The Deep-Sea Island Keeper

The writing is okay, the plot is stretched, the main plot is unclear, and the short plot is too confusing 1: The plot fails too much. The protagonist's grandfather and the protagonist's father have encountered three support missions in their lifetime. Within two months of the protagonist's arrival, they encountered three gringos who came to kill people, rob ships, and kidnap crew members. The protagonist shows off his power and kills indiscriminately, but the sea police are too weak-minded. He has encountered them several times and is still unprepared. There is no minimum warning, and he always relies on the protagonist to kill alone. 2: This book is obviously a daily leisure type. Interaction with sea animals, sea exploration, or the secrets in the sea are all very attractive, and the previous writing is also okay. Suddenly it turns into a superpower, and there is probably a spiritual recovery thing in the future (I don't know the details, but the world will change drastically as the old turtle said) 3: That's where I think it is, the short-term plot twist is too blunt, I just harvested the pet and gained the superpower, and ran to find the treasure without getting familiar with the superpower first, and without getting familiar with the pet first. After one or two chapters of finding the treasure, brainless foreigners came to cause trouble. After a random killing, they came again two days after returning. Two days after returning this time, another group of foreigners came again (surprised or not?) 4: Let's talk about how the world's top presence in the Chinese Coast Guard came to be. It turns out that when the protagonist encounters trouble, he calls the protagonist. When the protagonist goes out, he kills him. If something happens again, he calls again. If something happens again, he calls again! Plus five or six times before, right? Apart from delivering daily necessities twice, I basically just made phone calls. The pirates' supply points (munitions, etc.) Were placed in the inland sea. The protagonist killed people and took away the guns and money. The coast guard didn't even know the situation?

After reading a few chapters, there were too many unreasonable things, such as translating what the animals said in front of the live broadcast room, and how the dolphins evolved in the boat in front of his father. All the seals, dolphins, squids and seabirds were brought back to the bedroom. The squids were even said to be kept in buckets. The seals and dolphins were given a few clothes to nest in, which made them very speechless. When they were taken out to sea, they were always put in the boat. The most speechless thing was taking them to climb mountains. I really can't imagine this. The scene, by the way, can you imagine the dolphins squatting in front of the bed? The seals can still make sense. They can stay on the shore without water for a short period of time. The dolphins are really speechless. They will die if they leave the water. I am drunk, drunk, too poisonous, and slipped away.

I think the author treats marine life like kittens and puppies, which can survive without water, especially the small dolphins, which is an insult to my intelligence.

Doesn't anyone think there is a problem with dolphins living in waterless areas?

Chapter One: Persuading to Quit: On an island with an average altitude of 150 meters, only the top of the mountain is flooded several times a year, and the tide of the sea must be at least 100 meters high. Not to mention Shanghai, it is estimated that 80 million people drown in Japan every year, and Tokyo and Osaka can stay under the sea for a week every year.

In fact, I quite like this type of novel, but after reading that the support group left, I really couldn't stand it. Author, please be more rigorous when writing the novel. You actually hugged a dolphin after you rescued it. Wouldn't the dolphin become dehydrated? And then there's the dolphin squatting next to your bed when you wake up? ? ? ?

I don't understand why the pirates came, not the navy, but the island guards.

I really like this novel, but can the main character be less annoying? In the live broadcast, he showed that he could understand the words of turtles and other small animals, and he also translated for everyone on the spot. The dolphin was put directly into the boat and taken out to sea. He also performed a dolphin evolution in front of his father, and then fooled his father with many mistakes. Unlike other novel protagonists who are afraid of making mistakes when encountering evolution and hide away, the protagonist knew that the dolphin's loyalty point was about to reach 100, so he took it out to sea, and put it in the cabin of the boat instead of swimming in the sea.

Come on, keep me updated. The tickets will be great.

Although there are some flaws in the front, it's overall pretty good. It's a pity that I'm starting to become immortal in the back. I feel that most of these novels have no outline and are written very casually. At the end of the wilderness novels, all the gods appear. It seems that they are too niche. The rest are all about practicing to prepare for the future of fairy tales and fantasy.