Taoist Disciple

After reading more than twenty chapters, I quit. I don't want you to be a gentleman, but you broke into someone else's senior sister's cave alone, causing the senior sister to vomit blood. He actually stared at senior sister's naked body. He didn't even look at her for a moment to tell her to leave. She still looked there as if she had never seen a woman before. She didn't say sorry. It's so disgusting. She also calls herself a little Taoist, a pure rogue, a perverted loser.

The male protagonist is no longer a villain, he is a pure evil. Although he must be defensive, he must also not have the intention to harm others. The male protagonist's outlook on life has collapsed and he kills people at every turn. The more he reads, the more speechless and darker he becomes. He can't stand it any longer. There is almost no one with normal outlook on life in this novel, which is no different from the wild animal world.

I read two book reviews and they said it was a dark novel and that the protagonist did all kinds of evil. There was a little surprise at first, but it turned out to be nonsense. It's just a piece of writing. There is no profit first, no conspiracy, no murder. Where do you get the qualifications to become a dark writer?

I've only read dozens of chapters, and it's absolutely terrible! I thought it was a dark text, but it turned out that the sand dollar pig's feet will always be cruel, shameless, and seriously lacking in IQ. There is no redeeming quality in terms of character. He is definitely not a good person. He is so bad that he has no charm. He is just a piece of snot! The most disgusting thing is that he is extremely lustful, which is completely different from the Great Love Immortal!

I haven't seen enough yet. It's over so soon after the lockdown is lifted. I can't bear to let it go.

The eight-tailed fox and the psychic sword are both female.

Is this a clip of the God-pleasing video mentioned in Douyin? Nothing

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 170, so I came here to read the reviews. Sure enough, for the first time I saw such a highly recommended book, the book circles were all criticizing it. The writing is okay, at least it doesn't look awkward or stiff. But the plot is dragging. While I was watching it, I was thinking, this is really a model of the water chapter. If you just buy something, you can write half a chapter on the description of the item. Of course, the most important thing is the character of the protagonist, who is unstable and does things that make no sense. A book friend wrote before that the personality of the protagonist is closely related to the author's personality at the time. I fully agree. Because I remember that the author asked for leave earlier and said that he was lovelorn, and then the protagonist suddenly turned evil and killed people wantonly. Moreover, the author also described in the book: "Others asked themselves and did not touch his interests," but he was tortured and killed by the protagonist. Compared with the previous ones, I feel that the character creation is really very similar, not even a real villain. I am not saying that it is either evil or good, but I really feel that this book is more like a portrayal of the author's daily mood. Many plot settings are very unreasonable and completely like a book without a specific outline. The same is true for the specific personalities of the characters. Maybe the author himself does not know what he is writing about. To be honest, I have been reading online articles for more than ten years. This is the first time I have commented on it, and it is also the first time I have been persuaded to leave because of the character of the protagonist.

The author dares to write about being a scholar when he doesn't even understand the most basic Taoism? Moral ethics, if you practice Taoism without cultivating virtue, you are a demon. You might as well just write about demons

I got it from Douyin, it's completely different.

It was diagnosed as rotten, and the woman couldn't walk when she saw it.

Other novels are about pretending to be slapped in the face, but this novel is about pretending to be slapped in the face. The blood that the protagonist vomited could fill the Pacific Ocean. I vomit blood every day and get used to it.

The protagonist only bullies kind people and deceives his own people. When he encounters those who are more shady, he is rescued instead of being ravaged. It's so useless. He also forcibly adds a black character.

According to reality, the protagonist is a village gangster who cheats and kidnaps, steals chickens and dogs, and is a villain. With a little thought, he talks about running the train, but he has no feelings for this kind of protagonist anyway. In other novels, this kind of character will be used as a supporting role, and he will be preached.

I got it from Kuaishou ╮（╯＿╰）╭

I gave up after reading more than 900 chapters. Alas, it was really ugly. The protagonist is a real-life gangster who suddenly becomes rich.

I've read two hundred chapters to summarize, Dongfang Mo: 😁 Thank you, waiter, for a bowl of beef noodles. Waiter: 😁 Okay! Sir, please wait! Waiter: 😁 The official interview is here, please use it slowly. Dongfang Mo: 😆 Draft a horse! Roll! ... Dongfang Mo: 😁 Waiter, the beef is a bit clumsy. Please bring me two toothpicks. Thank you. Waiter: 😁 I'll give you the toothpick. Dongfang Mo: 😆 Draft a horse! Roll!

What I wrote in the end was so rubbish! ! ! The first half of this novel was really good, but the end was rubbish. Didn't finish reading the ending.

This protagonist is outrageous. He also likes to commit suicide. When he meets strangers, he will tell others his real name. He is afraid that others will not want to kill him. Two hundred pictures are written about how to commit suicide. If he wants to die, he has to jump around like a clown. Although he is an aboriginal, it is rare to see such a pure protagonist. He has to believe even a woman. I have only seen a few pictures that describe his own cultivation system. He can master any magical power after practicing it for a few times. How did you learn to be constantly being chased? I practiced Qi and wrote a few practice spells. After building the foundation, I learned the spells at a glance without needing to practice. I was constantly being chased and had no development direction. I didn't mention my magical powers or my physical constitution. It was confusing to read. To be honest, I rarely post book reviews when I read novels. This author made me break the rule. He can portray such an outrageous protagonist. I suggest you don't read it. Even a short article can outline the main line. This thing is completely useless.

Books written by young people. Creative thinking is okay. But the core is a bit different. As a novel about cultivating immortals, the protagonist doesn't even care about the oath of cause and effect, so what's the bottom line for the protagonist? Don't be afraid of going through tribulations. No matter how well written this article is, it will not have good results. Without awe, how can there be respect? If you are only interested in profit, how can you have any original intention! No core, no value, just for profit. People who read this kind of book are just bored, meaningless and soulless. There are very few reviews, nothing wrong

After only reading two chapters, you can feel that the writing is a bit not very good! A few obvious examples: 1. "That's what magnificence can be described by two words" 2. "A man and a woman stood side by side in the void, slowly standing in the air" 3. "Only a pair of smart eyes were exposed" 4. "There must be something extraordinary here" No need to say more...

After reading a few chapters, I found that the protagonist's character does have some problems. Although it is said that as long as you have achieved immortality, any character is harmless, but what I can't bear the most is that in Chapter 9, he called me Sanqing. He has such a bad character and dares to call himself Sanqing. If he changes his name, I can understand it, but this kind of thing dares to call himself Sanqing. You are really brave, author.

The writing is very good, the subject matter is novel, and the personality is distinctive. I like to read books like this where the protagonist and supporting characters are all selfish. This book can be compared with The Legend of Mortal Cultivation and The Contest of Great Dao. This book has been criticized negatively by countless moral gentlemen.

It's not on the same level as Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Let's not talk about the article. Let's portray the protagonist as a treacherous, ungrateful, and bloodthirsty person who slaughters several sects at every turn and goes on a killing spree. A living rotten person who only knows how to practice but not how to cultivate his mind will not be able to enter the hall of elegance.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

It's really tiring to watch. The little monk always fought with the tall man, and he was exhausted every time. You can't be more relaxed and happy at the same level.

There was a group of staff commentators in the chapter review. They commented that the writing of Xianxia World was unscientific, and I really wanted to send them all to a mental hospital.

The blood content is astonishing. Every time he vomits a ton of blood in a fight, he can vomit half a chapter's worth of blood. It's really awesome.

Whoever can persist in reading half of it will be considered great. It becomes more and more boring towards the end. It feels like we are just trying to make up the word count. One stick here and there, one stick here and there, leaving you confused and confused.

I recommend a million-word niche book "I Can Go to the Past and the Future". The first chapter is voiced by a female loli author. It is a light novel with a male channel. The background is a passionate adventure in the fantasy future interspersed with daily love. It mainly uses the floating city in the interstellar era as the world view, and the magic potion sublimation + sequence as the core. It is a time-line setting story of the heart, with wits and decisive killings, the plot is interlocking, and there are many foreshadowings such as grass snakes and gray lines. The details are controlled, the setting is censorious, there are no bloody routines and brainless plots, the overall is relaxed, interesting and semi-invincible. Brothers and sisters who are interested can come and take a look, maybe you will like it.