Order to Go to Immortality

I think whether a novel is well written or not depends first on the author's personal investment in emotion. The author's emotions are carried by the overall style of his writing, plot setting, and detailed conception. This book grasps this very well. It can be seen that you are a serious writer. Come on. Take good care of you! I will come often!

The title and introduction of the book are both better. They complement each other and the explanation is concise yet attractive. Let's talk about the plot. The first three chapters are generally the reader's first impression. If the first three chapters are written successfully, the reader will continue to read. If it is not fully attractive, the reader will probably abandon the article, so I read the first three chapters carefully. The opening chapter of Chapter 1 is too procrastinating. The plot can be directly extended to the discovery of the abandoned baby. The first few hundred words can be deleted, but the following content is indispensable. All the content is in one line, which illustrates the special identity of the male protagonist and arouses interest in reading. Chapters 2 and 3 are the chapters where the male protagonist officially appears, but the writing and ink used are almost the same as those of Yao'er. After reading it, it did not leave a deep impression on people. Apart from the appearance of the male protagonist, there is no other outstanding feature, and it is even vaguely taken over by Yao'er. Generally speaking, the image of the male protagonist is not three-dimensional enough. It is recommended that a plot of 1-2 chapters should be written with the male protagonist as the center at the beginning of the chapter. Suddenly, his character also has a small contradiction at the beginning of the chapter, which attracts readers to read. The overall feeling is that the first of the first three chapters is relatively good, and the other two chapters are a little dull. However, the image creation of Yao'er, Xiaoliu, and even Master Yuan and others is relatively successful. It is recommended that the male protagonist be more characterization.

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