
The Legend of the Demon Twins
天魔双子传
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 31k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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12Chapters
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My senior is really a role model in the world of coding. If the books I pursue can have one-tenth of the enlightenment of my senior, I will be satisfied.
Is it dark text? I don't want it to be too dark, I just want a... Type where the protagonists (two) can sell everything for their lives (to save their lives). It doesn't matter if the others are black or not (I haven't watched it yet, I hope it's what I imagined 🤫)
The text really needs to be refined. It would be better to add some real dialogue. You describe the grand scene down to the micro level, which is a bit overwhelming. You use dialogue to enhance the environment.
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I saw the advertisement and came over to take a look, so let me say something by the way.
1. Introduction. The meaning of the first paragraph is that the earth's sects are divided into good and evil. The enemies of the right path are not only the evil path, but also enemies outside the earth. The second paragraph talks about the sects of the righteous path, and the third paragraph talks about the twins, which refers to the two brothers. Does the author find these things attractive? How many years has it been since I read novels... 2. After reading the first three chapters, large sections of narratives are stacked together like haystacks, with messy background introductions, and scenes of pregnancy and childbirth without any sense of crisis. It does not show the cruelty of the struggle between earthlings and demons, and alien creatures at all... It can only be said to be a pity... To be honest, at this point, I can't hold on anymore. . . . 3. Personally, I think it is very necessary to name the devil (the devil) at the beginning of the chapter, or the son of the devil is born, there is a vision in the sky, the good and the devil are fighting each other, the fate of the two children is very interesting... Who cares about the parents of the devil...
The issue of time in the explanation book should be separated from the main text. If it cannot be divided into chapters, dividing lines and spaces should look more comfortable than a bunch of characters. Please change the cover quickly. To be honest, it looks too dated. 🔨
For books written in 2006, your update pace is better than Jiangnan...
Meng Xin came to visit the boss with a new book called "Looking for Flowers". She shamelessly occupied the first floor. People who don't like cool articles can save it. Thank you!
The same fairy tale [Ask if there is a fairy] is currently being serialized.
I'd like to borrow Dabao Land for use, and I hope all readers would do me a favor and go over and take a look!
I heard that a book that hasn't been updated in thirteen years has been resurrected. Come and take a look. I wish the author the best as he writes more and more books.
It's a bit cruel. I give the author a thumbs up for persisting in this dream for more than ten years. I hope you continue to persevere. I wish you will get better and better as you write.
Thirteen years of obsession. I'm curious how many of my original book friends are still there. By the way, author, don't you plan to reset the previous chapters? The setting is grand, but the description is real. . . Sorry for 13 years of obsession
This can all be dug out, it's a bit cowhide
Haven't watched it for a while, eunuch?