Books I Am Following and Books I Have Abandoned

在跟的书和已经弃的书

1928(23 linked)6y ago

A book list to record why you abandoned the book so that you don't look back and forget to read the same book again. Lots of spoilers, so proceed with caution. Appreciation is a very subjective thing. Recommendations are only based on my taste. If you have the same taste, just read the book in silence. If you have different taste, I don't want to talk to you. All discarded books will be noted at the beginning, and others will be recommended. Qidian article classification: Not readable - Readable - Ordinary (most of them have some creativity, some are popular) - Masterpiece (I am using Fenghuo's book as a reference here). When I read books, I focus first on logic and human psychology. If there is a setting, there must be logic, and people have psychological activities. These two points cannot be flawed in the plot. Secondly, I suggest you not to question the setting of the book while reading. When writing, setting is a natural law, something fixed and can never be violated. The design of characters and objects are all decided by the author. If you can't accept the setting, it only means that it doesn't suit your taste or the sense of substitution is too strong. It doesn't mean that the book is poor.

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Initial Evolution1

Make A Comeback

8.0M8.1320

The group number is 948681859 (fans are required to be stewards) The most unexpected and strange fate, The most intense brain clash, The most brutal life and death battle, The wildest bizarre fantasies, The most bizarre truth... The end has arrived, let's fight for another ten years!

Curator

The writing on the wall is endless. Isn't this news worthy of a feast?

Start with an Archangel2

Due North

3.3M8.4290

Wang Daliang is a senior who is about to graduate. His biggest hobby is playing various games. But when he was about to leave campus, on a hot summer night when he was woken up by mosquito bites, he suddenly discovered a big secret about his roommate. He was actually reborn... Highlights: Invincible Hero Elements Cool point: The European Emperor beats the reborn Q group: 241020886

Curator

Abandon books. It was actually okay in the early stage, but when the hell lord king escaped, the aura of mental retardation was turned on too much, which made me suspect that these five hell lord kings were all mentally retarded puppets made by Yunzhong City. Of course, if he was really written as a puppet, the plot would at least come full circle. But there is no chance of running away when the halo is turned on here. So it was right to abandon it.

Online Game Power Leveling Legend3

Big Ashtray

3.4M8.970

Dali is a low-level power-trainer with mediocre abilities and limited knowledge. He traveled to the early stage of the game five years ago and just wanted to do better than in his previous life. He made frequent mistakes while trying to copy the strategy, and he encountered unexpected encounters under various circumstances and was full of jokes. In this book, time travelers compete for hegemony, women compete for hegemony, rich and handsome men compete for hegemony, dudes compete for hegemony, professional top players compete for hegemony, middle school students compete for hegemony, and hanging silks compete for hegemony. And Dali, who is crowned God's Hand, Savior, Dragon Knight, Grand Lord, Prince, and holds various titles, said: low-key development will never lead to hegemony! Dali is a loser, but no matter how awesome people are, they are all working for him. Dali owes a huge debt, but the whole world is paying for him. This is the arduous struggle history of a kind-hearted and philistine little man with no special talents. This is a "being" power leveling legend where a real pig eats a real tiger. This book has been praised as a masterpiece by book lovers. Please do not read it using normal reading methods. The new book "Global Mining" in 2024 has been released. Book friends are kindly requested to collect and pay attention.

Curator

Abandon books. 1. Online games are not like online games, and fantasy is not like fantasy; 2. This is the first time I have seen a writing method in which the protagonist becomes worse and worse as he lives, and has to be forced to continue his life. This is definitely a flaw; 3. The book review area is messed up by idiot fans' excuses; 4. Some books make it easy to see the author's outlook on life and values. I don't agree with the author, so I can't read them. 5. Anti-negative. I can clearly feel the negative emotions vented in the book.

Perfect Life5

Perfect Life

Modern Romance

Monk With A Flower

19K0

He is just an ordinary student, living in confusion, with only games accompanying him every day. After an adventure, he traveled to the perfect world continent, became a real character in that world, became a myth step by step, and returned to modern life.

Curator

A book worth ordering. Compared with other rebirth articles, it is written more like that. Book reviews are not recommended. Just read a book.

Tian Xing Zhan Ji6

Part Seventy-two

1.9M8.42,744

On the journey of heaven, strive for the upper reaches. Xia Bei stood in front of the sculpture in the Hall of Heroes and looked at a line of words on the base. "Our journey never stops!"

Curator3

Push it. Otherwise, what should I do? I still have to point my finger at Fatty for more updates. Recommend it more. If more people watch it, they might be tempted. Don't write it down again as 678 years. I'm afraid that as you write and write, I will lose interest, just like a ruling. This is a story about a group of competitors working hard to improve. After the people on Earth left the Milky Way, they were finally eligible to join the Interstellar Alliance. The alliance gave the weak natives a way to survive from being exterminated: all alliance members could rely on Tianxing Competition to obtain resource allocation and enhance their interstellar status. Tianxing is a virtual world that includes pvp and pve. Tianxing Competition is forcibly promoted and maintained by the highest race in the interstellar world as the only way to resolve conflicts within the alliance. The background setting looks silly, don't mind it because it's very realistic. I have seen honor and deception, dedication and humiliation, class and life. The viewing angle is not small and the concept is good. I believe you can write well. You could write well 10 years ago. There is no reason why you should regress now.

Emperor Xi of the Three Kingdoms7

Mingwu

1.7M8.91,924

I am Yuan Xi, the second son of Yuan Shao. Awakening to hold the power of the world, lying drunk on the knees of a beautiful woman, a hero has no regrets, a hero has no tears. In troubled times, only war can win dignity, only cold blood can win victory. There can only be one voice in this world. "Guan Yu, surrender or not?" "Someone will not surrender" "Okay, I will be beheaded at noon tomorrow. I don't have the patience of Cao Cao." Yuan Xi left the cell under the surprised, admirable, and fearful eyes of all the ministers.

Curator1

Abandon books. What a great start, wasted. 😂I write articles without thinking, but I can't read books without thinking. Previous comments: Let him in first. I won't rate it yet because I've only read two chapters. I like this perspective very much. There were many heroes and talents in the Three Kingdoms era. I feel very sorry for the death of many people, like Dong Zhuo and Sun Ce. This is also why I like "The Bad Guy". It is actually easy to write about the Three Kingdoms based on the premise of the Three Kingdoms, because the historical materials are detailed. Even if there are no historical materials, there are still legendary stories, right? It is easy to find things for reference. But other people writing about the late Eastern Han Dynasty are different. Their positions, personalities, and ways of doing things will all show differences from the Big Three during the struggle for hegemony. Very fresh and very insightful. For the above reasons, I added a bookshelf to it. So why did I add a book list? Because I think this first chapter is really well written. Yuan Xi woke up from bed and stared in confusion when he saw a group of costume drama actors surrounding him. He must have said that he was from the Three Kingdoms. I was so frightened that I hurriedly pushed aside people and ran out of the house. I approached the gate, heard the old noise, opened the gate, and the street view suddenly unfolded. I was stunned for a long time in the crowd, and then I came back to my senses and said, "Damn it, I really traveled to the Three Kingdoms." What did I feel after reading it: "It's so smooth. This author has been on the set, right? This first chapter alone can be the first episode of a series!" Great, great!

Those Things from Another World9

Lonely Fossil

4.5M0135

"Science is the primary productive force, and magic is the primary driving force. When science and magic are intertwined... With a 'bang' sound, I will come over to save the world." "Iron Man? Wrong! That's magic power armor!" "Sniper rifle? Wrong! That's a magic electromagnetic gun!" "Internet? Wrong! That's the Artificial Intelligence Magic Network!" "RPG?... Well, it's really just an RPG." "Girls, please respect me and don't always touch me!" "Do you think brother Tang En is too innocent?" Brian, who has become a veteran driver, looked solemn: "I can only say, believe me, he is the one who really knows how to play..." PS: Book club group: 10486634, welcome to fill in the comments. VIP group: 366904, only for fully subscribed fans.

Curator

Abandon books. No, it's a bit annoying.

The Rise of the Main God10

Wen Chao Gong

2.6M8.7666

Wake up and travel through time to become a villain? This script is wrong! And robbed someone else's girl? Another strong sister? The script is even more wrong! There is actually a main god space, all heavens and all realms? I must be dreaming! Wu Ming continued his journey with a calm expression on his face.

Curator

Ordinary. I gave up once when there were only 170 chapters left, but then I thought it was enough, so I just finished reading it. The normal sales level of Qidian is similar to that of a cultivation chat group, with the nature of pretentious and cool articles. Compared with cultivation, the virus is much less contagious. Of course, there are readers who correct their mistakes, but relatively speaking, it does not live up to the name of the author. Just by looking at the title of the book, you can tell that it is an unlimited stream. It spans several universes, and finally turns into a fantasy. The short stories of Infinite Stream are indeed suitable for text copying. He is very handy and can play many themes, and most of them are original worlds. But this is also a shortcoming. I have always felt that so many descriptions of the world are a bit confusing to the plot, and readers who feel procrastinated may not have the patience to read on. There are also frequent departures from the main plot, which is a matter of opinion. The character portrayal of the protagonist is also very dull, following the tradition of the upgrade stream, either forgetting love or not forgetting love. These are two reasons why I don't think it's that great. Overall, it didn't meet my expectations.

Chongzhen Chat Group11

Call The Sky

3.4M7.880

[New History Era Essay Competition Shortlisted Works] Emperor Chongzhen was deceived into hanging himself, but in this book, although the emperor was deep in the palace, he had a group chatting with outsiders. Could he still be deceived? Oops, no, the emperor still traveled through time. This is too big a hook, and the earth is shaking! It's over, Ming Dynasty was not careful and the sun never set! The new book "Extraordinary Ming Dynasty" has been released. Please support me, thank you!

Curator1

Abandoned. . . Repost it. After I gave up, the author came over and paid attention. I was so angry that I had no choice but to push. I was still reading the book, and after writing the reasons for abandoning the book, I went to update it. Has it been discovered? Reasons I wrote before for abandoning the book: Abandon books. If a person has a good temper, his requirements will be high. This was a willful abandonment of the book. The main reason why I kept it on the bookshelf at first was that I hadn't read much about the late Ming Dynasty and wanted to know more about it. Abandoning the book was a battle of emotions, but it was not unjust. The paragraph I originally abandoned was poorly written. I have had my adopted son-in-law for a year, and I happened to be watching. I saw a bad routine here, thought it was poorly written, and was disgusted by other readers of the book. I was also watching "Brainwashing" "Cha Classmate Boy", and I was deeply moved when I saw the conflict between Mao and the Chinese teacher in the First Normal School. Arrogance is such a bad thing. Let's talk about the key to abandoning books: One generation stands for another. Modern people tell me that the late Ming Dynasty was full of cynics and rotten scholars. Readers of history call those who were involved stupid, latecomers call the pioneers stupid, and those who have followed the past call the experts stupid, all of which are reflected in some current readers. I remembered that there was a joke on the Internet about a group of Ph. D. S falling freely from a drop of water. Reposting it can reflect your IQ. I thought that after spending two days on the forum to learn a little bit about war history, I had a thorough understanding of people's hearts. Even today's generation can't understand why they should act like a brainless angry young man all day long and still comment on history? The Ming Dynasty was ideologically backward, but in terms of integrity and the firm belief in serving the country, most of the students educated now are not worthy of comparison with the ancient Confucian scholars. Just read a book and don't bring in those sx comments all day long. Also, the Chinese are all housing slaves (can you afford a 3rd ring with low housing prices?), The Communist Party (if you don't accept your efforts to bring order to chaos!), All of China is full of corrupt officials (how many officials have you had contact with? Can you memorize the Party Declaration?), Freedom (the US green card is really easier to get than China, you can just immigrate to Australia if you are a technician! You don't know, right?), Communism is a scam (you are smarter than Marx, the greatest thinker of the next century will be you). The half-full bottle of water was swaying around, and it was jumping very much, which made me feel upset.

Son-in-law12

Son-in-law

History

Angry Banana

6.2M8.55,912

At the end of the Wu Dynasty, the years were turbulent, the world was in chaos, Jin and Liao were fighting each other, the situation was turbulent, and a century of humiliation finally saw the first light of the end. Emperor Tianzuo, Wanyan Aguda, Wu Qimai, Genghis Khan Temujin, Jamuka, Chi Laowen, Muhuali, Borhu, Borshu, Qin Hui, Yue Fei, Li Gang, Zhong Shidao, Tang Ke, Wu Min, Geng Nanzhong, Zhang Bangchang, the contest between loyal ministers and treacherous ministers, the game between heroes and tyrants, the barbarians marching south, millions of cavalry knocking on Yanmen, the fall of the country, the loss of life, the centuries of humiliation and struggle of a country and nation, the cries, shouts and sorrow of the forerunners... A little before that, there was an undercurrent surging in Jiangning city. An inconspicuous son-in-law from a merchant family was living a leisurely life with no sense of responsibility, just eating and watching performances... ... Guo Qilin and Song Yi star in the original work of the popular film and television series of the same name.

Curator2

No need to say more.

Xiling Empire13

Xiling Empire

Science Fiction

Far Pupil

8.0M9.0865

It's not about an empire fighting for hegemony, it's not about another world, it's not about leveling up and practicing. In fact, this is a very serious and serious sci-fi salvation story – just listen to it seriously. Well, in fact, this is just a happy and unrestrained daily life of a group of leaders and a cheating head of state. The pseudo-house who was just waiting to die turned into the head of the empire, and the uncle with the halo of being a dad adopted countless lolita. This is the hilarious story of a certain house who got a rice-loving army that fell from the sky. Once again, I solemnly remind you: this is a very serious science fiction...

Curator2

Abandon books. In the same sentence, if you abandon the book early, it may have no reference value. It's right to be cautious about reviewing popular articles like this, even if I really have no interest in it. It may not be of reference value, so I repeat. There are a lot of fans everywhere, and after they talked a lot, I went there with the intention of taking a look. This book should be in the same state as Shengxu: White, with many fans. I hate crossing settings and have seen too many settings of all types. Judging from the beginning (after 200 chapters), both the group portraits and the plot fall into the category that I am already tired of and even too lazy to pursue. Sylvanas appeared in the show, I watched World of Warcraft and Juggernaut, I cleared all the levels of Warcraft 3, I also read the official hero biography, and also followed the plot of WoW. I have passed the stage where I like string settings. This way of writing will greatly reduce the difficulty of creation. It's fresh for a while, but then it becomes boring. Let me just write some personal opinions on this type of article here. Forcing someone to show a certain emotion is a mistake. One of the common problems with Xiaobai's writing is that the author fails to convey the atmosphere properly when expressing his emotions. If the reader doesn't care, they will just follow the emotional descriptors. The author wrote that the characters in the book were very moved, and they all shed tears. When readers see the word tears, they will understand: This is where they should be moved. . . . Society! I don't dare to move at all! If the emotion is not expressed through your description but directly through related explicit words, then the description is a failure. Complaining about character behavior through the character's perspective is a new problem in Qidianwen. A few years ago, this kind of writing was not even as good as a short article. Times have really changed. Complaining often ruins the plot and interferes with the flow of reading. This is done by readers to be clever, not by the author. You just need to describe what the character is doing. Keep it simple and leave some space for readers to think.

Entertainment Conscience14

Latecomer

985K8.5224

New book "I'm Not a Superhero", please support... ------ Some people say that he is the conscience of the entertainment industry. Whoever said this, doesn't your conscience hurt? ... Many years later, people will not remember the pits left unfilled in Eleven, the death of the heroine, and the death of the hero... He is only remembered for his kind heart. ------ PS: This article is poisonous. The protagonist is seriously ill and has a strong desire for revenge. It is just for entertainment. There is no need to take it seriously... Book club group 203384119.

Curator1

Abandon books. There are really many free readers these days, which can be seen from the number of prompt messages. It also reminds me when to read the plot and see how the author develops it later. In fact, this book was favored by me in the book review section. They said that this book is very conscientious and upright, and it uses satire to reveal the darkness of society. In fact, I feel that some places are very empty and have no foundation. Empty means that a certain plot is requested by the author rather than developing naturally based on foreshadowing. The book is not bad either, and many of the jokes are used well, so it's considered average 🙂 . The first poisonous point is the first six fingers, which are as miserable as the death of a family. The second poisonous point is to spread endless negative energy, but tell me that there are more and more book fans? The third poisonous point is that there is always negative energy. Others have to pay attention to the balance between work and rest in the college entrance examination. You don't give out any positive energy. The fourth poisonous point is the point where I abandoned the book. After a lot of negative energy in the early stage, HP was killed in the seventh part of HP, and at the same time, other plots were inserted and I wanted to skip this section. Not to mention that it is a miracle that Chinese HP can be popular all over the world, and then I turn on the negative power and I am really worried about the life and safety of the protagonist. So I had reservations because I didn't read it later and I was afraid that if nothing happened to the protagonist, the book would really be a piece of garbage.

Mythical Version of the Three Kingdoms15

Grave Soil And Grass

23.6M8.76,550

Chen Xi looked at the soldiers who were throwing away a huge stone weighing hundreds of kilograms, and looked at the sky speechlessly. Is this really the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty? Lu Bu single-handedly penetrated an army of ten thousand people. This is not scientific at all. Zhao Zilong is really possessed by the dragon soul and can break mountains with one sword. Is this really a human being? Dian Wei single-handedly protected Cao Cao and fought his way out of the enemy camp, easily killing thousands of cavalry on the opposite side. This fighting power was off the charts! Is there something wrong? Chen Xi touched a goose feather fan and waved it. The strong wind blew up and he sighed, "This is a myth, I am not normal anymore." Ps: Actually this is a serious farming article... QQ group: 476971307 (the old group exploded, this is a new one) Full booking verification group: 949176942 Soy sauce group: 397441818 (almost full) Group 2: 418928396 (almost full) Group Three: 188981452 (This one also exploded before, so I got a new one) Five groups: 850567843 (the previous one exploded, replaced with a new one)

Curator2

Abandon books. Due to style reasons, it was abandoned very early and may have little reference value. The author wants to write a simple and easy-going article, ignoring logic and making it easy. I am a fastidious person to a certain extent, and I will consider why in many places (if the author is very good and can make me ignore the irrelevant parts, I will shut up and read the book. The more I like the book, the less I will criticize it). The comments that were liked by readers in the first few chapters were all aimed at criticizing the author. The rest of the article was really unsatisfactory, so I left. Fortunately, she didn't have me as a reader when she first started writing the book, otherwise she would have been very unlucky. I have read a lot of Three Kingdoms games and novels, and I will think about certain plots when being criticized. My favorite book about the Three Kingdoms is Wicked Man. This book I read five years ago was the most innovative one at the time.

Genius Fortune Teller16

Drill

2.8M9.21,180

The young man Ye Tianqi received the inheritance from the fortune teller, studied the relationship between heaven and man, understood the changes of ancient and modern times, and inherited the unique knowledge of the past saints.

Curator1

Abandon books. Danyan always writes very carefully. Out of personal preference only ordinary. I must have been a loyal reader three years ago. Me now: Spreading feudal superstitious ideas is the dregs of the old era, no. Well, actually people have become more realistic these days and think it is pointless to watch this.

Harry Potter and the Secret Treasure18

Meow Star's Dog

3.9M8.2707

To put it simply, it is the story of a boy named Alvin Mason who travels to the magical world of Harry Potter and goes to school at Hogwarts! Alvin is one grade younger than Harry, Gryffindor route! Let me solemnly remind you: I write this article entirely based on my personal preference. There is no guarantee of updates, no guarantee of plot, and no guarantee of quality. Please be careful when entering the pit, the author only digs up and does not bury it!

Curator

Abandon books. This was probably the first HP fanfic I read at Qidian. In fact, I abandoned it a long time ago, but I never added it to my abandonment list. I always had great expectations for HP fanfiction before, because the HP series itself has created a very grand world. In order to facilitate description and simplify the text, Rowling has left many unimportant parts vaguely, some of which have been supplemented by logic, and some of which have not. I think the goal of fandom is to create settings that don't exist based on existing ones. But this one is not. The HP world is a separate world that does not involve things like Warcraft, Xiling, Cthulhu, Infinity, etc. If the author makes a random reference, my first reaction would definitely be that he plagiarizes things without using his brain, and uses the shell of a fan to deceive traffic. Moreover, the most important thing is that I have seen a lot of things in other categories. If you ask me to make up my own, I can make up a set of ideas, but it is meaningless. Since I started collecting HP fan books, many HP fans have been discarded for this reason, and this is just one of them.

Martial Arts Master19

Squid That Loves Diving

2.5M9.51,938

Here, martial arts is no longer an illusory legend, but a real inheritance. After confrontation with technology, it has been completely integrated into society. There are various martial arts competitions. Wenwu is the first, and martial arts is second! After Lou Cheng received the severed inheritance from a major school of martial arts, he moved forward step by step towards his original dream and towards the glory in his heart. There are still heroes in the city, and today's era relies on heroes!

Curator1

Abandon books. I gave up on this book after giving it serious thought. This book has been abandoned twice, including this time for the third time. The dog food guru is rumored online. Personally, I don't have any feelings about it. Maybe it's because I don't have a sense of immersion, but I think Full Time's description of professional circles and group portraits is better than this one. The author's creative skills are there, but I still think it's a bit ordinary. Damn it, I flipped through the book list for a while, and the Arcane God's Throne is actually this person's book. I didn't recognize him, so disrespectful! Pass tea to the boss.

Drink Black Tea Calmly at Hogwarts20

Only Eat The Skin Of Durian

1.7M8.5156

This is a Hogwarts where the style often goes wrong. This is a story in which Quirrell was betrayed by a group of students, a basilisk was on the dinner table at the celebration banquet, Sirius Black almost turned into a dog meat pot, Voldemort was tricked again and again without knowing it, and it was justice for professors to sit together and make dumplings.

Curator5

How dare I not push you. In cross talk performances, talented literary jokes will always be more popular with the older generation of masters, and the scores will be more inclined to this. However, in cross talk, it is difficult to be lively on stage because of the humor and praise in cross talk. How to make the audience follow you is also a test of your skills. Judges often comment on such jokes as "full of knowledge". After reading online articles for so many years, except for a few books such as This Young Man, I have not seen many that use literary jokes. The last time I saw a literary gag was in a horror broadcast. Xiaolong used "I brought you some oranges" from Zhu Ziqing's "Back", which was very good. To be honest with today's online writing, a college student can write fantasy with just a pen. Whether it is good or bad depends on whether the routine can be used, and whether it is popular or not depends on whether the idea is new or not. It is really difficult to come across a literary joke. That's why I recommend this book. Wen Yi Zaidao, I see the books you have read, the thoughts you have learned, and the literary classics you have memorized, even if there are only a few signs, but as soon as the signs are revealed, I will know what you are talking about. In common thinking among literati, classics are more exciting than novelties. I admire you and I will recommend you. These days, not many people are willing to read and memorize classics. Pssss: The author mentioned a book with a similar style in the book review section called "Reform and Opening up the Magical World". I also recommend it to everyone. I read the first two chapters. The descriptions are meticulous, the truth can be seen in the ordinary, and it is quite ancient. It's not a book written by Qidian. Please don't block me. Let me excerpt two sentences to give you a feeling: Thinking of his parents who both died, even a tough guy like Harry closed his eyes tightly and said sadly: "I want to raise you but don't wait for my parents. I am unfilial to my son!" As he said this, the eight-foot tall man burst into tears. At that time, my heart was like this: Hagrid: Harry, good boy, time flies, you are eleven years old now. Good guy, U r even higher than Dumbledore. Sorry, I admit, I was wrong. I don't hate string settings, I just hate bad strings, hahaha.

Slytherin's Newest Student21

Sad

1.1M7.8110

Ning An comes to the world of Harry Potter. Hearing the Sorting Hat grinning widely and shouting loudly "Slytherin--", he tightened his collar and lowered his head secretly. "Slytherin? No matter which house I am in, only the unremitting pursuit of magic is the direction I pursue." His deep eyes slowly scanned the auditorium, and then he walked towards the Slytherin table. "Bend your waist and bow - wizards, what is in front of you will be the greatest wizard in history."

Curator1

The author's description of psychological emotions is very wonderful. But the plot is dangerous. Ah, I'm in a dark room, so I can't comment. Jot down a few questions. 1. What is the purpose of Snake Letter? What a Death Eater does and how it acts is closely related to its goals. They want to create a world ruled by wizards, which is a mistake, so they must be sneaky and punish traitors severely to prevent them from being leaked. And because this was in line with the interests of the wizard family, it gained the support of pure-blood wizards and grew stronger. In the later stages, the previous means of control became a tool for Voldemort to centralize power. After the centralization of power is successful, the title of master becomes natural. But the purpose of Snake Letter? I'm sorry, who doesn't have a home yet, so I have to hurry up and get together with you? How can a group that is destined to not have many supporters except for violence and therefore has no political future gain support? The core goal is to resurrect a stranger? 2. I think it was not just HP who was drugged, but also all the other people in Hogwarts, including Dumbledore. Otherwise, how could we explain that Dumbledore was acting like a fool and couldn't even see HP's status clearly? Especially the part about replacing DA, I can't figure out why a Gryffindor would go to a Slytherin teacher's class and be almost exactly the same as a DA member? Hermione's relationship with students, even Gryffindors, deteriorated after the protagonist intervened. How did she persuade and win over other people? You see, up to now, Hermione has lost her principles and HP has lost his principles. Next, let HP kill Ron and become a dark wizard? This is a problem. 3. As for the plot, how do you end Voldemort? Just write that Dumbledore also lost his principles and helped you kill HP and Voldemort? Dumbledore lived for more than seventy years and was finally bewitched by the protagonist with a resurrection to the point where he no longer recognized himself as a human being? Is it so reliable? Deng had seen hundreds of thousands of people die in his life, many of whom did not deserve to die, but all of them were resurrected? The protagonist's emotional intelligence, which can't even be seen as a secret love, can also bewitch Dumbledore? It would be really bad if it forced a return to the original plot in the end. I will see the end, as long as it doesn't crash.

Glory under the Crown22

Bald Guitar

761K0

I started writing this book in 11 years, and it originated from an absurd dream. There are many problems in the hands-on work, and I can't solve them even if I want to. Thanks to the book friends who have accompanied me along the way. This book, which took 10 years to write, is finally finished!

Curator

Abandon books. The plot is very reasonable within the background and settings created by the author. Note that these are the author's own settings, not Rowling's. Starting from the classic routine, passing through the golden finger portable system stallion's wisdom halo, but wearing the shell of a fan. I didn't finish it, it wasn't to my taste. The main reason is that the character of the protagonist and the author forcefully changed it. And I went there because I heard that this is one of the best among Qidian fandoms. With such expectations, it is easy to be disappointed. A lot of changes have been made to the characters of the original characters. Hermione is indifferent and familiar with the wizarding world, Lupine and Sirius pay attention to their family background, Harry Potter is arrogant and arrogant, and so on. The author thought he didn't change it, but in fact he did. The added psychological expressions and lines were his guesses. But if he has no sense of immersion in the original work, the result of correct reasoning is actually not what he thinks. One point against the author is that he thought the protagonist was helping Harry Potter without doing anything. It was jealousy that made Harry Potter become the opposite of the protagonist. The reality is that Harry Potter would have been possible even without the help of the main character. The protagonist is like a parasite, ending the plot early and taking away all the honors while Harry is trying hard. This process itself is rebuking Harry. You must know that the original work arranged so many scenes because Harry Bit was the protagonist. Since your arrangement here is not the protagonist, it is more likely that he will disappear into the crowd. Anyway, there will be someone covering him, just waiting for Silver to kill Voldemort.

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When he woke up, he found that he had entered another world. Allen found that he had unlimited reveries after having the LOL system. However, at this moment, an acceptance letter from Hogwarts confused him. What the hell, is this the world of Harry Potter? When Harry Potter and LOL collide, a new world is born - that's how big the imagination is anyway!

Curator

Abandon books. Low-level writing, with no familiar routines. Introduction to Chapter 37: A shareholder of a listed company discovered that his bodyguard was very good at fighting, and immediately decided to promote him to the company's CEO, believing that he was the savior of the company's difficulties. The new CEO said that kidnapping all the technical staff of the rival company would solve the problem. The shareholders refused, so the CEO proposed a new solution. The company could be saved by replacing all the company's shareholders with Tsinghua University graduates. Although the existing shareholders had been in the industry for 10 years, they only had Fudan degrees, which was obviously not enough. The bodyguard believes that he has sincerely proposed a solution, and whether it can be adopted still has to be decided by the shareholders' meeting. This bodyguard is the protagonist of this book. This comment cannot be posted in the comment area. . . I want to send it! Md!

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