A Substitute for the Ming

Since you have traveled through time, you should recruit your own troops and conquer the world instead of being a lackey through time travel. I guess those literati can kill you.

I always feel like I can't stop, everything is grinding away, one step away... Boring

Lao Ke has a bag. I haven't even finished the first chapter and I can't stand it anymore.

I feel like the writing is not very realistic. Too much emphasis was placed on theories that were not in line with the social climate of the time. The more I look at it, the more embarrassed I feel. Socialism has not been realized yet. I don't know when it will be realized. Ancient rebellions that focused on the author's ideas all failed, the most famous ones being the Yellow Turbans and the Taiping Rebellion. Does the Ming Dynasty correspond to European ideological enlightenment? Don't really remember, maybe. I didn't pay attention to the technology tree, but it seemed to be building guns. In the late Ming Dynasty, weapons indeed began to be popular. However, before the emergence of semi-automatic weapons and rapid-fire weapons, there was no advantage in facing large numbers and cheap troops. And mature semi-automatic weapons could not be produced by the generation of the late Ming Dynasty. Alas, the technology tree in the novel was set up too quickly, but I didn't know that a small accessory may require dozens of mature processes to be made.

There is a goddess in the office, and we work late shifts together. The goddess told me she wanted to watch TV. I asked her what she was looking at, and she said the central set. I turned on the TV and adjusted it to the central set. As a result, she stopped talking to me and stopped watching TV. What did you do wrong?

Author! Even if you suck, you suck completely.

This book has 300,000 words, and the data is just that. Can you realize what went wrong? I also write historical novels, and now I am writing "Rebirth as Emperor in the Late Ming Dynasty". I am very envious of my brother's writing skills, but in terms of commercialization, maybe I can still make some suggestions. First of all, the subject matter. I wrote a novel of tens of thousands of words in the late Ming Dynasty, about the protagonist being a gangster, and I also checked a lot of information. However, the protagonist being a gangster might be difficult for readers to accept, so I didn't publish it in the end. I still admire my brother for daring to write about this kind of subject matter. Then your book should focus on the analysis of the situation. At the end of the Ming Dynasty, the government forced the people to rebel, mainly because the Donglin Party embezzled the salaries of the border troops and did not provide relief. Chongzhen was relatively weak just after he came to the throne. The border troops could not survive and began to plunder the people. In addition, the defeated soldiers of Sarhu turned into bandits and specialized in coercing the refugees to plunder the towns. Therefore, it is necessary to highlight that the protagonist has to rebel. The author has achieved this in plot description, but lacks overall analysis. It is necessary to show some sympathy for the Ming Dynasty, but also full of helplessness towards the current situation controlled by the Donglin Party. Then there is the opening. The most exciting thing about this book is the opening. The characters are well-drawn and the plot is compact. It can be rated 99 points. Then comes the rebellion process. Wang Jia In this way, it will be fun, and the recommendation votes and collections will jump up. Then there is the process of the protagonist going to Yan'an Mansion, which seems to be a bit bloody. He meets Li Dingguo, Li Zicheng, and Tang Ruowang. This is too coincidental. There is also a lengthy characterization of them, but this is completely inconsistent with historical facts. The materials you used, the author, should all be from Baidu! Baidu's information is very romantic. This model has been written badly and no new ideas can be written. The author should take a look at "Peasant Uprising in the Late Ming Dynasty" written by Gu Cheng, which records the movement of bandits in more detail, as well as some phenomena and customs in the late Ming Dynasty. However, you must have enough ability to distinguish right from wrong when watching. Because they cater to the official, they sometimes praise the bandits and call them peasant armies. So this book has about 80 chapters, and all the later chapters can be deleted. It is definitely a failure. It is not on the shelves yet, and there is still time to change the book.

This ending is actually a bad eunuch.

Young Master is called a man of culture. Hu Guang was a man who killed officials and rebelled. How can a man of culture be so domineering? In addition, after asking the Heavenly Army to establish a foothold in the grassland, should they fight to build slaves or return to the customs?

I read Chapter 50+ from the beginning, and I was disgusted by such a high-powered, low-IQ and EQ person like Pigfoot's brother. I switched directly to Chapter 144 and finally got through it. .