Forging a Sword in a Time of Prosperity

Qi Dada's books still have a strong realistic style, and real-life descriptions are the characteristics and advantages. However, this time with such a fantasy martial arts protagonist, it feels a bit inconsistent with Qi Dada's usual style. Let us not mention this fantasy of sleeping for four hundred years. It's about what people in the Ming Dynasty should be like, and what people in the Ming Dynasty will be like today. I feel that the author did not handle these two points very well. The biggest gap between ancient people and modern people is knowledge. The amount of information that modern people are exposed to in a day may not be accessible to ancient people in their lifetime, so it is too outrageous to write about an ancient person who calmly adapted to modern life immediately after arriving in modern times. It is not scientific. Even if we skip this aspect, it's acceptable if we go over it in one stroke according to the Spring and Autumn writing style of time-travel dramas. But the identity of the protagonist is also a bit unrealistic. He is an ancient killer, a gang killer in the ancient martial arts, and an 18-year-old boy. The character, calmness, and experience of the protagonist set by the author are not like that of an 18-year-old ancient boy. Even if he is a killer who has seen the world, he has only seen the world of the Ming Dynasty, and how many people have he killed? It's a bit exaggerated to be able to adapt immediately in modern society so that people can't guess his background. Anyway, I think the setting of this protagonist is a bit failed. If you say he is a middle-aged man who has seen everything in the world, this character is much more real. Except for an idol face, the 18-year-old looks like nothing else, not even the passion brought by hormones (this aspect of the description is one of Qi Dada's weaknesses, in the previous books) The protagonists have never seen any young people who are full of vitality, and they are all too old to die), and being able to fight and kill has a very limited role in modern society, unless the power of real martial arts is exaggerated, but then the force of the overall environment has to be improved, and the writing will not look like the real world around you. To be honest, I really don't like Qi Dada writing about modern martial arts. That is definitely your shortcoming. Anyway, I suggest that the author change the age of the protagonist. 18 Years old will bring negative effects. It is better to change it to 28 or above thirty. The kind of calmness and calmness you wrote is not what an 18-year-old should have, even if he is an ancient martial arts master or gang killer.

I used to own a restaurant, and when I first made the budget, I thought it only required rent, decoration, and purchasing. Later, I discovered that there are transfer fees for taking over other people's stores. Unless the landlord's house has just been built and you are the first to rent it, transfer fees will be required. My annual rent was 50,000 yuan, but the transfer fee was 120,000 yuan. This was still a bargain price, so you can imagine that the more times it changes hands, the more expensive the transfer fee will be.

More than ten years ago, I still enjoyed watching it

No one is watching? I read a few chapters and thought it was okay.

Here are a few recommendations for fattening and slaughtering. 😄

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive in killing, sharp and joyful. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious to the world...

This book is very good, but it's too bad

The characters in this book are too childish and the plot is too fake. I still like to read the author's industrial literature.

I looked at the book again and it was correct that it was updated in 16 years, but I thought it had traveled through the high school and junior high school years more than ten years ago. It feels like the entire routine was written more than ten years ago.

This novel must have been written by the gunman, and he just borrowed the name.