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It's bad, it's too simple, I deleted the book review Although it is classified as science fiction, it is actually an urban power similar to the infinite flow. There are dungeons and a main world line, and probably a tag of spiritual energy recovery. It is a suture monster that is not inconsistent with being placed on a bed. Unfortunately, the writing style is also quite good. In fact, although this opening structure and setting can be seen everywhere, this book It's not bad, but it's a pity that there are too many drama-like power struggles and allegorical plots, so that people lose the motivation to read on. The random layout and rough values ​​set make the (from now on) old-fashioned upgrade system an unavoidable flaw in the reading experience. The more you read, the more uncomfortable it becomes.

On the Bad Grass, The Explosion is wonderfully written, but too much water was poured into it, so I haven't finished reading it. Yan Nan is another masterpiece, the writing is guaranteed, but the plot can only be described as incomprehensible. Most of the content is cliche and watery, and the setting is not rigorous. Although those few chapters vividly describe the fatalistic aesthetics that Yan Nan is good at, which is very enjoyable, but in the end it was drowned by too much watery, boring and nonsensical content. After thinking about it, I decided to leave it up. After all, there is a recommendation list next door. Although I read this book for a while, I really can't recommend it.

Bad grass, a little reluctant fan Xiang Liangcao, and deleted the book review It can be regarded as a fan travel story of Gundam Seed. It adds a Zhutian system to go to other mecha animated worlds to search for dungeons and search for technology. You can also draw characters, buy supplies, and rub the body in a one-stop process. At first glance, it seems to be an ordinary beginner's article - in fact, it is quite a beginner's article - but the author's research on the Gundam setting is still a bit complicated. Considering the hodgepodge level of other Zongtian Infinite comics, as a fan of the Gundam series, it can barely be read, but let's talk about the problem first: First of all, there is no emotional line in this article. The female protagonist is jealous, and the male protagonist is henpecked, but he always flirts with women and pretends to be stupid. This kind of character template is not universal, but at least it is widespread. It seems that all authors who cannot write emotional dramas write like this. This book is also the same, that is, the most common starting point is the pseudo-harem with a single female protagonist. In addition, these female protagonists are all high-level NPCs summoned by the system, and they also have loyalty settings. Although this setting is basically just a mention (without the knowledge of it), it is still a bit jarring and limits the further development of the plot. Secondly, the protagonist is in a corner, and the original plot of seed is not changed much. It is said that the most important thing to do when reading fan fiction is to make up for the regrets of the original work. So what is the biggest regret of the Seed series? Among them, there must be Kira in the second season of Seed Destiny who is very powerful but does nothing. When a problem breaks out, he activates the machine and goes out to cut off people's hands and feet. The protagonist is also a secret small group who only concentrates on building new machines and does not make political efforts. It is a pity that basically none of the protagonists in this book was left behind. Not only did he not make up for this regret, but he took it upon himself. In the end, the protagonist crippled all the four heroes, including Aslan, and wiped out more than half of ZAFT's pursuers. The Eighth Fleet was still completely wiped out, and even Frey's father (who originally died earlier, but the author was so criticized that he changed his death here) died again. Where is the protagonist at this time? Playing a dungeon of the system in the lair, the protagonist has no idea if the system does not send a mission. The protagonist even made a cold-blooded declaration on the wreckage of Junius-7: "If it happens again, I will still stand by and watch" (original sentence of Chapter 73), which makes people wonder. What's even worse is that these questions actually have a ready-made standard answer for reference, and that is the villain of the second season, Chancellor Durandal. To be honest, if his goals were not too anti-human and he offended the protagonist Fang about Lux, what he did was completely a counterexample to the protagonist Fang. He was too decent to unite the normal earth nation. It is a normal idea to start a family, mobilize public opinion to attack the real enemy, and do some personnel work, but it is also valuable in the crazy world of Seed. This reveals another solution to the contradiction of Seed, and also lets us know that the Earth Federation is not monolithic at all. No matter what, the unification of all mankind must be naturally correct in our country. When the protagonist came into contact with the East Asian Republic, I also imagined that the protagonist would seize Shedi Randal and go directly to his path, leaving him with no way to go. Now it seems that I am just overthinking. The author's outline probably didn't think that much at all. I can only say that it is a pity.

Bad grass, too poisonous in the early stage, so embarrassing I heard that he was second in the Western Fantasy District, but I didn't expect that the gap between him and the first place was so big. I was really blinded. The writing in the first few dozen chapters is in vain, the plot is bad, the characters have basically no logic (i. E., It lowers the intelligence), and there are awkward Taiping Heavenly Kingdom jokes. It is a genius to be able to read it. Although according to the feedback of book friends, the author's writing has improved in the later period, but you should not force yourself too much when reading the book. If you can't stand it, don't read it.

Bad grass floods the golden mountain, and book reviews are deleted Even though I knew from the title that it couldn't be a work written by Liang Cao, I didn't expect it to be so poorly written. To be honest, this kind of wilderness survival novel is too picky for readers. Not everyone has the patience to read hundreds of chapters of the Stone Age, and Robinson Crusoe is the first. This book just adds a little supernatural power system setting that is commonly seen on the bad streets. The family does not build fields or farm, the protagonist is about to become mentally ill, and there is also a global live broadcast room. I am surprised. This content is almost the length of a "Historical Records". After taking a look at the author's previous books, it is also the same routine. I can only say that I really can't get out of my comfort zone.

On bad grass, there is no merit or demerit, but it is really not exciting. I didn't want to give it to you at first, but after reading hundreds of chapters, I really didn't have any mood swings at all, and there was no plot that left any memory points. As Long Wen, he really didn't feel happy at all in writing, including the so-called plot of abusing the protagonist in the previous dozens of chapters. After suppressing it for so long, he finally became him. A man's chess piece, he burned a few useless supporting characters and then went to farm. The explanation given was that the crowd will turn against him and the enemy can't take care of himself. The actual feeling is that every move is expected, and even if it feels a little satisfying, it was released in advance during the planning stage - not to mention that the protagonist is not the chess player who made the plan.

Damn it, the author likes brackets too much English brackets It can only be said that it is no wonder that everyone looks down on the infinite world. It is a very typical example of using dregs to sew up the heavens and pollute the entire universe. Warhammer 40k only learned one racial mysophobia. The full text can be summarized in three words: Alien race, picture! This kind of work is top-notch at first sight, and as expected, the author also expresses the extremely rough jingoistic theory very expressively, and then arranges supporting characters to praise it, including the twenty-one cheap sons. Yes, the twenty-one primarchs have become the protagonist's sons here, which is completely OOC. Moreover, he likes to write English in brackets after his name, which is very confusing. Some of them are even at the level of "steel city" - this is really the original text, it is simply incomprehensible.

Poisonous weed, the protagonist is unbearable First of all, although the title of this book is "Zhutian", it only covers Warhammer, and the frequency of updates tends to be unfinished. The protagonist of the free chapter basically did nothing. He just re-interpreted the original plot of the Battle of Calth and then went to farm. As far as online articles are concerned, it can be said to be the beginning of the collapse of heaven. There is no need to mention the three golden chapters. But the biggest poisonous point is the character of the protagonist. In short, the protagonist is the most typical refined self-interested person, but this protagonist is set as The Golden Age reinforced the insurance of the future, but as soon as the future arrived, he thought about abandoning the present human race and working behind closed doors. His personality was even more despicable against the backdrop of the Mechanic-Priests and the surrounding Astartes (not to mention the Ultramarines, one of the most humane legions). Such a protagonist may be suitable for the Dark Flow, but he is not suitable for the Invincible Flow.

Bad grass, too white

Under the bad grass, a running account in a literal sense It looks like reportage, with no plot at all and cannot be written.

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Under the bad grass, the running account is written in white and OOC Invincible Warhammer 40k fans, but just from this Invincible flow, it can be seen that this fan basically just copied the settings, and the unique aesthetic style constructed by the original work was basically discarded casually. The first shot was to destroy the world, and the power armor gravity shield was just picked up from the nest garbage, and the Mechanicus looked at it twice. As the title says, the protagonist is a Star God (C'tan). Because GW himself is vague about him, there is room for setting, but at least the C'tan is a purely realistic cosmic creature with weak psychic abilities and no understanding of subspace (otherwise the Void Dragon The fragments will not be easily defeated by the emperors of the indigenous period), and the self-setting given to the protagonist in this game becomes immune to psychic energy and subspace, and even distorts the physical laws of reality around him when he takes action - this is obviously the effect of subspace/psionic energy, and is confused. Of course, the original sin of online writing is that it doesn't look good, OOC is secondary, and the writing is poor and boring, so I can't recommend it.

Bad grass, a hodgepodge of low-quality Anke with low drive and low performance. The whole reading experience is really stumbling, like eating black bread with gravel and chaff. Moreover, book reviews have been deleted, and the evaluation has been further improved. First of all, this book copied a lot of settings and mixed in a mess of elements. It started with the German three-wind Shinra fighting the green Russian Russia, and then it was Goblin Slayer, Yin Ying, Harry Potter, Cthulhu, and others. To be honest, the blending was very poor, which was also one of the reasons why the early reading experience was very bad. It was like there was not a drop of water in the book. My own settings have to be slowly filled in until very late. Before that, these external settings are just a mess, and they are too inconsistent to be discussed in detail. I just feel that it is a drama, especially when the author is still trying to create a slightly serious background and at the same time, he comes up with the second grade / funny / crazy. It is better to write it as a white text from the beginning, which is not good or bad. Then there is the inferior DM part. The whole story is as weird as reading a fan Anke on the forum. The character logic cannot be said to be non-existent, but it is also as nonsensical as if it were decided by throwing dice. The author as DM/KP did a very poor job in explaining these plots driven by a large number of random events, such as the large number of san characters in this article. Check section, it is difficult for normal readers to understand this kind of situation that makes people go crazy after just one glance. The psychological horror of love crafts usually requires a whole article to foreshadow the causes and consequences. However, the author writes it as if it is as commonplace as a game character taking a debuff, or it is an overly exaggerated move like "drawing bloodstains on the face with both hands." Not to mention being substituted, what's even worse is that these people suddenly became normal again after a short period of time (usually after vomiting for a while), able to run and jump. This was the case when fighting the Behemoth, the sea monster, etc., Etc. The previous exaggerated performance was a bit untenable. The protagonist's experience along the way is more random, and he bumps into monsters that come from nowhere. His mentality is mainly to fight in a kick-ass team, and fight the monsters without thinking about anything else. Although there is an explanation later, it is foreshadowing, but the perception is not good. I won't go into details about other cases, but judging from the feedback from other book friends that the plot often forcibly suppresses intelligence, there are many shortcomings in the author's writing skills. As for the wonderful foreshadowing that the author boasts about, well, it is actually not very exciting or brilliant. What I saw was a bit disappointing. There is no core aesthetics such as a sense of fate. It just hides some things from you until the end. The traces of making dumplings just for jealousy are too obvious, but this is a matter of opinion and I will not make further comments. At least it's not a bad ending. If it's not a bad ending, it has already defeated 90% of its western fantasy counterparts.

Poor writing, poor writing, and unlikable characters The story about Asperger's Syndrome at the beginning confused me, and then the writing was also terrible. I can only say that the system writing is like this

Damn it, I couldn't stand it in the first few chapters, it's just too novice The Yin Ying version has a gunfire arc, but the writing style is new and the villain routine is also old. It feels like the author was writing in a hurry. Before the settings were laid out, he started to rush around and change people and places. Many setting terms had to be mentioned first and then explained. It looked like patching, but even in such a hurry, the pace was not fast, because large sections of words had to be cut to other people other than the protagonist/main line (otherwise the protagonist alone would not be able to support the journey) world view), and the protagonist has a big picture but refuses to explain what he knows and thinks in a few words. He plays the role of the Riddler to the readers. The rhythm of this opening is basically finished, let alone the conception and character and other content that can only be judged by further reading. I can only sigh. Sometimes it is no wonder that readers ask for the golden three chapters. It really shows the author's skill to write well. Then the real heroine is dead at the beginning, but doesn't seem to be resurrected later. The new heroine is still the fangirl of the real heroine (not even a friend, just a fangirl with a single arrow). It's really confusing. After all, this character design has nothing to like. According to the feedback from book friends later, it is also the most standard Japanese male protagonist with wings knotted. It is really cliche and cannot be read.

Poisonous weeds, the author's germs enter the brain, and everything is ruined The wonderful chemical reaction between the author of the US military nerd + the selfish protagonist + the nonsensical plot After reading dozens of chapters, I felt an air of ancient engineer science fiction coming over me. Whenever a setting is mentioned, the parameters and principles are listed in detail, as if to imitate the stories of Tom Clancy, the predecessor of military novels. However, this is science fiction or a space opera. It can be seen that the author has a certain knowledge reserve, but it does not mean that the small science popularization is seamless. Not to mention that it looks really awkward, and the world view is also very fragmented. As a military science fiction, it can only be said that it has basically lost its rigor, and it lacks imagination when compared with other space operas. What's worse is that the author often puts brackets behind military terms to popularize the terminology. When I saw the "Armored Brigade Combat Team (ABCT)", I was really blinded. Later, it got worse. The attack starting line and assembly points were marked with English abbreviations. I can only respect and wish you well. By the way, after going into space, the author completely changed his writing style and turned into a novice writing style, so readers of this level don't need to read on.

Under the bad grass, pure white writing Cyberpunk 2077 + his and their stars, but did not fly out of the atmosphere, a story on a planet, the content is basically dialogue and often does not add subject and predicate, the plot is old-fashioned, the plot is just kill kill kill, but the writing is not satisfactory, it is tasteless, it is a pity to abandon it