Initial Evolution

To be honest, I just picked up Ace and was reading it a few days ago. Then I heard that a new book was released. I was quite happy, but it turned out to be quite disgusting. Even if you are selling feelings, you should at least bring something real. Let's talk briefly about what's disgusting! 1. An awesome woman who has a good relationship with the protagonist's opponent will always fall out with the protagonist's opponent for no reason, and then follow the protagonist inexplicably (the reason is that the protagonist has more potential or something, but I don't find that the protagonist is stronger than the opponent in terms of brains, strength, and power. I can only say that the woman is blind) (As long as the author does not see my review and change the outline, this book will definitely be like the protagonist) 2. The protagonist has an inexplicable sense of superiority in IQ. Since entering the trial, the protagonist has not taken the initiative to obtain information. What to do proactively, basically just go with the flow. As a result, he has inexplicably obtained more information than other people's teams. He still feels good about himself knowing that others are planning the layout. Is the protagonist a fool? 3. It imitates the original food plot in a very far-fetched manner, and does not hesitate to disrupt the main plot. 4. The aura of the protagonist is too strong, which gives people the feeling that the space is helping the protagonist. The ability of space is like a sieve. Whether there are any violations in a certain hill or mountain (it's all because of the people above, who can say who)? If someone wants to take all the benefits, it's based on their ability. Can your protagonist do it? The space is not a charity, so why should I help you as the five protagonists? (Referring to a certain Qiushan who planned to kill the boss of Steel Fist, but was intercepted by the protagonist who was doing the task) 5. Think about it and then add it (눈_눈)

Although Fang Linruo had no appetite at all, he still gritted his teeth and ate. In his heart, he always remembered the sentence "Those things that can't kill us will only make us stronger!"

Although Fang Linruo has suffered setbacks since he was a child, Fang Linruo stayed in the rental house for two full days before he recovered before such a series of severe blows. In the end, he gritted his teeth and held on...

A relative he depended on had just passed away, and Fang Linyan, who had just finished the funeral, was diagnosed with terminal lung cancer. For Fang Linyan, this month was undoubtedly the longest month in his life.

It's not as good as the first two, why don't you tell me? I laughed

The protagonist has been genetically modified and genetically optimized, and can survive even one shot to the brain. There are also a bunch of severed limbs reborn, able to withstand grenades and still jumping around. I have seen and learned gods and magic, and even Shania, who was so dead that she could no longer die, could be resurrected with full health. But you told me that the setting of the protagonist now suffering from lung cancer really makes people feel alienated. In this world where there is magic and technology is so advanced that it can regenerate severed limbs and modify genes, it is still said that lung cancer is difficult to cure and that it is extremely rare to be cured. It's really an incredible thing.

There are a lot of inappropriate metaphors, dirty jokes that need to be played several times in each chapter, and the often abused adjective "everything is impressive" and various flaws in the data. In the past, there was no such thing as in-chapter reviews in books. Now that we have it, if there are any mistakes, it will cause tall buildings to appear. If you click on it, you will feel that there is a big problem with the writing. There is also the 811 world. Even the guidance arrows for hidden tasks are revealed. This shows that you have not thought about how to lead the protagonists to the final scene. You can only use forced prompts to lure the protagonist there to trick the protagonist, and then bring the villains of this world there to create conflicts for the protagonist. Your strength has declined more than a little bit. Or it's not that your writing skills have declined, it's that you didn't think carefully when you wrote.

I am also a fan of Ace and The Ultimate. I have read both books several times. They are indeed beautiful and rare masterpieces that can be streamed indefinitely. I heard that Evolution had released a new book, so I quickly made friends with a few friends who also liked the Evolution series. In the end, I really felt like I was being sucked down by someone, or I was the one who opened my mouth wide and took the initiative. Aren't Fang Lin and Sen Yan's portrayals very good? Why is it that the protagonist of this book is just like those created by third-rate writers? He is really forcibly reduced to intelligence and then forcibly arranged. The process of reading it is really embarrassing. Sorry, all readers of the Evolution series, I have to give up. Last but not least, if you were coerced into writing this, just blink. Evolution series, goodbye👋

Sure enough, one book is not as good as the other. I couldn't stand the first two books, and even less so this one. Many of the difficulties the protagonist encounters are caused by the protagonist's stupidity. No wonder the popularity is getting worse and worse, bye bye

Two chapters a day, and the main plot has actually advanced by 20 words!