Deduction of Ten Thousand Dharmas: from a Rickshaw Driver to a Great Dao King

The realm is too chaotic. The previous realm has been 100% completed. The next one has already started, which means that it has entered the next realm. It is just the early stage. The author is still describing the previous realm. It is so chaotic. The author is still unrepentant. This is the first time after reading so many books that he has slipped away.

I can't see what Liu Dongchuan is good for the protagonist. If the protagonist is not a high-level warrior who has saved Liu's life and helped the Liu family many times, and he is considered a noble member of the Liu family, they will definitely try their best to please the protagonist and the whole family will join him. The reality is that if you have a thigh, everyone can stick to it, let alone the Liu family's kindness to the protagonist. The protagonist left Dinghaiwei and asked them to follow him. If they didn't leave, the protagonist would be completely benevolent. There is no need to add drama to the supporting characters and their family in order to advance the plot, making it seem like the Liu family is very kind to the protagonist. It's disgusting to watch

The novel is well written, but the author is too stubborn and the setting of the martial arts realm is too weird. The realm has been broken through, and it is called the Great Success of the previous realm. I don't know how many people have been discouraged by this setting. I have also read the novels written by the author before, and they did not have this kind of setting. I don't know if it is a brain cramp this time, or what, but it is so exciting. I guess it depends on this setting. The more I look at it, the more awkward it becomes, and the more I look at it, the more angry it becomes.

In the early stage, martial arts were divided into four realms, namely, skin grinding and muscle strengthening, tendon stretching and bone pulling, Qi strengthening the lungs, and blood exchange and marrow cleansing. If it is normal and easy to understand, the data displayed when entering the first level of skin-building muscle building is skin-building muscle building (5%), which shows that you are in the first level and how much more progress you have made. Is the author doing muscle-strengthening (100%) or bone-stretching (1%)? Does it mean you have just entered the first level? For a person who has just entered level 1, I would liken his numerical value to be 1. For ordinary people, it is about 0.6, Which is a relatively fast process. There is no need for a detailed process at all. Well, the author's mirror world is to reduce the data of an ordinary person to zero. Moreover, the protagonist's physical condition is lower than zero at the beginning. In general, it takes more than 50 chapters to understand (understand)

In fact, you can watch it, but the description of the realm is a bit stupid, which makes many people confused. . .

The front is okay, but I haven't read the back yet. In such troubled times with high martial arts value, it is destined to be a tragedy if we have to write an emotional drama about Bai Erya. She is an ordinary person. How to write her plot later? If she is not dead and there is no plot that she can participate in, let her practice martial arts? Force. Death is the best way to write it, but it's better not to write it. It seems like a cool article, but it's my personal opinion.

I read more than a hundred pictures of this book, and what I came out of is the protagonist pulling a cart for a woman. Not long after he started practicing martial arts, the woman ran away. The protagonist escorted the girl to another city. He wrote dozens of pictures on the way. He kept running away and killed people, and then continued to run away. The protagonist sold himself in troubled times, so we couldn't write about the protagonist developing his power and slowly growing and spreading to the surrounding areas. The result is a plot in which the protagonist in troubled times takes a few trolls to fight alone, either chasing or running away. There are more than a hundred pictures like this.

The proficiency of Wuqinquan in the first few pictures was written too loosely. It was more than 30 at the beginning, and it was more than 80 after three days. One practice is only 2 points. According to your writing method, it can be up to 2 to 3 times a day, which means that the maximum proficiency point is 6 points in a day. No matter how you calculate, it is impossible to reach 88 proficiency in 3 days. This kind of golden finger must be set off by time. If the time is written too short and things are arranged too densely, it will collapse. It is recommended to extend the time a little longer and write the data more rigorously.

How to say it? This story is quite interesting, the writing is okay, it's pretty good, it has that feeling, but what I can't figure out is why the writing in this realm is so rubbish? The writing error is too obvious. I won't even say anything about the typo. I may not even notice it, but the writing in this realm is too obvious and makes people feel awkward. I rarely read the comment area when reading books, but because of your level, I went to this comment area specifically to find the answer, so I only give you three points.

There are too few updates, and reading two chapters a day is not enough. When I read Chapter 138, Brother Xie's men were basically useless. Idiot trash. And that Third Brother Xie is also a trash man who created such a huge industry. Is it possible that his subordinates are so superficial? He was ambushed and his property was burned, which only proves that the so-called Third Brother Xie is not qualified to be an opponent of those forces. A strong general has no weak soldiers. Just look at the few crappy things under his command. He needs brains but no brains, and he needs force but no force. Since he has huge resources, why he has not formed a complete organization shows that he is also a waste. Look at how superficial his subordinates are. Why are you so happy when others send you a few invitations to greet you but you can't find them? Just a piece of tattered paper and a piece of waste paper. And for all the achievements and the counterattack can be successful, victory is not the ability of you people, but Wu Liangchen alone can turn the tide. A very good novel. From reading this, I feel that this book lacks a normal logic. Can a person who can create such a big industry have so many idiots under him? I can't imagine how such a large industry was established, how it operates, and how it survives? There are such a group of wastes who don't know how such a huge organization can survive in a complex environment? Can't understand.