Saint

This line of writing seems really tiring. A paragraph first talks about A, then diverges to mention B, then diverges again to mention C, then mentions D, even describes E, and finally turns abruptly back to A. This logic of writing can be found throughout the novel. A paragraph can have seven or eight subjects. I can't tell whether the author has a special way of thinking, is used to letting his thoughts flow all over the place, or lacks common sense. He doesn't prioritize and describe everything, and piles up words. It's like a ball of flesh and blood without a skeleton. The form is scattered, and the spirit is not much better. It is probably scattered.

The meaning is still not finished. It feels like the plot develops faster after the fifty-year bloody war. The first book of DND worldview (personal opinion). PS: Can book friends recommend some good DND books?

Madam, please take a look here and fill in the missing chapters 😭

Maybe there will be extra 23456789?

I actually finished reading it... It's unbelievable... Except for some contradictions and deficiencies in the setting, there are also some logical problems... It can be said that it is among the top three books I have read in the past two years. Also, the missing chapters are quite disgusting.

Now that The Saint is over... Maybe I can look forward to Servants of All Servants or a new pit!

It's almost 2019. I've been waiting to finish it before I graduate from college. I'm not sure I'll still have the courage to read this book after I graduate from college. That's it, I'll come back next month.

Should the profile of non-Danmei appear on male videos?

It's a great book I just found today (✪▽✪) I love otters

If you want to read a refreshing novel, you can leave. This is a traditional novel with a lot of depression and helplessness in it. You need to sit down and read it slowly.

I always feel that Dylan does not really want to be an enemy of Baldwin, and he is not willing to work with his teacher. As mentioned before, Dylan actually admired the old lord of Thunder Castle when he was a child. Maybe this young master who is regarded as a mage in the eyes of others actually envies and loves the old lord and passionate warriors like Baldwin?

... My colleagues have already written half a book, and you are lying to me. But congratulations on your recovery~

I unexpectedly found a notebook from four or five years ago when I was cleaning up my room. I didn't expect to draw this hhh It feels so budding

Probably due to the fault of young people, the author has very strict requirements for the good people in his novels. For example, Baldwin seems to have unforgivable shortcomings. In the end, he had to be ruined and tortured for the crime of killing the king, but no one cared about his achievements. On the contrary, the villains are omnipotent, and their bright spots are all washed away, such as Dylan. Women are even more ill-fated, as if their love brain is unforgivable. Count how many people die, and the protagonist can slowly grow up and be protected by the Lich and Io. This highlights not the darkness of the world but the aura of the protagonist.

How to say pinch. . . The evil forces are dancing so happily. It was strange that the good god had no reaction. .

Ah, I finally finished reading it. Many years ago, I discovered such a masterpiece in a Western fantasy novel that was almost like a third-rate web game about upgrading and fighting monsters, but for some reason I gradually forgot about it, and I can't even remember the name of the book. But the scene at the beginning of the book still occasionally pops up in my mind - a cold port, a dim hotel, a very capable protagonist, encountering a sudden plot, and embarking on a strange adventure... What is the name of that book? But I can't remember it. Fortunately, I came across this book "The Saint" many years later. As I read it, I gradually recalled that I at least saw the part of Fenway on the Gray Ridge. Now that I think about it, the reason why I didn't continue reading at that time may be that I was too busy in the first few years of work and I changed my Qidian account. Some of the books collected under the old account were lost. This book is a feast for me. If I have any dissatisfaction, it is the author's almost persecutory plot arrangement for the character of Baldwin. Many people who are worse than him have unexpectedly good endings. But thinking about it on the other hand, the more I feel angry and grievances, the more it shows that the author's writing style is good, which really makes people love and hate it. In short, I am honored to read this book and thank the author.

I can't stand it. Although I like it in other aspects, I really don't like to watch the good guy being pointed at a gun all the time. The reality is already painful enough. I can't stand it when I read a novel and watch the good guy being plotted and even the murderer behind the scenes is unknown.

The villain seems to have a hole in his brain, he is stupid, evil, annoying, and has no charm. The motive is ridiculous and untenable. Idiots appear in droves, influencing the world from above. The so-called good people are conflicted and unprepared, and have names but no abilities. It's just awkward anyway. It's annoying to see,

To be honest, the plot behind it is really a bit baffling. The most important thing is that some people are always making fun of male-male CPs in Duan Ping, and I really can't look straight at them. The author's descriptions in some passages are even more ambiguous, and he also said that there is no beauty, and he did not mean to offend. Anyway, I felt awkward and disgusted when I saw these...

There are 3 children. It seems that the Paladin really wants to have a few children~ 🤭

The third character habit of Jiuyu: Raising a good baby. Pink robe takes Xiaoke, Xiaoke takes Xiaoyi, Xiaoyi takes Salil, Salier takes Lily... In addition, there are also Pi Daddy with Julio, Hopkins with Sasha, Rocky with Hillis... Alex brings frog with unique taste... However, these good babies are just children, and they all have the temperament of a villain when they grow up. The witty Aphra: Got it, become an adult directly and pursue my beautiful father. (Master's misfortune)

I was fooled by the author's long list of settings earlier. . Later, I felt something was wrong, and then I felt that the characters in it died inexplicably. After the female elf knocked down the enemy, she didn't confirm whether the enemy was dead or not before being killed? This feels inconsistent with the battle-hardened setting! The king in the back didn't look like a king at all, he looked like a brainless idiot. From his speech and behavior to his death in the back, I was very confused. Is it so serious for the king to reveal his feelings to others? In the front, I was afraid that the noble count would die, and in the back, I would chop them with knives together. What do I feel like when I am killed in the back? ? ? Doesn't the king have a bodyguard? Without guards, this is a world of high demons. You, the king, don't even have a protective item? There are still several places that I don't understand (the smiling maid?) (The line after the king's death, the old king said long live the new king? I vomited...) (Bodwin killed his wife without thinking of directly subduing the fighting power. I can't understand it) There are many places that become more and more fascinating the more I read. I have obsessive-compulsive disorder (*￣m￣) plus a steel bar. The above are all personal opinions. Don't criticize me @The book is still pretty good. I'm a novice and I'm poor. I can only read the free chapters and I haven't finished the rest. Please show mercy, bosses (funny body care).

The spoiled ending of Mei Mi and the constant suffering of the protagonist group will make people very depressing. I don't want to see a little person who blindly does bad things end up even better than the protagonist group.

Yuda, if you are reporting a loss of contact, don't change the outline just for the sake of the starting point. You can publish it on the public account and pay for serialization. Although it is a bit selfish to say this, it would be a pity to change the original plot for this reason. There are not many people who can write good books now, let alone this subject and this style of writing.

At first, you may feel that the sentences are too long, there are too many modifiers, and the descriptions are too complicated. You may lose your composure and abandon the article. . . However, as long as you persist in reading a few chapters, you will find that it is really well written! Such content should be written in this style! The author has strong writing skills and rich vocabulary. The descriptions of voice, appearance, environment, movements, demeanor, scenes, etc. Are all meticulous, vivid and vivid! ! ! Reading is like watching a movie! ! !

A certain evil spirit secretly cut off her faith, pretended to be Fro and gave her magical powers, and then secretly twisted the doctrine in order to kill the god? But Maymi accidentally contacts the real Flo?

The writing is excellent, but there is too much nonsense. Maybe some readers like this.

This book is a bit outrageous. The first few chapters are almost full of bad sentences... I remember that my compositions in middle school were often like this. The subjects were confusing, the sentences were broken, and the connectors were used randomly... Foreigners who can speak Chinese will not be so outrageous, because they can't write long sentences 🤓.

If we talk about the most fundamental reason, it is that he is too OOC. This can be said to be the worst-looking mistake in fan fiction, and such a thing actually appears openly in the text. Readers will of course feel very bored if they lose the divine perspective that sees everything in this person. You thought he was a paladin? The Paladin will not deceive his true heart. The Paladin will persevere no matter how many twists and turns he encounters. Do you think he is a villain? Villains will not reconcile with their companions, villains will only harm others and benefit themselves. Do you think he will wake up? How can you blame justice when you wake up? Yes, everything you thought did not come true. Anyone will be irritated by being teased again and again.

Describe to the artist the story of Mei Mi lighting nightshades in Chapter 153. Although she was still hiding from pursuers at that time, it was really romantic to dance the sacrificial dance beside the bonfire. Some content allows the artist to express himself freely