Cataclysm: I Can Make Alchemy and Strengthen it Infinitely

I have read 60 chapters, and I feel that overall it is okay. The novel can be used as fodder, and it is not so poisonous that you can't stand it at all. However, there are many problems, and I guess this book will not become popular. If the author is a newcomer, then the writing is not bad. Here are the areas where I think there are problems. 1. There is a problem with the protagonist's style of doing things. The protagonist in the apocalyptic novel was killed at the beginning and ran back to seek revenge. Later, he was found by a suspected military boss, so he joined him, and he was still living in it? When you get a prop card that checks other people's attributes, you don't use it on enemies before using it on teammates, just to promote the plot and introduce superpower levels, and treat teammates as hidden enemies? It felt very awkward, especially since I didn't get a second one later, and the plot seemed even more deliberate and inexplicable. It would be more reasonable if the protagonist in some novels swiped hundreds of pictures at once, and found that this person was abnormal everywhere. Moreover, what is the purpose of this enemy and what force it belongs to are not mentioned later. The injured soldier was not saved when he was escaping later, but a little fat man was saved, just to echo the plot of the time bomb earlier. The most disgusting thing is the story about the female thief at the end. She just told her to leave if she didn't want to interact with her. What was she writing about? This woman pestered him and didn't express her feelings. He spent a whole day with her. Later, I wrote that he was even blind dated, and finally found out that she was a neighbor. Just to get in touch with the story organized by this woman later, a normal person knows that a person with problems keeps contacting him, and he has no intention of countering the other person's tactics, and he still plays with the other person. Especially in this kind of apocalyptic world background, isn't there something wrong with it? 2. Many parts of the plot design are not echoed, and I forgot about it after two chapters. I wanted to pull someone else's tooth and say that I would pay homage to it later, but I didn't mention it after more than 10 chapters. I took what seemed to be my father's watch and the manuscript. I didn't read it when the situation was urgent, and I still haven't read it after more than ten chapters. I guess I'll wait until I want to advance the plot in this direction before writing it. I also added a sentence like the situation was urgent and I later recuperated and forgot about it. It was said before that you can only enter the shelter if you have a bracelet, but it can only be outside. It may be that I didn't look carefully and you can only go to the shelter if you have a bracelet. In short, the writing is very vague. It is suspected that the military personnel took out the bracelet of the protagonist when they recruited the protagonist. Later, when writing the plot of Aunt Hu, they rewrote the previous plot again and wrote hundreds of words, but did not say anything about taking away the bracelet. After Chapter 60, there is still no mention of the background of the apocalypse... And no mention of how these monsters appeared. 3 Logical questions. The protagonist and Fatty Lao Wang were abandoned by suspected military personnel. Anyone who was not mentally retarded could tell that the other party did not want them alive at all, and even deliberately killed them. Knowing that the other party wanted to harm me, I turned around and ran to the shelter where the other party was. At first, I was injured to recuperate because of the situation. Later, when the injury was much better, I controlled the bracelet and ran to study. How big is my heart? The shelter is so big, so I am not afraid that the other party will come and silence me? In addition, the masters of the rebel forces rushed over and wrote down their consciousness and used their fists to fight back. Don't you think there is a problem? If you don't have a gun in hand to defend yourself in advance, the opponent will obviously have strong combat power. The first thing you can do is dodge and fight back. When you kill someone's men, the first thing you don't do is kill him with a last hit, and Mo Min cleverly runs to force him to kill you? Then he came into contact with this female thief inexplicably and was identified. Is your awesome gun a decoration?