The Granary of the Worm Cubs

A friend recommended a well-written fanfic

The full text focuses on one dispute, from the dispute between the master-disciple line and the family line within the sect to the dispute between Taoism and Xuanmen outside the sect. The protagonist who traveled from the apocalypse has a first-class character. With his means and brains, he is decisive in killing and brave and diligent. But with his sword, he can cut through thousands of miles of clouds, cut through thorns and thorns, and swim upstream. The image of a convincing strong man is vividly and convincingly portrayed! The setting of the whole book is grand, and the lines are full of ancient style. The more you write, the more exciting it becomes. It shows the plot and calculation of the immortal style in a very charming way.

I've never been too fond of two-dimensional fan fiction. After all, there's a dimension difference from the second dimension to the third dimension... Not to mention the exaggerated + blood-splitting style of "One Piece", Luffy is even better than his predecessor, a "little strong" who is 1000 times stronger than Seiya. I always feel that if it becomes a novel, Goldfinger is too thick and boring. But the author actually used my favorite "reasonable party tone" and "rational writing style" to write this article, borrowing the background of the big world of One Piece, not hanging on the protagonist, but relying on his own brains and diligence to open up his own era. So far so exciting! Even if you have not read the original text, it will not affect your reading, because the author did not rely on the original main line, and the protagonist is a CEO who has not watched a few episodes of One Piece. The Goldfinger "system" is used very carefully, thus allowing the plot to flow smoothly.

Jidao Tianmo continues to walk on the path of horror and fairy tales, but it is an improvement over the previous book, and the setting is much improved. The biggest improvement is that the story is more condensed. From the first book, Get Out has not lacked imagination and the ability to describe and depict characters, but his old problem is that the story is too loose. Viewed individually, the characters are all distinctive and well-described, but the plot is thin and the complex interactions of the characters cannot be reflected. I ran out of words while writing, so I had to change the map. I ran out of words frequently, so I changed the map frequently. This is a manifestation of the inability of pen power to control inspiration. The writing power of this book has improved. It has not changed the map after hundreds of chapters. The plot is cohesive and powerful, and it no longer relies solely on selling inspiration to attract readers. Coupled with the unique thriller atmosphere, it is indeed unique among online novels and can truly support a genre. This book is the pinnacle of Gokai, a breakthrough after many years of continuous honing of writing skills.

It is a remarkable fantasy novel about Taneda. The protagonist is suspected to be fused with the smoke dragon of death, and has the ability to partially interfere with destiny - manifested in constantly getting tasks, completing them, and receiving rewards. All rewards come from things that already exist or may exist around the protagonist in the story, cleverly avoiding the danger of excessive cheating that would drastically increase the story's combat power until it collapses. Overall, it's a good read, and readers who like fantasy shouldn't miss it. I only review books here, not other things.

It's a high-definition unit drama that needs to be watched with some brains. The skeleton of this book is the outline of the main story, while the flesh and blood of the book is made up of small stories. In each chapter dominated by the main supporting characters (blood owl, consultant, gunsmith, snake gambler, etc.), An almost independent story is told. Under the looming connection of the protagonist, various supporting characters present complex relationships that are not uniform but interrelated. In the author's writing, each independent chapter is like a silhouette of a different character, introducing many "ability users" with different personalities and backgrounds in different styles and angles. At the same time, these chapters with different styles are not separated from the main line. They are cleverly combined by the protagonist's "Reverse Cross" plan. The labyrinth of the mind in the Sin from the Heart scroll, the numerous conspiracies in the Water City Blood Shadow scroll, the mysterious adventure in the cannibal rainforest scroll, the layers of foreshadowing in the Conspirator scroll, and the normal style of the Snake Gambling scroll all demonstrate the author's ability to control various writing styles.

It is a true-mortal cultivation novel based on the underlying cultivation sect. The author cleverly combines cultivation and farming. With good writing style, it is still very readable. In addition, in order to pursue reasonableness, the protagonist's sect is a little bit abusive in the process from weak to strong, and countless supporting characters are convenient, but it is just like this that when the protagonist becomes stronger and tramples on the opponent, it makes people more comfortable to watch. The overall feeling is that Wenjing and Wenjing are two extremes. Wenjing is gorgeous and has a spiritual writing style, while Zhangmenlu is simple and writes people and emotions. In terms of the setting of the world, Wenjing is vertical with depth and height, while Zhangmenlu is horizontal with width and breadth. Some people say that it would be nice if the ending was that the protagonist failed to attack the golden elixir, and finally recalled his life of struggling to maintain the ailing sect with his fellow sect members. This is the true ending for people as small as you and me in the world of cultivation, but this is too cruel.

The second classic anti-wuxia, or social novel in the skin of martial arts that I have read. The first one is "The Young Man" by Wen Ruian. This is not to be compared with Wen Ruian. Regardless of anything else, this book is indeed better than "The Young Man" in terms of mental journey, turning points in writing, rationality of layout, etc., And its social significance is even greater. This book is more like a social novel. Doesn't Wang Tianyi's changes and experiences reflect the silent majority like you and me? The whole book is about a young man who is full of justice and ideals. After receiving an education within the system and entering the society, after experiencing the conflict and subversion of his inner values, and experiencing the disillusionment of his ideals by reality, he gradually became indifferent, utilitarian, and even ruthless. Even after he became successful and famous, he could not hide the hungry roar of the tiger in his heart. Prime Minister Bai knows how to press the sword, not to hurt anyone, but because the social reality of traps makes us have to press the sword to be on guard at all times.

The soul travels to the world of extraordinary abilities and steampunk. By tracing the suicides of the original teachers and students, he learns that extraordinary forces are behind the scenes. He enters an extraordinary space through the alchemy ceremony of Qin and Han Dynasties, uses the characteristics of the space to disguise himself as the behind-the-scenes BOSS The Fool, and successfully forms a secret Masonic organization. At the same time, he comes into contact with the real extraordinary special police and joins the ZF organization. After meritorious service, he becomes an extraordinary diviner... From then on, the protagonist understands and collects extraordinary information through the space platform, and gradually becomes the "mastermind" who controls the world. At the same time, he acts as a lawful person in the front desk, hunting down extraordinary criminals, and cutting off the tentacles of the evil god's invasion... I really like the brother-sister relationship and companionship of the protagonist. In this world of industrial revolution class oppression and Cthulhu evil god religious invasion, people can feel the hope of humanity in the cold and violent world, and feel the glory of civilization in the darkness and chaos. With a thick and huge world view setting, a novel and progressive power system, a down-to-earth storytelling style and the same outline guarantee as always, the squid is back.

A rare high-quality system-streamed One Piece novel with online IQs of the main and supporting characters and a smooth plot. I think the biggest advantage of this novel is that the introduction of the power of system plug-ins does not make people feel blunt. It is well integrated with the original power system of One Piece. The power system has not collapsed even after more than 400 chapters. The protagonist obtains his own original capital by rescuing the Celestial Dragon slaves, and then lets Fujitora Yixiao become the deputy captain, and he also becomes the Shichibukai. It can be said that it was still very exciting before Luffy went to sea. However, this book also encounters a common problem with fan fiction, that is, when the comic text begins, I don't know how to write it. I want to leave the comic protagonist and go my own way, but I am worried that this will not attract the original fans. Choosing to follow the protagonist of the original work will lead to a weak plot. Because you are very powerful and then joining the plot of the original protagonist, it will often make people feel that adults are bullying children. It can be said that the original plot placed constraints on the author's writing, making the author neither dare nor want to deviate from the original plot. Of course, this article can be rated as food and grass based on the stability of its power system.

Realistic Pirates, although it has the shortcoming of being too detailed, the flaws are not outweighed by the fact that the protagonist is ruthless and good at scheming, and has a very lovable personality.

A swordsman can use the power of thunder and lightning to stimulate his muscles like a thunder shadow. He can forge two vampire swords in the early and mid-term, and in the mid-term, he can obtain the power of flesh and blood to transform his physical fitness. Haki, kendo ring, and then kill along the way, kill red hair, destroy drow, kill Blackbeard, break the Straw Hat Pirates, kill Big Mom, kill Kaido, kill the Five Old Stars, and Francis as a partner, without establishing a pirate group, there is a rabbit partner with a partial healing fruit, the possible lover is a female of the Celestial Dragons, the sun fruit, the writing is relatively smooth, the battle plot is quite well described, dark, domineering, a little bit white There are just some small details that give you a golden thumb, which you can take a look at when you are short of books.

This book has basically nothing to do with Naruto: Naruto, and it has nothing to do with Naruto: Boruto. If you are a Naruto fan, you will basically not be able to watch it. It is a bit similar to the one from One Piece. It uses the names of background characters and a little bit of the plot. Many other things are original. However, these are not the point. The point is that the personality portrayed by the pig's feet is really a bit disgusting. Personally, I prefer the pairing of Uzumaki Kushina and Pig Knot Minato, and the red-haired girl. The whole book is written from a God's perspective, which is a huge failure.

The protagonist is a ninja from the same period as Kakashi. As a civilian ninja, he showed his talents and first attracted the attention of Orochimaru. As a trade, he became Tsunade's disciple to learn medical ninjutsu. After Orochimaru defected, he teamed up with a jounin of the Uchiha family to force Orochimaru to agree to the protagonist's signature on the psychic scroll, thus obtaining the Sage mode. But at the same time, the deal with Orochimaru was exposed, and he fell out with Tsunade. After that, he studied cloning and first-generation cells, plundered the Sharingan and Byakugan, created a copycat tailed beast, cloned a clone for himself, rescued the fourth generation couple, and raised Naruto. This book shows all the sadness and fear on the road from being a little person to becoming Hokage. Of course, there are also shortcomings, which are common problems among Hokage fans. His strength reaches its peak too quickly, as if he was weak before going to bed and becomes invincible when he wakes up.

At the beginning of this article, in order to match the personality of the previous characters, Pig's Knuckle was a bit deliberately acting in his speech and behavior. So you can skip the first few chapters first. But then, after Pig's Knuckle began various studies on chakra, shadow clones, copycat jinchūriki, sage mode, natural energy, etc., It can be said to be the food and fodder of the setting party. This article does not invent anything new or introduce anything that is not ninjutsu. The new ninjutsu of Pig Knuckle is also an innovative application of the original ninjutsu in the original work, and it is well-founded and makes people think that it should be like this! It can be said that it has made up for the loopholes in Naruto's power system.

The male protagonist has no CP, but he has a golden finger, but overall it is not big. The portrayal of the male protagonist in this article is pretty good. He is diligent and hard-working, and the strength accumulated bit by bit is at least traceable and convincing. It was originally a very good book among recent pirate fandoms, and I was really looking forward to it, but it turned out to be a pity that it became disabled. The plot in the early stage was very good, the characters were affectionate and not too OOC, but it was a pity that the writing fell apart in the later stage.

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