The Hyperdimensional Dark Trade Network

The author has written quite a lot, but has never been very popular. In fact, in my opinion, it is entirely because the background of the author's books is too grand, and they are all set in the universe. But it is obvious that the author's ability is not enough to control such a huge setting. In fact, not only the author, but also some real masters may not be able to control such a huge background. I suggest that the author narrow down the layout and try to keep it on the earth. Don't write about the universe or anything like that yet, and try again when you can control such a background in the future. Finally, let me explain that I am not criticizing the author, it is just a small suggestion. It is up to the author to decide whether to adopt it or not.

Can we not show the dark web? Who doesn't know? It's just that you don't want young people to know that this kind of thing exists, and you're still spreading it

I originally saw the introduction to this book! I hesitated and thought I could take a look, but it's not very attractive! As a result, I saw the words recommended below (Quidian Writer Second Speed ​​Nine Light Years solemnly recommends the following Qidian works). As I scrolled up, the word "Nine Capital" became more and more written! Decisively put it on the shelf and save it! But if it's 200,000 words, let's wait! At least 500,000 is enough to see if you are following me!!

As for the setting of super powers that are now dark and extinct, let alone the things in firearms and missiles, a bandit group does not carry a gun. Even a person with super powers cannot explain it. Moreover, the current setting of super powers feels too weak. Even the military in the 20th century cannot compete with the power it has shown. Moreover, the protagonist's ability is to be immune to super powers and make other people's super powers disappear, but even the simplest use of super powers, the high temperature generated by fireball, and the ice system Low temperature, the earth type directly hits people with stones, and the high temperature and kinetic energy generated by the electric type are not immune to the protagonist. In that case, what is the use of the protagonist's low-temperature training? He can't feel the temperature at all. It makes sense to directly write it as darkness and extinction. It is the physics department, the super energy department, the technology side and the auxiliary abilities produced by it. Otherwise, the speed of a pistol exceeds the speed of sound, and the protagonist's body is completely unable to block it. He is killed by one shot and the fireball is immune, but the high temperature produced also roasts the protagonist.

Emmmmm... Why is this book review section like this after a while... When I first read it, this was my favorite book at the same time. I really liked the character of the protagonist. The point is that even if I think about it now, it is a bit of a saint. In fact, it is very burning in the book! Give the author a big shout out!

The author's books are all poisonous, Holy Mother, Patriotism

By the way, when I was preparing to comment, I found that the author looked familiar. I had read one of your books back then. However, I was a student at the time and read 😅. Sorry, although this book is a bit strange now, when I followed this book, it was no problem to subscribe now. The small problem I discovered is that the author started to say that the protagonist is 1 6 years old, let me bring it in based on reality. In China, 6-year-olds go to primary school, 12-year-olds graduate from primary school and go to middle school, and 15-year-olds graduate from middle school and go to high school. This is the situation of students under normal circumstances. The author started by writing that the protagonist is 16 years old and has graduated from high school. I am not sure whether the world view of this book is that there is no middle school or that there is no second grade in elementary school. So the best suggestion is to change it to 18 years old, or 15 years old, and graduate from high school. The second problem is the problem of robbery by superpowers. You said that they receive state subsidies, which means that the state has their information, at least the basic information is there. The real-name registration author should know that the state can do a similar registration. To be honest, I don't understand it. Don't talk about the future. Even now, if you don't do something, the police can definitely find you if you commit a crime. Also, it was mentioned earlier that the inheritance crystal must be 16 years old, but it was not mentioned that you can awaken your powers independently, so I think there is no age limit to awaken your powers independently. Then the problem comes again. Although the national army, police and other armed forces only have about 10 million people, based on one in 100,000 calculations, there are still 100 people. Moreover, the author said that there is a certain chance that superpowers will form inheritance crystals after death. The author said it was a forbidden technique. However, I thought I had missed it. After reading it several times, I could not find any traces of forbidden techniques. Therefore, I thought that there is no need for any rituals or techniques after death. As long as death is enough, then the country can completely catch the criminals, and then shoot each one. Firstly, it can be a shock, and secondly, a few crystals can be harvested into the hands of the country. And about the problem of crimes committed by people with super powers. If you can break a wall with one punch, can you stop a bullet with one punch? If not, then why are they so unafraid of death? There are hundreds of troops, each with a gun, forming a fire net. Can they stop it? As for accidentally injuring civilians, simply replace the bullets with tranquilizer bombs, or even drop a large tranquilizer cannon into an area, and then the special forces will go there with the tranquilizer bullets. Generally speaking, the age of the male protagonist is a bit wrong, I don't know that the world view of this book is different from the real world, the national government is a bit useless, and the superpowers are too arrogant. That's basically it.

Why is there no second one??

One power I will never forget is Darkness. . .

What kind of heart do you hate most, the heart of darkness? It's just a belief