The Great Luo of the Ten Wastes

🙂 From Chapter 1 Chapter 562 Pig's feet are always 13 years old

The article is very novel and the plot is very attractive. Today, when there are so many works, I am really happy to see such works... I hope the author will continue to work hard, develop his own style, improve his writing skills, stick to his own writing path, and don't ignore quality for the sake of quantity... I agree: quality comes first! Dear readers!

In fact, this book is okay in the early stage, but the description of martial arts is really lacking. The protagonist's cultivation is too complicated. When it comes to sword training, he should focus on the sword, both the physical body and the fist. What's the use of a sword that can beat you with your fists? I have to complain that this protagonist is a disaster with a bloody plot, which indirectly caused the death of so many tribesmen. The level of cultivation is too cumbersome and too weak, especially in the Tongxuan Secret Realm. The division of the second realm is so cumbersome. More than 800 chapters are still the second realm. You are so good at the second realm. Isn't Lu Shaoyou going to bang his head and die? In the third realm, I went to meet Donghuang Taiyi. Alas, I originally came to read this book because of the prince. Now this new book has not yet been completed and is about to drag down the characters of the previous book. The new audience cannot accept the plot, and the old audience cannot accept the situation. Although the prince is not good enough, at least it is acceptable. In fact, the prince can still be written. There are too many things that have not been written. In the early stage, he was too impatient in the lower world, and the plot in the fairy world was jumpy and ended hastily.

The total number of clicks, recommendations, and fans are not as many as the number of words, and the author is still updating! How embarrassed did you make those eunuch writers feel?

Jixia Academy, why is it gone? It's already a thousand chapters long. Is this hole still to be filled? I promised you that if you enter Dayu, you will have a chance to enter. You are invincible and why don't you go in?

I can tolerate it when the goddess is called Jiang Shuying, but later the ancestor is called Wu Qixian, which is very poisonous.

Chapter 19. It tells that practicing a seventh-grade low-level martial arts can lead to the secret realm of Tongxuan, OK. When I saw this, I thought that there was no inner qi technique here, and that one could improve one's realm by using martial arts. So, why can body and martial arts skills improve one's realm? This is obviously unclear logic, right?

Read a few chapters. I couldn't help but want to complain when I saw the protagonist burning the secret book because he thought the Nether Claw was evil. Now even children know that there are no evil secrets, only evil people. And you don't have to use it in front of those three families. Why are you? Just rely on your street boxing skills?

It was very well written, but unfortunately it was discontinued 😭

The realm setting is too exaggerated. In the second realm, Tongxuan realm, you can be reborn after your head is cut off. This has surpassed 99% of novels.