People in Tokyo: Starting with a Time and Space Gate

It's normal for it to have a low rating. More than 50 people rated it 7:6. This novel is really confusing, after you read the first 13. I will probably download or collect it myself. Or give him a recommendation vote, but if you read it carefully, once you get to chapter 20, you will feel that the protagonist's character is very bad. Too noob. When you first arrived in another world, I thought it was quite normal. After all, the protagonists of some novels are very innocent at the beginning, but slowly grow into cruel and cold characters later on. And you have worn it for the second time, and you don't have the aura of a strong person, or the feeling of a superior person at all. There is no archive at all, I am still the same novice. Are you disgusted? Especially the part about the knight over there, even if someone provokes you, you are still in that humble state, and then they adjust your position even more, and in the end you don't even make a sound. This book is not only a novice novel, but also a torture novel. I couldn't watch it at all, and my ability to arrange the plot was too rough. 😎The ability to insert plots in other people's novels is not just right, but it seems that there is nothing wrong with it. You are so weird. The ability to set up the plot is simply terrible. 😎The realistic plot of this novel was too rough when An x Yilong left, which made it very strange to watch. Originally I should have given you three stars, but because your ability to set up plots is really terrible, I can only give you one star. The protagonist in your novel has not grown up at all. He is already over 20 years old and has no worldly feelings at all, except for the time when he sells gold bars. It can be seen that except for a normal protagonist, he is a child at other times. According to your description, the protagonist is nearly 18 years old, and he also has a previous life. Age memory shouldn't be so naive, but it turns out that what you thought was simple, you think. How complicated is the thought of a 20-year-old young man, but the protagonist you write is so simple, even if you are staying at home. Thoughts cannot be that simple. What you describe here is so outrageous. After the memories of the two lives are merged, your thoughts can become simpler. Damn it. Think we're stupid, right?

It looked pretty good originally, but the character of the protagonist can be considered a failure😌

When I saw the protagonist enter a new world, and after knowing that the world was invaded by monsters, his first reaction was to be a savior or a destroyer. It's funny. If you want to save the world, save it. If you want to destroy it, just go and destroy it. What's the point of being confused here? Then I saw that the heroine left behind the queen. The protagonist obviously has the strength to not directly save people, but those who have no strength and have to accept the result of the heroine's divorce, ask them why they don't save people, does it seem that the protagonist Bai Lianhua is sick, is it interesting to belittle others just to show off to the protagonist? I quite liked this novel at first. After all, the protagonist has a strong golden finger, a high degree of freedom, and has written many worlds. But what happened to the character of the protagonist? He is neither above nor below, and has serious double standards. After traveling through so many worlds, his strength has only been enhanced, and his character has become more and more unlikable.

I read the last Tokyo book and was looking forward to it, but after reading more than 20 chapters of this one, my IQ was not above the line throughout. I shouldn't be timid when I should be vulgar, and fearless and timid when I should be cautious. I don't know what will happen next, but I have no expectations.

It's all about popular anime, and the settings are pretty good. The writing is too wordy, and there's a lot of nonsense. The biggest flaw is that the protagonist has two lives and acts like an idiot. I'll polish my writing and start a new book. This one is a sure winner.

The old author is still writing simple articles. . . . . It's a bit hard to swallow the poisonous food in a few chapters.

The character of the main character fell apart at the beginning. I don't know what to think. I was speechless. It's true.

Hey guys, I read your post a few years ago. It's outrageous that there has been no progress at all over the past few years.

Personally, I think the protagonist's IQ is lower than normal people. It's not necessary to write it like this. I deliberately lowered the protagonist's intelligence, and then used the line of a so-called elf girl to control her own power and supplement her common sense. I pushed it to the work page and took a look at the author's name. It seemed familiar. I should have seen his other works before. The protagonist in the author's previous works in the image is not so bad🤐

Xiaobai Wen, let's not talk about clothes. You still lower the price of your own products and keep exposing your own information. Are you another one who wants to get points? At 8:07 on April 9, I saw Chapter 29 died of poison, I hope future generations will remember it.