until suddenly there was a battle over luck, and he, a loser with a genetic level of F, was actually the only candidate to represent Blue Star in the competition? ! --After entering the world of luck, the originally ordinary golden finger can not only refine elixirs and weapons, but also practice automatically. Occasionally, you can also discover some secrets... For example, the cold teammate turns out to be a woman disguised as a man. --The so-called battle of luck means that everything gained in the world of luck can be reflected in reality a hundred times. After learning a move called "Fire Control Technique", hundreds of libraries in Great Xia had an extra copy of "Fire Control Technique". A contract was made with a mythical beast, Cheng Huang, and suddenly there were a hundred more Cheng Huang cubs all over Daxia. The bloodline of Shennong was unexpectedly revived, and all the people of Daxia were blessed. Their understanding of alchemy increased significantly, and the global medical level rapidly broke through. Other netizens: "We also want to be a part of Daxia!" People of Blue Star: "Xiuxing, you are such a genius in riding horses!" Xingxing: ... Just an ordinary life-style contestant. --The introduction is weak, national destiny + exposure + anti-fourth natural disaster (NPC reverse passage)

Curator

First of all, this book is still interesting, but it has a lot of minor flaws. I have read less than 40 chapters, and some of the things may be taken out of context, but it can be used as a reference. 1. If the Xia Kingdom in this novel is regarded as China, what are the considerations for making the entire country, or the entire planet, have two random people who are not pure blood of the country, and are both abandoned by their families, which is equivalent to being exiled here? What is the Xia Kingdom in the author's eyes? Although I am not a supporter of blood theory, is this setting inappropriate? 2. The host Guo Moumou in the live broadcast, even if it is true that someone in the comments said that he was acting in a war, his behavior was too much. Even before the game starts, he angrily criticizes the protagonist. The protagonist still complains when he gets resources, and the heroine continues to complain when she has no talent for cultivating immortals. What kind of official host is this? This is a keyboard warrior who dares to show his face. It's really annoying to watch, and this kind of behavior cannot be whitewashed at all. 3. The players from other countries who appear, or everyone in the entire novel world, are all smarter. If we say we will cooperate, we will cooperate, and the protagonist will agree to cooperate just by writing a blank check? It also feels inappropriate to provide resources for free, even if it is for the sake of allies. I haven't seen the others yet, and I hope there won't be any new poison spots later.

I Have a Game Clone9

This Fishing Guy

860K7.843

Ning Shi, a young man from Saturn, accidentally downloaded a mobile game called "Century". "Beep! The clone is created!" Ning Shi got a game clone. As the clone becomes stronger, the main body will also become stronger! "The clone has been training in the training room for 12 hours, and the physical fitness is +1, and the mental strength is +1." "The clone killed the earth dragon and obtained the blood of the earth dragon!" "The clone took the charm fruit, and the appearance value was +10!" The clone moved in and out of each game world, creating power and leaving a legacy. "The avatar successfully communicated and conquered Rose Duke Alice. Alice is about to arrive. Please pay attention to the main body." Ning Shi: ... The new book "Entertainment Immortality" has been released. If you are interested, you can take a look.

Curator

If this book had been published 15 years ago, it might have been able to become a god. 10 Years ago, it probably would have done well, but now it can only be pounced on... First of all, I read Chapter 10, and there were a lot of poisonous points that are not common in novels in the past two years. 1. A story about someone mysteriously showing up with a formula and making a fortune directly by using this formula. Although I haven't seen the story behind it, I guess it's pretty much the same. 2. Discuss interests with brothers who have no plot foreshadowing, and a simple formula without any subsequent maintenance or technical innovation is used as a technical investment. The protagonist actually accounts for 85%. Is the protagonist's brother a charity? Even if a milk tea shop has a net profit of 100,000 yuan per month, the remaining two people only get 15,000 yuan in total, and the one who does the work only gets 5,000 yuan. Besides, what kind of store can have a net profit of 100,000 yuan a month? Isn't this funny? 3. A childhood sweetheart with extraordinary abilities appears out of nowhere. He is also a genius but has a crush on the protagonist who is an ordinary social creature. Besides, this girl was the protagonist's classmate for a year... And then went abroad for further study in the junior class and hadn't seen each other for more than ten years. How much do you want to have a crush on the protagonist without meeting? 4. The attributes are not clear. You can improve them through normal exercise. If you don't exercise well, you can add a little bit and a little more, and the skills are about the same... There is no mention of whether the attributes can be changed. What's more, what's added is obviously physical strength, but what's added is strength. It's obvious that there's no huge difference in physical strength, but as a result, the strength ratio of 9 points of physical fitness is higher than that of 10 points of physical fitness. What do you think of the NPC? 5. The entrance of Chaofan was unprofessional. The protagonist had been working for five years and had never heard of Chaofan. However, they met on a blind date. Before the matter was dealt with, a group of people expressed that they had come to the restaurant under unknown circumstances. Even if this kind of thing is controlled by the Internet, word of mouth spreads it and it will become an urban legend in a few years. It is impossible that they have not heard of it at all. And since the memory can be erased and the scene can be restored, is it difficult to use extraordinary abilities to make up a reason that can be believed? Why not do it? I can't even wash the floor. Although the cheats and the design are quite interesting, I have made mistakes that I shouldn't have made in the past two years. If the author has a new work in the future, I hope to avoid these problems. Of course, this is just my personal opinion

Nuclear Powered Sword Fairy10

Riding The Wind And Sword

3.1M7.9

Beside the coast, a 100-meter star gate overflows with light. Outside the star gate, the army made of steel can be seen as far as the eye can see. In the sky, a fleet of fighter jets flew across the sky and intertwined with the Iron Curtain. In the distant ocean, aircraft carriers, destroyers, and frigates are all over the sea, ready to go. All the muzzles were aimed at a figure coming out of the star gate. "In the name of the Federal Command, I order you to stand down, otherwise, what awaits you will be a full-scale war." "War?" Taking a step forward, his figure rose up in the wind. In an instant, he grew from less than two meters to a chaotic demon god thousands of meters high. The brilliance of a white dwarf star radiated from his body. His own gravity alone caused lightning, thunder, and tsunamis in a radius of thousands of miles. He lowered his head... And looked at the toy-like war weapons. He stretched out his hand and a hydrogen bomb fell into his hand. The degenerate star core of electrons in the body releases helium, and the helium element expands. The terrifying high temperature instantly causes the isotopic elements of hydrogen, deuterium and tritium, to assemble. The energy explodes, and the sudden white glow is like a sun lighting up on the sea. Before the sun's energy could be released, he closed his hands, and the shining white light mixed with billions of high temperatures was compressed and sealed in his palms, unable to escape. "I think you should choose peace."

Curator

Maybe I'm being picky, but after Chapter 40 I just couldn't stand it anymore. In Chapter 40, the protagonist is constantly being hunted and persecuted by several forces inexplicably. First of all, the setting of Karma is bright, but it gives the impression that the protagonist is completely brainless and cannot use cheats at all. For example, hiding his identity and using coercion and inducement to let a third party gather some low-level evil cultivators. There are hundreds of evil cultivators or evil-doing monks around a big city. It is not too much. One wave at a time, the cheats take off directly. What happened in this novel? There is no subjective initiative at all, and I only want to fight back after stepping on my head. The plot of being chased by Qi Lian at the beginning of the second chapter is even more ridiculous. If you say that all the skills are lost, it's easy to understand. But with the ability to hold pills, it's so funny to be chased by several big realms on the opposite side, right? Killing people adds karma, so what if it's useless? Although they are clearly not opponents, they dare not fight back at all, saying they are afraid of increasing their karma. However, when they try to eliminate the karma later, it does not work at all. Are they afraid of increasing their karma? What the hell plot? The oppression of the third villain came out of nowhere. At first, it was understandable that he had a conflict with the deputy palace master. But later on, why did the demon-killing palace kill a monster and be promoted to a murderer? Directly tell the protagonist that your credit is not enough, but there are bounties from other families to give you a magic refining method, but the reward of the bounty belongs to me? Who can't accept that? The protagonist is in urgent need of divine refining methods and elixirs, but there is no need for weapon refining magic weapons for the time being. It is obvious that the result can be a win-win situation, but he insists on digging a trap to harm others. What is this person thinking? What follows is that the protagonist has to join the family, and the protagonist's armor is directly copied. Are these people brainless? How can I gain confidence in my combat power when I clearly can't crush the protagonist? The fourth is the asymmetry of information. Everyone knows that the protagonist's skills have been damaged. Everyone knows that the protagonist has turned to become a heavenly master. But only one person doesn't know that the protagonist in the Demon Elimination Hall got angry and killed Bao Dan to plunder wealth? The protagonist kills a lot of monsters and doesn't know that? No one knows about the protagonist, Mie Shajin, and other masters? Everyone knows any news that is not conducive to the protagonist's stable development, and everyone ignores any news that is beneficial to the protagonist. What's the logic? The setting of the fifth family. As mentioned earlier, the ancient clan that the protagonist belongs to is one of the three major local families. It turns out that the protagonist has the highest combat power, and the rest have two pills... The protagonist himself has been hunted down and suppressed, and in the end, he keeps sending money, goods and exercises to the family. Isn't it embarrassing? The protagonist is still practicing, and his strength is improving faster. The existence of this family cannot even provide resources to the protagonist in the early stage. What is the meaning of writing it? The last and most important thing is to abuse the master. It's been 22 years, how come there are still online articles about the abuse-dominated novels that were popular 20 years ago? Reading online texts is always a way to relax. Most of the online texts themselves have little depth. What is the point of torturing the master? Filter readers? Most depressive works allow people to find some beauty by contrasting them with reality, and this novel is not like that. This novel is 40 chapters long and the main character is still suffering all the way. It's really uncomfortable to read.