Harry Potter and the Secret Treasure
About This Novel
To put it simply, it is the story of a boy named Alvin Mason who travels to the magical world of Harry Potter and goes to school at Hogwarts! Alvin is one grade younger than Harry, Gryffindor route! Let me solemnly remind you: I write this article entirely based on my personal preference. There is no guarantee of updates, no guarantee of plot, and no guarantee of quality. Please be careful when entering the pit, the author only digs up and does not bury it!
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Official(707)Scraped 23d ago
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An excellent fantasy novel
The protagonist's IQ is a flaw and he has various poisonous points. The book shortage is the motivation that kept me reading the Prisoner Chapter.
Various plots are copied from the original ones, and the original protagonist's IQ is comparable to that of a 5-year-old child! There are also many book reviews that claim to have read dozens of fanfics and this is the best? Isn't the Prince of Curses delicious? Isn't the Death Eater's Son delicious? Isn't it delicious? Isn't the Legend of the Academic Master delicious? Isn't the Hogwarts on the tip of my tongue delicious? Isn't the Blood Wizard delicious?
The best HP fanfic currently
As a fan of H. P., I have read a lot of HP fics and feel that these dozen are the most consistent with the original work. There is no mechanical copying and some unknown power system. The characters are also very consistent with the original settings. The author also used his own whimsical ideas to write new things based on the original framework, which is worthy of five-star praise👍👍.
Destroy the original work
As a stand-alone Goldfinger novel, there is no problem. But there is no need for the protagonist of the dark original work to be so capable. Ron seems to be nothing but jealous. Harry is a childish and passionate person. Various language descriptions of Hermione also tend to portray an unlikable character. Everyone in this book except the protagonist is a fool. It has nothing to do with me how the author likes to write the book, but since we are fans, we must at least respect the original work.
To be honest, it's okay at the front but OOC at the end. Ron was also hacked so badly. Does the author have any grudge against Ron? !
No innovation, feeling boring
Why does the protagonist have to take Harry's route? Follow the protagonist and pick up leaks? As promised, then you can watch the movie and see how other people take their own routes. I'm really speechless. To read this novel, it's better to just rewatch the movie. The protagonist can obviously prevent many things, but he still has to follow the plot route. You might as well copy it from the original Harry Potter.
Can the protagonist have an adventure in China?
Really bad
After reading ten chapters, I copied the plot like crazy, the main character is so childish, it's really terrible.
This book is really good
Just like the title, the more you look at it, the more you realize that the author is definitely a science student. The plot of the previous love affair was extremely awkward, but the plot was absolutely thoughtful. Everything is connected before and after, and the previously inexplicable plots are all explained. The author is still very thoughtful. After reading the original work, if you are really invested in it, many characters will already have their place in the reader's mind. So I think fan fiction doesn't need to overstuff the image, as long as it's not too biased. One final word, all readers in the book review section, please don't kill this novel at once. Only those who have written novels know that it is really not easy to persevere after work. How many similar novels are discontinued? Come on, author! Support you!
Why are there so many people hating Ron?
I think Ron has always been a good person. In the original book, Ron is Harry's first friend of the same age in the wizarding world, and he is also one of the most vivid characters in the entire HP series. He does have shortcomings, but these shortcomings better reflect the reality and vividness of his character. Before Hermione was Harry's friend, Ron was Harry's only friend. In normal times, he and Harry shared many little anecdotes about Hogwarts. When Draco was about to duel with Harry, he immediately stepped forward and offered to be Harry's assistant. And in the secret room of the chessboard, he also resolutely chose to deal with the queen himself, letting Harry and Hermione continue on. (
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Official(707)Scraped 23d ago
reminder
An excellent fantasy novel
The protagonist's IQ is a flaw and he has various poisonous points. The book shortage is the motivation that kept me reading the Prisoner Chapter.
Various plots are copied from the original ones, and the original protagonist's IQ is comparable to that of a 5-year-old child! There are also many book reviews that claim to have read dozens of fanfics and this is the best? Isn't the Prince of Curses delicious? Isn't the Death Eater's Son delicious? Isn't it delicious? Isn't the Legend of the Academic Master delicious? Isn't the Hogwarts on the tip of my tongue delicious? Isn't the Blood Wizard delicious?
The best HP fanfic currently
As a fan of H. P., I have read a lot of HP fics and feel that these dozen are the most consistent with the original work. There is no mechanical copying and some unknown power system. The characters are also very consistent with the original settings. The author also used his own whimsical ideas to write new things based on the original framework, which is worthy of five-star praise👍👍.
Destroy the original work
As a stand-alone Goldfinger novel, there is no problem. But there is no need for the protagonist of the dark original work to be so capable. Ron seems to be nothing but jealous. Harry is a childish and passionate person. Various language descriptions of Hermione also tend to portray an unlikable character. Everyone in this book except the protagonist is a fool. It has nothing to do with me how the author likes to write the book, but since we are fans, we must at least respect the original work.
To be honest, it's okay at the front but OOC at the end. Ron was also hacked so badly. Does the author have any grudge against Ron? !
No innovation, feeling boring
Why does the protagonist have to take Harry's route? Follow the protagonist and pick up leaks? As promised, then you can watch the movie and see how other people take their own routes. I'm really speechless. To read this novel, it's better to just rewatch the movie. The protagonist can obviously prevent many things, but he still has to follow the plot route. You might as well copy it from the original Harry Potter.
Can the protagonist have an adventure in China?
Really bad
After reading ten chapters, I copied the plot like crazy, the main character is so childish, it's really terrible.
This book is really good
Just like the title, the more you look at it, the more you realize that the author is definitely a science student. The plot of the previous love affair was extremely awkward, but the plot was absolutely thoughtful. Everything is connected before and after, and the previously inexplicable plots are all explained. The author is still very thoughtful. After reading the original work, if you are really invested in it, many characters will already have their place in the reader's mind. So I think fan fiction doesn't need to overstuff the image, as long as it's not too biased. One final word, all readers in the book review section, please don't kill this novel at once. Only those who have written novels know that it is really not easy to persevere after work. How many similar novels are discontinued? Come on, author! Support you!
Why are there so many people hating Ron?
I think Ron has always been a good person. In the original book, Ron is Harry's first friend of the same age in the wizarding world, and he is also one of the most vivid characters in the entire HP series. He does have shortcomings, but these shortcomings better reflect the reality and vividness of his character. Before Hermione was Harry's friend, Ron was Harry's only friend. In normal times, he and Harry shared many little anecdotes about Hogwarts. When Draco was about to duel with Harry, he immediately stepped forward and offered to be Harry's assistant. And in the secret room of the chessboard, he also resolutely chose to deal with the queen himself, letting Harry and Hermione continue on. (
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When I was a kid, I always felt that the plot of JK's Harry Potter was a little thin, but now there is finally a good story to fill this void!
The protagonist travels to a Muggle family, one generation later than Harry. It does not follow the plot of Harry Potter, but the timeline is consistent. The plot is very good, and the power system is also good. The protagonist, as a little wizard, is stronger than ordinary little wizards, but he cannot defeat more powerful adult wizards. The plot unfolds quite reasonably, and it is currently close to one million words, making it a very good Harry Potter fanfic. The only problem is that the author has work, so sometimes updates are interrupted, but when I update normally, I can get two or three pictures a day, which is pretty good. BY Longyou sky_fox
A very good HP fan work. If the plot design was a bit restrictive at the beginning and followed the original work too much, the plot after the secret room is very innovative and truly enters the "secret treasure" chapter. If you like HP's story, this book will not disappoint you. By the way, Ron was badly hacked. . .
After reading more than 500 chapters, I will update my review: As a passerby who has never read the original work and only relies on fans to understand the plot, I think the second setting is good. The treasures of the four giants, the snake vampire family, and the arrival of evil gods expand the magical world of the original work. The writing is also okay. The protagonist of the Lion House is the first to be older than the trio. Ron has been in a cycle of blackening - whitening - blackening. The current female protagonist is Hermione, but she has ambiguous plots with several female characters. It is probably a multi-female story. Let's talk about a few poisonous points that I feel I can't stand: The protagonist is not like an adult time traveler, but a young man with prophecy who is mentally stronger than his peers when it is not a key plot point. Although the specific plot has been changed, because the author did not dare to leave the original plot for deduction, he always returned to the original plot and made small-scale changes. The protagonist seemed hesitant to do things, and was often blocked by various "coincidences". As a result, the plot seemed embarrassing and destroyed the protagonist's image to a great extent. When I first read Chapter 50 of this book, I gave it a review of "Grain and Grass". Now I only have dry food, but I can still read it.
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