Notes on Internet Articles

This book that was innocently devoured last year is back, happily. Praise everyone who speaks out in protest. 9.5 Points High-ranking officials and generous salaries are not immortals. Mr. Three Idiots are right in complaining. If you have no choice in the world, you will fly into the sky and into the earth to become an invincible existence, or will you still be hierarchical and bully the weak? How can you get immortality? As a result, the characters no longer see themselves as clouds and the world as dust. In addition to enjoying the beauty of the flowers and moon, they also go to the streets to see the world and people. Feng shui divination is only for embellishment, the important thing is that justice can make the road clear and compassionate, and it can be said that the immortal soul of green blood will never be cut off. Zeng was upright, kind and good at adapting to situations, but he was still faced with many obstacles and difficulties. Traveling in life is difficult, even finding a place to drink is difficult. The gentleman stopped writing halfway and said goodbye gracefully, which is heartbreaking. I also thought about the fate of Jiuli, Miaoxiang Yingzi and others, and silently regarded it as a happy ending. I couldn't bear to read this posthumous book, but I finished it. What Mr. Sanchi writes is not just stories, but history, culture, customs, nobility of human nature and beauty of emotions, which are refreshing. Only after meeting the Three Idiots did I believe that there is literature in online novels. The chirping of cranes in Xihua Pavilion is no longer heard.

When writing books, Lang Ha is different from other people. He pays attention to speaking, learning and singing. Ma Xiuer's natural talent is the banished immortal in martial arts and the soft rice wizard, the latter is particularly outstanding. A generation of delicate grass attracts men and women to bow their waists; although the world is big, there are still many coquettish people who look at Xiu'er. Not only does it have Qiao Feng's own BGM, but it also has a shameful jukebox. It's really a flagpole with underwear hanging on it, and it's famous far and wide. However, the title of the book was changed to "The Soft Rice King, I'm Determined!" >>Isn't it more appropriate? PS. The cover is a bit outrageous. It's a magnetic skateboard boy, but it's so sunny and has one of its wings folded. I was so scared that I almost deleted it when my hands shook. It is recommended to take a headshot with a bright smile but a bit mean.

1 Free is not recommended by me, clean network is not recommended by me. 2. When faced with overbearing terms, write a good book and be good enough to bargain. When you first enter the industry, you have to weigh the pros and cons. I also suffered losses, but I persevered. 3. You can hire a lawyer when signing a contract, and you must trust Tencent. 4 Dead Wife card. At the point of the collective resistance to the slave contract, there was a hero who said some specious things about Zhang Wei avoiding conflicts. "Writing is the foundation of the author" was shaken. This makes Zhang Wei's attempts to strengthen his bargaining power and believe in the future and ease the relationship between capital and authors meaningless. Blessings, paintings, and trust in Tencent are the voices of capital that ease the relationship, not the author. Minus 9 points A book about making money from an assembly line will be awarded 1 point for its level and 10 points for its historical significance. Originally, works belong to works, and people belong to people. But the previous ones can be counted, but not this one, because Zhang Wei is the leader of the catastrophe of Internet literature. At that time, the author's name was Tang San. Although Douluo 1's level was average, he still had some memories. He never expected that one day he would completely despise the author. He is already a reviewer of online articles, not a creator. How can there be any author who strives to take credit and put shackles on the creative environment? Tang San has passed away, leaving only Zhang Wei. Zhang Wei proposed at the political meeting in March last year to censor online novels, standardize online literature, and clarify censorship rules. As a result, many online novel websites led by Qidian. Com and Jinjiang suffered large-scale censorship of content last year, and Jinjiang was once removed from the shelves. At the starting point, millions of novels were banned and removed from the shelves, including many classic online novels, such as "Kunlun", "Wandering of the Gods", "Infinite Terror", "Lingao Qiming", etc. Even elegant historical texts such as "The Superior Hanshi", innocent romances such as "Danzhu", and popular science texts such as "Arcane God Throne" were once lost. Only Tang San's works, some well-known works and very profitable first-line works survived. Most of the books that were spared and those that were slowly released after review were abridged and incomplete. Following the second review in July, almost all urban supernatural texts were removed from the shelves, and the historical genre was greatly restricted. Not only are the censorship rules not clear, but they are even vaguer, and the content of the novel touches more red lines. For example, no description is allowed below the neck (you can simply wear a black robe). The above is, to a certain extent, "credit" to Member Zhang's proposal for leading the way. He was able to secure his position, but he ruined the jobs of thousands of authors, robbed the wallets of countless readers, and even damaged the very foundation of online writing. Everyone understands that the position of the butt has changed, and everyone understands the general trend. No one requires you to be a minority and fight for creative freedom under pressure, but you could have refused to take the credit by not standing up. If you do something like this, you will inevitably get stabbed in the spine. All Internet article authors and readers have reasons to diss him, and the book friend circle has therefore become a forum for discussion. It is a pity that the enemy is in the Propaganda Department of the Central Committee of the Communist Party of China, which does not speak human language and imposes restrictions everywhere, making it difficult for the world to empathize with China, and the export of culture is far away. As enlightened as the Tang Dynasty, if you bump into a car on the road, the car owner will discuss which word is better to use in a poem, and the whole world will not only praise your national strength, but also admire your culture, this is the true image of a great country.

9 points Web articles set the peak of integration. It combines successful formulas such as One Piece framework, Sherlock Holmes, steampunk environment, Cthulhu atmosphere, game job transfer system, group play and even live broadcast rewards in an unobtrusive way, which is very impressive. The theme expression is also correct. The ending of the first part was a bit rushed. I was originally expecting a grand war on top, a significant fall and the turbulent tide of the times, but in the end it was just a quiet confrontation and split PK. Except for some inner dramas, Amon lost his glasses body, and Mr. Ke temporarily fell into sleep, there was nothing disturbing. It was just a pause button. At the end, the emotions are reached in the two scenes of the elder reading the letter and the junior high-fiving, but this is like changing the ending of the first One Piece from a war on top to a fish-man island that talks about false hatred. Without a big plot climax and insufficient emotional impact, it will be difficult for people to buy into the meaningful theme. Fish-Man Island can do this in the prologue of the second film. It is outrageous for Squid to use the prologue to replace the climax. It violates the double climax of plot and emotion that is necessary to end the chapter of a popular work, so many readers are dissatisfied. The previous chapter ended neatly, and the idea of ​​not pursuing a grand battle but pursuing a sense of graphics and editing is still very admirable. It's just that the foreshadowing, characters, and battles are often not clearly and fully described, making the climax of the subsequent chapters lose the sense of speed that the first editing session had and just feel rushed. Some of the shortcomings may be due to the limitations of the home-age mentality, and I don't know if they can be improved. However, it is a good thing that some people are making different attempts in online articles. It is also rare for a squid to turn years of accumulation into various attempts. I'll write about the rest later, but let's first note the copyright earthquake caused by the recent high-level reshuffle at Qidian. "Is there a way to steal someone else's talent?" "Find a very poor person who has the talent you want to make a deal, give him the money he desires in exchange for the corresponding talent." "It's a bit like the devil..." "The easier way is to pay someone with talent to help you solve it." Squid objected mildly. The new contract not only has strict content review, but also plunders copyrights. It turns Qidian into entrusting the author to write the book. The copyright of the work, the author's copyright and even the pen name belong to Qidian. If you are not satisfied, you can directly change the author according to the outline you submitted. The author is reduced to a tool on the assembly line and gets nothing. The capital dries up and the situation is ugly. This is even more outrageous than when Tian Xia Ba Shang was drunk and sold out for tens of thousands, and then he continued writing and was ordered to pay millions in damages. Domestic copyright laws are too imperfect. Copyrights are sold cheaply, and if the IP makes a lot of money in the future, additional shares will be required. There is not even this basic protection for relatively weak authors. At that time, Shanda wanted full copyright, and did not allow the author to see the publishing house, and Yan Yangshen Monthly Ticket manipulated the list. Xianxia's No. 1 Literary Xianhu was also hastily ended due to this contradiction. I did not expect that such an unbelievable robbery would happen now. Then Shenji took the lead and took the lead without being coerced, and Lang Ha waited for the response and went to Zongheng together. But it is too difficult to build a platform. Under the increasingly serious industrial chain and monopoly in all fields, traffic is increasingly concentrated on a few leading platforms. Under Tencent's wave of capital harvest, big-name authors still have bargaining power for the time being, but it will be difficult for other authors and all future authors to get ahead. Bless you all.

9.5分 华人歌者以邓丽君为尊，为何？因她的歌声不仅有人性闪光，更从未有怨气悲苦，总给人以美好。 文字比之音乐，品性高下更一目了然。读网文至今，唯有三痴先生最上品。 因先生不曾让生活中的困顿身体上的苦痛沾染文心文字分毫，至情至性，始终高洁从不偏激鲜耻，也不曾见到错字。 好的文字见性情，此书当得上温润如玉真挚深情，更雅趣处处令人爱不释手，随便读一章都如沐春风。 陈操之与东晋名士们把臂同游谈笑静胡沙，一路上神采风流令人心驰神往，不由想多读几卷诗书前去相认。 历史人物和掌故信手拈来，正面写辩难、解管锥编足见国学功底。剧情毫无闯关升级感，路上的风景极美。遗憾处是战争戏写简单了。 看过的网文作者里，也有几位文笔优秀的，但文采稍逊三痴先生，风韵更差了许多。（当然，他们的长处不在这里。） 三痴先生的历史文，往往能还原出那个时代的文化风貌写出代表人物的一些质感，这是其他网文作者无法企及的领域。 先生笔下，有秋官的潇洒、尊龙的惊艳和哥哥的深情，神贯古今，尽得风流。 有时甚至觉得，是张岱穿过来写网文玩，邀你湖心亭看雪，同饮同痴。 希望先生也是如此远行。 PS. @水墨江湖-手作人生： 贼道三痴的《上品寒士》是难得的描写魏晋风骨的佳作。重生文拉个酷炫背景布容易，但能在故事里举重若轻的写到魏晋书法、音乐、服饰、王谢风流、土地制度、九品中正制等，故事又不枯燥是很难的。尤其写葛洪的脱俗，顾虎头的痴绝，谢道韫的清疏，就像古人重现。 PPS.网文大劫后先生的书有些缺失错漏。大概，书太多审订不过来吧。深表遗憾。

10 points As expected, both elegance and coquettishness are combined, and the clouds and rain are involved. Zhang Yuan is sophisticated and sharp-edged, principled, compassionate, and yet interesting in life. Zhang Dai is so elegant that he wouldn't want to be born in this world without the beauty of flowers and moon. Zhang E, on the other hand, gained the true interest of the world and acted as he pleased, laughing and cursing, drinking and singing, flirting with maids and courtesans, and pursued pleasure and enjoyment throughout his life. At the Water Margin, he swaggered through the city pretending to be Ximen Qing and kicked Wu Song for Jin Lian. He was really wonderful. It should be said that "Those who are fluent in writing are extremely disgusting, such as eight-legged essays; those who are lovable despite being illogical in writing are like Zhang E." He is the dandy I once thought about, but he is a naive and evil young man who runs around the world. "You must go through the world of mortals before you can achieve transcendent enlightenment." "People must learn to enjoy themselves and sing to wine. How long is life." Good words. Life must have some spirit of play and hedonism, otherwise it will be inevitable to be depressed by the environment and exhausted. The flowers are indifferent, the Tao Yun is heroic, and the veins are full of veins or crystal clear. It is precisely "a spring water surrounds the flower body, and the shadows of the flowers are enchanting. Each one has the spring. Even if it is blown into snow by the spring wind, it is better than being crushed into dust on the south road." "Senior brother, have you ever heard the sound of apricot blossoms withering, the sound of apricot blossoms falling amid the sound of wooden fish? Skillful people work hard, but wise people worry. Senior brother has desires and demands, and things are too annoying. I'm afraid it will be difficult to remember this moment in the future. Let me help you remember it. " Sentences such as "What if I have a guilty conscience" and "I have to force myself" will make people's hearts tremble. At the end, the dream came to an abrupt end when I went back to the fork in the road and headed towards Miss Wang who would never marry. I thought it was wonderful. It is necessary to know that there are many beauties, and there is peace in the world. There are always regrets, and it is also a sigh that life is like a dream. Some people think that Ming Dynasty did not write the ending until it ends anticlimactically. I would like to say that there shouldn't be too much eroticism. For princes and princesses, it is enough to stop at the moment when everything is still full of hope when writing about the wedding. It is not beautiful to write about whether the rest of your life will go smoothly. It is better to leave a lingering flavor than to reluctantly write with eroticism all the way. The writing is more worldly and compassionate than that of Shangpin Hanshi, and the shortcomings pointed out hit the reality, and seeking truth cannot overcome the relationship of interests. It is difficult to win the top prize, it is even more difficult to maintain one's original intention and not be coerced, and it is difficult for interest groups to work together to achieve success. The war drama is solidly written, and the argument is much more sophisticated than the small test of a high-ranking humble scholar. In the "Great Debate in the Snow", some concepts of Chinese and Western studies were in a powerful confrontation. The expression was clear and clear, and I benefited a lot. The philosophical and historical skills are admirable.

8 points The young girls and boys are full of energy, not inferior to Legend of Shushan Swordsman at all, the emotional description is quite tasteful, and the ending is just right, a jug of good wine. "After traveling eight thousand miles, it turns out that this is how you like someone." "My thoughts are in Ulsan. The road to follow is difficult, and I look eastward with tears in my eyes. How can I repay Ying Qiong Yao when a beauty gave me a golden knife?" However, there are as many shining encounters as there are plum blossom petals that overwhelm Nanshan and endless waiting until the beauty fades and the frost and snow cover the head. How many people are there who have no regrets when they meet again? There is joy at first sight but only a brief taste of it, and you are not happy anymore. The cold girl who has been entangled with melancholy for life after life, the pretty and cheerful young lady who loves liveliness but is willing to work hard for thousands of years to meet again, and the deep lover who goes to the underworld to find his true love on the other side, all of them are pitiable. The third idiot is also a love idiot. ------------ Royal Entertainment Guide 7 points Of the five great joys in the world, the first four are truly joyful. I also thought about carrying a birdcage and traveling around the world in style, and this book made it even more true. Fighting insects, chess, tea and Cuju, the Three Idiots lead readers to experience the ancient entertainment world one by one, making people feel that life should be fun. The first book of Mr. Three Idiots is a richly researched but light-hearted game. His thoughts are like the sparkling waves on a lake, which is astonishing and stunning. ------------

3 points The setting is a future light-brain game world, with mental access to the Avatar level. The real gaming experience is addictive just thinking about it. China's urban buildings have also been transformed into carefully built modern ancient cities, which is great. It's a pity that there isn't much intersection between the game world and the characters' real lives. The game writing is just too much gameplay, which is really boring for people who don't play this game. However, it can make people recall some of the joy of hanging out in chat rooms and forums, and also experience the excitement of fighting monsters, upgrading and picking up girls in online games. Finally, there is the sadness of a period of life ending, which makes people miss college. Who wouldn't want to be a swordsman who can "fly into the sky with a sword, go in and out of the dark world, chase clouds and moons, and span thousands of miles"? ------------ Great Ape King 3 points By this time, the setting is already quite exciting. It's a fun read, but it's an anticlimax. "If I want to become strong, I will become strong." The price is to be a fake bald donkey, to achieve the same goal through different paths. "A man must be bold and bold." Part fighting, part picking up girls. In a fit of rage, he becomes a beauty, beats up everyone who bullied his girlfriend, and then travels all over the world to get his girlfriend back, and is very successful in dating.

9 points This is a story about a stone that doesn't want to be changed by a fucked-up world. It has the power to subvert the order. It is able to ignore the rules of interests and risk its life to fight against the evil forces. It is a story about Zeming trying to show his face when he is not satisfied with the power of cannibalism. Although it is outrageous, all kinds of people are very happy when they are angry. Mr. Shi's last dance was also pretty cool. I've seen a lot of these in martial arts movies, renxia movies, and One Piece, but they're still touching because they fit my deepest yearnings. Xu Le's personality is very idealistic, but he is more approachable than Ning Que and Fan Xian. Campus life is always nostalgic. Friends who admire each other, young first love, finding a prostitute to lose your virginity, and some pretensely profound sentences about lost love, etc., The author incorporates his experiences, and the scenery on the road is much more realistic than celebrating more than a year. Studying is a process of understanding the world step by step and establishing values. The simple concept of right and wrong of young people is naturally consistent with idealism. Students are naive and naive, and everyone is more tolerant of communication. Therefore, discussions about darkness, justice, and passion are more natural. The plot is still a bit draggy, and there are also some errors and omissions in sci-fi settings and details. When listening to the Ghoststand version, it is obvious that the dubbing and soundtrack are good, but the writing is sloppy, with too many straightforward explanations and aggressive and cruel scenes. When Mao Ni can be less boring, write with a sense of speed, and pay attention to details, will he really be a good author. Federation and Empire, like the Eight-Power Allied Forces, Military Japan and the Qing Dynasty. The Federation does not believe in the hand of peace, does not recognize the rationality of the empire's rule, and brazenly launches a war to plunder the crystal mine star map. It contains many political shady historical events. The plot design, character characteristics and character relationships draw heavily on Jin Yong. Apart from what Mao Ni said, I think Xu Le resembles Zhang Wuji, Uncle resembles Xie Xun, Shang Qiu resembles Xiao Zhao, and Little Watermelon resembles Guo Xiang. Lipifu, on the other hand, is very extremist. He sees no peaceful coexistence but death for you and me, so he deceives his master and destroys his ancestors, denies his uncle's human choices, and denies George Carlin's reform ideas, dualistic worldview, and vested interests logic by saying that the present is better than before. Li Zaidao is Song Qingshu and Chengkun. Jin Yong was worthy of his master, he studied hard and was good at writing. "The core of federal unfairness lies in the non-disclosure of information. The prohibition of sharing of possession information is the unfair distribution of production materials. Fairness and justice may be illusory, but working towards it is better than being indifferent. Live well and live with peace of mind. The emperor never disappeared, he just changed his clothes. Long-term interests and the overall situation are nothing more than a fig leaf used by certain groups to pursue their own interests. Patriotism is the last refuge of the scoundrel. The law and the media are often just toys in the face of power. If you are not satisfied with life, you should always do what you want to do. In order to seek inner happiness and moral satisfaction, you don't need to compromise too much. I have no faith or worship. I don't believe in this country, I don't believe in religion, I don't believe in God, I don't believe in all man-made formulaic ideas. The so-called freedom is not to do as one pleases, but to be in control of oneself. Even though I am locked in a nut shell, I still think I am the king of infinite space. " People appreciate all kinds of idealistic expressions and critical views, especially when these are gradually no longer allowed. Because it incorporates life experiences, the scale is bold and there is less nonsense. This is Mao Ni's most sincere and best book.

7 points The world is worth it, I give you the moon. It is a very romantic design that can remind people to look at the moon more. There are many moving parts, but unfortunately the story is not focused on conflicts. The story ends unfinished after the master ascends to heaven, making it very painful to read. The battle between heaven and man, which should be magnificent, is all used to focus on the relationship between men and women, which is a waste and a waste. The discussion is at a brain-teaser level with lots of random attacks, which is a pity that Mao Ni has the best setting. (I wrote a lot about bald donkeys who deserve to die, which makes people wonder, was the Mao Ni family defrauded of a lot of money by a monk?) However, it is still a passable romance book. It can be used as a TV series, and it is currently the most successful fantasy novel. Some of the battle scenes are mysterious and gorgeous, and the love sequence of Lord Mo is even more rare and elegant. Some characters in the book are relatively paper-like, and some settings are very biased, such as the squinting Mo Shanzhu and the ancient dragon version of Confucius Zhou Botong. The screenwriters and actors of the drama version have worked hard to turn the imaginary into reality (Jin Lao's experience and blessing, and his ability to laugh and curse freely are so brilliant), and to modify the characters (Qiuguan's style is like a human sage who has educated countless people, with good demeanor and warmth that will not make people feel uncomfortable) He is just a weirdo who fights alone, and he is extremely handsome and has no rules). Filling in various details (General Ma shaking his legs) and a sense of ritual (all kinds of pleasing and precious etiquette of Hou Shan and Lord Mo), many characters have become more vivid and three-dimensional. Even the Gulong-style witty dialogue, which is admittedly difficult to adapt, has a very docile atmosphere, which is extremely rare. There are also some shortcomings in the adaptation, such as the helpless cost saving, crude comedy scenes and noisy passages made to attract low-level audiences. But despite its flaws, it managed to seize the real brilliance of the original book and improve it, creating a collection of beautiful things in the world. I wish I could have teachers like my master, relatives like Yan Se, lovers like Mo Shanshan, and friends like all kinds of idiots behind me. It is a blessing to have people to be obsessed with in life, and you can find a few more as Horcruxes. I hope that as I read, I will never know that I am approaching old age.

6 points Qing Yu Nian comes from Liu Yu Qing in Dream of Red Mansions. To put it simply and crudely, it means to advise you to be kind. The theme is pretty good and the implementation is average. This is a struggle between a shameless man who murders an idealist and a shameless man who avenges the idealist out of personal emotion. Coupled with the complex of patricide and father-seeking, the design is okay, but the writing is not realistic enough. Most of the authors are nagging themselves, and the flesh and blood and soul of the characters are not written. The story is full of jungle laws, trade-offs and conspiracies, and too many black-and-white plots are boring. There are too many insidious means and dirty power, and too little righteousness and human bones. The character believes that he must do whatever it takes to win, that he needs to centralize power to make achievements, that he is worldly and angry, that he must stand firmly in the gray area but still complain, that he is hypocritical and shameless in order to survive. He is not afraid to reveal his hypocrisy, darkness, selfishness, narcissism, extremeness, shamelessness, etc. He is very honest and even complacent. I don't like the "truth" of Mao Ni, and people still have to pursue higher things. However, if you do this in life, you will be attacked by others, but in a book, it is a sacrifice to expose the little evils in your heart to readers, which is a very satisfying thing. The goal of world peace emerges later, and I feel that righteousness is true and can give life meaning. It is the author who carries the character forward rather than the character himself. The description given is insufficient, such as the closeness to Ye Qingmei and the conflict between protecting those around her and No. 1 Is so great that it is difficult to reconcile, and the psychological transformation is unconvincing. But it's always nice to see smart people doing stupid things, especially Chen Pingping, who is supervising the world and chatting away like a teenager, and exposing Emperor Qing's vulgarity and despicability. Who does power serve? Whether it is a public weapon or a private weapon, it is a pity that there has not been more discussion. After reading the two books, Mao Ni is outstanding in a series of techniques from theme design to writing skills. Few online writers can match it. He talks about the growth of desire, value search and choice slowly, and is good at telling stories. Unfortunately, there are always too many pretentious and narcissistic links, the plot is fragmented and the conflict is scattered, and it gradually becomes too slow. What's particularly frustrating is that the plot flow is so fast that you have to express your feelings in a pretentious manner wherever you go, which is very torturous. A dark story that doesn't pretend to be literary and youthful, but a lot of lyrical style, so contrived that it makes you want to roll your eyes. There are too few brilliant passages like the bookworm Miss Sun and the sword-house female cub. Think of Mr. Jin Yong, who is famous for his rich characters and rich plots. The longest novel in the Ming Pao newspaper is only 1.5 Million words long; while Gu Long is good at creating cool characters and exciting plots. The longest novels of Chu Liuxiang and Lu Xiaofeng are only 1.1 Million words. I personally think that even for a large-scale novel, if it exceeds 2 million words, it is suspected of being filled with water. With more than 3 million words, you can imagine the amount of water injected. Of course, there are disadvantages of the money-making model of online articles. Daily reminders are not conducive to creation, and concise writing is not conducive to making money. This book is not bad as a palace battle essay, but average as a ethics essay. It is a failed attempt to treat it as a historical text. It has a weak foundation and lacks details, let alone its depth and elegance. Historical writing requires a high level of knowledge about politics, history, allusions, etc. It doesn't just require reading some thick black and George Carlin. It takes years of study to write it decently. After you get used to it, it's right to turn to fictional fantasy that is more suitable for use.

9 points When modern people travel to ancient times, many of them click on the technology tree, but few of them go this far in ideological transformation. There is a more systematic thinking about settling down and establishing a life, and the plot follows the thoughts and leads to a sense of power. It's just that sometimes I put endless thoughts before the story, and there are too many obscene elements in the early stage. However, the compilation and summary of a large number of personal thoughts along the way hurt the rhythm of the story, but it also has its value and can serve as a mirror. Just like every chapter of One Piece has universal themes and value questions, it has some enlightening significance. It should be said that this kind of sharing itself is value. The advantage is also like One Piece and Nolan's movies. It can combine plot and emotion to set off climax layer by layer. It is a thrilling novel on the dramatic level. Banana has a lot of experience in Japanese comics and nonsense, and he has a good way of being cool, but sometimes the transition of scenes and characters is a bit off-line. This is a disease of the times for most authors. Killing the emperor is brilliant, thundering on the ground, and so high that it is like killing a chicken or dog, which is a sharp contrast, clean and neat, with mixed flavors. In the later period, I focused on refining my writing. The long war drama was written with great tension, especially the more I wrote it, the more I gained a sense of belief. There are not many such works that I like. Progressive thinking can highlight the human spirit when faced with difficult situations. The emergence of thermal weapons of mass destruction like the Tejiang has completely reversed the disadvantages. Such powerful countries rarely survive without collapse. Fortunately, Banana is respected by those who have been eliminated by the times but have faith. The focus is on the awakening of personal consciousness and the indomitable spirit. When the situation changes, the analysis of the psychology and choices of people in different positions is brilliant. It is the progress of the times to understand to a certain extent the outstanding individuals who were generally labeled as traitors of the puppet army in the past, and to understand their growth environment and stance. Respect the individual and victory will feel like victory. The conflicts and contradictions in governance, reform, and social consensus after the conquest of the world are very difficult to write about. They test political skills and historical perspectives, and they are also easy to reconcile. Banana does not have a deep foundation in these aspects, so it is difficult to write these. Moreover, the implementation of a system in ancient times that is difficult to implement even in modern times is doomed to failure. Personally, I think it should be cut off. But Sisyphus is still impressive, let's see how long he can last. "In the end, after almost twenty years, I only have eyes for you..." I remember a reporter asking Li Ruotong how to play an aunt well. She replied: No matter when and where, just keep looking at her. PS. China needs more rational thinking. In the book, Confucianism is regarded as an extremely decadent target because of the needs of the revolution, but in fact it is not the case. China has always been a fake Confucian and a true Legalist. The Emperor of Qin burned books and harassed Confucians, and the Han Wu stole the banner of Confucian benevolence and righteousness to cover up the Legalists' respect for the emperor and his subordinates. Fake benevolence and righteousness on the outside and full of desires on the inside, which is the Confucianism and internal law that has been popular in ancient and modern times. This Confucianism is not Confucianism, but a cynicism forced on you under high pressure. Who said it was Confucianism? Confucius and Mencius were so angry that they died again. The essence of Legalism is not the rule of law, but the leveling of classes and the elevation of monarchy. Under the emperor, everyone is careless, which is a cruel method. Confucianism is based on the principle that the people value the country, the country is inferior to the king, and the virtuous and debased kings are allowed to rule together, or even there is no king. Even Zhu Xi said: After the Qin Dynasty, it was all about respecting the emperor and humble ministers, so later generations refused to change... And the teachings taught by the three kings, Duke of Zhou, and Confucius have not been practiced in the world for a day.

6 points The emotions are delicate and the emotions are well laid out. Jian Suyan's stage image is well promoted and eye-catching. The characters written by Banana are quite palatable, with a bottom line to stick to, three views and logic, and the joys, sorrows and joys of life. The neurotic side is also like the crazy Monkey King in Journey to the West, wielding a knife at the traitor. "I want people to see me but not know who I am. 』 The benefits of being born into the world should be the same. Compared with the King of Killers, it is better to have the name Hidden Kill.

9 points Qidian boasted about creating this stream and that stream, but most people disagreed with it and thought it was exaggerated. The genre of popular novels that have existed for a long time (except for the fan fiction of current popular culture) cannot be called a new genre just by adding more obscenity and time travel. If there is no need to classify it, it should also be called the time-travel trend in these types of novels. Of course, as long as it doesn't go into the scope of popular novels or even literature, it's okay to just talk about it in the context of online articles. But ghost blowing out the lamp may indeed be called tomb robbing style. Tian Xia Ba Sing sorted out the knowledge related to tomb robbing. Under the specific background of the era when the Cultural Revolution ended, reform and opening up, and the masses no longer destroyed 4 old cultural relics, but instead sought personal wealth, it integrated folklore and personal experience and blazed a Chinese-style path of adventure and treasure hunting stories. Unfortunately, the more outstanding part of the novel is the historical human relationships. The specific design of the tomb robbery and treasure hunt is still slightly different from reference works such as Raiders of the Lost Ark. This may be because I have only watched two of them. PS. The "Gui Chuu Deng World View and System" compiled by Snake God's Bone is very exciting. The Ghost Blowing Lantern series can continuously expand its settings while writing good stories, which is a model.

9 points An infatuated, gentle and talented young man fell in love with a female swordsman from an enemy country for the first time in his life. The male protagonist does not stop at the so-called righteous national hatred, and goes away together in a small boat. Unfortunately, there are intact eggs under the overturned nest, and it is difficult to be a human being in troubled times. After endless grief, he finally put aside his little love and inherited his father's legacy to fight for the people. Fortunately, adult fairy tales provide a soothing time. Young people are always charming, innocent, kind and a little crazy, untainted by worldly things and human feelings. He was forced to fight not for the sake of his camp but from his true heart. After the incident, he left a mark and left a mark to mourn for all the dead. This is exciting, just as it is said in the Sky Island Chapter, the pinnacle of romanticism in popular works: The earth has always been there to silently accommodate all things, and it has never been something you and I fight for. The climax of the story is when the Nine Palaces and Bagua troops are deployed to defend Xiangyang against the violent attack of the Mongolian Tatars, which is quite wonderful. The group portraits, emotions, and spectacles are all well written, and the plot is compact and the writing is concise. There are no problems such as water injection, sourness, etc. It is very enjoyable to watch. The characters in the main story are more twisted and there are too many Jin Yong imitation shows, so the viewing experience is not as good as the prequel.

9 points Destiny and love. The first stream of consciousness online novel. A new online version of Westward Journey, a Chinese novel, wrote some of the voices of teenagers at that time and became very popular. After re-reading, the impression is not as good as before, but some parts are still beating people. The battle between Monkey King and Nezha who breaks the bones and restores the flesh is still very exciting. Especially for Nezha, people probably have to pay off all their debts and debts before they can find freedom. This is why He became a rock totem. Line: "I want this sky to be able to cover my eyes no longer, I want this land to be able to bury my heart no longer, I want all living beings to understand my thoughts, I want all the Buddhas to disappear into thin air!" 』

It's a pity that none of the famous books in Misty Jiangnan are at the starting point. Earthly fate 9 points One of the representative works of Xianxia online novels. It is strange, reasonable and sentimental, and full of fairy tale flavor. ------ Blasphemy 9 points One of the representative works of Western Fantasy online novels. Very bold and whimsical. The description of people and the world is relatively in-depth. Longing for love, discovering the narrowness of fate, finding the meaning of life in helplessness, and desperate resistance are the trajectory of everyone. He talked about a lot of bad things, blasphemy in different senses, and that there is no justice in the world, that the essence of power is robbery, that the world is a huge cage, and so on. Love is written very hard and there are many interesting characters, but it's a pity that religion is not written well enough. ------ Demon Hunting Notes 7 points A masterpiece of wasteland web writing. The setting is huge. It is common to write a book that is large but has no content and heart to write about or is not sincere. This book is not a success in its discussion of human nature and bestiality, civilization and plunder. Fortunately, it is sincere and writes a bit of the beating heart and some soft things in the burning world. Good at depicting distinctive characters. The sunny sister Persephone, the dark girl Madeline, the iceberg Helen, the earth-like tolerant Li Gaolei and the willful Li, several characters have left an impression. "There is no heaven, because everyone has desires, and desires are endless. Even if a person's desires can be realized without limit, heaven will become hell." "Although there is no heaven, we can still have faith. The meaning of faith is actually a lighthouse we light for ourselves to move forward in the darkness without losing ourselves. As long as you have faith in your heart, there is heaven at your feet." Got it.

3 points Yue Qianchou puts on the guise of a fairy and writes about the city and the mecha he has always wanted to write about in order to avoid the issue of scale. It's a pity that the plot is opened from the wrong angle, with a lot of small tricks and narration to make up for it. The setting and charm are far different from those of International Idle Man. I'm a little disappointed. I feel like I just jumped into the game without completing the preparation in the early stage. The scene changes are so slow that I really don't want to make money but practice writing. The biggest mistake was that Lin Yuan was too downtrodden. He didn't have the underground king's demeanor like Lin Zixian, and his personality was not cute. It was a bit embarrassing to be placed in the position of being attacked by the heroine. And the main story didn't come out in time. Some readers called me female channel. This is okay, only those with a weak mentality don't like strong women. A strong, mature and feminine girl who is knowledgeable and can give you different levels of beauty. Buy one, get one free, very profitable. The man is more brave and the woman is more resourceful. They are a pair of exes who are weak when separated and invincible when combined. I hope the heroine can break through Qiao Yun Zhiqiu's frame and become a female Taoist master. It is said that Master Dao will also appear in the book, so look forward to it. Although Qin Yi has passed the rank and does not have to study Fang Zhongshu by herself as hard as Qiao Yun, she still has to work harder to overcome the male protagonist's mental defenses. It seems that she cannot succeed without going through nine or eighty-one difficulties. She has a hobby of torturing women. If you want to appreciate women like Gu Long, it would be better if the characters have less relationships and more Stockholm and more fun. Generally speaking, Yue's book is like an old Hong Kong drama with a touch of Gu Long's battle of wits. It is not refined enough in some places, but the story is relatively good-looking, the characters are down-to-earth and individual, and have a human touch.

6 points Classmate Zhang said it was a book that was more in line with his outlook on life. The book did not disappoint, but this guy has learned to shut up as soon as he starts talking, and he really deserves a beating. Yue Qianchou is a special author. Like GAI, he is full of Jianghu flavor and has many qualities that are fascinating to explore. By the time of this book, he is already an excellent storyteller, full of ingenuity, twists and turns, and a series of schemes that make people want to stop. The Infinite Fruit Thief is particularly exciting, and the handling of Bobo is even more impressive. The characters in the novel are also more mature. After all, they have upgraded from a gangster who worships Guan Gong to a dark boss who loves the countryside. In the past, the protagonists in the books were too young and did extreme things. For example, Niu Youde killed a bunch of wine masters (even though they were monsters) on his first trip. In this book, he no longer kills indiscriminately. He has his own principles in doing things. He is good at building momentum and leveraging others. He calms down his anger and becomes more harmonious, and he can also create comedy effects. There is still a sense of joy in acting, and there are many admirable characters who are very martial arts and strong (such as Black Peony and Ximen). He just likes to pretend to be mysterious and make a lot of compliments and want to beat him up. The regret is that the war drama is relatively simple. In the later period, I was tired of adding monthly tickets and the pace gradually slowed down, and sometimes the writing was a little rough. Tickets are productivity, but they are also a waste. PS. It is recommended to learn squid to update on weekends. Giving the reader the initiative to add updates will make it easy to owe more and more, which will be tiring for both parties and is not good for writing. ------------ In addition to Daojun, "International Idle Persons with Beautiful Women", which has the most content and expresses the most expressions but was deleted, is also worth watching. The White Lotus Sect's philosophy of upholding the people's valuing is planting nails everywhere to protect China. Various elements from ancient and modern times, Chinese and foreign, are harmoniously mixed together, making it bold and interesting. Very nice, 6 points for a masterpiece. If you want to know more about Yue Qianchou, please read Xianren.

5 points There is a power struggle when someone is involved, and fairy tales involving human nature or the soul are more valuable to write about. The beginning is a loss for the verbosity of the novel, but the battles are exciting, and the later stage turns to a more Machiavellian alienation. In the end, Miao Yi disappears and only kills like a hemp cow with a cruel mentality change, which is quite brilliant. Power and profit are the most difficult to let go of. Most people drift with the crowd and lose themselves in the pursuit. Only a few people can still be pure and white. The characters have their own characteristics, and many characters (such as Bajie and Zhan Ruyi) are memorable. The sentence "Idiot, is it hard?" Is still fresh in my memory.