Online Gaming: The Pokemon Century

Reading your novel and your pen name reminded me of a certain Su Yong

I feel that the dialogue between players and NPCs in your novel is too Pokemon-like, and it feels a bit childish. You can provide the author with some online game suggestions: 1. Auction house moonstones, elves, vehicles, healing PP value potions, skill learners, and tree fruits can all be used as trading items. You can add new things by yourself. After all, online games cannot be non-commercial, and you want to make money through online games. Brother, you can't just rely on competition bonuses and local tyrants. You can use the experience brought by rebirth to acquire resources at low prices and then sell them at high prices to make money. You can also add herbs and the like to increase intimacy, make potions, and baits; 2. That game must have more than just Chinese players. What about players from other countries? 3. The copy feels a little limited to Pokémon; 4. The weather system increases the difficulty, etc. Don't be so rigid about Pokémon. You can create something of your own; There are relatively few Pokémon-themed online game novels. I still like the author who is relatively good, so I made some suggestions. They are just suggestions.

As in the picture, no, as in the title, it is too difficult to think of a name when writing an online game. If you want to be featured in this book, then think of a game ID, a personality, a gender, and an elf. I will consider the arrangement as appropriate, but the elf may be changed because the actual situation must be taken into consideration, huh.

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I don't even know why the author arranged the first chapter? Why arrange for the protagonist to be killed and reborn? After reading the second chapter, I really didn't understand it, and the protagonist actually chose to have his own appearance, thinking about being killed again in the real world? No matter how good the things you get in the game are, so what, outside the game it's not all about one shot.

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The starting point now is that there is always a rebirth novel, but in the end, it doesn't even have the huge advantage in the early stage. What advantage do you want to gain in the later stage? When everyone else knows how to play, the protagonist's advantage is gone! So I don't want this novel to be like other rebirth novels. The protagonist should be the top king, right? How can there be no King Elf? Also, regarding the fact that Poison Rose's skills are not complete, why is it that the protagonist is always imperfect in various ways, while the supporting characters always have perfect skills, various kings, various props, etc. It will make people think that the protagonist is reborn, it is not as good as others who have not been reborn. , Then if those people who are not reborn but are perfect are reborn, won't they completely destroy everyone? Why is the protagonist always unlucky, and how can God choose the protagonist to be reborn, instead of those who have all kinds of geniuses, all kinds of complete skills, all kinds of luck and have king elves and props, and all kinds of people who are not reborn but still seem to be better than the protagonist to be reborn? If you have to be reborn to be able to defeat others, then why can't God suddenly reborn those who are born to defeat the protagonist at a later stage? Then isn't the protagonist useless again? What I want to say is that if the protagonist is reborn, it will be very difficult to defeat the unregenerated people. If there is no invincible golden finger protection shield like the author, then if those unreborn people who are about the same level as the protagonist after rebirth are reborn, they will defeat the protagonist long ago. I hope the protagonist won't be imperfect anymore. (The above are all things I want to complain about after reading the rebirth novel. If the author does not think or write this way, please ignore it)

After reading a lot of chapters, I felt that the protagonist was a bit ruthless. There was nothing interesting about the scene after catching the big butterfly. In terms of potential, it was not as high as my own Squirtle and Pidgey. [Just my own opinion] Ah, I still like pockets (well, this sentence is nonsense, many of them are not just based on the name). Even in the data, I feel that the elves are alive. Is it really okay to dislike my own elves so much? Then go to the shy bag where it is very valuable to cultivate. To persuade. Of course, I also know that the Bada Butterfly captured by the protagonist in the author's novel is a BOSS and cannot and cannot be persuaded. Then it's like this, which makes me feel that the protagonist only goes back to capture the bad butterfly because he can get the so-called lottery egg by catching the bad butterfly. The protagonist came back four years later and clearly knew the development after the Elf Century. He did this from his own perspective for his own benefit. If I were him in his perspective, I also know that this is the best choice for me, but after all, I am not the protagonist. Even if I observe through this wall, I still feel a little unhappy. He can kiss Squirtle because of his high individual value, but why can't he caress Bada Butterfly for the benefit that Bada Butterfly has gained for him? It feels like if the individual value of Squirtle obtained by the protagonist is too low, will he abandon Squirtle just because there is a second elf? Isn't Squirtle too pitiful? Just because of the main idea of the first impression, when the protagonist rushed to the hospital after being poisoned by Squirtle, I felt dark in my heart (ah, I hate myself so much, what's wrong with this)? What if Squirtle's individuality is not what the protagonist wants. . . . Above! These are my own thoughts and there will definitely be differences between the author's mother's Above! So if what you said is wrong and the author is unhappy, you are welcome to pick up my little fat times (what the hell is this!) Above! I don't really like punctuation (except for!). It's common for word order to be incorrect, haha~ More than the last time! The above are all my nonsense. Just take a look and don't take it seriously (I think if I could write so many words in the college entrance examination essay, I wouldn't be *********) Loading, please wait...