Fairyland Winner

Looking through the comment section, I feel that many people were persuaded to quit from the beginning. I would like to write a book review to stop everyone from quitting so quickly. I would like to state in advance that because I follow the series and the time span is very long, I can only rely on my memory for some of the plots. Any inaccuracies are welcome to be corrected. Regarding the part where I have read so much and my readership data is so low, I do not shy away from saying that I used to read version The use of traditional Chinese is purely because I am an overseas reader:) First, let's talk about the points that have been criticized very harshly in the previous chapters: 1: The sect was wiped out, the protagonist was seriously injured... The unpleasant plot Personally, I think it is just a way to set off the protagonist, even if it is to lead the plot, shape the character and ideas. In the end, there is actually no plot that may make readers unhappy. Two: The women around the protagonist First of all, let's draw the conclusion: there is no Shura Field I think there is no Shura Field. The image the author wants to create is obviously not the Shura Field and going to bed, so the relevant plot is only a slight touch; apart from the emotional line, each female character also has her own focus on cultivation and practices different ways. In the early descriptions, it seems that the female characters can only stick to each other, but later on, they actually look more like respectful guests. When the author writes about the relevant plot, he will think about the female character's thoughts and then communicate with Zhou Shu. At the same time, Zhou Shu will not force the female character to choose or accept anything. Sometimes Zhou Shu is the one who is beaten by the female character. It's a pity that the female character was written like this in the early stage. I think on the one hand, the author's writing skills are not good enough and his grasp of the character is not very good. But later I felt I was making progress. Friends who were poisoned here in the early stage, maybe you can hold on and have a look? Third: I have written more than 7 million words and it is not finished yet Before ascension, the author wrote a lot about the Xuanhuang Realm, from the sects, the prototype of Tao creation, events in various places, interactions with various races, the basic content and application of various "Tao"... After ascension, in addition to the development and extension of the above events, there is also the creation of Tao, fairy city, world view and secrets to write about. Overall, the author wants to write a lot, and the world view is extremely large, so he has many words. Some people may think that even so, there must still be a problem with writing so many words! Yes, I admit that there are some plot flaws. This is a matter of the author's writing skills and editing skills. I am not going to defend it. But in terms of the concept the author wants to express, I think this word count is quite reasonable. — Now I want to talk about some of the points I particularly like [The main plot is clear and the plot is not aggressive and reckless] The protagonist clearly knows what he wants to do from the beginning. Since he was still a mortal, he has steadily grown up and found his way through various plots step by step. This book is classified into the invincible genre, so compared to other similar genres, the protagonist may be rushing all the way, all difficulties have been solved, all plots have been completed, and then it is over. But this book takes you slowly through the world constructed by the author through the adventures of the protagonist, and it is explained in a calm and detailed way. Friends who like to ponder the world view will probably like this book as much as I do. [More expansion and description of "monasticism"] I really like this. I will give some examples among the people the protagonist meets. "Official Cultivation" From managing a sect or a fairy city, mastering and scheduling everything, taking care of things is also practicing "Business Cultivation" Cultivation by doing business, helping yourself or your career to gain profits "Military Cultivation", "Military Cultivation" Forgive me for forgetting the details, in short, it is a professional general. Specializing in training, dispatching and strategy Actually, there should be more, but I can't remember some of them, sorry. Every Tao can be cultivated to a profound level, and slowly move towards the so-called Daluo Golden Immortal, Quasi-Sage or even Saint. The characters are not limited. As long as they have the ability, they can become various "cultivations", which makes the book a lot richer. Many books like to write about the Three Thousand Avenues, but I still only know swords, knives, talismans, elixirs, time, space, destiny, etc. After writing them. To really write something different, I was deeply impressed by the illustration of The Squid's Destiny. And how many books are there on the market? I deeply feel that it is rare to be able to describe more in this aspect. Of course, it may be that I am a frog in the well and have not read other books with similar settings. Even so, my recommendation for this part of the book remains unchanged. It's too late today, I'll try to make up the rest slowly. I still hope you won't quit too early. If you really don't like some of the interactive jumping chapters, you can just pass them. The rest is quite interesting. Finally, cheers for the author! Support you!

Why hasn't it been updated? I'm still waiting 😁

The story is okay, the routine is that a genius turns into a waste, and then counterattacks to become a big winner. But the author's view of love really makes me sick. It's okay if the male protagonist has many women. The key is that those women are not jealous at all, they help the male protagonist to seduce other women, and even push their biological sisters to the male protagonist. Then every woman says, "I practice just to be with you!" Are all women so cheap in the author's mind? Their only pursuit in life is to be slept with by the male protagonist? I would like to ask the author, what is the difference between the feeling of being slept with by the male protagonist and the feeling of sleeping with other men? Apart from getting more wealth and benefits, what are the other benefits of sleeping with the male protagonist? Why is it that only the male protagonist has a love interest and a woman, but no one else has his own love interest? Is the author's outlook on life so extremely selfish? Not even willing to give some virtual love to the supporting characters? Another question for everyone, can gods change their gender? Is sex important to gods? Will gods use mortal methods to satisfy their sexual needs?

I tried hard to make myself watch it but I really couldn't stand it anymore. The male protagonist spends his whole life helping women everywhere. He likes to talk to women and rub their heads to tell them that they can rest assured that they have me in this life! I am responsible for all the secrets and materials for cultivation. In the eyes of the women in this book, only he is a man. All the women like him. When they see him, they want to live with him forever. If they are a woman, they like him, and he is also a woman. Are you tired? ? If you want to write about a stud🐴, just do it directly. How many women are there among the male protagonists? I have only watched less than a third of it. If this continues, there will probably be three thousand beauties in the harem in the end. Is this what you live for? ? This book is really not interesting, so everyone should leave or don't read it! !

He has no strength, he can crush anyone to death, yet he is such a holy mother, meddling in other people's business everywhere.

Qi Lianqi ridicules Jindan and there is no one left. The Jindan monk apologizes to you and makes mortals vomit.

The name of this book should be "Zhou Shu and His Stupid Women"

The first part was fine, but after 50 chapters you wrote about Yan Yue and Yang? It's really disgusting. That woman shouldn't have been close friends with the protagonist before testing her. Although she swore, there are two for one. There is also a family that helps that woman. You have done your best to sell the talisman to her. You don't owe him. Instead, you help her in everything. Yan Yue also has to be a cousin and build a memorial arch. Author, please pay attention in the future. I am watching the comments decrease one by one.

After writing thousands of chapters, there are more than 100 comments. What makes the author persevere? I really wanted to read more and support you, but after more than 50 chapters, I found that I am actually a very fragile person. I was deeply poisoned and had to run away. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I have read a little bit of this book and would like to ask the author, Yan Yue, if she will be the heroine? I don't think much of Yan Yue as the heroine because his character and outlook on life are too different from the protagonist. Just like the matter of dealing with the head of the family, the protagonist's first thought is to withdraw from the family, and the second is to kill someone. But Yan Yue can't do it. In her outlook on life and values, family is the most important. If for some reason the protagonist is in conflict with the Yan family, there is a high chance that she will stand against the protagonist, or they will not help each other.

Mainly about the fate of the loser and the protagonist, the evil fox star. Everyone is tired of watching this kind of thing and has begun to resent it. Really, Chapter 4 dissuades most old bookworms. I just forced myself to watch it. But if you don't watch the losers and the sect being destroyed, everything else will be fine. In the end, everyone was tired of watching the protagonist's desperate situation and nirvana. Most people didn't like the original good idea, which was not worth the gain. If you write it as a hobby, then forget it. If you want to make money, don't write about useless people in your next book. Even if the sect is destroyed, you can still write about it. It's just useless writing. It's disgusting! ! !

This book should be set in the Invincible style. The protagonist has powerful computers and intelligence, but the author didn't write it well. When I saw him helping Yan Yue in Fangshi, I felt that this was a bit of a mindless Invincible novel. Did the author need to write about such a stupid woman? The second uncle in his family joined other sects to steal the family's things, and he shared the things without compromise or changed stores or quit the family. The second is not killing people, because family members cannot kill each other. In the end, they can only fight each other. The protagonist helps to kidnap the second uncle. Is the relationship really that good? In the early stage of Qi training, for a first-level rune diagram, he offended such a sect, and the sect with brains was destroyed by just sending a master. Not to mention that they like each other, the relationship is not that good, at most they have a good impression. For the sake of the plot, I feel embarrassed watching it.

This book is remarkable both in terms of writing style and content. The author's writing style is very sophisticated, without too much nonsense, and it is not the kind of world that revolves around the protagonist alone. Every supporting character that appears is very vividly created. It is absolutely excellent in terms of content, worldview and writing style. , The score of this book is really surprising. The comment section is nothing more than some old bookworms who have read countless books, where they are crazy about obscenity and imagining the world in their minds. As long as the book is not written according to what he wants, he will try his best to write comments with the greatest malice. This state will appear in many old bookworms. To put it bluntly, he has read too much and he has no idea what he wants. They think they know everything, but in fact they don't know anything. They hold keyboards and think they are what everyone in the literary world is commenting on. To put it bluntly, they are like those people who have been in love too many times. They say that they would rather be in love, but in fact they are rotten at heart. It is impossible for these people to find the kind of book they like unless they write one themselves. They don't have the ability yet, so they go and comment arbitrarily on the works that others have put so much effort into creating, and it seems that they know a lot of things. This kind of people are the most disgusting no matter where they are. Have you read too many books and always think that you are the protagonist and everyone has to follow him? This book was completely ruined by the comment section. If this book were posted again at this time, he would definitely become popular.

The author has a problem. As soon as the protagonist meets a woman, she becomes mentally retarded and verbose. I really can't handle it. Could you please the author change this lack of love? It's really scary to watch.

You were just a junior employee when you first joined the company. When you didn't understand the manager's behavior, you ridiculed him in front of him. . Really, can you do this? There are no policemen in the world of immortality. Strength is the principle. If the author wants you to be dissatisfied with the editor's actions, will you ridicule her? 😏

Nothing will happen for hundreds of years. As soon as the male protagonist comes, all the sect will die. 66666

The protagonist is a virgin who saves people everywhere

Being a Shennong feels pretty good. The writing of this novel is very novel, the protagonist's golden finger is okay, and the things described are okay. If so, this novel can still be read! But in the end, the handling of the problems between Yan Yue really ruined the book. It was originally a transaction of interests, and the protagonist even helped Yan Yue more and more effectively, while Yan Yue only helped the protagonist think about it in a small way. The protagonist felt touched, and the same was true for Yan Yue's previous temptation of the protagonist. The protagonist forgave him with just one sentence. To be honest, after seeing this, I really wanted to sit back and say that all the good books were ruined by Yan Yue!

It can be seen that many book lovers give up on the first dozens or even a few chapters, so I will write a brief introduction. If you take a few glances at the book before giving up, you may have different feelings. Without further ado, let's get started. The protagonist turns out to be a genius, but he is only one of a million geniuses. He can be cultivated in a small sect, but is discarded by a large sect. The protagonist is new to the world of cultivating immortals, and doesn't know much about it. He knows that he should find a small sect to start cultivating immortals, but he doesn't know much else, so he goes to Wuwang Sect, which is recruiting people. Revealing your talent, attracting the attention of the elders, and becoming a core disciple are all expected. If everything goes well, you will be able to embark on a new journey after reaching a certain stage of cultivation. Unfortunately, it didn't go well. People were in the world and couldn't help themselves. The Wuwu Sect where the protagonist was found was spotted by others and was easily destroyed. As a core disciple, the protagonist suffered a disaster from Wuwu and had all his veins broken. This was something the protagonist who was new to cultivating did not expect. The protagonist learned about the cruelty of the world of cultivating immortality for the first time, and also figured out how to continue on this path of cultivating immortality. Geniuses become useless, is that true? Of course not. At the same time as his veins were shattered, the protagonist also opened up all the hidden energy veins. What was impossible in the past has become a reality. He has gone from being a one-in-a-million genius to a true genius who is one-in-a-million. He is very sure that with his special talent, he can do everything he wants as long as he restores his energy. This is an opportunity that is rare in the world. After going to Fangshi, the protagonist has learned a lesson and will not join the sect casually. He will investigate and find the one that suits him best. The story begins from here. Let's talk about Yan Yue's problem again. This is something that many people have complained about. There are three reasons why the protagonist helps Yan Yue. First, the protagonist needs the Yan family shop to pave the way for wealth, and the magic talisman is also an unexpected blessing. Second, the protagonist needs to learn about the Heyin Sect from Yan Yue. This sect is famous for its elixirs and can help the protagonist recover his muscles. She is an inner disciple and has an advantage. Third, Yan Yue has helped him. If he hadn't borrowed Yan Yue's influence from the beginning, the protagonist would have been miserable, so he will repay. The protagonist helped Yan Yue a lot, but the price paid was within control and would not affect his cultivation of immortality. The protagonist, who has experienced hardships, has been planning for the future, which is very clear. After seeing this, I got started, and I should be able to read on. One more point, why didn't the protagonist take away the inheritance of the Heyin Sect? Because he didn't want to experience another sect destruction, and was determined to lead the Heyin Sect. This sect has a bright future, and this is true. Many people have grown up with the protagonist. That's it. One final word, this book is not a useless book, but an invincible one. It will be clear after three or four hundred chapters. In fact, if you have nothing to do, you can still find a lot of happiness in this book. -_-#

The protagonist Chun Chun is a big licker. If she only writes about practice, she won't be so bad.

The golden elixir beats Yuan Ying, and the early Yuan Ying fights against Huashen. In addition, people at the third level can recognize the second level protagonist as their teacher, which is equivalent to Yuanying chasing Jin Dan and calling him master. I can only describe the promotion of the protagonist as drinking water. After reading 800 chapters, I really can't stand it. People who have practiced to the Yuanying level are rubbish, and people don't have the skills to look after others. If you are a Nascent Soul in the early stage and fight against Huashen, you will be abused in just one or two chapters. When I first watched A Hundred Refinements to Become an Immortal, I thought it was already outrageous. I didn't expect that there would be something even more outrageous here.

I'm afraid this book is ugly even if it's not a holy lady. What kind of stuff is it written about? Immortals cannot kill mortals indiscriminately. They are insulted by mortals and forced to surrender their immortality skills. Immortal cultivators are scolded by mortals like idiots. Mortals even threaten immortal cultivators knowing that they are immortal cultivators. In this world where there is no law and everything relies on fists, where killing people is as simple as eating and drinking water, where does the courage come from to challenge the immortal cultivators?

I have read almost all the fairy tales. Thank you to the author for writing a work that makes me look forward to updates every day. Thank you very much.

Laws of Creation: Law of Time, Law of Space, Law of Chaos Supreme Laws: Law of Destiny, Law of Order, Law of Energy, Law of Reincarnation, Law of Cause and Effect Advanced Laws: Law of Destruction, Law of Creation, Law of Power, Balance Laws, Laws of Belief Intermediate Laws: Law of Five Elements, Law of Good and Evil, Law of Life and Death, Law of Yin and Yang, Law of Killing, Law of Soul, Law of Devouring Low-level Laws: Law of Metal, Law of Wood, Law of Sound, Law of Thunder, Law of Disease

I read the whole book in one go and it's worth reading, but the ending is not a happy ending.

There are indeed a lot of poisonous points in the early stages of this book, but starting from Yuanying, it is refreshing. Various cultivation texts talk about the three thousand avenues, but by the end of the book, they cannot describe a few avenues. However, this book has at least dozens or hundreds of avenues. Let me list them for you: The first is the five elements, metal, wood, water, fire, and earth. The combination of the five elements can be counted as one, the cooking way (that is, you can practice by cooking various spiritual foods) , Eighteen kinds of weapons with swords, guns, swords and halberds (of course not all are listed in the text), official ways, sun, moon, stars, chess and chess, calligraphy, painting, Taotie, elixir, formation, weapon, talisman, soul, ghost, blood, balance, life, death, wheel Hui, yin and yang, cause and effect, destiny, including the special abilities of various mythical beasts, the power of dragons, various dragons (golden dragon, Yinglong, Chilong), twelve witches and gods, demons, spirits, wood, there are too many...

Cultivating immortals means cultivating immortals, and improving one's realm means improving one's realm. What's the point of opening one's veins? From the time he entered the sect to the time when the sect was destroyed, it was always the first level of Qi refining. In the end, he became so awesome in the market! I can't figure out how a protagonist who is at the first level of Qi refining can avoid death🌚

Overall, the structure of this book is very good and the plot is compact. The writing is rather sharp. Worth a look

Just buy a talisman pen and it's hard to stand it.

After reading more than two hundred chapters, the two sects that Pig's Feet joined were destroyed, and Pig's Feet himself also changed from a genius to a waste and was rebuilt. This kind of book has so many plots that make many readers uncomfortable, how could it be so popular...