1977: Daughter King at the Beginning of the Blind Date

From the protagonist's thoughts to the readers, the article is full of petty bourgeoisie. The article really attracts the same people.

Let's talk about the overall story first. The main plot looks really good. It starts with the original protagonist returning from the countryside, and then the protagonist is reborn after 1990 (but it also means that the protagonist has never experienced the previous period at any time). He rises step by step with goals and plans. You can say that this is the innate advantage brought to the protagonist after rebirth. After all, you know the future. And the overall main plot is really good, otherwise it wouldn't be so toxic that I would spend money while complaining... 1. Poisonous point, the identity after rebirth can determine the future, and you who have not experienced that period can handle it with care, but you are not qualified to stand on the so-called moral high ground and point out this and that. This is purely mixed with personal opinions and looking down on certain people (currently Tian Zhuangzhuang, Jet Li, etc.) 2 Poisonous points, laymen give advice to experts. Your advantage after rebirth is to know the general trend, rather than being proficient in everything. To put it bluntly, talking on paper is fine, but some industries really ask you to do it, even if you are reborn, you cannot do it. (As for the number of books published, I didn't even look at the specific book publishing issues that year, so I just gave some advice to professionals) 3 It's a bit awkward. I don't know if it's a foreshadowing or something. The sister and the uncle with a foreign surname all appeared later. They were not explained clearly in the early stage. Going to the Northeast to find my sister to take the college entrance examination is very awkward. I didn't expect that there would be a follow-up. The sister went back to pretend again... These two paragraphs have nothing to do with the main plot. The uncle with a foreign surname, the special forces operations, and martial arts (it seems that if urban literature does not write about this, it will not write about it)... These have nothing to do with the main plot and are very embarrassing. There is no mention of poison, but they lowered the rating of the entire book. Overall, the main trunk is growing vigorously, and most of the branches are acceptable, but too many branches will cause water injection and cause some poisonous spots. Without these at least I would give it five points.

According to circulation data in the late 1970s and early 1980s, "Practice is the Only Criterion for Testing Truth" (edited by the Institute of Philosophy, Chinese Academy of Social Sciences) published by Xinhua Publishing House in July 1979 had a circulation of 5 million copies. Three books by Zhang Haidi published by China Youth Publishing House in 1983: "The Shining Life Path - Zhang Haidi's Deeds" have a circulation of 5.09 Million copies, "The Shining Life Path (Sequel)" has a circulation of 500,000 copies, and "Selected Letters and Diaries of Zhang Haidi" have a circulation of 860,000 copies. The February 1979 edition of Sanlian Bookstore's "A Journey to the West" published 1.42 Million copies. During this period, the Commercial Press published 500,000 copies of Ci Yuan (1-4). The three-volume "Li Zicheng" published by China Youth Publishing House has a circulation of 2.3 Million copies since the first volume in 1963, and a circulation of 1.87 Million copies of the second volume published in 1975. In terms of children's books, in the 1970s and 1980s, China Children's Publishing House's "Sanmao Wandering" (1978.5) Issued 1.62 Million copies. The nine volumes of "One Hundred Thousand Whys" published by Shanghai Children's Publishing House in 1980, including physics, chemistry, and astronomy, all sold more than one million copies. "Up and Down Five Thousand Years", "World Five Thousand Years", "Reading Pictures" and "Andersen's Fairy Tales" all exceeded 500,000 copies. So in your eyes, you are omnipotent because of your time travel, and are you just pretending to be an expert? Also, I don't object to you complaining about Jet Li, but there's no need for you to always stand tall and point fingers.

It's okay in the front, but the protagonist in the back is too good at pretending, and his description is the same as Liu Xiahui's. If you don't accept beautiful celebrities, don't write about them. If you don't accept them, you'll be disrespectful to others and make you depressed.

It was a failure to make Li Changhe's identity too complicated. He could just have a Hong Kong household registration. Anyone who is Chinese in Europe and the United States would be on guard against it. There is also no need to push the female king in the direction of film and television, Zhu Lin is not a strong career person.

It's a novel that starts high but ends low. It's amazing in the early stage but boring in the later stage. Business affairs are messy and disorganized. Emotionally, he actively pushed his wife into the entertainment industry and was separated for a long time. After seeing Madonna, he set up a company specifically to serve her. Is this a normal thinking? Completely disregarding the training and chance opportunities a person needs to go through to grow.

For the protagonist, it's better not to open a company. The silver financial war is okay. What about opening a movie company, acquiring Italian companies and real estate? , You don't build a team yourself, you don't do background work, and you still don't change what Yugang Pao told you several times. Is the film company owned by the protagonist or Wang Jing? Your personnel structure has nothing, it's just an empty shell. You haven't met Wang Jing. Later, you gave up Hong Kong Film? , The assistant Bao Yugang sent to you doesn't know how to use it, doesn't connect the background and memory of the general environment, and doesn't change even after several losses? , It would be even more poisonous to buy that luxury product, oh, as much as they say? , I didn't write anything about the company's situation, who was sent to talk about it? , Your acquisition can be completed in just a few sentences, Land is like a fool, you can rest assured that the Chase people you found are still doing other businesses, understand, you only have 1.5 Billion US dollars, which is more than 80 Hong Kong dollars, if you buy Land, write it down, just leave it to others. If you can't write it and start a company, go back and write about entertainment.

The protagonist returns to the hotel, and it happens that Rosamund Kwan asks his father to take her to the hotel to experience things. He happens to be hit by your driver, and he happens to have contact with you... How did you come up with such a bloody plot?

The net is cast a bit too wide, can't we focus on one area? I'm afraid that the more I write in the future, the more general it becomes, and it won't be enough for life.

I remember that only children don't have to go to the countryside. Could the author pay attention to some details?