Naruto the Savior

To be honest, everyone thinks of themselves as Naruto when they watch Naruto. I hope the author will write a fanfic of Naruto. Thank you.

This is an interesting start, and it is much better than the current flow of articles that follow the crowd! I just started reading it and got to Chapter 6. Let me comment on it.

It's a very good Naruto fanfic. I had a blast reading it in one go. The author also updates 666 every day. Come on!

As an aside, the recent rewards and subscriptions for the iOS system have been taken away by 30% by the powerful Apple, which greatly reduces the actual income of the author. After deducting the share, the author can get about 30% of the consumption of the iOS system, and it will be detained by Apple for three months before distributing. Therefore, if possible, try to avoid the recharge and consumption of the iOS system. Readers will spend less, and the author can get more pocket money. To be honest, for a novice like me, the difference between subscribing and tipping on iOS is the difference between eating noodles with or without eggs every day, but it has a huge impact on real Huoshu. Moreover, you may not know that this kind of commission is targeted at Chinese users and not others. In other words, Chinese Apple users are being discriminated against unknowingly. I'm too lazy to comment on whether Apple's terms are reasonable or not. Anyway, I hope it's convenient for everyone to pay attention to avoid being charged for nothing.

If you become the protagonist as soon as you time travel, or have extraordinary abilities, then what else can you see? I think the original Naruto also relied on blood, bonds and hard work to attract people. To be honest: this is the best Naruto fanfic I have ever read.

I suggest that this book be renamed "Naruto: The Scientist"! Stop calling Naruto the saviorὡ4

I think generally the author really over-interprets

Not to over-interpret the plot, even if you are hit, you have to explain why this move did something to you, and then you won't do anything to yourself, and then the second move comes again. Also, the protagonist's ninjutsu is not well written. Since the protagonist has done some weird ninjutsu, then don't make a half-finished product that talks about what happened and what will happen. It doesn't matter if there is no signature ninjutsu. The writing is very complicated. The most important thing is that it is a copycat version of jinchū. The power is just a clone, which has no effect. There is also a jinchuriki that has a tailed beast sealed in its body, and the little one-tailed clones obtained by the protagonist are not sealed into the clone's body. Where did the copycat version of the jinchuriki come from, and the samsara eye was created, which is a bit incomprehensible.

This should be the most in-depth Naruto fanfic. Other Naruto fanfics are too novice and have no depth. They either regard Rasengan as an author like Feng Dun, or they keep following the plot, which is basically the same except for the multiple personal plots. Or they are too violent and have the strength to kill indiscriminately, or they become the Holy Mother who is willing to be tortured like a dog, or they lead a system but are a slave to the system. It is easy to get things, but if the system is removed, it will become useless and useless. There are also shortcomings. The character Mizuki is too unrecognizable, and it is also relatively ugly, so it is easy to abandon it at the beginning. There is too much text explaining the setting theory and needs to be streamlined.

The Dance of the Three Suns and Moons can actually only cut once. Those three are clones, not shadow clones. The main body waits for the opportunity to make a cut. The advanced version has three shadow clones, and then use the Dance of Three... To cut three times.