Lightning Protection for Own Use

Must be praised? I said that the free chapters were okay, and they were considered sufficient in Red Mansions. But for the subsequent updates, it took almost 3-4 days to write a chapter. I asked him what was going on, and then deleted the post + permanently banned him, even if he asked? Then why do you, the author, come out to write a book, just for fun?

The system says that the protagonist is a waste, but the protagonist doesn't believe it. The system also says that the protagonist's fiancée is Nalan Yanran and is planning to come to break off the engagement, but the protagonist believes it. Here comes the problem. After the fiancée and father-in-law came to visit and exchanged a few polite words, the protagonist jumped out and said that he wanted to break off the engagement and then divorce his wife. What kind of logic is this? It's something that hasn't happened yet, or even something that's not known to be true or false. It hasn't been verified, and the other person didn't say anything. The author's protagonist looks like 🤡

I won't go into the plot points of this book and skip them. Let me talk about the key points that need to be complained about. In a book about practicing and upgrading, the realm grading must be simple and clear. 1 Is 1, 2 is 2. If it is digitized, it will only be simpler and clearer. However, in this book, the realm grading will be laughed to death by colleagues. Let's take the most common mortal cultivation article as an example. Ordinary mortals introduce Qi into their bodies through their spiritual roots. If they succeed, they will reach the first level of Qi training. This can be expressed in data as 1% of the Qi training period. In this book, ordinary people's Qigong practice has become a digital representation of "1% of the foundation building period." The author explained it for a long time. I really didn't understand his brain circuit. He said that when this realm is full, it becomes the foundation building period, so it is reflected in the foundation period. The problem is that you are still practicing Qi. Anyway, I can't understand his explanation. If you are interested, read the author's explanation in the book review section.

I originally thought it would be a genius flow, after all, I started with two spiritual roots, but from the beginning of joining the sect and choosing a force, I madly emphasized that the Danfeng was not good, and the Danfeng was far inferior to others, and the resources were not good, as if I would starve to death after entering the Danfeng. To sum up, no matter what force the protagonist joins, it is the worst anyway. The author thinks it's normal. The problem is that your sect doesn't need to take elixirs anymore, right? You don't want the Foundation Establishment Pill either? Are all the elixirs imported? Do you trust the elixirs produced by others? For example, it is true that the canteen director has a very low level, but have you ever seen canteen employees eating worse food than department directors? Do you want to rebel against Tiangang?

The early writing is really good, a fusion of Tomato Swallowing + Eagle High Martial Arts. It is a rare book in fantasy literature in recent years. It is not only the content of the two books above, but the author actually also wrote his own characteristics. But unfortunately after chapter 400, it seems as if someone else has written it, and all kinds of conflicting plots have been arranged, especially in chapter 438. The supporting character looks down on the protagonist and wants to bet 100 million with the protagonist. Can you believe that this is a plot written in a novel with a 100,000-yuan subscription? It was in this chapter that I said that the plot of Bet was eye-catching, and my review was immediately deleted. If I was dissatisfied, I went to the book review area and posted feedback about the plot of Bet. I am happy to mention it forever. It is true that Qidian officially gives you the right to ban your comments, but if you are banned as long as it is a negative review, then I am just looking for trouble by reading the testimonial version. What is the point of the Qidian book review area?

I have only read Chapter 10, and there are too many problems. He borrowed a lot of the plot of the waiter, but the specious characters have already fallen behind. Borrowing is borrowing, and the same is the same. These are two different things. Someone else writes a three-year contract, and you also write a ten-year contract. If you don't bring some of your own characteristics, it is nothing original. Also, the smoothness of the plot was not saved. When someone drank too much and said, "I want to be Long Aotian, I want to be Zhao Gao," the protagonist would backhand and say, "We don't work together if we have different paths." What's wrong with you? You're picking your feet in embarrassment.

When a 7-year-old opens his mouth, he can read all kinds of classical Chinese allusions, and his tone of voice is like a mature person in his thirties or forties. And with the background of the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms, who at the age of 7 can convince you? In the context of troubled times, there is no golden finger to summon 100% loyal soldiers. It is impossible for a 7-year-old to control the court in the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. Without Zhao Da and Li Er and Zhang San, the generals with military power will listen to your 7-year-old child to guide the country? There are also 320,000 orphans who have become an army. The ideal is very full and the reality is very skinny. Even in a modern industrial society, you know how much it costs to take care of 260,000 children under the age of 10, let alone the background of ancient troubled times. (Comment deleted)

The background story of the simulated world is very good, but the plot and pace are really difficult to describe in one sentence. First of all, Miss Xie is a smart person, but for those words she said in Zhongnan Mountain, did she have double-digit wisdom? He puts the object of his worship on the fire grill and cannot understand the plot. There are also plots after it was released. In the ruined temple on the way to the capital, the literary youth-style chat lasted for 7/8 chapters. I endured skipping three chapters. The protagonist was still in the ruined temple. The released chapter was too watery, so I quit reading it. Summary: "The background of the story is based on the history of the late Song Dynasty and the divine sculpture. Unfortunately, the author's writing style can only be considered below average. There are many minor plot points in the plot, and the chapters after being published are seriously watery." (Delete)

He traveled through time and became Emperor Jianwen who had just ascended the throne. He held 80% of the world's troops and had the magical power of immortality. Then he said that he was a time traveler. He was afraid that he would not be able to defeat Zhu Di, so he surrendered and exiled himself to Siberia. Let's treat him as an individual and have compulsory education for a long time? Crocodile with 6 divine equipment, singles out 2-piece Yasuo, and gives you 10 minions of Yasuo. I don't know how Crocodile can lose.

If you still can't pass the application, just look at the summary, I'm too lazy to change it. Summary: The heroine Zhu Lin is so sweet at the beginning, but she feels vomiting when she goes to the port area later on. She has the same character as Chen Shimei, and even writes more than 260 chapters and still ignores logic to pick up Gong Xue. This is a book that starts high and ends low. (Comment deleted)

This is a family novel with a reward system for giving birth to a child. The first twenty chapters describe the interactions and emotions of family members. The style of painting changes suddenly in Chapters 26 and 27. The younger son completes his apprenticeship in the sect, and the protagonist is kidnapped and sent to mine. The plot is simply explosive. There is no connection between the upper and lower plots. It is just like reading two books. The main plot is about giving birth to a child and surviving on growing up, and then suddenly turns into a ruthless fighting maniac, and also breaks away from the main plot for 4/5 years, mining in an underground mine for 5 years, leaving a bunch of wives and children aside to fend for themselves, an explosion within an explosion. Just like in the previous chapter, the protagonist sends his 5-year-old son to kindergarten, and in the next chapter, the protagonist is killing people in the Colosseum. The plot must connect the previous and the next. Even if there is a sudden change, there must be a foreshadowing, otherwise it will be split into two books. (Comment deleted)

The first plot of the high court in this book was written in a mess by the author. The protagonist is a policeman who wants to be promoted based on the Mumbai hotel incident as his political capital. However, he failed to design a rescue route in the hotel and had no weapons and equipment. He took two Karami boys to eat melon at the door. He was targeted by gunmen and then fought back. It was forced to self-defense. The counterattack weapon was the 18-wire retired revolver that the boy carried with him. Promotional capital is that simple? ? ? The writing is worse than a lump of curry. When the soul travels into the third brother, it also comes with the third brother's character?

The concept of this book is probably based on Yulong Feidu's "I Cast Immortality with Tao Seed". In order to avoid being accused, many settings have been changed, and the world background is also different. It can be said that there are two books, but the main concept should not be different from the general setting. It's a pity that the author's world view and writing power are not enough, and the writing is simply a mess. In order to suppress the protagonist's strength, various restrictions and deliberate arrangements of conflicts are still in the academy until it is released. This is similar to Tomato's Cangyuan Tu. It first writes about the process of improving strength, but the same problem is that the author's writing power is not enough, and the written plot smells like a useless fantasy novel, pretending to slap the face and deliberately ridiculing it. This has fallen into the inferior category among online articles in 2024. Summary: "Following the trend of works, but having my own ideas, it's a pity that I can't write a smooth plot. The author should have written a fantasy novel about waste material before, and it must be at least several million words. He can't get rid of the habit of writing waste material." [Delete comment]

We know that there are warriors in this world. To practice martial arts, you need to eat meat and take medicine. Anyway, you need resources. Then, after hunting a black bear, you want to sell bear bile. The reason is lack of money. The black bear's meat has been sold for more than 90 taels. Are you telling me that I am still short of money? Later, they will sell black panthers and ginseng, but the main thing is that they are careless? When the price of meat was low, you sold wild beast meat vigorously, and you were just an ordinary villager in your past, selling millions of goods a day. Do you understand that you can hold gold in the market? ? ?

Comparable to Demon Monk Hua Wuque, I have written 4/5 books before and finished the whole book. Moreover, I have been missing for several months before issuing a statement saying that I am done with it. Previously it was called "Xiao Shichu", but later it was called "Morning and Dusk Wanli". Even if his grades are good, he will cut it. As long as the plot is slightly stuck, he will not want to write it and will just disappear. It is purely to harvest the readers for a long time. After finishing the book, whoever reads the book will be afraid.

It's the same routine as a certain book of praise. At the beginning, it is repeatedly emphasized that the auxiliary profession is a sewer, and the auxiliary profession is a drag, just to pave the way for being ridiculed later, a fighting-style renaissance.

After a lot of hard work, he won the first place in the entire server, and the system rewarded two highest-level items. However, the author desperately weakened the mythical rewards, and seemed not to give them. (Myth/Legend/Epic/Uncommon/Rare/Common) The first myth: Increase building defense by 100%. The second myth: A library is added to the territory, and its specific properties are unknown. Let's talk about the first myth first. Doubling the building's defense is good, but it's not a myth. It's barely considered a legend. Strictly speaking, it can be classified as an epic. Moreover, your legion war treasure in the next chapter can ignore all defenses, and this legion treasure is only legendary. How come myths can't compare to legends? If you add another building to double the attack, it won't be worth the level of myth. The second myth is to add a library. However, the author did not say what specific bonus attributes it has. He only mentioned one sentence about recording the humanities and history of the territory, and then adding bonuses to the characteristics of the territory. So what is this? Mythical A4 paper? I know you, the author, will mention this library later, but if you got a mythical reward in the early stage, it's as if it didn't exist. If you want to suppress the protagonist, why should you give a mythical level reward? Just give a rare one in a lottery. Summary: It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw away. (Permanently promoted in one hour after sending out, 666, decisively included in the book list)

A typical example of this book list. First, let's talk about my next-door neighbor who is also an old spell master. He can draw only 1/2 pictures a month and it's amazing. Then the protagonist practiced his Qi and set up a stall in the market every day to sell amulets, dozens of them at a time, and then sell them again in the same place a few days later. For several months, everyone in that street knew about it, but no one suspected it. For a person who is at the first level of Qi training, no one else doubts how he got the charm, and the author has no explanation. He sells it for dozens or hundreds of spiritual stones at a time, with the word "fat sheep" written on his forehead. It's like your monthly salary is 5,000, but you go to a fixed stall every month to sell Apple mobile phones, dozens or hundreds of units at a time, and there is no purchase record. Treating everyone else as Shazai. Also, haven't you learned the story about this kid holding gold through the market? Long-term compulsory education? ? ?

The author uses sensational words to write the plot, which is called "bloody", but in fact there is no progress in the doomsday plot. For example, in Chapters 8 and 9, the villain blocks the road and screams crazily, repeated over and over again. It is such a small thing, and I wrote 4000/5000 words. The details are as follows: "If I don't leave, hit me if you can," the villain said. "Go away quickly, or I'll beat you to death," Commander Justice said. "Boss, they seem to be serious," the villain brother said. "What are you afraid of? I'm a foreigner," the villain said. "The boss is mighty, the boss is domineering", the villain's younger brother looked adoring. "First warning" Commander Justice said. "I am a foreigner, you will never dare," the villain said. Don't say that I described it randomly, the author just wrote this kind of wordless plot. What's written next is a complete retelling of a country's greatness and its past sacrifices, and then uses the perspective of the sacrificed personnel to describe past deeds, so you will be excited to read them. This type of book has a small starting point, but there are many out there. To sum up, this book will end at the beginning of the end. He can write 300/500,000 words of foreshadowing the plot, but then, he has nothing to follow up, so forcing it to continue is just a waste of time. (Additional author control. Originally I was not planning to include it in the book list, nor did I write so many reviews. I only wrote about 50/60 words of reviews at the beginning, and then they were gone the next day, and they have been banned until 2073, so let's add them to the list)

The problem in Chapter 22 is that the protagonist is walking halfway and encounters two people fighting together. There is a fellow disciple among them. He wants to use the protagonist as a backup, that is, a scapegoat, and deliberately shouts for the protagonist to help. The protagonist is forced to kill the other person and generously lets the fellow disciple go. What if you don't have a golden finger? Being dragged as a scapegoat, the grass on the grave is three meters high. Nowadays, online articles use the concept of not taking the initiative to cause trouble and not letting a villain go to describe the character. How come you have become so lax?