My Lucky Life

Summary of discontinuation: Class T2. 240,000 Words, no updates. Tags of the work: Weird rules, suspenseful puzzles, imaginary city, awesome start. Rating: A. A carefully polished beginning of the story and a narrative technique with a good sense of atmosphere; B. It has an amazing start, but is pessimistic about the overall high level of the work; C. Just the right perspective switching, a full immersive reading experience. A brief comment in one sentence: The gold content of the eight-month draft in two months can be seen with the naked eye. 1. Introduction "I'm a very lucky man." "..." "I'm not crazy! I'm serious! This is different from conventional luck. What I mean is that my good luck... Can allow me to avoid death." "For example?" "For example, there was a murder case not long ago." The two policemen looked at each other and silently took out handcuffs and sedatives. "Well, you continue." 2. Plot, characters and writing level It is fair to say that the plot design is above the standard, but there is still a feeling of buying a casket for a pearl: the quality of the plot is good and can be regarded as a "pearl", but the packaging expression method is undoubtedly a superior "casket". The character creation in this book is relatively successful, and the characters with heavy plot weight are vivid, many of which leave room for further expansion. The author's writing level is average to above average, and it has basically achieved the desired effect, but there is still room for improvement. For example, the constant switching of perspectives and the lack of clarity when describing the case through dialogue are relatively unclear. 3. Highlights The atmospheric packaging technique is the most prominent highlight of this book. The author starts the story with the protagonist describing the case in the police station. The protagonist's memories are mainly used, and the police interrogation is supplemented. He constantly alternates the information output method, and combines the incredible supernatural subjective narrative and the inexplicably related but contradictory objective results into a suspenseful and strange puzzle. Since this stage is the recollection of the case that has already occurred, the reader is under psychological pressure. The plot then naturally transitions to the interrogation phase. At this time, both the identity change of the protagonist and the suspect and the environmental changes in the interrogation room will increase the reader's sense of urgency. The supernatural events also turn from memories to reality. The author quietly adds thriller elements to the story through a step-by-step approach. Although the psychological pressure of the reader increases significantly at this time, the author's progressive and step-by-step approach makes people feel more immersive and unable to stop. The writing process of this book has certain reference value for the majority of online article writers. The author and editor worked together to revise the manuscript eight times in two months. The repeated iteration and optimization can be said to have truly improved the reading experience, and the focus is mainly on expression techniques. Perhaps designing an otherworldly story does require talent and inspiration, but through constant polishing and careful packaging of a relatively mediocre story, it may also be possible to turn decay into a magical effect, and the latter is not beyond the reach of ordinary authors. 4. Questions ① Compared with the extremely brilliant presentation technique, the core of the story is slightly inferior; ② The start of repeated refinement is impressive, but it is still unknown whether the level can be maintained in the future; ③The author's writing skills need to be further strengthened, especially when he chooses more complex expression techniques.

"I am a very lucky person." "..." "I'm not crazy! I'm serious! This is different from conventional luck. What I mean is that my good luck... Can allow me to avoid death." "For example?" "For example, there was a murder case not long ago." The two policemen looked at each other and silently took out handcuffs and sedatives. "Well, you continue."

"I'm a very lucky man." "..." "I'm not crazy! I'm serious! This is different from conventional luck. What I mean is that my good luck... Can allow me to avoid death." "For example?" "For example, there was a murder case not long ago." The two policemen looked at each other and silently took out handcuffs and sedatives. "Well, you continue."

🐸 Tag: suspense Wow, after reading more than ten chapters, I can only say wow, this story is really attractive. Whether it is the suspense case design or the group portraits, it feels very interesting. To be honest, it is very interesting. The character movements, language, and plot development are all designed with precision. The suspense left makes people want to see the subsequent plot. The contrast between the protagonists is also very unexpected, but it is indeed reasonable. I am looking forward to the subsequent development. Recommend it to everyone. The pen feels very powerful.