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After reading the first few chapters, the protagonist's friend took the protagonist to drink before the college entrance examination. Is this something good friends do? ? The protagonist even drank! ! Is this a student approaching the college entrance examination? ? The protagonist still feels that he owes this friend some friendship? ? ? Poisonous. . .

In 1996, did it predict that Internet literature would be a new life in literature? The fact is that until 2017, online literature has not been taken seriously, let alone online novels! Novels do not belong to literature! Even though I am a long-time bookworm, I never regard all novels as literature! What is literature? Perhaps these starting points are all that the author considers all novels to be literature, just to brag about himself! Remember that you are just an author, not a writer. Even the works of writers and famous people may not be recognized!

Abandoning the book in the first chapter. Nima, my own history teacher proctored the college entrance examination alone? Nima, has the author passed the exam?

Where is the hero? At least he must be a big boss of film and television. He thinks he is smart, but he can't make three times the profit by showing off his sword. The first broadcast is a loser! The film and television company gave up most of its shares? What the hell? Don't like management? Love to be fucked!

Almost every two chapters, there is someone who is forced to show off and gets slapped in the face. It is disgusting for you, the author, to write like this.

I'm not talking about the author, but I'm just asking how a peasant with his face turned to the loess and his back to the sky could have such idioms as "mysterious" in his dialogue? ? ? Also, he is the only author who can describe his father as a ferocious beast that eats people...

The rest is fine. As a reborn person, every time you have to fall down on what has already happened. Then it felt like the protagonist didn't even have a basic plan. Okay, I know it's to create conflict and drama, but it also makes the protagonist look too silly every time. One time, he was trying to save a female writer, but he never missed the opportunity. The protagonist went to the toilet twice in a row. Once I missed the female writer, I missed the bad guy once. The protagonist's prostate should be checked. There is a one in 100 million chance of it. One time it was the husband of his music teacher. It was not like he had no money, so he actually delayed someone until he got sick. Couldn't he have waited three to five days in advance? And then, he didn't know where a better hospital was. I kneel down to you, you want to save someone when they are sick, but you even know where the hospital is in advance. You don't take this matter at ease at all. I had vowed before that I must pay attention in advance. I have seen people who had heart attacks sent to the emergency room, and I have personally seen people who were pronounced dead within 2 hours of being sent to the emergency room. The protagonist has no plan at all, that is, he is the protagonist, otherwise the music teacher's husband would not be far away from death. Then there was the matter about the soil hillock. The protagonist actually didn't even mention it to his father. Dad, if you don't say it, brother, can you mention it, at least say it, don't agree casually without your own consent. Don't you know how weak his father is and how ignorant he is of the protagonist? It's not because he is the protagonist's father, he has been cheated a long time ago. Although I know it's for plot conflict, please don't write the protagonist as someone who knows everything beforehand and is like a pig afterward, right? Everything is known in advance, but once something happens, the protagonist is still in a hurry. What kind of rebirth is this?

It's really..., The turning point is too abrupt, it feels like it's breaking the previous smoothness, is it necessary?

It is not a mistake to want to find a wife from your previous life. Just pursue it again. The third time we met, you wrote a note saying that you wanted to be your wife. This was the 1990s! We were still in high school. Is this an IQ problem or an IQ problem? Even now in 2015, it's shocking. The plot is stiff

The author still writes small plots that are more attractive, especially in literature. After breaking away from singing and going to Hong Kong, the part of returning to Peking University is more attractive. I think this is because Shiba is better at this aspect, so I suggest not to write too much about how to make money. The key point is that there are too many novels about making money. 👍