
The Story of Fallen
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- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 233k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 10y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
0Monthly votes
846Recommends
42Fans
91Chapters
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Reader comments
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[Comment] As always, give 17 votes to support and collect the reward
As always, throw in 17 votes to support and collect the reward
[Comment] Good books must be praised
Definitely worth watching, it made me, a grown man, burst into tears. Great book! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! From now on, 5 votes will be given every day, if I come.
[Comment]Support good books
Your novel is very fascinating. I couldn't help but add it to my favorites and recommend it. Although I don't have many votes, I like your work very much and will recommend it to my friends. It's a very good book. It's very well written. I like it very much. I will keep reading it and recommend and support you! Come on! Come on! PS: I will firmly vote for you every day and try my best to support you and help you succeed!
[Comment]Support!
This is really a good book, with twists and turns in the plot, ups and downs of the story, delicate writing, and novel ideas. It makes people read it again and again, and can't put it down! Please cum for me! Thank you! ! !
[Comment] The article is very novel
It's a very attractive plot. In today's world where there are so many works, I'm really happy to see such a work... I hope the author will continue to work hard, develop his own style, improve his writing skills, stick to his own writing path, and don't ignore quality for the sake of quantity... I agree: quality comes first! Dear readers! ..
[Comment] Just vote later. Not posting. Too tired.
😄😁Just vote from now on. Not posting. Too tired. If convenient. Essence.
[Comment] This is a wonderful book, the author is very imaginative!
This is a wonderful book, the author is very imaginative!
[Comment] Collected, clicked, recommendation vote +12
Collected, clicked, recommended vote +12
[Comment]Support
Well written! The writing is vivid and the plot is fascinating. It is a rare masterpiece. I recommend it.
[Comment] There are two types of fairy tale books, one is about money and the other is about dreams.
The so-called looking at money is a commercial novel, while the so-called looking at dreams is either wild and unconstrained, beautiful or moving, or moving forward steadily. There are countless novels written by Diandian every day. There are too many for people to choose from, but there are too few that can really make people read. It seems that the great masters are all following the same routine. The books of Diandian and the more outstanding new books all follow the deviant approach and do not follow the ordinary path. To write a book, you must be able to withstand loneliness. Diandian writes countless books every day. Alas, too many of them end in vain. How many people fail because of three minutes of heat and lack of persistence. And this book, "Luo Chuang Ji", is one of the few good new books I have read recently. Actually, I want to ask first, will you stop updating? Are you a eunuch or a bad guy? I'm a little worried. Your updates are unbearable to watch. They are a bit too slow. Actually, it's not that the updates are bad. The main reason is that the number of words is too small. We all like to read more in one go. Overall, the main character Yun Fei doesn't have many very touching and large-scale actions yet, but the anticipation is already overwhelming and there are enough pitfalls. The most important thing is that in this book, whether it is a pig's foot or a supporting role, the characters have a good sense of immersion. To be precise, it has a sense of reality and pictures. Of course, Wu Hui is the first highlight at the beginning. The first character is very good and very curious to watch. Having said that, I would like to add that the main reason is that the author's writing style is very good, frivolous, interesting, down-to-earth, and has a strong sense of empathy, so it makes people feel comfortable. The protagonist's personal pace is a little slow, but it is understandable that this type of book is really not an ordinary book about fighting, nor is it an ordinary book about talking about love and romance. This kind of book is a book in which every character is a "pig's foot" in a general environment. Each character will have more characterizations to make it fuller, richer and three-dimensional. In this book, some of the supporting characters are given a certain amount of analysis and description, which is a bit more than other books, so it makes them feel more realistic to me. On the whole, this book is very appetizing. The opening chapter directly points out the main plot of the early stage, and quickly creates conflicts. The climax point appears, and then uses powerful plots to keep the rhythm within a very exciting range. I have to say that the author's writing skills are also very good. Whether it is the control of the rhythm or the advancement of the plot, it is all told in a eloquent and step-by-step manner, without the criticisms of other novels, such as the plot that makes people feel that it is too distracting. Then there is the writing style. Your writing style is really good, simple, clean and delicate. When readers read a book, they not only experience the story, the emotions of the pig's feet, etc., But they can also feel the author's emotions and the author's thinking. The book is like the person, sincere, and you can feel the great care in every word, and every place is well described. If I have to use four words to describe this book, I think I can use these four words to describe it: stunning and brilliant. From the writing style and writing style in the book, we can see that he is a literary youth, obviously a literary young man. If literary youth is a disease, I think countless people have this disease, and they are deeply unwilling to extricate themselves. Let this disease become fatal and affect him in his prime! Still the same sentence. There are two types of fairy tale books. One is based on money, and may be very popular, but its ability will be limited. The other may not be popular at first, but from the day it soars into the sky, it is not just popular, but makes money, plus two words, classic. I am very optimistic about this book, "The Legend of Luo Chuang", and it is really expected to become the latter. Come on!
[Comment] Click, collect, recommend!
I just published a few chapters, and the writing is pretty good. I'll give you my recommendation vote. Hope you can work harder.🤭
[Comment] I am a supporting character control
I always have the urge to turn the supporting character of this book into the protagonist, but it's a pity that I am not the one who leads all this.
[Comment] I like the plot very much
Although the plot of this book is divorced from reality, it is very lively and down-to-earth.
[Review] Good book
Good book, no need to explain, I will support you to the end, don't be a eunuch! ! ! 🌹😄😄
[Comment]Recall
This book gave me the feeling of re-reading previous non-internet novels, and it really has a traditional beauty to it.
[Comment] There is a fantasy every year, and a fairy every hundred years.
In my opinion, fantasy novels and urban novels are popular every year, but fairy novels are really difficult to write, and there are very few good books. Starting from Xiao Ding's Zhu Xian, among them is the tricky half-fantasy and half-fairy Xia Jiangye, which I think is okay. I came across this book "Luo Chuang Ji" by chance, and I read it out of curiosity. The writing is really good, the story is suspenseful and interesting, and most importantly, it is really refreshing and exciting. I hope the author can maintain this style and continue with more updates. There are too few and it is not enough to read. I can't find more words to evaluate this book. To put it simply, it is one word, good. The setting is good, the story is good, the writing is good, and the style is good. If there is only one bad thing to say, it is that the updates are too slow, the current content is really too little, and I am an impatient person. I just want to say one thing. Why doesn't Yunfei fight all the way to the sky? Why aren't you surrounded by beautiful women? Wow, this book gives people such a strong sense of expectation and full sense of immersion. It also describes the characters very well and is very down-to-earth. Anyway, to put it simply, I like the feeling of the author writing the story. He tells it eloquently, without being impatient or impatient, and stops briefly, half-hiding his face while still holding the pipa. It will not explode and hurt like other novels at once, nor will it have ups and downs like other novels, but it will go on with a lot of flavor. Then, I have a rather impatient personality. I wish I could see a pig's feet stepping on people, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, and then slap and touch a beautiful woman when I see one. Hahahaha, okay, author, calm down, you write slowly and update slowly, I can afford to wait, but really don't be too slow, otherwise I will only read it once a week. I don't like to catch up with updates every day, it is too troublesome. If your updates in one week are not enough for me to read, then I will have to save up and read it once a month. I really like the character setting of Yun Fei. It makes people full of expectations. I can't help but want to see where Yun Fei will go and what kind of story he will have. The most important thing about an online novel is the beginning. Your book has a very good beginning, surpassing many authors. Tai Da, I don't feel like you are a newcomer. Your level is already very good, and your style is very mature. Once you stabilize it, the novel will definitely become a big hit after the explosive period. If Tai Da, you are really a newcomer, I can only say, awesome, Tai Da, you have surpassed too many newcomers. Your writing is very flavorful and makes people want to stop. Already collected, worth reading, following up, Tai, please give it a try.
[Comment]Flowers all the way
The author will definitely receive applause from flowers all the way if he writes like this! He will become a god soon. Don't forget us after he becomes a god~
[Comment] The setting is really OK.
It's very good, very bright, and the plot is relatively novel.