Return to the Small Mountain Village in 1986

The comment section is so lively. Although I haven't read it, I don't care about Sister Li's description of the little son in the author's introduction. First of all, people can't be born bad, right? If you don't have a good education or no education, how do you know that he is born a bad person? You've been reborn, wouldn't it be enough to educate your little son on the right path this time? It's hard to read novels with some brainpower these days.

I've read almost 400 chapters, and there's something wrong with the character setting. The first thing I talked about is rebirth to make up for the regrets of the previous life. Take good care of your family, that's okay. At first I thought it was a pastoral novel written around a mountain village. Just have wealth and freedom, take care of your family, and enjoy life! In the end, you were reborn and went to smuggle. You are trash whether you are reborn or not. If you look carefully, you will find that the entire book is about legitimate businesses and basically does not mention the amount of money earned. Every time I go out, I either rob or take advantage of something wrong. Since I can't write at a commercial level. Don't write down a business plan in such detail that you end up confused. It seems that every few days, they are either running for smuggling, returning home to harvest honey, or going to the fields. This can be a normal life. One year I lived in a big mansion in Hong Kong, and the next I went back to the countryside to pull weeds. Also, the supporting characters in this book are written in great detail! Look closely at the time the protagonist and heroine spend together. Are the interests and hobbies of both parties and family conflicts just like this? No matter how you look at it, it looks like crap.

After reading the introduction of the novel, the protagonist said that he made enough money in his previous life, and he will be rich in this life. But the author is working hard on typing, working hard for more than half a year just for a few taels of silver, and imagining that he is the protagonist. He has made enough money and is impatient with money. This is a strong fantasy-type chuunibang pretense.

Rebirth is all about making up for regrets. If it is not for promotion and wealth, as long as you can get your hands on it, you want most of it. Instead, you want to be salty, and you are worse than the future generations. That would become a joke. After all, if you have the memories of later generations, you should know how cruel the life of later generations is.

I have been a bookworm for almost 20 years. In the past two years, I have become obsessed with period farming articles. It may have something to do with getting older. The time in the countryside that I once longed to escape has now become my own white moonlight. It seems that I have adapted to the bustle and convenience of the city long ago, but every time I return to the countryside for a short stay, I can always feel the inner peace and satisfaction. After reading the book as a whole, the flaws do not hide the flaws. After all, it is a female author. The writing is delicate and the ambushes before and after are quite good. Wouldn't it be better if there were no so-called martial arts secrets in the early stage? After all, this foreshadowing will not be used much later. Looking forward to the author's fairy novels, hoping to write new ideas

The character of the protagonist is too fragmented. All the bad things that parents at the same time did to their children were placed on the protagonist. There is nothing touching about these parents. How did you make the protagonist so moved that he kneels down and licks his parents like this?

I'm really annoyed by the kind of person who always writes repeatedly about how I was when I was alive and then what I was like when I was alive.

When writing a book, there must be more plot, rather than narrative and anecdotes. In addition, if you want to write about business, you can't let go of random writing, because the richest people are all reckless and have a background. I don't know how many times they have died. Also, don't have a single female protagonist, or a monk, because he is not a man and has no humanity. You don't have to write about hunting all the time. You're not a wilderness survival diary. It's so unrealistic. It's boring to write more. You have to return to society in the end. Human feelings are warm and cold. Otherwise, you would write about a monk becoming a monk and seeing through the world of mortals.

It's really ink, a man still has the experience of being reborn, and dealing with family matters is really like a bitch.

This novel is about having regrets in the previous life. After being reborn, I felt aggrieved. I didn't say anything, so I just endured it. The aggrieved article