Urban Superbrain System

Having read the first few dozen chapters, the writing style feels like it's all about humor for the sake of humor, bordering on nonsensical. Each scene or paragraph is inevitably followed by a few far-fetched metaphors or exclamations, which not only dilute the plot but also become quite annoying. The dialogue is rather verbose, and the level of filler content is somewhat lacking.

I finally finished reading your first novel. 1064 Pages, that wasn't easy!

A dozen or so minor characters, and you're going to write so many chapters? There's no way you'll have anything left to write. It's a good thing you haven't put it on sale yet, otherwise you definitely wouldn't have any subscribers.

So you're just going to pad the word count?

Is this the "Golden Scale Extraordinary Being" that wrote about the "Urban All-Round System"?

Keep it up! It's not easy to launch a new book, hang in there and keep going.

It would be better to just write about superpowers, and even super brains.