Complaint Book ListFirst of all, the protagonist's plug-in is relatively new. Although the protagonist's training method is a bit old-fashioned, it is also interesting. However, the plot of the heroine Li Qiuling is really uncomfortable. First of all, she is killed without brains. I also specifically said before that if you can't help, stay away and don't cause trouble. This woman won't do it. She appears out of nowhere and shouts, "Don't kill my boss!" Then he dies at the speed of light. I was so embarrassed watching it😰. What happened later was even more extreme. The girl's IQ was still online and suddenly she became mentally ill. She said she was alive just for her younger brother, but suddenly she gave it away. After she was resurrected, she felt that her younger brother's life or death didn't matter. This girl's impression was originally an 8 but after she was resurrected, she was left with a 2. She turned directly into a love brain. She watched the male protagonist do something to her, and her mind was filled with the image of the male protagonist. It was so disgusting. And what about the male protagonist? I have been in contact with this girl for a total of two days, and I specifically emphasized that I don't like her, just for peace of mind. I don't understand why I feel uneasy. First of all, if there is no male protagonist and Captain Zhao colludes with the two evil cultivators, the people in this village will definitely die. Secondly, I told her to stay away and not to leave, but even if I didn't curse her, it would be fine, but still feel guilty? Think about playing League of Legends and telling your teammates to guard the tower and wait for me to clear the line of troops. As a result, as soon as the line of troops enters the tower, I use a set of skills to clear the line of troops and can't replenish a few. Unless I line up with the enemy in the middle of the two towers, the opponent rushes in with a set of skills and dies. After dying several times, I still get out of the tower. This heroine is the kind of person who can't just run away with her younger brother. Even if she wants to stay, she will let her younger brother run away first. In the end, none of them will run away, so they give her away. The third ghost path golden elixir monks all said that it is extremely difficult to retain the memory of a person after death and transfer to the ghost path to rebuild. As a result, the protagonist, a novice in cultivation, succeeded easily after studying the secret book for a few days, so he asked if this was a form of intelligence?
I don't understand the value of this woman's existence.
From the perspective of the heroine's identity, first of all, even though I don't have a virginity complex, it doesn't make sense to write about her being raped. Although she is a son of a nobleman, her father is dead. It doesn't make any sense. Don't suddenly write later that it was actually a royal princess who poisoned her.
From the perspective of helping the protagonist, although she has a little understanding of the world of cultivation, she only knows a little bit without talent. If the protagonist has a little training, she will basically not be able to help at all in terms of knowledge. Her help is basically limited to that one secret book.
From the perspective of strength, in my opinion, a person who has never practiced cultivation has no talent for cultivation. Is it reasonable that a formation and the blood of the protagonist will suddenly have a strong combat power? It's completely unreasonable, it's just to make her not become a useless person. It makes her uncomfortable to watch.
In addition, from the plot of Chapter 60 that I have read, it is enough to write that the protagonist is seriously injured and goes berserk. There is no need for her to be killed. The plot until the resurrection has no impact at all. There is no need for this woman to give you even the cultivation method. You can just get it from Captain Zhao in muscle form.
I think most of the emotional scenes in online novels are awkward, especially a relationship like this that ends with two meals together in 20 chapters and then ends up living and dying together. It's so speechless. If you can't grasp it, just don't write it. In fact, there is no need for the heroine of this kind of fairy tale to exist. Regardless of whether it is the goddess, saint, or daughter of heaven, under the power of the protagonist's plug-in, unless it has reached the ceiling of combat power, she will be surpassed sooner or later and will never be able to catch up. Like the heroine in Xian Ni who seems to have died because of the golden elixir
