Do Not Die

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, all kinds of bloody plots, is this called Gou? Does your content have anything to do with your name profile?

Generally speaking, this is my favorite type. I deducted one star because the protagonist wants to break off the relationship with anyone without leaving any trace, but she insists on writing a female protagonist! The heroine also has a female apprentice. I think people who like to read this type of novel will not mind if you write one without a heroine, right?

The pace is too slow. To be honest, it's a bit confusing. I've read more than 30 chapters, which are all kinds of training and exercises. What you practiced today, how much progress you will make tomorrow, how much the exercises on the panel have changed. Come here today to introduce the local area, go there tomorrow, introduce the rules, stay in a shop and introduce the streets, go to a training room and talk about a bunch of unimportant customs, and then practice and study again. I basically didn't see the plot of the exercises... Maybe those who like farming stories will like it, but old bookworms prefer to read stories with plots. In fact, the cultivation process is really not that important. The plot is interesting, and the protagonist is willing to read it after he levels up after sleeping. Such an important golden chapter, writing a lot of cultivation processes, readers will not be able to learn, it is monotonous and boring, and the focus is wrong. It is better to pay more attention to the plot.

This is the first time I see that the Breath Condensation Technique can actually improve one's cultivation level. Other novels hide one's cultivation level downward! Six six six

The author's new book: Start with an Eyeful of Red Names.

Good book, but the ending is a bit rushed

The overall article is very good, and the exploration of spiritual practice is refreshing. It is a rare type of spiritual novel, but it ends too suddenly!

The dialogue is too rigid, and many characters with different designs all sound the same.

Is there anything interesting about traveling through time to a person in his forties?

In my personal opinion, there is no poisonous point, the writing style is delicate, and the plot is smooth. There is actually not much difference in the title and content. It's just a matter of fact. Everyone is different. Just like assassination, some people say that as long as all witnesses are killed, it is assassination.