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The roadside stall reviews rated it 84 points.

This is a very interesting story, a very interesting sect, a very interesting leader, and even the entire world of immortality is very interesting. At the beginning of the whole story, the protagonist travels directly to a world of cultivation, and is then forcibly bound to the leader system. He has mission techniques and certain skills, and takes the development of the sect as his own responsibility. From the setting point of view, this is a seemingly normal story. But in the author's writing, the whole story shines with a "hahaha" aura. There are endless jaw-dropping twists in the plot. The psychological activities with barrage and the surprising setting should be the biggest highlight and selling point of this novel. First of all, it is different from normal cultivation novels where monks fight for cultivation resources. The world in this book develops very harmoniously. Everyone uses mutual benefit as the basic trading principle. Killing is basically invisible. If you don't have spiritual stones, you can just go work... It can be called a breath of fresh air in the world of cultivation. Secondly, the world of cultivating immortals in the article has the flavor of a once-in-a-lifetime being-oh, I'm talking about the talisman of all realms. Buy elixirs and magical herbs? Go to Lingshi. Com! Guaranteed transactions are instantaneous and the authenticity can be verified. Are you afraid? Want to contact an old friend? Just buy a liaison device! SMS, voice and video are all available! Is there no alchemist in the sect? Go to the job market to recruit one! But you have to cover five insurances and one gold... I can only say that the immortals in this world of cultivation understand some strange things all day long. Oh, actually the strangest thing is the leader, our protagonist's classmate. As a leader, it is normal to recruit disciples, but why do you recruit little girls of four or five years old? It's just due to system limitations. Tell me how you managed to survive when your disciples' cultivation speed was eclipsed by thousands of miles. The painting style of other characters in the article is also very strange, such as the foodie leader of a certain sect and his younger brothers who steal a bunch of radishes, such as the female (?) Rabbit who named himself Lord Rabbit and does not think too much, such as Zhao Lengleng who has always been silent and cold-faced, such as the alchemist who likes to create a school of cooking alchemy? For example, the former head who took Shushan as his path and transformed his system into one? The whole novel is such a strange setting. Great idea! Come on!

1. Character creation: The story is told from the perspective of the heroine. The heroine is a girl who is friends with many fairy kings. She is a mortal girl who is not known to be a fairy. She is lively and thoughtful, has a new love, is smart and innocent, and has the image of an ideal and beautiful girl. However, it does not feel out of place when integrated into this work. Instead, it makes people feel close and easy to like. It can be said that the image creation of the main characters in this work is relatively successful, and it can be seen that each character is not just a formality for the plot, but has his own extraordinary experience. They are not the protagonists, and it is impossible to tell their stories in detail, but the author is really powerful. Through the words and deeds of the characters, or even one action, he tells the readers: they have a story. 2. Plot The first few chapters are very interesting. The author uses his own ingenuity to slowly unfold a world of immortals in front of the readers. I personally like the plot of the young man in gray who makes tea. It attracts people at once. Then the story slowly unfolds. This tea stall and the beautiful visitor Gradually, the extraordinary is revealed... Riji seems to have an understanding of his own life experience, but more mysteries have not yet been revealed. The "brother" that makes Riji confused about whether he exists also affects the reader's mood... This paragraph is very smooth and refreshing, making people unable to take their eyes away. Many settings in the work are also eye-catching. For example, Shu's brothers and sisters have the same roots rather than the same parents. I have always had a strange liking for this setting. Afterwards, the scene where the immortals descend to earth seems to be less amazing than before. The plot seems to have fallen into a "routine", but even if it unfolds similarly, I don't think a group of immortals will react normally to mortals. I didn't particularly like the scene where the hairpin was turned into a hairpin, because I felt that the clerk was actually quite innocent... 3. Rhythm of writing The feeling at the beginning was also very good. The introduction of the settings and the appearance of the characters were all calm and leisurely. Then the author began to speed up the pace of the article in order to promote the plot. I still recommend the author not to rush. This book feels very fresh and comfortable. Take your time and tell the story well and wonderfully. Naturally, people will support it. 4. Writing style The writing style... Let's put it this way, it's top-notch among the female videos I've seen. There are many magnificent and bizarre imaginations, detailed descriptions, stacking of colors, and even the selection of scenery. It doesn't make people feel like it's just a pile of words, but a description that is full of beauty and makes people feel very comfortable. The language is generally semi-literary, the style is relatively relaxed, and there is sometimes a touch of humor. This is also one of the few novels I have seen that truly fits the category of "oriental fantasy romance". 5. Others The title of the work is "Pear Two". Readers who have read it will naturally understand that this is the name of the heroine, and may have other connotations. However, as a book title, it is not very attractive for readers to click on it. Of course, the title of the book is very important to a book, and it is left to the author to consider.

A little girl who loves to practice martial arts turns into a monster. In order to save her, her father lets her fake her death. Therefore, the doll and her sword boy have been living in the underground palace. Later, when the dynasty changed, the girl became demonized again due to internal conflicts in the family and was exiled by the court. Then the girl and the sword boy changed their appearance and regained their lives. The girl began to gain social experience, obtain blessings, and began to design political swords and swords. She came to the Northern Wei Dynasty, went to the Tuoba family, and then faked her death again, secretly becoming the Tuoba family's guest. After that, some figures from history began to be introduced, paving the way for the subsequent historical direction of the Southern and Northern Dynasties. Advantages: 1. Localize history Big D should have understood this part of history or worked hard on it. First of all, I would like to praise this spirit. Using the heroine's experience to connect an era and looking at those past characters from a third-party perspective is pretty good. For example, Tan Daoji, Tuoba clan, and even the Xianbei people at that time all had certain localization treatments. At least it doesn't feel like these people are dead. The author has written the flesh and blood among them. 2. The heroine's golden finger is not particularly big. The heroine sometimes falls into despair and has a tragic fate. She is homeless. This is much better than many overly sexual novels on the market. The heroine's golden finger is good at martial arts, but she can't open it randomly. At the same time, she also has problems that her martial arts can't solve. For example, if she was poisoned by miasma, she couldn't solve it. 3. The plot succession is very natural This article breaks away from the routine plot. There is one place that left a deep impression on me: the heroine's father married another bride. The bride was arrogant, and when I thought there was going to be a house fight scene, the author immediately cut the plot to prepare for the subsequent release of the heroine. This is no longer a low-level routine, but a high-energy writing method that is oriented to staged results and supplemented by reasonable plots. In layman's terms, it means writing amazing plots. What is a surprising plot? To sum it up in three words: Unguessable. The author's logic is ahead of the readers, which creates an unpredictable situation!

[The book is good, and it is of high quality among female videos] 1. Character creation: The characterization is well done. The heroine Tiange has a stable and capable personality, and is extremely resourceful. Her many years of experience in the underworld and the memory of her rebirth are great gold fingers. Tiange, who has been exposed to multiple knowledges, has not become an omnipotent Mary Sue, but is reasonably expanding based on her previous life. This is rare. The quality of the several main characters is also remarkable. The villain's IQ is above the line and he is not brainwashed, which is very good. 2. Plot The plot is very smooth, non-toxic and has no obvious surprises. The connections between chapters are natural and coherent, and the interesting points are divided into reasonable parts. The only small problem seems to be that the male protagonist appears relatively late... In fact, I don't think there is a problem. After all, the plot of a female novel does not just revolve around falling in love, especially this kind of novel where the female protagonist has a strong personality, but it seems that female readers will care more about this. The protagonist's hidden clumsiness is not explained very naturally, although it is quite refreshing to watch... You can think more about the emotional actions of the characters when they speak and the content of what they say. The title of the book... This should be my own problem. At first glance, I thought it was an aquatic novel. The protagonist was reborn as a koi or something. After the Spring Festival, I will go to the ophthalmology department... The first chapter is a bit trivial. There may be a better way to introduce the opportunity of rebirth. The article is relatively slow to develop, and the first few chapters are not particularly attractive, but since the author is capable, he does not need to pay special attention to the so-called "three golden chapters". It can be seen that the author used his brains to write this work seriously. Many of the insights in the article are eye-catching. I don't know much about female videos, so I can't find any big problems. The author insists, there is a chance to make a little god in this book. 3. Rhythm of writing The rhythm is well controlled and very comfortable. Just follow the author's feelings and you won't have any big problems. 4. Writing style The writing style is acceptable and the focus is relatively good, but sometimes the narrative can be a bit trivial. Of course, online articles do not have high requirements in this regard... Overall, the book is good and has great potential.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a wonderful article in a new female channel book. If you continue to write at this level, you will definitely get 90 points. The title of the book "Old History of Qingchuan" is just four words very good. It has a historical charm when reading it. The first impression is that the book will be very connotative. For book lovers who like ancient Chinese language and don't like Tai Xiaobai, they will know at a glance that this book has depth. Sure enough, when I read the introduction, I felt that it was very novel and unconventional. If the title and introduction of the book are so attentive to the content, it is worth looking forward to. The two short paragraphs at the beginning bring people into the world of Qingchuan. Combined with the title of the first chapter: Entering the Urn, it gradually becomes clear that the whole story begins when the sixth princess Ruan Xueyin of the Ying Kingdom is married to the Qi Kingdom. This book can actually be said to be a palace romance drama. The story of the male and female protagonists basically begins when Ruan Xueyin married into the Qi Kingdom. As for the three golden chapters, the author has an excellent grasp of it. There are countless foreshadowings buried at the beginning, so that readers have to read along. The characters written by the author are all wonderful. Whether it is Yunxi, the maid, or the male and female protagonists, they are all characters with online IQs, and each character is portrayed with extreme detail. Currently, I like the heroine's carefreeness and the hero's affectionateness the most. After a few chapters, the abuse is done where it should be abused, but no one can detect the traces of intentionality. The overall feeling is that the author has really heard of such a story, and then used her most beautiful writing to tell the story. Advantages: 1. Good writing style. The overall writing is smooth and flowing, making people want to stop reading. 2. The plot of the story is tightly linked, and every detail has a specific meaning, without any superficial words. 3. There is a strong sense of immersion, and it is extremely difficult to escape from the world of Qingchuan. 4. The characters are carefully drawn and their IQs are all online, each with their own personality characteristics. 5. The world as a whole is huge, but there is nothing that cannot be controlled in the environment of the four major kingdoms.

This is a very good work. The author is very careful in laying out and writing a wonderful story. This story is a very rare first-person narrative. Although I was a little uncomfortable with it when I first read it, I gradually accepted the first-person narrative as I continued reading - after all, this kind of narrative is very suitable for exaggerating the atmosphere and cultivating a sense of immersion. The protagonist of the whole story, that is, "I", is a relatively magical existence. Roughly speaking, he seems to have had an unusual teenage period and experienced a lot of darkness. At the same time, there are many things that are different from ordinary people in his thinking - the most intuitive manifestation is that he is often regarded as an alien. And it is such a person who can be said to have been involved in the return of a Cthulhu-themed myth without his knowledge. Not only does he have to survive among many strangers who doubt him, but there are also different partisan disputes and various kinds of unfreedom among the people who regard him as a god. Therefore, in the story, the protagonist reasons about his current situation, completes various tasks as arranged, and weighs the strengths of both parties to make choices. It can be said that this is a story written with great care, and the plot of the main story is also very fascinating. The unraveling of the main plot and the meticulous logic make this story feel like a detective-style work, and the sense of immersion in the plot is also quite strong - this can be intuitively reflected in the fact that after reading it last night, I ran to read two chapters of other novels before going to bed in shock.

Immortal grade works. The protagonist is a geological university student who takes the opportunity to activate the gem system and rises step by step on the road to academics and business. The book is very thin, but it is great in every aspect and is worth fattening up. Compared to academic novels with serious professional attributes, this story is obviously more down-to-earth than stone gambling works with a similar style. It made me wonder whether the author is in the same profession as the protagonist. The protagonist is a senior student. After getting the system, he paid a certain price to activate it. Then he mastered a piece of gem-related knowledge, and then he shined during his first internship, successfully getting rid of the fate of meaningless coolies and entering a substantive position. In fact, this novel is similar to the general novel routine. There are many plots in which the protagonist is looked down upon and then slapped in the face. There are also some distinctive villains required by the plot, and there are also cheats from the system that constantly shock others. But this novel is excellent because of its academic style, which makes the whole work look so down-to-earth and a bit high-end. Compared to the protagonist getting a treasure and breaking through the realm, I still like this kind of story where the protagonist publishes a paper and does some substantive research, especially the history and future content spoiled in the introduction, which makes people look forward to it. The author's writing is fluent, the story has no flaws in details, the plot has appropriate points of excitement and suspense, and some chapters are even missing chapters... It can be said that this is a very mature seedling of a work that is worth looking forward to and nourishing. I believe that after the protagonist has passed the novice stage, the large amount of money and academic achievements brought by the official plot can make the whole story more attractive and charming, revealing the true brilliance of this story.

The background of the entire story is ancient times, and the world is probably a continent with different countries and sects fighting for each other. The Ming Dynasty, where the story mainly takes place, is probably a fictional country based on reality. It has an imperial examination system for students, as well as a transcendent academic institution "Academy", as well as a complete official system and intricate special departments. At the same time, there are many "remnants of the previous dynasty" and people of other races or sects in and around the Ming Dynasty, which has been strong for thousands of years. Some of them are keeping to themselves, some are ready to take action, and some are already taking action. The whole story begins with a conflict and struggle brought about by the astrology that heralds the world's strife, and the protagonist is probably a very important part of it. The protagonist in this story is a time-traveler, but unlike other time-travelers, not only was he unable to light up the skill tree on the technology side in ancient times, he was also unable to do anything and almost lost his legacy. Even when he finally wanted to embark on the path of spiritual practice, he was trapped in his own inability to practice because of his physical constitution and was unable to get started. Fortunately, in the latest plot, the protagonist was enlightened by an expert from outside the world, and finally clarified his inner thoughts, gradually integrated into the world, began to practice, and successfully resolved a crisis.

The female protagonist studies fairy literature and takes a relaxed route. Judging from the spoilers so far from the title to the introduction, the male protagonist still does not appear... But the story is still very good and worth watching. With the background of Xianxia, ​​the plot enters directly at the beginning. The heroine Feng Jitai comes to light up the adventure and embarks on the difficult road of spiritual practice. On the road of spiritual practice, the heroine met many, many people, but these people only accompanied her for a short part of her life. After going round and round, she still had to walk alone... I have to say that I quite like this setting. The heroine probably has a magical golden finger, which is the kind of person who often encounters thighs or encounters unexpectedly easily. However, except for the magic weapons and spiritual stones in her pockets, the thighs basically left after a while, and the magic weapons were all sold and bought with spiritual stones to practice and consume... Maybe there is a feeling of coming back after all the money has been spent? The whole world has a large structure and many settings, but there are no large sections of forced science popularization in the story. The background introduction is completely integrated into the narrative of the story. There are no problems such as typos and language differences in the text. From the author's narration, it seems that he has just started to write common sense online articles, but there are no many detailed problems that ordinary novices have. The reading is very smooth, there are no red flags and poisonous points, and he is very skilled.

Very niche work. However, after many commentators' keen eyes and scans, the average score should be above 80 points. If you know how to run a group, you have come across an excellent book; If you don't understand, please pass by silently.

Traditional martial arts writes a huge world, waiting for the arrival of the knight.

First person, sweet but not greasy, a superb work. This book tells the story of a woman who inexplicably traveled to a different era after walking into an elevator (she was originally supposed to study painting) and became the dragon of a country. However, the heroine did not live in a privileged life, but entered society for experience under the arrangement of the emperor's brother. This leads to the continuation of the struggle for power between the Feng and Su family, from the carefree life of a noble to the common people's home. The contrast is not dramatic, but it is also real and believable. The love affair with the male protagonist has a faint sweetness, and the Feng family's battle of wits and courage with the chickens and dogs ascending to heaven is gentle and chivalrous; choosing the aristocratic student union and studying in the same house of a poor family, there are give-and-take; it is quite rare to have one's own thinking about society and the future. Highlights of this book 1. The writing is excellent, the plot is smooth, flowing, and completed in one go; 2. The descriptions of several mythical beasts and demon kings are particularly brilliant, including the ghostly nine-tailed fox demon Hua Qi, and the dragon vein guardian Gu Qilin Shengyou. Each one is more exciting than the other! 3. Several companions are also very distinctive: Xibei Mingyue, who was born as a businessman, is lively and down-to-earth; Wu Mingxia, who was born as a warrior, is bold and righteous; Tongwenshe's stuttering brother, Pan Feiyu, nicknamed Fat Fish, and several minor villains are also well-portrayed; 4. Dialogue is another highlight of this book. In general, it is: not awkward, not wordy, IQ is online, and the degree of restoration is high; 5. Delicacy may be what the female author is best at, and it is also very prominent in this book. Even a fallen leaf can set off the mood, and the prose skills are evident; 6. The male protagonist is aloof but not pretentious, praise him; he is forbearing yet tender, praise him; he is chivalrous and responsible, praise him; he is innocent but not childish, praise him again! 7. Dare to insist on the first person without writing collapse, which is very difficult in itself. Keep up the good work; 8. Have a strong sense of picture, meticulous description, neither hurry nor slowness, and steady writing power; 9. The sense of innovation is always there. The plot may look familiar, but it doesn't feel routine or cliched. It won't make people deliberately think about the ending, because the process is already exciting; 10. When female authors write male characters, they tend to be weak, weak, and feminine. This work has basically overcome this.

The inheritance and expansion of traditional literature or TV series such as "Chu Liuxiang", "Lu Xiaofeng", "Criminal Investigation Files" and "Invincible Pioneer" are relatively similar, but the crime environment is the contemporary 2000-2018. The first case in this book tells the story of a group of detectives from the Beiting Detective Agency. When they returned home to visit relatives, they encountered a strange serial murder case. The cause of death of the deceased was bizarre. Rumors were that it was related to the "Five Elements of God's Punishment". The whole village was panicked. However, in fact, this incident was related to the boom in antique reselling in recent years. The murderer just used rural superstition extremely cleverly to achieve the purpose of revenge and stealing national treasures. The second case is about a trip to Lijiang, where I accidentally broke into some kind of underground sex trade and came into contact with an extremely hidden darknet system. Just when the Beiting detective was disapproving, bizarre murders happened one after another... Highlights of this book 1. This is the first novel that is truly structured as a team. This is quite different from the CP in some works. A detective team of 7-9 people has no particularly obvious protagonist; 2. It has a strong social atmosphere, spares no effort to restore the real scene, and has a strong sense of picture; 3. The pure traditional literary skills make the whole work appear heavy; 4. Dialectical philosophy is the highlight of this book, and it is fully reflected in the fact that there are no absolute good guys and no absolute bad guys; 5. You really can't guess who the murderer is – it's not a secret; 6. The flower house of the Mosuo people is my favorite scene. Another view of love in the form of walking marriage not only amazes me, but also fascinates me; true love does not lie in form, but in human nature; 7. There is not a word of hydrology in the whole article, the logic is rigorous, the IQ is online, and the design and layout are very clever; 8. The sense of suspense is very strong, almost every chapter has suspense; 9. The rich experience and detailed details give people a sense of immersion, except for a few perverted items; 10. The skill of group painting has been significantly improved, let's keep up the good work.

The writing is excellent and the plot is fluent; it is warm and informative, and it is a good popular science article about the entertainment industry. This book tells the story of a beautiful screenwriter. Although she was very talented, her business failed due to her excessive ambition and the betrayal of her partners. She was reduced from a boss to an employee, and returned to her old business. Having just lost love, she accidentally bumps into a handsome guy on the road while chasing her ex-boyfriend, and the story begins from there. A cute little handsome guy, a pet white cat, a good idea, a good script, and the filming of a low-cost movie. During the period, there are complex corporate interpersonal relationships, a collective poisoning incident on the crew, the director falling in love with a life teacher, a private concert by a world-renowned band, and Lily being photographed by the paparazzi... Aha, no more spoilers, it is worthy of being produced by a screenwriter! Highlights of this book 1. The writing style is no longer a problem, the only thing that is faulty may be the story itself; 2. I was late for work, and Didi actually ordered a taxi... Plane? He has a good mind and dares to think; 3. The visual sense is particularly strong, even an ordinary piece of the crew feels real; 4. The characterization is very distinctive and looks just like real people. It feels common and impressive at the same time; 5. The description of the upper class society is easy to read. I believe that as the plot develops, there may be more and more knowledge. Moreover, if you pay careful attention to the details, you will find that most of them are not fabricated out of thin air; 6. The author's professionalism can be felt in every position and division of labor in the crew; 7. The portrayal of the male protagonist has some flaws, but it does have its highlights. At first I thought it was the domineering president who fell in love with me, but fortunately it was not the case. It was still more or less down-to-earth. A few minor flaws 1. The heroine would actually reach out and touch the forehead of the lewd and lustful landlord? 2. Will you become a nymphomaniac just by looking at a pretty boy? It's a bit outdated, the general environment is suppressing handsome men and sissy; (In fact, another word can also explain the handsomeness of the male protagonist, but it is best not to bring out the sissy) 3. The synopsis of the script: A certain age leads a certain age, and then is abducted by a certain age. Can it really be a good script? Or is it because I am ignorant again; 4. The core love story is indeed quite beautiful at first glance. The concept of Cinderella is also good and quite sweet, but it is a bit cloying if it is too sweet. Many scenes give people goosebumps, especially in the early stage; 5. The male protagonist's performance is puzzling. Although the reasons have been explained later, I personally feel that it is still not very convincing, and it is a bit cliched and not novel enough.

It is a supernatural novel that is not scary even if you read it in the middle of the night. The plot is twists and turns, funny and funny, and the writing is first-rate. This book tells the story of a highly skilled surgeon who resurrected his body after a car accident and inherited the skin of the male owner of a bookstore. The new skin has a beautiful doctor wife who is both beautiful and mysterious, and a sister-in-law who is foul-mouthed and looks down on others. It is conceivable that she was a coward during her lifetime. However, due to an accidental act of kindness, the protagonist is entrusted with acting as a ghost agent, and from then on this bookstore becomes a super crossing that only opens late at night... As the plot unfolds, the protagonist gets to know the boss next door whose gender is unknown and can be called gay. He uses the refrigerator to keep the ancient corpse of a stunning beauty who died unjustly, came back to life, and can walk in the sun. The jokes start from there. Immediately afterwards, the truth was gradually revealed, twisting and turning again. It turned out that the death in the car accident was not an accident. It turned out that the protagonist had "cuckolded" himself. It turned out that the murderer was right in front of you. It turned out... There were too many truths that you could never imagine. Highlights of this book 1. Regardless of commas, periods, or paragraphs, this is a god-like willfulness. The strange thing is that it does not affect the reading experience; 2. The indistinguishability between humans and ghosts is one of the highlights of this book. Every ghost has a bitter human story, and each person has a ghostly relationship. You clearly see him (her) as a human, but suddenly realize that he (she) is a ghost. What a wonderful thing! 3. Mistakes are also a major feature of this book. Making mistakes is not only a helpless choice, but also a source of joy, and a powerful promoter of plot development; 4. He is very skilled in characterization. Although sometimes it is just a few words, he can often immediately outline a very three-dimensional concrete image, as if he is talking about someone you are very familiar with. This is especially obvious when transcending a few lonely ghosts. On the one hand, it is the skill of casting, and on the other hand, it also benefits from daily careful observation; 5. The rhythm is well controlled, and the plot develops smoothly and in one go. Turning the pages quickly (there are only a few words on a page), the feeling of suspense is very enjoyable, and you can't bear to put it down while reading; 6. The customs and customs in the book should have been studied for a long time. Perhaps they are the author's original life scenes, with strong personal emotions, so the pictures are full of meaning and make people instantly immersed in the scene; 7. The dialogue is humorous, the jokes are full of jokes, and the baggage is everywhere. This may be the biggest selling point of this book!

Rebirth system articles, upgrade articles, lighthearted and funny articles. This book tells the story of a senior high school boy from a poor family who was reborn ten years later and brought with him a warrior wealth system, and his life has been messed up ever since. In the martial arts examination (corresponding to the liberal arts examination), the protagonist with no family background signed up and unexpectedly found that he was better than many people. What's even more perverted is that before the college entrance examination, a high-level martial arts fugitive fell into his sight. Under the "unfounded" charge, he was drugged and underhanded. He successfully captured him, harvested millions, and accumulated the first pot of gold... Becoming a warrior is easy, and by the way, I met a noble senior brother. Before the college entrance examination, I reached the realm of quasi-martial artist. I resolutely applied for the prestigious Wudu University in the magical city and headed towards a glorious life... Highlights of this book 1. The writing is smooth, the writing is good, the plot design is reasonable, and the structure of the warrior world is complete; 2. Relaxed and humorous, especially the part about planning to capture fugitives, there are indeed a lot of laughs; 3. It is also a pioneering work to explain Chinese Kung Fu in another way, involving stances, eighteen kinds of weapons, internal practice, etc.; 4. It cleverly borrowed many events of the time, such as earthquakes, doomsday prophecies, etc. I don't know if there will be an Olympic Games, but it fits closely with current events anyway; 5. Reborn in 2008, there seem to be relatively few works from this time period (maybe I don't have enough experience); 6. A sinister male protagonist is a lot of fun. A few flaws 1. The writing of the first two chapters is really confusing. There are not many pages of psychological activities, and they are all pretending to be stupid. As for rebirth, everyone understands it, so it is completely unnecessary to explain so much; 2. The reason why paranoia caused an ordinary high school student to attack a second-level peak warrior is too far-fetched; 3. The plot of being drugged is not uncommon, and sharing the stolen goods with the senior brother is not unsightly, but isn't such a protagonist a bit wretched? Should we consider martial ethics? 4. In order to register to be a martial artist, he lied to his family many times to defraud him of money, and his family was poor. Although it was a vision of rebirth, it was also a high-sounding excuse; 5. Except for the highlights of some individual characters, the writing of several other supporting characters is not exciting; 6. There are some opinions that people really disagree with, but there are probably a lot of people who like scheming male protagonists; 7. Hydrology is probably ubiquitous. Just the introduction of college entrance examination results is several thousand words long. It is nothing for student readers, but it may be a bit boring for old people...

An orthodox holographic online game, with data flow and technology flow, the cheats are not obvious, it is a little slow to warm up, the proportion of virtual reality is moderate, and there are no obvious poisonous points. The title of the novel is quite satisfactory, and the introduction is okay at first, but later on it feels a bit rough and doesn't quite match the style of writing. If you don't mind, you can adjust it a bit. The initial evaluation score is 80 points, which is above average and has high growth potential. If you are interested, you can fatten it up. The background of the novel is a holographic online game, which is an old routine. The public beta begins at the beginning of the story, and the protagonist directly buys a helmet and enters the game. I think the description of the game itself is more appropriate. It not only introduces the basic information of the game through excessive plots such as special animations, but also does not focus on too much science popularization to make people feel tired, nor is it too general to leave a complete impression. The author handles the details in the game very well. Personal panel attribute values, equipment data, skill details and even monster attributes are all introduced in detail. Since I am not a data controller, I did not verify the specific data. If this aspect can withstand scrutiny, it will definitely be a very stable selling point. There isn't much to talk about in terms of professions. Everything is a normal setting. The only thing that can attract attention is probably the skill book, but it's only the beginning now, and most of the content has not been unfolded yet. The sub-career is only part of it, it seems to be a way to make money. The mission setting in the game is unique. The protagonist has accepted a few missions so far, and what he brings is probably just ordinary experience, money and equipment. I hope there will be interesting things like serial missions in the future. As for the players, as of the 100,000-word mark, the protagonist had a feud with a trade union, got acquainted with a group of big guys, and connected with the display by the way. There is a best friend who cooperates tacitly and wants to start his own union, but he has accepted the invitation and has not responded yet. Personally, I prefer the protagonist to hang out with the big guys, but it depends on the author's ideas. Generally speaking, the structure and setting of the entire novel have no flaws, and it leaves enough platform for the future plot development. It is estimated that it can attract a group of readers through the feelings of traditional online game novels. They can read a long distance in one go without feeling bored, and the potential is sufficient.

Daily style, ordinary things, seeing the big from the small, humorous. This book tells the story of a super unpopular little policeman who was transferred to the police station of a demolished urban village because of his inappropriate major (music major). The seemingly undisciplined classmate Han Chaoyang boldly took the mass line and fought the people's war. Through down-to-earth activities such as fishing, joining a band, establishing a WeChat group, sending red envelopes, going on blind dates and other down-to-earth activities, he had a great time mingling with the "Chaoyang masses". In return, the small community police actually led the "security team" to successfully destroy counterfeiting dens and assisted in solving large-scale cases of manufacturing and selling perjury, robberies, homicides, and thefts... Extraordinary things can be done in ordinary positions, not only by golden fingers, but also by the magic touch of turning stone into gold. Highlights of this book 1. The details are described in detail and realistically, everything is described accurately, and the description is very accurate; 2. The full text is very down-to-earth, neither preaching nor condescending, but closely connecting with the masses, forming a united front between young people and adults; 3. The protagonist's character description is in place: he has ideas, personality, execution ability, dares to venture and do things, and has strong adaptability; 4. It can be seen that the author has rich work experience and accurate selection of materials. Several seemingly ordinary police missions: catching snakes, breaking up fights, land and property demolition disputes, immigration census, etc. Are all conflicting hot spots about people's livelihood, as if they happened around him; 5. The seemingly ordinary police career in the book quietly hides wisdom and philosophy, which comes from rich life experiences and is worth spending time to ponder; 6. The writing is full of humor, but this kind of humor is unique and not obvious in the text; 7. Pretending to be slapped in the face is also very covert, and most of them are logical. This is a purely literary way of writing, rather than blindly pursuing the cool points, but the effect is no different, and if it is used properly and the foreshadowing is sufficient, the cool points will be stronger; 8. Several supporting characters are also well written. A few minor flaws 1. There are a large number of NPC characters in the early stage, but their profiles are vague and their faces are unclear, which affects the reading experience to a certain extent. This is more prominent in the first five chapters, but is improved later (maybe you are familiar with it); 2. The heroine appears a little late. Although it can be tolerated without a heroine now, this book has a heroine, and she is quite important; 3. The awareness of the people in Chaoyang has been raised and their functions have been fully realized. It seems to be too fast and too smooth. The special demolition environment may be one of the factors, but the lack of resistance is slightly unbelievable; 4. Reality is a double-edged sword. Experts see the rules, while laymen see the excitement. In fact, most of the people who read novels are laymen, so they will misunderstand "the police station is of low standard", "the intrigue is too powerful", "the protagonist is too dazzling and unrealistic", etc., But ignores the human nature itself - the police are also ordinary people, this point is not fully explained; 5. Although a single police incident is common, the ins and outs of the incident are not sufficiently described.

From the roadside stall review circle. Fantasy + supernatural + Sherlock style detective elements. Well, the main character's name is Sherlock. When the dark wizard took Sherlock's body to sacrifice to the evil god, he pulled the protagonist's soul over, so the protagonist merged into Sherlock's body and became the agent of the evil god. There are only twenty chapters, and I won't introduce the plot. In short, it is a detective-style supernatural novel in a fantasy world. Defects The writing style is still good, but it needs continuous practice. Come to think of it, this kind of novel requires very high writing skills. The style must be stable. I am worried that it will turn into a struggle among gods for hegemony in the later stage. It is recommended to weaken the gods. They are just embellishments of the world's North Pole.