The Glory of the Young Eagle

Author, you are all water Your calm article, Like the ebb of the sea, Return to the bottomless sea, Return that article which is full of water. Your talent is like alcohol, It evaporates and is lost, leaving only a blush. The bitterness of the article is not love, But the joy of a clown is just one person's carnival, There is no trace of the reader's joy until the author's, The lower body is bleeding, and this chapter of the sea ends.

Don't add so many harems to a historical novel. It's quite disgusting to force a little maid into the protagonist's body in just ten chapters without doing anything.

If you want to write a love story, go to a female channel. Forget about this history. Napoleon couldn't hold his hand when he saw the coffin board. Why not change the title to "The Overbearing Prince Falls in Love with Me", maybe this way the audience will be wider.

Ink stains, the more I look at them, the more annoying they become.

This is too watery. Are you writing The Legend of Zhen Huan?

After reading more than 20 chapters, I found it boring and bland, with no ups and downs in the plot! From the protagonist's speech and behavior, there is no trace of the maturity that should have been achieved after living two lives! It seems that he is really a boy of fifteen or sixteen years old. . . . .

Overall, there are no particularly big features or big mistakes. It is relatively ordinary. There is no passionate uprising and there is no military in the early stage. After reading Chapter 15, I have begun to regret it. I really can't stand it. There is no chaos in this bullshit. There is no war, and no territory of his own. He is just a clown in this palace. Of course, after more than 60 chapters, the melody is still the same. If you want to read the strategies of politicians (hey, Prime Minister), I want to know, author, what on earth are you writing? I don't know whether to reflect the protagonist's inability to control himself or to establish his own territory in a foreign land @_@, and I don't want to understand. Author, what exactly is the protagonist in this book? I hope he is an excellent commander, the owner of a political power, and a liberator of productivity, instead of accompanying a group of palace nobles who are still in the palace in Chapter 60. The plot is extremely slow, without a small climax, let alone a big climax. I can say that the overall score is not worse, only more ordinary. The protagonist can just live with it, can't he escape first? What is the protagonist's position in this book? (┯_┯), It made me panic.

After reading the author's extra chapter and this article, I feel that Teresa is developing more and more in the direction of Zhen Huan. Yes, I have paid so much, but you can't give me a satisfactory reply, and you have even brought me a lot of opponents who can threaten my life. You did the first grade of junior high school, so you can't blame me for doing the fifteenth grade. This is the French version of Zhen Huan who was not so lucky and was suppressed by the big boss.

This book is no good. It's too watery. It seems like the author is a woman? It feels like I'm writing a romance. After dozens of chapters, I haven't gotten to the topic yet, and I'm having a romantic relationship with Sophia, and I've blocked him.

Why do you write about being overbearing and falling in love with me under the guise of a history of fighting for hegemony? It's still a hodgepodge of incest, cuckolding and all. Did Napoleon go to the author in the middle of the night? It's really outrageous to talk about love all day long. After traveling through time for eleven years, you are already fifteen years old and have done nothing. You just rely on the halo of the protagonist to become the emperor?