Sovereign of the Deep Sea

The author should try to write some smart novels. Although brainless novels are fun, they will not help you practice your writing skills. Novice writers can write novels, so you can try to write more orthodox novels with IQ!

The missing chapters are too serious, and the main character is too arrogant. I just picked them up one after another, and I was completely indifferent.

There are many people named Lin Fan. Today I met a man named Lin Fan who wrote five novels

Tridacna is really not that exaggerated. There are so many in Hainan that none of them are more expensive per ton 🤫

I just want to ask if I can open a harem. If I don't open it, I won't watch it! ! !

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I have been following it until now, and I have a few small suggestions. I originally wanted to hold back, but I couldn't help it. After all, it is not easy to find a book that is interesting. I hope the author will pay attention to it after seeing it and stop being so careless in the future. First, this book contains a large amount of content that appears to be copied and pasted from Baidu Encyclopedia to introduce sea creatures and certain places in reality. Although I have to write the plot when it reaches this point, can I control the quantity a little bit? Don't fill the whole paragraph with hundreds of words, which may seem like watering down. In fact, a few hundred words is enough. If there is such a large amount of popular knowledge after it is put on the shelves, the number of subscriptions will be beyond the reach of readers! Secondly, could the author please take a few minutes to check for errors in the chapter before uploading? The so-called errors refer to some grammatical errors. It does not mean that the author uses the wrong grammar, but that the author often omits something in a certain sentence. Sometimes the subject is missing, sometimes the predicate is missing, and sometimes the adjective and attributive cannot be found. I know this may be an unconscious input error by the author when coding, but if it continues like this, it will cause great reading difficulties and readers will not be able to do it! There is another point that I haven't understood until now, which is what is the current diving depth of the protagonist, and what are the diving depths of other ordinary people? I think it should be 70 to 80 meters for ordinary people and over 100 meters for the protagonist. However, why do I see sentences like "Lin Fan has dived to more than 500 meters"? What exactly is the author going to do? 😭 Finally, I want to say that it will be on the shelves soon. It is always appropriate to give an initial order. If there are improvements, full orders will also be included. [Fn=2_6]

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Already collected and supported! 🤭

I have read more than 50 chapters, and it is estimated that 1/3 of the text was copied from the encyclopedia introduction.