From Titan Corporation to the Empire of Man

I always feel that the human supremacy of 40K is too petty, and it goes to the heavens. There must be so many non-human races, and it always reminds me of coming from the New World.

After reading it for a while, I felt like I couldn't finish it. The only thing that stood out to me while reading this book was this picture😒😓

My evaluation is that the Warhammer universe is purely bragging and asking for trouble. Those who brag about evil gods and trash cans can't influence each other. In the final analysis, psychic energy is equivalent to opening a wireless network. The subspace is just an information cloud segment full of malicious virus data. If it is so awesome, all the rat people and natural creatures will be infected. He has become a monster of his own camp. Those who say that you will be infected if you think about traveling to the past are all nonsense. They have the same brain as the invincible monsters of the Baku type. Why don't you say that monsters of such a large size are not as lethal as tigers, which are similar in size to humans in nature, and are not as bad as the genetic changes caused by nuclear radiation. Also, those people in the Warhammer world indulged in pleasure during the 30k period, were extremely class-oriented, and committed genocide at every turn. It was not a good civilization in itself. Is it any wonder that the four hawkers started torturing them during the 40k period? Double standards, right? It doesn't matter if you do evil, others of the opposite sex will be called heretics if they do evil. Pure and wise-- Internet commentator

The way you write. . . Where did you learn this evil way? The development of the main universe is inexplicable. Any development is just a short sentence at the beginning, and then it is inexplicable at the end. There is no process, no experience, no changes in the hearts of the people, and any plot is inexplicably omitted. I feel that you wrote it in a hurry.

After watching 118, I felt that it was a waste of food and was a pity to abandon it. Each world went too fast and I didn't see any exciting points of discovering the world. It only took seconds. To be honest, the protagonist's reset ability was not very exciting. The main world in the article is boring, and the dungeon world is also boring, and passersby are often used to sell themselves and brag. When I first saw it, I really liked the setting and character of the protagonist, but now it feels like a running account.

I read Chapter 13, and it's just a garbage book that is messed up and put together. I read the reviews and they all gave low stars. How did I get this score of 8.1?

The writing is really worth reading, just sharing some of my own thoughts. The Warhammer Legion is all a person with a gene seed. That is because the Warhammer Legion is equivalent to its own group and can only develop one seed. In the book, the Primarch is raised by the protagonist and the army is in his own hands. In fact, this does not need to be done. Since it is a special operation, it should cooperate like the Death Watch. It would not be too unreasonable to break up such an army. This brings me to my next thought. The original body is not suitable to be a leader. Angron is suitable for fighting and being a general. Perturabo should indulge in research, go to Curze and let him do reconnaissance. Let Luojia be with him as a secretary assistant. If you make major changes to the character's personality and it's too different from Warhammer, then you might as well let them go to a place that suits them and have some of their own ideas.

The plot is so confusing, and the writing style makes it feel like there is no sense of immersion at all, just like reading a vernacular novel.

This novel should be much wider to write, right? After all, there are hundreds of thousands of stars in the Stat Universe and the Milky Way. Using space gates like yours, you can write about many universes. For example, ancient universes may also appear. It is impossible for technological universes to always appear because the time universe is always changing. Your space gate may also appear in ancient universes. In fact, I want to write a novel in which the protagonist goes to restore the glory of the foundation and travels through various universes. Each universe originally had branches of the foundation. Then, for unknown reasons, suddenly one day the space door closed. Then the protagonist, as the heir to the foundation, wants to restore the glory of the foundation and regain the branches of the foundation.

Is the writing okay? But it's a bit confusing, and I'm illiterate and I can't recognize any of the military weapons. It's annoying to hear.