Sword Girl

After watching it, I had a lot of emotions and a lot of pitfalls, and some moments were confusing, but the plot is still good 😁

I don't know how many people came here after seeing the cover and raised their paws.

I kept it, and after I finished it, I didn't want to look at it anymore.

I watched it when I was in junior high school. I remember that the female protagonist was quite outrageous at the time. The relationship between the male protagonist and her was pretty good and she almost became RBQ. However, the female protagonist's body was cut off by another man.

Damn, this book was actually released. Ye Qing returned to his home.

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To be honest, I am not qualified to comment as I have read piracy, but when I saw that the author started to prevent piracy, I started to wonder why the subscription dropped. Don't you have any idea why the subscription dropped? After the 150th chapter, the fluency of the writing began to decline so seriously. The plot changed from the original compactness to a watery one and a running account, especially in the mine. Are you a humanoid self-propelled cannon? How about bringing some snacks? The protagonist has such a strict character at the beginning, but why don't you turn off the computer for me later? As mentioned in the previous article, you didn't finish the entire guide after posting it on the same day? In less than 20 chapters, the character's personality starts to change crazily? Change it every ten chapters?

It's so rubbish. There are so many characters and so little plot. It's hard to distinguish between the main and branch plots. I've completely forgotten the attributes of the accompanying swords with so many characters. I've forgotten all the settings for the supporting characters.

This book is really poisonous, really.

1. What is the grudge between the Liunian family and Yixianjian? Was the relationship between the Liunian family and Yixianjian reconciled later? 2. At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist's family left behind three sets of swordsmanship, except for the Xuantian Nine Swords and the Qinglian Three Swords? 3. Who is the Qinglian Sword Immortal? He appeared in Chapter 370 and then disappeared? 4. Did the Canglan Waves Sect give the protagonist the sword formation diagram? 5. Who is the mayor of Free City? Is he Mr. Saitama? 6. Who are the ancestors of the Gu family, why is it called Huaguoshan Gujia, and who left behind the swordsmanship? 7. If the protagonist did not go back to the past and meet Yi Qing, why would the three Egyptian gods know the protagonist? 8. In real history, how did Yi Qing solve the problem between her and the male personality, and how did she reconnect the broken Abi Sword of Yuantu? 9. Why did Yi Qing say that he felt sorry for the protagonist? 10. What is going on with Sword Emperor Allah? If Allah is the leader of Tongtian Cult, where did Sword Emperor Allah's sword come from? What happened to the red sperm in Chapter 11.532? What is the dimensional list he is talking about? 12. In the early stage, what did Yuan Kou mean when he said that there is a backstage but not a backstage? If there is a backstage, there is no need to fight for life and death, but without a backstage, the situation is precarious? 13. What is the relationship between Lucifer Cain and Lucifer Cain? 14. How can starting point evolve into the Emperor Sword and what are the conditions? 15. In an encounter in the Infernal Corridor, why did Sento Isuzu call the protagonist Master? 16. What is the major event planned by Black Palace Sword Spirit and others, and what is its relationship with the protagonist? 17. Gu Xuanwu is the son of the protagonist and Yi Qingping. Both of them are human beings. Why does she have a half-human, half-Yuankou physique? 18. What happened to the conspiracy in Yanjing City? Who gave Ju Luren the Internet tools? Why did the Tianhen Sword Immortal swallow the godhead? Why did he steal the Sword Girl? Why did the stolen Sword Girl end up in the Hall of Valor? 19. Who tricked Isis during the trial, and her temperament changed drastically? 20. Who is the Sword of Death, why does she know so much, and why is she so devoted to the protagonist? 21. Why is Ashima a mixed race, and what is her relationship with Sento Isuzu? 22. What is the significance of the appearance of Yanhong Sword Fairy Liu Qingmei, and why does she say that Gu Xuanwu is her lover? 23. How did a six-year-old boy turn into the Monkey King? 24. Who are the people behind each in the conversation between the Dragon and Lion Sword Emperor and the Haotian Sword Emperor? 25. How does Hongyu perform human operations as a sword girl? 26. Where did the apprentice named Liu Yunyue that the protagonist took in when he returned to Yuzhang go after being taken away in a bag, and who are her ancestors? 27. Who established the organization mentioned by Wu Zhang Shi Fang? 28. How did the protagonist return to the prehistoric period? 29. How did Qingping disappear? How did the protagonist come back to life in Chapter 1572? Why was the daughter of the poor protagonist mentioned? 30. Where did the sword energy that assisted Tongtian come from when he fought against the Five Saints? That's all for now, welcome to add. The book is already finished and these holes cannot be filled in. I hope the author will have time to write two extra chapters or something to fill them in a little bit. I also advise the author not to dig holes in the timeline. Generally, the author does not have enough writing skills to fill in the holes. If not filled in well, it will be a mess.

Everyone can see that it is borrowed from Kan Niang. It is at least more creative than directly borrowing doctrines, but what the hell is the plot of killing Sword Ancestor at the beginning? If Sword Ancestor changed gender, this kind of plot would definitely put this book out of business! Don't tell me that it's a game and it's data, so it doesn't matter. Inappropriate novels will still be criticized. There are some things that the supporting characters can do and the villain can do, but the protagonist can't do, because he is the protagonist! There is nothing wrong with writing novel ideas, but no matter what the reason is, writing this kind of plot, especially at the beginning, is a very wrong move, and it will immediately turn off many potential readers who can't stand it. I really want to ask why this is the case, but I don't want to know the answer, because the author has already written it like this, so I can only feel sorry for it. If the author wanted to impress people, he succeeded, but unfortunately it was not a bright spot, but a dark spot. I feel really sorry

The first time I read it was in 2017 when it was free at the starting point. It was also my introduction to domestic second-level literature. Then I stopped reading in 2019 and found out that there were only pirated versions. I read both Sword Girl and Ship Girl in one summer vacation. Both books were very interesting in the early stages, but the latter part was really shocking, crashing and poisonous. I still remember those poisonous points and plots. For example, in this book, Saber misunderstood the male protagonist, and the girl who likes the hero in Ship Girl married the villain. Especially the ending of Ship Girl was still unclear.

I saw a video recommending the author's new work on station b. When I came in, I saw that it was the author of Sword Girl. I remember reading it when I was in high school. Later, the book was blocked and I thought the author stopped writing it. Only today did I find out that the author is still there.

Author, I find it hard to read what you wrote. Nowadays, people are obsessed with mysophobia. If you write like this, you will only be a third-rate author for the rest of your life. The plot arrangement is too messy. After reading so many people's comments, don't you feel that there is something wrong with you? Forget it, I have to find a good book to dilute this feeling

Why! This book is the only one that I have ever read from genuine to pirated and then from pirated to abandoned!

Believe me, just read the first part of this book. Whoever watches the ending will die. Even the bad ending is not enough to describe it.

Such an old book, I really liked it back then...

Kids, I'm back

One was Medusa who petrified Gu Han and then sent Gu Han for treatment. The other was rescued by the medical warehouse of the swordsman from the Yuzhang Sword Committee who rushed to Meishan. It is impossible that Liu Nian Lin or someone from the Liu Nian family happened to come to see Gu Han and saved him, or that King Arthur happened to be nearby and saved Gu Han.

It's uncomfortable to see all kinds of data errors. Inexplicably, the main character's actual sword value changed from 1100 to 2100. The blue sword value oral solution was set to add 200 sword value, and then it changed to purple and added 200. The author himself doesn't remember his settings. The data is calculated randomly. Can you be more rigorous?

I've played it three times in three years, and I feel so good every time I see the ending filling in the pits.

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I first read it in 2017-2018, and I haven't finished it yet. Reading it now, I still feel it's a bit confusing. After all, aesthetics and public preferences and standards are also changing, but it was definitely a good book at the time. In the first half of the year, I read the author's book about writing novels, and then I remembered that he had written "Sword Girl", so I came back to read it. The plots of the two books seemed to me to be weird at my current level. In fact, it was mainly because I felt that the author was paranoid and then imposed it on the protagonist. In "Very Healthy", the protagonist's paranoia about history is very shocking. Many of them are not in line with the environment and times at that time, but the protagonist must stick to history in an abstract way. In "Sword Girl" The character of the protagonist is distorted by reading about it, and from the current perspective, the counter-intuitive operations used to push the protagonist of the plot are a bit depressing. For example, forcibly suppressing Medusa's godhood and causing her to self-destruct and then reveal a boss is too abstract. However, this kind of book can only survive by brushing aside and having a decent story. Generally speaking, it is still readable. Five or six years ago, it would have been considered a high-quality product.

I couldn't hold on until I saw the paid chapters. . .

It's so beautiful and sounds so good. Five-star praise. I have voted for three monthly votes before.

The subject matter is indeed good, but it's a pity that the author's writing is poor and there are quite a lot of flaws.

I read this book last probably a year ago, and it seems to be roughly divided into several parts: 1. Become a sword wielder. The main plot is in the game 2. Inheriting the inheritance of Zhetian 3. The Battle of Yuzhang, outside the game 4. Saving the King of Yue 5. Suppressing the Wu Clan 6. Conquering the world 7. Infinite Corridor 8. Eliminate Jie Jiao In fact, the setting of Yuan Kou almost collapsed from the third part. By the time the Twelve Ancestral Witches began to directly become the prehistoric trend, it cannot be said to be a failure. At least it was much more interesting than the Yuzhang battle. It seems that the biggest problem today is that there are too many poisonous points and too many useless plots. The least advantage is that the male protagonist's third-level swordsman Gu Baoming is okay except for the sculpting and plot of the passing water. The Five Swords and the Sword of Victory of Honghuang Ryu are more unremarkable. Liu Nian Rin, Lucifer, and Saber each have their own merits. Liu Nian Rin is good in the first half, but not in the latter part. Lucifer is always submissive to the male protagonist, and Saber has little relationship with the male protagonist. Yi Qing's settings are also very confusing. However, the two settings of Pacifier and Hongjun Sword Emperor are still very interesting. Overall, I give it a 7/10 score, but it is really too poisonous.

After reading novels for many years, I finally found that many subjects were banned, and there were a lot of them. As a result, the novel industry is now in a state of drought. I basically can't get enough to write novels at the beginning. Nowadays, many novels are completely based on the same routine. I basically just change a few names, change the title and protagonist. It really seems that many places are completely borrowed from others, and none of them are really readable. It didn't take long for me to come up with a routine and it was borrowed by a lot of people. Now, games are almost banned and thrown away. There are no really good games. Those who have the ability to make good games can only make some online games that are not good enough to make back their money. Animation is similar. Many are suppressed and cannot make back their money. They are obviously about the same as outside. It can be said that many aspects have never been better or worse. They are completely erudite. In comparison, their overall strength is okay. Others...

I was attracted by the name Jian Niang. I have read many Kan Niang novels, but this was the first time I saw Jian Niang. At first, I thought that the so-called sword girl was just a new skin of the ship girl. After reading it all, I realized that it was not just a simple skin change. Not to mention the difference in world view, the character rules of Sword Girl and Ship Girl are two completely different systems. The two systems have similarities, such as the transformation of ships (swords); but they also have differences. For example, Ship Girl relies on large-scale construction, while Sword Girl relies on synchronization and coordination. In fact, there is no comparison between the two. With the richness of animation and games, Kanmu naturally crushes this novel by more than a dozen streets, but this does not prevent me from seeing some innovative things in the novel. Saw some interesting sword girls. But now, there are more than a dozen sword girls on the scene, but except for the Yue Wang Sword and the Poverty Sword, no other impressive sword girls have been described. The author himself has spent less time on it than you. I hope it can be improved. I hope to see more sword girls with their own characteristics appearing, rather than a single tsundere or three-no attributes. Finally, I want to ask, is the Qingpong Sword actually the Qingping Sword?