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From the roadside stall review circle. An orthodox holographic online game article with novel setting, interesting plot, clear main line and careful attention to details. Although there are some unsatisfactory aspects, the flaws are not concealed. It is a complete and rigorous novel worth reading. (The important thing is that the author still has the manuscript saved) The opening game is open beta, and you can enter the game directly without any extraneous content, the rhythm is appropriate, and it is full of fun to watch. The game setting is novel and the professions are quite satisfactory, but the character setting is relatively innovative and feels eye-catching. At the same time, there are also many unexpected ideas in terms of specific equipment tasks, such as "+15 epic necklace", "high auspicious number rewards", "hatred lock", monster names and skill names, etc. When reading, you will have the feeling of "Hey, this setting is very interesting", I suggest the author to continue to maintain it. The protagonist has a clear goal. He enters the game as a professional player, has a small group, and can exchange information offline. The setting is relatively complete and self-consistent, and you can look forward to the subsequent development. The golden finger should be regarded as luck, coupled with a little skill, it will bring good skills and equipment tasks, normal routine. The overall focus is on data flow and technology flow. All upgrades, equipment, skills and even monster attributes are supported by clear data. When the protagonist fights the boss, the details will be carefully designed (as the author said), and (should) stand up to scrutiny and appear to be very rigorous. The villain is pretty average, just a small boss in the big guild who fights against others, and with the addition of a white lotus, there is generally nothing outstanding about it. At the same time, I think another advantage of this novel is that the author is very sincere. This sincerity includes but is not limited to having a saved manuscript, being able to reply to this chapter, and commenting in the book review area. He often talks about the thoughts he put into writing, the hard work he put into this book, etc. In the writer's remarks. Personally, I think this will attract the most fans.

How should I put it? After reading the first few chapters of this book, I feel like I want to keep reading. First of all, I think the idea of ​​connecting the male and female protagonists in this book is very good. Of course, this is my personal opinion. In the book, the hero and heroine are connected through a shared kitchen incident. The shared kitchen is really novel. Of course, there are some small logical loopholes, but the flaws cannot be concealed. I won't spoil the specific details, friends who are interested can check it out. Secondly, I think the role of the male protagonist's sister in the book is well set up. The reader is given a doubt at the beginning, why does she want to meet the heroine? Then I will explain the reasons slowly. There is a kind of narrative flashback technique, which is very good and arouses the reader's desire to read more.

This is a systematic novel with an even more outrageous author. The whole text is full of comments and barrages. The author has a steady writing style and a continuous stream of funny jokes. If it can be completed, it will be at least an 80-90% high-quality novel.

A relaxing martial arts work worth watching. First of all, the author of this book is a senior who already has excellent books. Such a senior is very decent in the details of writing, and there are no flaws such as uneven writing and ink. It can be said that there is no problem with the structure of this book, so in the following book review I will start from the deficiencies in the plot and content of the book. Of course, the following book reviews are all my personal thoughts from the perspective of readers. Their level is limited and are for reference only. I hope others will understand. I won't mention the title, introduction, and merits of the book for now. I think such an author doesn't need my exaggerated words to give meaningless praise.

The combination of heroism and military skills in troubled times is indeed the best! 1. Basic perception History, fairy tales, martial arts, military art, and romance novels are five in one. They are integrated and integrated. They have already far surpassed each separate category. The application of knowledge is as pure as the Golden Liang. This book tells the story of a generation of famous general Zuo Beihou who was brutally wiped out and left behind a posthumous son. His beloved general and his son risked their lives to cross the Changjiang River and survived. A few years later, he traveled to the snow-capped mountains to visit elves, opened his eyes to wisdom, bravely braved Xiaogushan to save his brother, memorized 100,000 Taoist classics, shook the hidden ice ruler in the mountain, revitalized the Cangbei army, attacked Dulang City at night, competed with swords in Meizhou City, the heroine was born, and practiced medicine to save the people... The scenes were magnificent and heart-stirring. 2. Highlights of this book 1. For the first time, I feel disgusted with long paragraphs of text that are not divided into paragraphs. I feel that if I don't write like this, it is not enough to describe the vivid panorama. It turns out that it is not that too many words are not suitable for online articles, but that people who are incompetent should not write too much text, which will only leave a laughing stock. The correct way is to speak meaningfully; 2. The writing flows smoothly and is completed in one go. This has reached the master level. The environment, scenes and characters are lifelike and appear on the paper without any abruptness; 3. Poems and allusions can be picked up at your fingertips, and you probably don't need to look up too much information, let alone Du Niang's help; 4. The characters have distinctive characteristics, whether it is Zhou Qing and Xun Zhou in their childhood, Zhou Yan who regains his glory, the scheming Xianwen of the state government, the chronically ill Xuan Li, the Taoist Chen who sweeps the floor all day long, the dead tree springs up Long Yanyi, the old god who predicts the future, the unknown unknown heroine who is shocking... All of them are impressive; 5. The explanation of Taoist theory is very profound. This is a comprehensive expression. Without skills and experience, it is difficult to understand so deeply; 6. The Wise Eyes have far-reaching meanings. I am very much looking forward to breaking through the first one as soon as possible. What will the fourth Wise Eyes look like? Break into a cold sweat. 5. Overall evaluation Score: [91] (I leave the peak of online literature to 95 and above, and the peak of traditional literature to 90 and above, which may be a bit too precious) Suitable for: (senior) Lao Bai, physical publishing, adaptation of Xianxia TV series It turns out that Qidian also has such works, and I am still worried about whether I can sign the contract, but fortunately, these top works have gradually joined the ranks of online articles; online articles are indeed inclusive, and Big D has broadened the writing form of traditional writers. I hope to boldly write about immortals and heroic heroes. Who said that "xiaxia" is dead? I hope there will be more and more articles like this and the road will become wider!