Hobby Complaints

It has a bit of a hammer feel and seems to be more of a gaming style.

There are roughly three advantages: First, the intention. Generally speaking, this novel, like other historical novels, has no deeper or higher moral purpose. It is just about the hatred of the country and the family, and the rise and fall of the dynasty. But one thing is that the author does a good job in portraying the characters, especially the author's three-dimensional and changing analysis of the characters from multiple perspectives of stance, doctrine, situation, and interests. This makes these characters unlike other historical works, which are either high-level or tool-like, but really make people feel alive and popular. Secondly, the writing style. As a historical text, textual criticism is a compulsory course that cannot be passed, and there are also those who use textual criticism in historical texts. However, textual research is often accompanied by another problem, that is, the large amount of historical materials produced through textual research sometimes greatly affects the fluency of reading and the integrity of the writing. At least, in my opinion, this novel needs to be well researched, and at the same time, it does not affect the feeling of reading. Through psychological activities similar to that of Bachelor Xiaolin, etc., It basically makes the article smooth. Of course, it's not perfect yet. Finally, the growth of the protagonist. From this point of view, the author has barely answered an inevitable question in time-traveling literature: why should a person who was an ordinary person before time-traveling perform so well after time-traveling? At least, in this novel, I can see the growth and changes in the protagonist's heart, and see the protagonist's gradual adaptation to the times. Although there are still some blunt and politically correct aspects, in general, I think the author's answer to this question is still qualified.

It is a doomsday science fiction with a relatively slow pace and a relatively plain style of writing, but compared to those novels that use the name of doomsday science fiction and are written without knowing what they are called, the attitude of this book is extremely excellent. It can be seen that the author wants to express something, but limited by language and experience, what he did is not very good, but it is worthy of encouragement.

It has the meaning of imitating Red Mansion, but the main part is still a routine. The protagonist is quite a robot, a father is kind and his son is filial, and brothers and sisters are respectful. There is no bright spot or new idea. It is a standard template.

The gimmick of "Old Hong Kong" was enough to attract me and keep me reading. Even if the Cantonese language of this book is a bit awkward, even if the chapters are seriously missing, and even if it cannot escape the routine of urban entertainment writing, I am still willing to keep reading for this subject matter.

The writing is immature, but I still give you some support.

I really doubt whether this author has ever run a group. He probably wrote the article after playing the game and looking at the settings, just like Shenzhen Dominator. If I had actually run in a group, the writing would not be so stiff and rigid. The language would be completely in the mode of online writing, and I would not be able to see the RP feeling of running in a group. I have to say that Internet literature has created a large number of COB and DNB-style PLs. This is probably Ye Gonghao Tuan.

A typical "butt determines the head" book. They followed the eunuch route, and the relatively mainstream imperial examination stream and military service stream were relatively niche (of course, relatively speaking, they were not unpopular), which still interested me very much. However, upon closer inspection, it is actually not much different from the mainstream routine. In order to highlight the protagonist, the description of eunuchs is downplayed, and more content is depicted on the corruption and cliques of civil servants for personal gain. Of course, these issues are also historical facts. It does not mean that the writing is wrong, it is just a matter of perspective. Reflecting the protagonist's greatness and righteousness is also a normal operation of the novel, but the author's treatment makes the route taken seem less distinctive.